9. Scientz 9-3 vs. 10. Vyris 9-4

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Old 12-01-2003, 08:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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9. Scientz 9-3 vs. 10. Vyris 9-4

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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 12-02-2003, 01:22 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 12-02-2003, 06:53 AM   #4 (permalink)
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one blast u'll be leakin, leave ya ass gaspin n weazing
fuck just elephant guns, i'll bring a whole african region
ur attracted to semen, "ohh my god" not a cum rhyme
got hit wit so many cannons,
that this bitch started his own drumline
ur fuckin wack, the proof is u constantly losing battles
so there's not a good vyris,
herpes, aids, mono, n yourself...r just a few examples
this fag's really wack, how u gon hand me a loss?
i'll just watch ya style unfold,
into matching sets of panties n bras
scientz gives it to lames, punches hit a few frames
cuz im a knockout king, n ur jus real good at video games
peeped who i was battling, how can i type with a grin
i'd laugh my ass off, but i'd probably never find it again
the best this site offers, try me? i'll attack u haters
dont like my lines?
but steady repeating....like pie keys on calculators
he's scared of pussy, if a broad tried sex'n this herb's face
he'd run home...before he could reach 1st, 2nd, or 3rd base
this hicks into beastiality, i found out its true
asked em to hold his horses, he proceeded to fondle em too
when ur drunk u think ur signed, thats what faggots been told
so ur just a lil sisqo away, from going platinum or gold
i hope these lines hurt u, when testing me just bring it
dont just take offense to my lines, add on special teams n defense

holla at cha boy!!!
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Old 12-02-2003, 11:35 AM   #5 (permalink)
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dear scientz,

placed last in the PBA, u're flow is poor and slightly gross
in other words ur style is just a worthless fit like cheap clothes
and ur girl seems to agree, and she already junked ur vote
so drown in that...
but fuck the relationship cuz u've already sunk the boat
u're pretty-ugly, ur spits get booed awfully too long
see ^^ u're words wouldn't connect if I gave u oxymorons!!
but now lets get serious, this lines gonna capture the sway
cuz if u're itchin to win, I'm just gonna scratch u away
and erase u, takin the plot like satan it's hot
and how are u a baller?
when u fade away without even takin the shot
and fuck the rank maker this week my pen will spread a stink
cuz I rip heads with ink and well, u just give head to ink
but back to ur girlfriend, her breast will measure less than fat
and that's the golden truth so...
she hides and tries to be smooth but even her treasure chest is flat
u're nothin but an easy win and that's it and now I'm sure, keep ur written raps nerd
and this is 'war' <-- oh, I just wanted to prove I can be 'raw' and beat u spittin backwards
now I'll punch and hammer ya, lunge and damage ya
bitch I'll leave u out cold like bums in canada
but let's talk about where u live and about how u think u rap
cuz I know that ur place in thought, is only a beat up shack
I'ma leave jerks just stearin and now that ur verse is tearin
I'ma leave a Gap in ur chest, like the t-shirt u're wearin

and that's how u do it.
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Old 12-02-2003, 11:57 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Nice battle guys.

Eyedill, your whole second half of your verse was nice except one line where the flow fell off, but you didnt get rocking until the secodn half. That hurt compared to Scientz who had them flamers from jump ALMOST all the way down his verse. Close shit but ima have to go with....

Scientz by a nose hair.
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Old 12-02-2003, 01:48 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 12-02-2003, 06:25 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Scientz- cannons coo, good vryriss line lmao, unfld nice, pei coo, run home coo, hold horses line funny N dope, offense coo.. overall nice verse... eyedill fit coo, itchen ok, out cold coo, place coo.. he ahd a solid verse.. I jsut felt scientz came with dope lines while eyedill came with decent ones

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Old 12-02-2003, 09:01 PM   #9 (permalink)
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and how are u a baller?
when u fade away without even takin the shot

i cant vote..but damn that was a nice line.
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Old 12-02-2003, 11:10 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Scientz
lets go!!!!


one blast u'll be leakin, leave ya ass gaspin n weazing
fuck just elephant guns, i'll bring a whole african region
ur attracted to semen, "ohh my god" not a cum rhyme
got hit wit so many cannons,
that this bitch started his own drumline

this fag's really wack, how u gon hand me a loss?
i'll just watch ya style unfold,
into matching sets of panties n bras
scientz gives it to lames, punches hit a few frames
cuz im a knockout king, n ur jus real good at video games
peeped who i was battling, how can i type with a grin
i'd laugh my ass off, but i'd probably never find it again
the best this site offers, try me? i'll attack u haters
dont like my lines?
but steady repeating....like pie keys on calculators

this hicks into beastiality, i found out its true
asked em to hold his horses, he proceeded to fondle em too
Feelin all that.

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Originally Posted by Eyedill
but now lets get serious, this lines gonna capture the sway
cuz if u're itchin to win, I'm just gonna scratch u away

and how are u a baller?
when u fade away without even takin the shot
and fuck the rank maker this week my pen will spread a stink
cuz I rip heads with ink and well, u just give head to ink
nerd

and this is 'war' <-- oh, I just wanted to prove I can be 'raw' and beat u spittin backwards
Feelin these, but u didn't have as many as Scientz. U could've done a lot more wit that last one I have on there.

Vote=Scientz

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Old 12-03-2003, 03:34 AM   #11 (permalink)
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good shit dill....props

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Old 12-03-2003, 05:11 AM   #12 (permalink)
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vote- Sci

Eyedill only had one line that i was actually feelin which was already quoted...sci was solid all the way thru so he gets my vote..good shit doggies...pz
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Old 12-03-2003, 09:54 AM   #13 (permalink)
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thx sci ;)

that's 0-4, my last up!!
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Old 12-03-2003, 11:56 PM   #14 (permalink)
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God dayum....i hate situations like this.

Lemme Break it down...

Scientz:
one blast u'll be leakin, leave ya ass gaspin n weazing
fuck just elephant guns, i'll bring a whole african region
***Nice, Nice***
he's scared of pussy, if a broad tried sex'n this herb's face
he'd run home...before he could reach 1st, 2nd, or 3rd base
***Ridiculed him. Just Ridiculed.***
this hicks into beastiality, i found out its true
asked em to hold his horses, he proceeded to fondle em too
***LMFAO. Rugged.***

That shit was FUCKING fire. 9.5/10

Now for Vyris:
and ur girl seems to agree, and she already junked ur vote
so drown in that...
but fuck the relationship cuz u've already sunk the boat
***Haha, i feel you dog***
but now lets get serious, this lines gonna capture the sway
cuz if u're itchin to win, I'm just gonna scratch u away
***Hot...good wordplay***
now I'll punch and hammer ya, lunge and damage ya
bitch I'll leave u out cold like bums in canada
***Whooo!***
and this is 'war' <-- oh, I just wanted to prove I can be 'raw' and beat u spittin backwards
***Tight***


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Vote=Scientz...
Just being real about a real battle.

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Old 12-03-2003, 11:59 PM   #15 (permalink)
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That vote was mine. Sorry MC's...cousin logged on and i didn't see his name.

My bad.

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Old 12-04-2003, 06:33 PM   #16 (permalink)
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I liked scientz verse.. he had some fiyah lines.. first, second, third line, vyris line..

Eyedill REALLY suprised me .. the raw line, the baller line..

this shit was MUCH closer than it seemed.. and I'ma have to go vyris by a hair..

altho both came HOT

vote = Vyris
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Old 12-04-2003, 09:07 PM   #17 (permalink)
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vote- dill

scientz- nice opener, the middle was a bit bland, but the last couple of lines, were your best

eyedill- opener was ehh, middle was nice, that baller line was firah, closer was good also

overall i felt dill wanted this more, and it was established in the punches
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Old 12-04-2003, 09:15 PM   #18 (permalink)
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wow, this was a good battle

Scientz:
this fag's really wack, how u gon hand me a loss?
i'll just watch ya style unfold,
into matching sets of panties n bras

nice

this hicks into beastiality, i found out its true
asked em to hold his horses, he proceeded to fondle em too

dope

Eyedill
but now lets get serious, this lines gonna capture the sway
cuz if u're itchin to win, I'm just gonna scratch u away

yup

and how are u a baller?
when u fade away without even takin the shot

good shit

liked the raw line


man, this was fuckin close


vote - eyedill

best battle i've read so far

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Old 12-05-2003, 02:23 AM   #19 (permalink)
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Sci... this was fire
one blast u'll be leakin, leave ya ass gaspin n weazing
fuck just elephant guns, i'll bring a whole african region
ur attracted to semen, "ohh my god" not a cum rhyme
got hit wit so many cannons,
that this bitch started his own drumline
ur fuckin wack, the proof is u constantly losing battles
so there's not a good vyris,
herpes, aids, mono, n yourself...r just a few examples
this fag's really wack, how u gon hand me a loss?
i'll just watch ya style unfold,
into matching sets of panties n bras
scientz gives it to lames, punches hit a few frames
cuz im a knockout king, n ur jus real good at video games
peeped who i was battling, how can i type with a grin
i'd laugh my ass off, but i'd probably never find it again
the best this site offers, try me? i'll attack u haters
dont like my lines?
but steady repeating....like pie keys on calculators
he's scared of pussy, if a broad tried sex'n this herb's face
he'd run home...before he could reach 1st, 2nd, or 3rd base
thats nearly ur whole verse.. i thought the ending was "UM, WHAT HAPPENED?"

dill.. opening was ehh
but now lets get serious, this lines gonna capture the sway
cuz if u're itchin to win, I'm just gonna scratch u away
^ill
and erase u, takin the plot like satan it's hot
and how are u a baller?
when u fade away without even takin the shot<--ill
and fuck the rank maker this week my pen will spread a stink<--what the fuck? spread a stink?
cuz I rip heads with ink and well, u just give head to ink
^ill.

vote- scientz.. came thru w/ a more consistant verse while dill had some hot lines here and there.
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