11. Charles 10-5 vs. 12. Retulen Reactus 7-3

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Old 12-01-2003, 08:11 PM   #1 (permalink)
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11. Charles 10-5 vs. 12. Retulen Reactus 7-3
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Old 12-01-2003, 09:31 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 12-04-2003, 06:16 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Sup...

Saw ya last match..we cud disperse the news..
Cuz i'll put a Bulletin..
...while you make the fake personals..
Your lines arnt witty..dukes needin a hed scan
Cuz only React i know thats dope..
...is the one thats featuring Redman..
Saw ya last week..the irony made me crack up twice
How u say Namix bit Resin..
...and then close flippin a Fracture line?
All have 'Tore-Ret'..Fuck,shit,bitch..im blazin you
^^See im usin Paper's wordplay..
Since last week u showd you think thats okay to do
Your pussy..cuz if u dnt want me to abuse you..
you'll let ya sis-go do it all.
..just like the way that Dru Hill used to..
You cant front on skill..so believe that im dope
Cuz im a Livin Legend..
.....and after this u'll be neither of those..
Messin wit me is gd for u..helpd ya shit rappin..
Cuz I brought out the best in you..
...and then i slapped that bitch back in..
Stop maskin ya badness..dont pout n bitch..
Cuz if RM Seize-ure wackness..
...you'd start ta froth at the mouth n twitch..

Bye.Bye.

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Old 12-05-2003, 01:56 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 12-05-2003, 06:32 PM   #7 (permalink)
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give u props cuz you tried- but I peeped and it was nothin
so grab some tannin lotion- cuz you'll need it for this sonnin
My rhymes divine,- why you can barley right a punchline
You beat scientz? -Well consider me albert Einstein
Fuckin, with ret’ll leave ya maimed, our skills the same?
Charles known to- ‘steal’ more lines the titanic’s frame
My text, is untouchable, and i insist your feeble at best
The only swings you throwing,- are the one’s at recess
Kid you blew your chance.. and yet, you still flippin phant
all your shits ‘offal’,like butchered entrails in sewage plants
Ret’s smashing this whore, first to get knocked to the floor
Then I’ll slam your dome into the wall..like an electrical chord
who cares where your from, u ride the champ to the rally
u're stuck up his ass which proves why I left u dead in ‘cali’
My shit gets huggs and arm-fulls, all you get is snarls
Even Queen Elizabeth, held the crown longer then charles
Bash in ya chest, slice ya by the dome, n hitchu with a left
Tried to take retulen", but you couldn’t swallow without a neck
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Old 12-05-2003, 06:42 PM   #8 (permalink)
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good battle

vote- retulen

i think he came harder in all aspects..charles had some nice punches, but ret had some firah punches



Kid you blew your chance.. and yet, you still flippin phant
all your shits ‘offal’,like butchered entrails in sewage plants
^ fira!
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Old 12-05-2003, 11:40 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Vote=Charles
I'm definitely feelin that ''tore-ret'' / wordplay line...
Actually i'm feeling this entire battle...and curious why nobody else voted yet.
Nonetheless, Charles came with better form...i was able to break down his bars into a better flow..
Punches were a tad bit harder.
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Old 12-06-2003, 06:51 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Vote-Charles
His punches were much more witty and humerous. Ret your punches were decent but just didn't carry any structure with them.
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Old 12-06-2003, 11:18 AM   #11 (permalink)
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i gotta say vote charles as well...

came with a witty steeze, nice flow, cool delivery, and just some nice lines

retulen came pretty off kilter...i mean the concepts were ok at best, and the delivery didnt help....by delivery i mean wording


v. charles

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Old 12-06-2003, 07:11 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Saw ya last match..we cud disperse the news..
Cuz i'll put a Bulletin..
...while you make the fake personals..
decent open
Your lines arnt witty..dukes needin a hed scan
Cuz only React i know thats dope..
...is the one thats featuring Redman..
haha, pretty str8
Saw ya last week..the irony made me crack up twice
How u say Namix bit Resin..
...and then close flippin a Fracture line?
bad wording
All have 'Tore-Ret'..Fuck,shit,bitch..im blazin you
^^See im usin Paper's wordplay..
Since last week u showd you think thats okay to do
haha, nice
Your pussy..cuz if u dnt want me to abuse you..
you'll let ya sis-go do it all.
..just like the way that Dru Hill used to..
ehhhh
You cant front on skill..so believe that im dope
Cuz im a Livin Legend..
.....and after this u'll be neither of those..
haha nice concept
Messin wit me is gd for u..helpd ya shit rappin..
Cuz I brought out the best in you..
...and then i slapped that bitch back in..
ehhh, decent
Stop maskin ya badness..dont pout n bitch..
Cuz if RM Seize-ure wackness..
...you'd start ta froth at the mouth n twitch..
played, not a good ending

this was an ok verse
nothing really special
I've still seen better from u in the past
it was a decent tho


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give u props cuz you tried- but I peeped and it was nothin
so grab some tannin lotion- cuz you'll need it for this sonnin
haha, nice little opener
My rhymes divine,- why you can barley right a punchline
You beat scientz? -Well consider me albert Einstein
haha, an ok concept, could've been worded better
Fuckin, with ret’ll leave ya maimed, our skills the same?
Charles known to- ‘steal’ more lines the titanic’s frame
ehhh
My text, is untouchable, and i insist your feeble at best
The only swings you throwing,- are the one’s at recess
haha, nice concept
Kid you blew your chance.. and yet, you still flippin phant
all your shits ‘offal’,like butchered entrails in sewage plants
decent
Ret’s smashing this whore, first to get knocked to the floor
Then I’ll slam your dome into the wall..like an electrical chord
haha, str8 punch
who cares where your from, u ride the champ to the rally
u're stuck up his ass which proves why I left u dead in ‘cali’
ahahahaha, i liked that one ;=)
My shit gets huggs and arm-fulls, all you get is snarls
Even Queen Elizabeth, held the crown longer then charles
haha
Bash in ya chest, slice ya by the dome, n hitchu with a left
Tried to take retulen", but you couldn’t swallow without a neck
lol, pretty good ending

this wasn't that bad of a verse
some could've been worded better
u need to work on ur flow a little more
but that's not really a big factor in text
the punches were there
prett good verse homie


vote = Retulen Reactus

I felt like he came more consistent
charles had some good punches but also had some bad ones
his verse was off and on
Retulen had his share of bad punches too but I thought charles had more bad ones
this was a pretty close battle
I saw Retulen edging this out tho

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Old 12-06-2003, 07:15 PM   #14 (permalink)
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anyways

Charles started poorly, then came back with the Tore-Ret line..then fell again..but ended okay.

Ret started poorly, but came more consistent so I have to give my vote to Retulen with a more solid verse.

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Old 12-06-2003, 07:20 PM   #15 (permalink)
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one of the better battles

retulen had some bad punches, had some very nice ones also, solid verse

charles- wasnt feeling your verse... had a nice opener but thats about it

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Old 12-07-2003, 02:27 PM   #16 (permalink)
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who cares where your from, u ride the champ to the rally
u're stuck up his ass which proves why I left u dead in ‘cali’


Tight line...

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Old 12-07-2003, 05:57 PM   #17 (permalink)
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nice battle..

Charles - I liked your verse, I just think you fell off on a couple parts, but the tore-ret line was nice .. made me chuckle but you didn't stand up to that line again..

Ret - you didn't have ONE line that stood out as much as his one.. BUT your verse on an avg was better chan charles by a little, your wording, concepts.. slightly edged him

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i'm going with Charles on this


he had better concepts and punches in my opinion


Ret didn't really have the flow and his punches were average



that living legend line was nice

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Old 12-07-2003, 10:19 PM   #19 (permalink)
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V - Charles

I wouldn't call his style witty, like Headless did, since it's been used a lot. But he made it flow good, some nice lines throughout his shit

Ret, most of the time your stuff is nice, you usually have some nice direct stuff.

But Charles had nicer punches.

You cant front on skill..so believe that im dope
Cuz im a Livin Legend..
.....and after this u'll be neither of those..

Heh .. Nice.

Dope battle.
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