11. Craven Moorehead 6-2 Vs. 12. Vyris 9-5

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Old 12-09-2003, 04:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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11. Craven Moorehead 6-2 Vs. 12. Vyris 9-5

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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 12-11-2003, 06:41 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Craven Moorehead takes it up the butt!
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Old 12-11-2003, 08:11 PM   #4 (permalink)
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yeah...I'll go ahead and drop first pussy..holla!!

Dear Craven,

dangerous and been mean for years..ur verse'll just leave me in doom
cuz I saw u tear down the stage..........in the puppet commerical on MTV2
so I'ma break the mold and prove u're wrong..ur flow loses clues strong
this bitches lines stay small...and old like Too Short songs
I'm known to start lyin sometimes....but just when writin new lines to win
cuz u're the dopest alive <-- oops look, I caught myself lyin again
and now since that is clear.....I'll leave u in portions
cuz we know craven stays lost..like disciplined orphans
u've never been in a good battle...so now u're hatin
cuz the only close calls u've had......are local phone conversations
bustin whores that thug on sites, u might pour ur love on mics
but I've heard ur audios.....they sound like ur vocal cords ain't plugged in right
these bitches fallin out cuz my recent look draws flames
and craven's the first down...like long distance football plays
u're punches are obvious and running out of a clue
so u wear the same outfit.....trying to avoid coming out of the blue
hate to recycle lines that I used before but the sayin captures all
when I erase u bitch....got u fadin away like u're playin basketball
and now for the closer..
blah setup blah setup, where's ur thirst?
played punchline played punchline,<^ there's ur verse

and that my son, is how it is.
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Old 12-11-2003, 10:22 PM   #5 (permalink)
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That's it?



You straight delivered the trash
'n Dill always be chillin' on the fag tip like cigarette ash
This poor fuck's a magic card deamon
I'd mention Dill' dough - but then his ass'd start creamin'
Enough'a the gay shit
Got a mod spot and he still struggles to say shit
He'd be leakin' on stage
So when I say this kid ancient - I ain't speakin' on age
Everybody's whisperin' secrets
'n agreein' that your name proves you resemble a penis
I own you, kid
When it comes to winning you ain't even had rental rights
Your mental's tight?
I'm cutting edge - 'n to top it off I'll slice your dome w/ it
Leave you in a casket dazed
Dill's like a playboy calendar - this kid's been ass for days
I've seen some scary shit
but kid went from hustler to bitch so fast - he signed w/ Larry Flynt
Sit 'n chug some gin
'cause I got on your nerves - 'n now I'll let Baraka rub it in
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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 12-12-2003, 01:48 PM   #7 (permalink)
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ok, i'm readin eyedill's & goin.. maaan, i've seen him come better. but he stayed consistent with half-way decent lines. minus the fadeaway line which he used LAST week. lol

but then i got to craven's & i was totally disappointed because i thought he'd be mad nice when he got the top 10 lines or whatever.. he had some decent bars.. but wtf is up with those setups? lol

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Old 12-12-2003, 08:42 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Out Write takes it up the butt!
lol.. no

v/ Craven easily

he came fresh.. dill had alot more played shit.. i think craven took it by far in my eyes

You straight delivered the trash
'n Dill always be chillin' on the fag tip like cigarette ash
This poor fuck's a magic card deamon
I'd mention Dill' dough - but then his ass'd start creamin'

He'd be leakin' on stage
So when I say this kid ancient - I ain't speakin' on age

Leave you in a casket dazed
Dill's like a playboy calendar - this kid's been ass for days

^i thought all of those lines were dope.. eyedill came with some pretty basic shit in my eyes.. nothin id even really qoute.. pretty one sided.. peace boys
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alright, 1-1, uppin.
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Old 12-13-2003, 05:46 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Old 12-13-2003, 06:35 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Vote- Eyedill..

Wasn't feelin Craven's style, Eye had a more appealing battle verse IMO.
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Old 12-13-2003, 09:56 PM   #12 (permalink)
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vote- eyedill

craven came cool, just not enough to win
both had solid punches, craven had one stand out line while dill had a couple,

-dill had a consitent verse, well rounded, you didnt have any lack luster punches, which gave you the win
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Old 12-13-2003, 11:53 PM   #13 (permalink)
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vote=Craven

Punches were harder than fuck....definitely feeling the fag line (opener)...and the larry flynt line...
Yo, this kid is just nice.

Vyris---definitely DEFINITELY spit some fire...AGAIN...but this time i think you were edged out a bit...mainly because of the harder punches AND his flow pattern, i was able to flow his a little better.

Nice Battle

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Old 12-14-2003, 05:11 PM   #14 (permalink)
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craven some of your punches were brilliant
'n Dill always be chillin' on the fag tip like cigarette ash

that shit was dope as hell. i cant believe i aint use that yet, i always be sayin to my friends you smoke, so you like fags in your mouth?lmao. i just learned a while ago what fag meant overseas, sue me.

but that was about it tho. your setups need alot of work.


eyedill was dope
u've never been in a good battle...so now u're hatin
cuz the only close calls u've had......are local phone conversations
bustin whores that thug on sites, u might pour ur love on mics
but I've heard ur audios.....they sound like ur vocal cords ain't plugged in right
these bitches fallin out cuz my recent look draws flames
and craven's the first down...like long distance football plays


eyedill stayed consitant with some real solid lines. if craven woulda came at same level as his opener, he woulda won, too bad he dropped the bar, no homo.

vote-eyedill

nice battle tho, props for both dudes for showin
blah setup blah setup, where's ur thirst?
played punchline played punchline,<^ there's ur verse
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Old 12-14-2003, 07:42 PM   #16 (permalink)
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nice battle

vyris-i liked it...good structure, punches were nice, flow was good...on most points, overall nice verse

craven-wow, good verse....lots of dope punches....good nameplay, nice flow....overall ever thing was dope

both were dope.....but, craven pulled this one out

sorry dill

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Old 12-14-2003, 09:55 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Vote- Eyedill..

Wasn't feelin Craven's style, Eye had a more appealing battle verse IMO.


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Old 12-14-2003, 10:02 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Yall both came correct, but Craven wins

Eyedill - Biggest complaint is that you seem to be jockin that new style I call metacommunication.

blah setup blah setup, where's ur thirst?
played punchline played punchline,<^ there's ur verse

From what I've seen these type of lines are getting played out. I've only been on the site for 2 weeks and I'm sick of them

Craven

Like the style...flow would translate well in real life, something I gotta work on myself.

Good lines from both.

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Old 12-14-2003, 11:51 PM   #19 (permalink)
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nice battle

Dill - close calls line was good, MTV2 line was good, go down first was nice, and fade away was good too, nice flow, good wording.. consistant verse

Craven - I usualy like readin your verses and shit, I thought your set ups were eh, punches were pretty weak too, I thought the wording coulda been a LOT better, only thing you had was flow really

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good battle

i gotta go with craven tho...i felt the new style

that ass for days line had me rollin...eyedill had some nice lines also...but i think craven edged this one out...good read boys

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