25. theFRANCHISE 5-1 vs. 26. Awtasee 5-2

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[Awtasee]

aloha.

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[theFRANCHISE]

count 'em and match.......

listen tough guy awtasee, quit flossin’ geek book a fight
how can I take him serious this Dawson Creek look a like
i’ll beat the proof with ease… kid barks and he blunders there
the streak he claims he’s on are the skidmarks in his underwear
prolly say I’m old and bald.. but enough of the silly shit
heard you got your name since we awtasee how you really spit
stutters, slurs, mumbles words and with a lisp he dreams
that one day we’ll think he’s phat without the aid of krispy kremes
see I’ll stop your run quicker than when you hear the ref’s whistle blow
so you can kiss my ass and my tailbone contains no mistletoe
franchise always keys his verses since it doesn’t pay to think
you need to supplement your punches try centrum with A to Zinc
awtasee is kind of chubby time to lose some blubber champ
plus he’s beat up since I left him punched more than a rubber stamp

another victory for theFRANCHISE..........

[Awtasee]

you gay liar…

this kid was talking smack, imma gore this gay wack
I’ll put stars around ya dome like where the cowboys play at
and when I say that, and tell him ‘dont even diss me’
cuz im above your control.. like ya mothafuckin shift key
im about ta get shifty.. is this little bitch soft?
when im gettin No L, and christmas is still a little bit off…
and when ya friggin lost, and your a total wack disgrace…
I’ll give you such a ‘maulin’.. I’ll open GAPs in ya face
infact its distasteful, how I gave you mad hurt
with ya stitched up lines lookin like yer fuckin plaid shirt
you’re a bad jerk who thinks hes gassed, but not…
he has talent on ‘mere’ levels.. like Russian astronauts
^^but that shit blew up, and I guess its swell
Cuz hes a badly ending FRANCHISE, worse then XFL

[TimmayB]

The Franchise:


listen tough guy awtasee, quit flossin’ geek book a fight
how can I take him serious this Dawson Creek look a like
blah opener 2/5
i’ll beat the proof with ease… kid barks and he blunders there
the streak he claims he’s on are the skidmarks in his underwear
Heh... aight 3.25/5
prolly say I’m old and bald.. but enough of the silly shit
heard you got your name since we awtasee how you really spit
errrrr.... nah 1.5/5
stutters, slurs, mumbles words and with a lisp he dreams
that one day we’ll think he’s phat without the aid of krispy kremes
decent 3/5
see I’ll stop your run quicker than when you hear the ref’s whistle blow
so you can kiss my ass and my tailbone contains no mistletoe
dope concept, didn't use it right.... 2.25/5
franchise always keys his verses since it doesn’t pay to think
you need to supplement your punches try centrum with A to Zinc
nothing outstanding 2.5/5
awtasee is kind of chubby time to lose some blubber champ
plus he’s beat up since I left him punched more than a rubber stamp
Wow that's a bad closer.... 1/5

Awtasee:

this kid was talking smack, imma gore this gay wack
I’ll put stars around ya dome like where the cowboys play at
decent opener 2.5/5
and when I say that, and tell him ‘dont even diss me’
cuz im above your control.. like ya mothafuckin shift key
okay, okay feelin that for sure 4/5
im about ta get shifty.. is this little bitch soft?
when im gettin No L, and christmas is still a little bit off…
decent 2.5/5
and when ya friggin lost, and your a total wack disgrace…
I’ll give you such a ‘maulin’.. I’ll open GAPs in ya face
ehhhhhhh.... tiiiiight flip 4/5
infact its distasteful, how I gave you mad hurt
with ya stitched up lines lookin like yer fuckin plaid shirt
blah 1/5
you’re a bad jerk who thinks hes gassed, but not…
he has talent on ‘mere’ levels.. like Russian astronauts
not feelin 1.75/5
^^but that shit blew up, and I guess its swell
Cuz hes a badly ending FRANCHISE, worse then XFL
dcent closer played though 2.5/5

Vote -- Awtasee. Just a better verse. Neither was spectacular.

[~sincere~]

like he said..neither was very hot...Franchise, I posted b/f fore you and flipped two lines that i said...whatever, maybe I'm buggin. Best line was the Krispy Kreme line...pretty hot.

Awtasee had weak ass setups but saved them with clever punches, your checkmate was garbage though...but overall a pretty nice spit.

vote=Awtasee.

[castro'DAMUS]

Up' Over No Shows

[Awtasee]

votes?

[headless verseman]

hmmm..interesting battle

i thought french eye's came pretty decent, YOU STILL NEED TO WRITE A VERSE FOOLIO....um, ya...nothing negative about his verse, some lines didnt hit others did

awtasee- pretty cool verse as well, some played lines...cowboy's shit, shift key, no L,

that gap line was aight, nothing real special...the plaid shirts line didnt work, and the russian line was wordplay for the sake of wordplay

i gotta say vote french eyes...on a second read, awes verse was just filled with a bunch of lines i didnt like



but, this is one man's opinion


gluck to both of you

[Dr. Knockboots]

cool battle, both came cool franchise came preety good awtasee came nice too i felt the noel line

vote - awtasee

[Resilient.]

Eh battle to be honest.

Franchinse - You had a weak verse. The only line I really liked, well the concept, was how you used his name as "Ought To See". That was clever. The lines itself sucked. The opener was wack. How do you know he looks like Dawson Creek Characters? Who from Dawson's Creek anyways? Very bland line. Flow was okay. YOu had some decent end-bar rhyming, but the lines sucked.. oh well

Awtasee - I like the No L line, and that's about it from your verse. YOu tried too hard to diss him I thought, and you concentrated more on rhymescheme than you did on punches and personals. That was your only mistake. Concepts were okay, but you should re-word them a little bit. Your content sucked though. "Bad Jerk", "Mad Hurt", "Wack Disgrace" - being that you said wack about 30 times.

Vote - Awtasee, though

[Magic Johnson]

vote- the FRANCHISE.. i feel he edged out aw in every area in this one.... more stand out lines to me..

[Alamo IV]

Vote/Awatasee

I was felling his punches hit harder than Franch

[Break it]

awatasee just came out harder punches where connecting more than franchise flow was also on pt just an overall better verse

vote-awatasee

[Tri Optix]

awtasee whooped a little ass in this one...surprised me actually..

Franchise..blech..your setups to your punches need to make a little sense..looks like your just tryin to rhyme words..


vote=awtasee

[Dust-1]

vote - theFranchise


felt he had a more solid verse


that shift key punch of Awt's was nice tho


but i felt Franchise had the edge

peace

[Scientz]

Vote-Awtasee

I felt his maulin line...and the above control joint...some concepts were old but he also had a few nice joints

i didnt feel fran this time around...didnt really have any standout lines

[Retulen Reactus]

vote-thefranchise

had more lines i liked

awtasee

stutters, slurs, mumbles words and with a lisp he dreams
that one day we’ll think he’s phat without the aid of krispy kremes

that was horrible. that and your closer were "no." the rest of the verse was decent, only standout line to me was your opener, which was nice

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Awatese Wins