5. Scientz 10-3 Vs. 6. Charles 11-5

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Old 12-09-2003, 04:29 PM   #1 (permalink)
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5. Scientz 10-3 Vs. 6. Charles 11-5

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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 12-09-2003, 05:42 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Sup homie..

I dont mind..say..

16-24..

Just hit this up soon wit ho many u wanna go,but i dunno if i can go more than 24 this week..

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Old 12-10-2003, 04:40 AM   #3 (permalink)
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dont know how many i will go

it will prolly be longer tho...dont go over the limit this time!!

i will be close to 30...depends on how i feel when writing

might drop tonight...who knows!!!!

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Old 12-10-2003, 06:02 AM   #4 (permalink)
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u wore ya scientz lines out last time doggie...now pure skill comes in...somethin that u lack...what ya gon do!!

scientz this, scientz that...come original when gruding me
ya name plays so fuckin bad,
they should be traded to another team
u suck it seems, n with fat jokes, i can prove it hurts u
ur so chunky,
we could mix u wit veggies, n do a soup commercial
get ya arms n legs broken, wit most of ya men killed
u'll be left inside fourcasts,
...like temperature n wind chill
this kids ill, n hotter of course, after poppin this broad
i'll fill ya life wit so much drama, u'll recieve an oscar award
goin a different route, no wordplay i'll drop, hardly
just hit 'kid' wit more punches, than the bullies on house party
teflon is nothin, when i pop it breaks, shit i can drop a tank
so u better be wearing more metal gear, than solid snake
please say thanks, u poor kid, what i delivered is viscious
hoped i opened some whoopass,
so ya fam could have dinner on christmas
he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short
ya skin must soak up lotion, or either u wear it wrong
cuz ya body's filled wit enough ash,
to air a damn pokemon marathon
homo why dont u play sports? staying strapped to ya couch
i admit u wear shoulder pads,
but usually they're attatched to ya blouse
my blows r viscious, mad damage when i hit fellas
shits so on target,
that walmart n circuit city get jealous
ya mom got std's from hooking, men around the way, scared
but if tricks are for kids,
that bitch should be running a day care
this "one time at bandcamp", nah but its the same system
in high school i played the sax,
n u were known for playing with them
after a whiff of ya breath, im not sure i can get up
fuck just scope,
u need a whole navel base, plus the sniper's setup
invest in karate school, cuz i find this real, funny
even when times get rough,
they r capable of taking ya milk money

thats 30 lines....time to move up in the rankings!!
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Old 12-11-2003, 06:51 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU,GET OUT OF HERE!

i could flip his lines.. that'd be utter defiance
if i wantd to make up wack,i'd put blusher to Scientz
ya names deceiving..beef shows i'll beat ya ass..
n if ur styles raw..mines still walkin n eatin grass
your gay antics are tedious now, ya boring kid
get kicks from makin passes at guys,like Jordan did
go dildo fuck..ya ranking shows for real,ya suck
and i can Take 5 easier than Spielburg does
b-boys on rm were noticed,they whoopin some ass
see they caused a stir..your in a cookery class
a geek with glasses, ya mashed when im bomin ya
turned his life around
..and now only sees the back of his moniter
killed ya before.. use no prewrittens to dent asses
beat you wit keys,like ya taught in defense classes
your a walking joke.. check how ironic this is
my punches & flow go hand in hand..
which is further then you ever got with a bitch
fuck your momma disses..you got nothin to harm me
cuz if mines just a trick..
yours is the magic show.. plus the finale
my bars do sometimes need tweakin,yeh,i know that
but almost all the time..
yours in need of a 360 flip,twist,with a nose grab
i got a Ruthless Record..so believe I down kids
when u Bone Thugs..worse then the group Easy founded
if ya think rippin sci is tough or manly, ya wrong
cuz I took him to the cleaners
and he brought along pink panties with thongs
talk on the hood,but the cops only pretend to act
so u'll Splinter under pressure,cuz we Sensai rat
never won a b-boys tourny,wont blaze a sick verse
ya only face scientz in the finals,takin midterms

Fuckin punk..
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Old 12-12-2003, 01:37 AM   #6 (permalink)
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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 12-12-2003, 07:50 AM   #7 (permalink)
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hahaha...u really tried flippin my lines

its all good fam...let the votes begin...g/l

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No i didnt...

Why vote sway??

pshh..but nice verse..g'luck..

this is my 1st up..
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Old 12-12-2003, 12:52 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Scientz:
scientz this, scientz that...come original when gruding me
ya name plays so fuckin bad,
they should be traded to another team
haha, cool open
u suck it seems, n with fat jokes, i can prove it hurts u
ur so chunky,
we could mix u wit veggies, n do a soup commercial
ehh
get ya arms n legs broken, wit most of ya men killed
u'll be left inside fourcasts,
...like temperature n wind chill
haha!!
this kids ill, n hotter of course, after poppin this broad
i'll fill ya life wit so much drama, u'll recieve an oscar award
nice, nice
goin a different route, no wordplay i'll drop, hardly
just hit 'kid' wit more punches, than the bullies on house party
iight
teflon is nothin, when i pop it breaks, shit i can drop a tank
so u better be wearing more metal gear, than solid snake
haha, I liked this
please say thanks, u poor kid, what i delivered is viscious
hoped i opened some whoopass,
so ya fam could have dinner on christmas
ahahahahaha
he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short
nice concept
ya skin must soak up lotion, or either u wear it wrong
cuz ya body's filled wit enough ash,
to air a damn pokemon marathon
ahaha
homo why dont u play sports? staying strapped to ya couch
i admit u wear shoulder pads,
but usually they're attatched to ya blouse
lmao
my blows r viscious, mad damage when i hit fellas
shits so on target,
that walmart n circuit city get jealous
was iight, not really aimed at him tho
ya mom got std's from hooking, men around the way, scared
but if tricks are for kids,
that bitch should be running a day care
ahahaha, nice
this "one time at bandcamp", nah but its the same system
in high school i played the sax,
n u were known for playing with them
haha, dope
after a whiff of ya breath, im not sure i can get up
fuck just scope,
u need a whole navel base, plus the sniper's setup
yup, another nice concept
invest in karate school, cuz i find this real, funny
even when times get rough,
they r capable of taking ya milk money
ehh, decent ending

overall was a nice verse homie
concepts were there
flow was there
good shit dookie


Charles:
i could flip his lines.. that'd be utter defiance
if i wantd to make up wack,i'd put blusher to Scientz
haha
ya names deceiving..beef shows i'll beat ya ass..
n if ur styles raw..mines still walkin n eatin grass
ehh, its cool
your gay antics are tedious now, ya boring kid
get kicks from makin passes at guys,like Jordan did
nah
go dildo fuck..ya ranking shows for real,ya suck
and i can Take 5 easier than Spielburg does
lol, cool concept
b-boys on rm were noticed,they whoopin some ass
see they caused a stir..your in a cookery class
nah man lol
a geek with glasses, ya mashed when im bomin ya
turned his life around
..and now only sees the back of his moniter
bwahahahahhahaa
killed ya before.. use no prewrittens to dent asses
beat you wit keys,like ya taught in defense classes
haha
your a walking joke.. check how ironic this is
my punches & flow go hand in hand..
which is further then you ever got with a bitch
ha, pretty nice
fuck your momma disses..you got nothin to harm me
cuz if mines just a trick..
yours is the magic show.. plus the finale
nice, connected well
my bars do sometimes need tweakin,yeh,i know that
but almost all the time..
yours in need of a 360 flip,twist,with a nose grab
ahaha, nice concept
i got a Ruthless Record..so believe I down kids
when u Bone Thugs..worse then the group Easy founded
haha
if ya think rippin sci is tough or manly, ya wrong
cuz I took him to the cleaners
and he brought along pink panties with thongs
lol
talk on the hood,but the cops only pretend to act
so u'll Splinter under pressure,cuz we Sensai rat
bwahaha, that was dope, i liked that
never won a b-boys tourny,wont blaze a sick verse
ya only face scientz in the finals,takin midterms
nah, not a good closer

overall was a dope verse
had some good concepts and flow was good
i liked this verse


this is a VERY close battle
both had their share of witty concepts and punches
and both were consistent flow wise
u both basically went line for line in this battle
but I felt like scientz was a little more creative with some of his concepts
don't get me wrong tho, charles did have a good verse
but I just felt like scientz edged this one out by a hair

vote = scientz

good battle, enjoyed reading it, props to both.
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Wow, i cant vote cuz im signed out this week..

but damn, this is one of the best battles ive read in a long time.

Nice consistent new good concepts from both. DOPE BATTLE
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Best battle in a long fucking time. Scientz came raw..

this kids ill, n hotter of course, after poppin this broad
i'll fill ya life wit so much drama, u'll recieve an oscar award
he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short
invest in karate school, cuz i find this real, funny
even when times get rough,
they r capable of taking ya milk money

Niceness right there,

But.. Charles' whole verse was quotable, maybe 2 or 3 couplets I wasn't feeling, too much for Sci this time.

your a walking joke.. check how ironic this is
my punches & flow go hand in hand..
which is further then you ever got with a bitch

Muawahah

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Old 12-12-2003, 05:08 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Vote=Scientz

This kid, especially for the OPENING verse.....phewy boy. Lemme tell ya...

The Chunky line---funny as fuck...
Fourcasts....heard it before, but not like that.
Blouse line, had me rollin.

Charles--You came RAW as FUCK...and i do not hate your verse the least bit. Like said above, this is one of the tightest battles i've read in a hot one...and to me, Scientz' punches were harder by the skin of his teeth.

Nice one, boys

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tight battle, scientz came doppppe, alot of nice lines, the oscar award line was sick, charles came correct the hand in hand line was crazy dope, sensai rat line was nice too, well yall both came nice but ima give this one to charles

dope battle
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Old 12-14-2003, 05:22 PM   #14 (permalink)
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shit this was close as hell. both ya nukkas came raw as hell.i liked how charles flipped scientz punch, man that was hot.

fuck your momma disses..you got nothin to harm me
cuz if mines just a trick..
yours is the magic show.. plus the finale

but its a shame thats when you started with the hotness, in the middleof the verse. scientz was comming hot from the beginning and kept it consistent.

scientz this, scientz that...come original when gruding me
ya name plays so fuckin bad,
they should be traded to another team

and he kept it going.

nice battle tho. best i read so far. props for both for showin.
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wow.....nice battle, charles nice verse...good flow, good punches, & scientz, whoa, dope verse, good flow, punches were really dope, just an overall a WOW verse

i broke it down the best i could

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