13. Tri Optix 4-1 Vs. 14. J-Nyce 7-3

U S E R · 12-09-2003, 04:32 PM

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Tri Optix · 12-09-2003, 04:46 PM

yep yep

16.

1.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...33#post7926033
2.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...32#post7927532
3.13. Tri Optix 4-1 Vs. 14. J-Nyce 7-3
4.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...30#post7946730
5.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...49#post7946949
6.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...91#post7947491

iLL Nyce AKA ReTard · 12-10-2003, 12:55 PM

in..

ill do 12 or 16.

Tri Optix · 12-11-2003, 10:43 PM

You're in the Top-15?

hmmm..

what you need to know is..

The difference between us...Tri Optix is just an ill muthafucka..
While the only Top-Teens you'll ever see again..
Has Lil Romeo and the Olsen Twins on the Cover..
J-Who? Exactly..Step in my zone and get dropped son.
Last time you ever came "off the chains"..
Your slave-master started firing shot-guns
Once again against a noobie..and that shits not-right.
Your style doesnt just need work..
Its 80 lbs. and starving..standin with a squeegee at stoplights
Urban Legends is all over the Top 30..aint no avoidin us..
My style is a lot like ciggarettes..even my filler is poisonous
This kid is so fuckin wack..Fuck a J-Nyce..
This kid is so fuckin wack......that I can beat him with sayin my lines twice
And you can type lies..like you gettin hurt..when its actually murder
J-Nyce "stacks more punches" then a Snapple Factory Worker
You need to stand straight and look at me when I address you
Hows it feel to know that Optix doesnt even need to Tri against you?
This noob got his emotions on his sleeve...and hes STILL wearin it wrong
Just hit this link kiddo...and take your ass back where it belongs.

-Troublesome- · 12-11-2003, 11:20 PM

postin for J-Nyce:

tri's a fluke to contest.. so why try 'n shoot with the best..
..and tri just aint got a chance.. or community chest..
better come wit his vest.. cuz my gat is gone blow faster..
..to have tri ''takin two'' like a clumsy actor..
j is the master.. i swing punches wit no gaze..
..just to leave tri with more marks than roadways..
get blown in the haze.. ya been wack, so plz stop it..
..cuz even blind kids dont wanna tri-optix..
hit up wit rocks, bitch.. he sucks, to put it at rest..
..so polish up on ya game, and im not talkin ya chess set..
ill beat him a mess.. last week his steez was crap..
..with a verse that was so ass, it made trina look flat..
dude's gettin smacked.. fuck it.. beatin tri is a game..
..cuz now ur tooths gettin broke, and not from spendin some change..

Tri Optix · 12-12-2003, 01:26 AM

1-Up..

If I have anything important to say..itll be here..so stay alert.

U S E R · 12-12-2003, 01:35 AM

uppin over no shows

Tri Optix · 12-13-2003, 03:31 PM

2nd up...lmao..

perma frost · 12-13-2003, 06:42 PM

Lmao He Used An Off The Chain Like A Slave Line

eyedeal · 12-13-2003, 06:47 PM

good battle,
I can't vote tho cuz tri's in my crew

and shut up perma
stop swayin

-Kolli$ion- · 12-14-2003, 01:41 PM

Vote = Tri Optix

Came with more raw punches, where J-Nyce just came with predictable, plain punches to me (i.e. chess set, community chest)

Oh--Tri--i see you liked how i broke my bars down last week vs. you...you took it from me this week!!! LoL it's aiight tho..

Nice Battle

-K

Scientz · 12-14-2003, 03:38 PM

Vote-Tri-Optix

Tri has been coming iller in the last few weeks...had a few lines i liked in this verse too...J-Nyce was decent but ya punches were too basic...the trina punch was funny as hell tho...props for that joint...but i dont think u did enough to edge out tri in this battle

iLL Nyce AKA ReTard · 12-14-2003, 06:03 PM

basic?

since when is text supposed to be superbly complex and shit..

and rofl.. plain punches.. yes, chess set is extremely plain considering i could've used a variety of things from checkers, monopoloy, etc.

the fuck outta here..

oh yea, this is my first up.

namix · 12-14-2003, 07:46 PM

J-Nyce:

tri's a fluke to contest.. so why try 'n shoot with the best..
..and tri just aint got a chance.. or community chest..
---"you have no chance, like monopoly without the orange deck"
~SuperNova vs. T~R~E -rapworld championship '02
(just explaining why i wasnt feeling this one, cuz it woulda obviously been a tight line)..

get blown in the haze.. ya been wack, so plz stop it..
..cuz even blind kids dont wanna tri-optix..
---lol, i feel it, i'd be surprised if it hasnt been used before on him, but to be honest since i havent seen it i cant hold it against you lol.. but pretty coo shit..

overall: you had a pretty cool verse on average, nothing really jumped out at me just because alot of your concepts, while cool, have been flipped in one way or the other before.. also, is this Kosh? just wondering.. anyway i thought u had a pretty nice showing nonetheless..

Tri Optix

Once again against a noobie..and that shits not-right.
Your style doesnt just need work..
Its 80 lbs. and starving..standin with a squeegee at stoplights
---lol, i have seen 'need work' alot to be honest man - but you had a pretty funny twist to it, this made me laugh for sure.. good stuff.. i'd say careful on your flow cuz your lines are getting a little long here, but i do the same thing.. so good stuff lol

And you can type lies..like you gettin hurt..when its actually murder
J-Nyce "stacks more punches" then a Snapple Factory Worker
-----pretty cool flip here, very specific comparison, i liked it.. while i dont like 'punch' wordplay much, you had a cool flip..

This noob got his emotions on his sleeve...and hes STILL wearin it wrong
---this is ok, the link concept was pretty funny, but i think you coulda made ti sound more punch-like.... i dont know about saying 'optix doesnt need to tri against you'.. having nameplay on yourself sometimes seems desperate to me.. but just being real playa

vote: Tri optix

why? Well, i did think this one was close.. jnyce had the dopest line of the battle, but i had seen the concept before so it didnt really hold much weight for him in that case.. i did think that tri came a little more original than jnyce did though.. but i also thought jnyce had better wording.. This was a close one in my opinion like i said, but good stuff, im giving it to tri because his concepts were more original to me.

and dont bitch about my vote jnyce, cuz if ur kosh u kno of all people im always real with you on bboys while most are just haters lol.. peace fellas...

lil hot sauce · 12-14-2003, 08:10 PM

vote-tri optix

tri had a nice verse, better than ive usually seen from him...

j-nyce, nothin in ur verse really appelled to me..sorry

so tri gets the vote

Calefaction · 12-14-2003, 11:57 PM

pretty good battle..

Tri - off the chains line was grimey, style needs work was raw too and the stack punches line was pretty nice as well, good flow, pretty consistant, didn't fall off reall

J - I wasn't feelin much .. and yeah your shit was REEEEEEEAL basic, some playe shit as well, flow was pretty good tho, do audio

vote = Tri

iLL Nyce AKA ReTard · 12-15-2003, 01:07 AM

wordddddd dizzle

good battle & verse tri.. i'm still in the top 30 so its all gravey.

but yea.. i'm dope as fizzuck in audio, calefaction.. so that comment meant alot.

-takes a bow-

castro'DAMUS · 12-15-2003, 02:10 AM

Tri Optix def. J-Nyce

12-09-2003, 04:46 PM	#2 (permalink)
Tri Optix The mentor of your mentor Join Date: Nov 2000 Location: Wherever it is you picture me to be Posts: 12,012	yep yep 16. 1.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...33#post7926033 2.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...32#post7927532 3.13. Tri Optix 4-1 Vs. 14. J-Nyce 7-3 4.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...30#post7946730 5.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...49#post7946949 6.http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...91#post7947491 Last edited by Tri Optix; 12-14-2003 at 04:10 PM.

12-13-2003, 06:42 PM	#9 (permalink)
perma frost gay stars suck taint Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: san diego, CA Posts: 9,249	Lmao He Used An Off The Chain Like A Slave Line __________________ wonderflow

12-14-2003, 01:41 PM	#11 (permalink)
-Kolli$ion- 3-1-5 Join Date: Sep 1999 Location: Utica NY Posts: 2,195	Vote = Tri Optix Came with more raw punches, where J-Nyce just came with predictable, plain punches to me (i.e. chess set, community chest) Oh--Tri--i see you liked how i broke my bars down last week vs. you...you took it from me this week!!! LoL it's aiight tho.. Nice Battle -K __________________ *HTTP://WWW.KOLLISION.TK*

12-14-2003, 03:38 PM	#12 (permalink)
Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch! Join Date: May 2002 Posts: 908	Vote-Tri-Optix Tri has been coming iller in the last few weeks...had a few lines i liked in this verse too...J-Nyce was decent but ya punches were too basic...the trina punch was funny as hell tho...props for that joint...but i dont think u did enough to edge out tri in this battle __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=320121 A-Status all day everyday...Stil'A Hustle Records...shoutouts to 71Sick and A-Stack Management "If i aint tossin chrome mags, I'll A.K.A. nigga...n i aint talkin also known as" -Good Writtens a.k.a. Scientz

12-14-2003, 07:46 PM	#14 (permalink)
namix u flip shit, i refine it Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 1,185	J-Nyce: tri's a fluke to contest.. so why try 'n shoot with the best.. ..and tri just aint got a chance.. or community chest.. ---"you have no chance, like monopoly without the orange deck" ~SuperNova vs. T~R~E -rapworld championship '02 (just explaining why i wasnt feeling this one, cuz it woulda obviously been a tight line).. get blown in the haze.. ya been wack, so plz stop it.. ..cuz even blind kids dont wanna tri-optix.. ---lol, i feel it, i'd be surprised if it hasnt been used before on him, but to be honest since i havent seen it i cant hold it against you lol.. but pretty coo shit.. overall: you had a pretty cool verse on average, nothing really jumped out at me just because alot of your concepts, while cool, have been flipped in one way or the other before.. also, is this Kosh? just wondering.. anyway i thought u had a pretty nice showing nonetheless.. Tri Optix Once again against a noobie..and that shits not-right. Your style doesnt just need work.. Its 80 lbs. and starving..standin with a squeegee at stoplights ---lol, i have seen 'need work' alot to be honest man - but you had a pretty funny twist to it, this made me laugh for sure.. good stuff.. i'd say careful on your flow cuz your lines are getting a little long here, but i do the same thing.. so good stuff lol And you can type lies..like you gettin hurt..when its actually murder J-Nyce "stacks more punches" then a Snapple Factory Worker -----pretty cool flip here, very specific comparison, i liked it.. while i dont like 'punch' wordplay much, you had a cool flip.. This noob got his emotions on his sleeve...and hes STILL wearin it wrong ---this is ok, the link concept was pretty funny, but i think you coulda made ti sound more punch-like.... i dont know about saying 'optix doesnt need to tri against you'.. having nameplay on yourself sometimes seems desperate to me.. but just being real playa vote: Tri optix why? Well, i did think this one was close.. jnyce had the dopest line of the battle, but i had seen the concept before so it didnt really hold much weight for him in that case.. i did think that tri came a little more original than jnyce did though.. but i also thought jnyce had better wording.. This was a close one in my opinion like i said, but good stuff, im giving it to tri because his concepts were more original to me. and dont bitch about my vote jnyce, cuz if ur kosh u kno of all people im always real with you on bboys while most are just haters lol.. peace fellas... __________________ Wonderflow my dick is so-long.. yours is more like hello

12-10-2003, 12:55 PM	#3 (permalink)
iLL Nyce AKA ReTard nimclown Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: ''the devil's greatest trick is convincing the world he never existed.'' Posts: 8,008	in.. ill do 12 or 16.

12-11-2003, 11:20 PM	#5 (permalink)
-Troublesome- Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Jersey Posts: 2,477	postin for J-Nyce: tri's a fluke to contest.. so why try 'n shoot with the best.. ..and tri just aint got a chance.. or community chest.. better come wit his vest.. cuz my gat is gone blow faster.. ..to have tri ''takin two'' like a clumsy actor.. j is the master.. i swing punches wit no gaze.. ..just to leave tri with more marks than roadways.. get blown in the haze.. ya been wack, so plz stop it.. ..cuz even blind kids dont wanna tri-optix.. hit up wit rocks, bitch.. he sucks, to put it at rest.. ..so polish up on ya game, and im not talkin ya chess set.. ill beat him a mess.. last week his steez was crap.. ..with a verse that was so ass, it made trina look flat.. dude's gettin smacked.. fuck it.. beatin tri is a game.. ..cuz now ur tooths gettin broke, and not from spendin some change..

12-13-2003, 06:47 PM	#10 (permalink)
eyedeal The Bad Guy Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: GA Posts: 20,306	good battle, I can't vote tho cuz tri's in my crew and shut up perma stop swayin

12-14-2003, 06:03 PM	#13 (permalink)
iLL Nyce AKA ReTard nimclown Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: ''the devil's greatest trick is convincing the world he never existed.'' Posts: 8,008	basic? since when is text supposed to be superbly complex and shit.. and rofl.. plain punches.. yes, chess set is extremely plain considering i could've used a variety of things from checkers, monopoloy, etc. the fuck outta here.. oh yea, this is my first up.

12-14-2003, 08:10 PM	#15 (permalink)
lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: texas Posts: 12,159	vote-tri optix tri had a nice verse, better than ive usually seen from him... j-nyce, nothin in ur verse really appelled to me..sorry so tri gets the vote

12-14-2003, 11:57 PM	#16 (permalink)
Calefaction Legendary Textcee Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: M-town, NY Posts: 7,453	pretty good battle.. Tri - off the chains line was grimey, style needs work was raw too and the stack punches line was pretty nice as well, good flow, pretty consistant, didn't fall off reall J - I wasn't feelin much .. and yeah your shit was REEEEEEEAL basic, some playe shit as well, flow was pretty good tho, do audio vote = Tri __________________ Text Masters Of The Universe

12-15-2003, 01:07 AM	#17 (permalink)
iLL Nyce AKA ReTard nimclown Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: ''the devil's greatest trick is convincing the world he never existed.'' Posts: 8,008	wordddddd dizzle good battle & verse tri.. i'm still in the top 30 so its all gravey. but yea.. i'm dope as fizzuck in audio, calefaction.. so that comment meant alot. -takes a bow-

12-15-2003, 02:10 AM	#18 (permalink)
castro'DAMUS Still So Fly. Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Toronto. Posts: 12,292	Tri Optix def. J-Nyce __________________ "The sun don't come out for many, Like Annie.. Half orphan, Momma never had an abortion, Papa sort've did... Still I managed to live" - Hov

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