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word up
battling nasif you no you gotta mess with his flock
and you 5-0 well im bout to put that on a road block/
...man, i think you had a REAL good concept going for you here.. the 5-0 lines are played.. i've seen them flipped soooooooo much in the police context since i been in this league.. if one of the kid's records are 5-0 in a battle, its almost certain that they will have some reference to cops lol.. BUT, being that his name is roadblock AND thats his record, i dug your idea.. Your prolly the last kid that coulda pulled off a reaaaaaaaal dope flip to the 5-0 line as far as im concerned, but you didnt quite deliver it as nice as you coulda.. it just seemed a little rushed.. even by adding a little more complexity to it with something along the lines of "getting passed roadblock like fuck the 5-0', i think i woulda dug it more.. but still a nice thought man
your success of winning aint lasting no more
ur verses straight garbage even got declined by the poors/
......heh, it was sorta funny- but also real simple.. these garbage lines are flipped similarly alot of times.. wasnt feeling this too much
you shud no battling me you will never really win
call my knife bumps the way its gettin to your skin/
....well, "bumps" (as long as ur referring to goosbumps or somethin), i tend to think of as "on the skin"... really i just didnt like your wording here too much, it was an aiight concept though
i never really loss in rbl so you no im the best
you just got in top 30 and already failed to pass the test/
.....ehhh, not feeling this one too much partna.. your opener was the best line tho, it was still a cool thought..
roadblock
I'm beyond rugged with rap slang.
Word, how you expect to be down when you got Up as a last name?
.....aiight aiight, pretty simple nameplay, but relatively effective nonetheless i s'pose, aiight start
Apparently, you're just another dyslexic to step on,
In this heated exchange you're rejectin' electrons.
....lol damn.. down to a science literally.. that was one of the more intellegent punches i have seen this week.. while it still wasnt quite JAW dropping or anything, it was nice.. nicely worded as well.. very 'to the point' like.. and this was a really fresh concept as far as i know, nice shit..
You're a fake all-star clown.
Shit, your whore's so fat she sports a rollback to make Walmart proud.
....lol, this was aiight man.. I have heard "make your eyes roll back, like walmart prices" before, so i wasnt feeling it as much, but it was an aiight flip
You're in a bad place, like Xanadu.
Got caught stealin a schwinn, and this 5-0's STILL not comin after you.
....well, i dont really dig 5-0 lines like i said before, but this was an ok flip to it with 'not coming after you' i suppose.. it did have a 'closer' feeling to it.. pretty coo quick lil verse..
vote- roadblock
why? It basically just seemed like he collected his thought a little bit better...while both of you seemed slightly rushed, it seems to me that roadblock just had better wording and fresher concepts.. stay up..
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Wonderflow
my dick is so-long.. yours is more like hello
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