5. Namix 7-1 Vs 6. Retulen Reactus 7-2

U S E R · 11-26-2003, 06:28 PM

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namix · 11-26-2003, 06:37 PM

votes:

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Retulen Reactus · 11-27-2003, 02:46 PM

make it 16 man.

Gluck

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Retulen Reactus · 11-28-2003, 09:31 PM

Beat cryo last week, but your not touchin my steez
Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease!
Micheal Jackson and R Kelley think ya real nice
They both said your fresh n tite…and I don’t mean skill wise!
Im untouchable geek , your still jockin b-boys g
So Call me sea, the way your 20,000 leagues below me!
win? please, all ya shits played n wheathered
You’ve bitten ‘resin’ so much, that ya lips stick together!
Ret's quick to rip, my lines are crowned majestic
Nam’s concert’s a rodeo, everyone stampeding for the exit!
This kid's dyslexic, i can't be phased by your weak slurs
I'll Put more shells into ya frame, then beach pictures!
Half your wins are from dickriders, the other half is luck
Cause The closest you’ll get to Victory, is at the strip club!
Last Setup= where I prepare for the final dissing.
Last Punch= …what your entire verse was missing!

namix · 11-28-2003, 10:17 PM

fuck thanksgivin kid, u lost ground faster than the Indians did
speakin of which,
...ur train of thoughts like the ‘little Injin’ that couldnt do shit
u can blame the dog, cars, obstacle courses or the fake car toy
…but none of those explain why you couldnt beat Paper, boy
ya tongue-tied like shoe laces.. so quit thinking u’ll blaze this
its over with the fat lady, and the bitch isnt singing ur praises
i go ape like king kong, on ya ass like your creepin pink thong
ur only in Ex-T cuz ya ‘rode Mud’ like the dirt street u live on
u can think a battle wit me’s more Fair than albino hair ‘n skin
but like old Michael Jackson pictures.. ya pale in comparison
everything u types fuckin pitiful, you probably even log-on sad
all ur drops are like the end of Old Yeller…cuz ya doggone bad
lol@u usin a adam n eve punch, now your verse’ll get Eden too
‘n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RBL..u’d be forbidden, fruit
finishin clowns! fuck throwin it in, wipe my piss wit the towel
kids never make-out wit muh ass, but u can start kissing it now

ur like a one-legged man in an ass kicking contest.

heh, g/l man..

U S E R · 11-29-2003, 02:32 AM

Up' Over No Shows

roadblock · 11-29-2003, 01:42 PM

funny that ret called out the other cat for resin biting, when the last two lines of his ish are earily similar to a frac couplet in PBA 1.

but I digress.

i think namix took this by a bit. retulen had the flow edge, but namix's punches were wittier (with the exception of the MJ line - which was HORRID).

v - Namix.

namix · 11-29-2003, 02:05 PM

up

...and yea, i have never bit in my life.. making up personals is gay ret lol.

(lol and word at the MJ line roadblock, except i hope u've at least heard the phrase 'u pale in comparison to me'- but im not defending it lol)

roadblock · 11-29-2003, 03:04 PM

lol

yes.

i've heard the phrase. tooooooo many times.

eyedeal · 11-29-2003, 05:09 PM

iight, here's the breakdown...

Retulen Reactus:
Beat cryo last week, but your not touchin my steez
Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease!
haha, cool opener.. 2.5/5
Micheal Jackson and R Kelley think ya real nice
They both said your fresh n tite…and I don’t mean skill wise!
ehh, decent.. 2/5
Im untouchable geek , your still jockin b-boys g
So Call me sea, the way your 20,000 leagues below me!
haha, liked the concept, could've been worded better tho.. 3/5
win? please, all ya shits played n wheathered
You’ve bitten ‘resin’ so much, that ya lips stick together!
haha, i liked that.. 3.5/5
Ret's quick to rip, my lines are crowned majestic
Nam’s concert’s a rodeo, everyone stampeding for the exit!
ehhh, decent.. 2/5
This kid's dyslexic, i can't be phased by your weak slurs
I'll Put more shells into ya frame, then beach pictures!
haha, good wordplay.. 3/5
Half your wins are from dickriders, the other half is luck
Cause The closest you’ll get to Victory, is at the strip club!
hmm, it's decent.. 2/5
Last Setup= where I prepare for the final dissing.
Last Punch= …what your entire verse was missing!
nice ending.. 3/5

pretty cool verse
wasn't really top quality
I've seen better from u
but it was pretty str8
ur total score is.. 21/40

Namix:
fuck thanksgivin kid, u lost ground faster than the Indians did
speakin of which,
...ur train of thoughts like the ‘little Injin’ that couldnt do shit
nah.. 2/5
u can blame the dog, cars, obstacle courses or the fake car toy
…but none of those explain why you couldnt beat Paper, boy
[i]this was cool.. 3/5
ya tongue-tied like shoe laces.. so quit thinking u’ll blaze this
its over with the fat lady, and the bitch isnt singing ur praises
wtf, nah man.. 1/5
i go ape like king kong, on ya ass like your creepin pink thong
ur only in Ex-T cuz ya ‘rode Mud’ like the dirt street u live on
haha, cool concept.. 3/5
u can think a battle wit me’s more Fair than albino hair ‘n skin
but like old Michael Jackson pictures.. ya pale in comparison
nope, played.. 1/5
everything u types fuckin pitiful, you probably even log-on sad
all ur drops are like the end of Old Yeller…cuz ya doggone bad
wtf? ahahahaha, that's a newbie punch if I ever seen one.. 1/5
lol@u usin a adam n eve punch, now your verse’ll get Eden too
‘n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RBL..u’d be forbidden, fruit
haha, that was cool.. 3/5
finishin clowns! fuck throwin it in, wipe my piss wit the towel
kids never make-out wit muh ass, but u can start kissing it now
very bad ending.. [1/5

not really a good verse
this was my first time peepin u
not really impressive at all
work on ur wording and content kiddo
ur overall score is... 15/40

so both total scores are...

Retulen Reactus: 21/40
Namix: 15/40

vote=Retulen

He was more consistent and thought out
namix just seemed bland and needed better wording too
some of his concepts were good but most weren't
retulen edged 'em out in this one

holler!!

Craven Moorehead · 11-29-2003, 06:54 PM

RR had little appeal - a lot of flipped shit that wasn't that nice. How the fuck did I lose to you? Haha - anyways. namix had the 'paper, boy' line, the 'rode mud' and the last section of his verse were all dopeness. He had better content which made for the easy dub-ya.

Vote: namix

Retulen Reactus · 11-29-2003, 08:44 PM

my upp.

Inkwell Q · 11-29-2003, 10:08 PM

V - Retulen Reactus

Namix seemed rushed a little, I dont know how much time you put into that verse, but some of those lines were just .. Not up to par with your other shits.

RR came decent, your closer has been done an infinite amount of times though.

The Tour-Rets line was pretty good

Namix has the Rode Mud line, but I felt Retulen had a tad bit more material IMO.

Nice battle.

Desenut§ · 11-30-2003, 02:02 AM

Ret had a pretty goood verse.. I was impressed.. and figured he had it.....

but from line one.. namix took control.. and kept it.. just with better wording.. flow.. and punch concepts..

vote-Namix

Charles · 11-30-2003, 08:31 AM

namix was niiice..paper boy,and eden lines were fuckin nice...wow...ret made up personals?!?!wha?

Vote - Namix,easy

Retulen Reactus · 11-30-2003, 01:45 PM

STFU
WITH THESE MADE UP PERSONALS, look on b-boys, and if read my verse you could tell it was one line

ill edit this with votes

Calefaction · 11-30-2003, 01:51 PM

Namix - Came with a nice verse, I DID like the paper boy and eden lines.. but I didnt think they were ground breaking and that was more or less the only thing standing out

Ret - Resin line, shells line, closer..<--basically those won it for you, the rest of your verse was about = to namix's rest of his verse.. but you had 3 stand out lines..

vote = double R

Break it · 11-30-2003, 02:06 PM

ima have to go with RR on this one just took this in my case both came out aggresive and had a real clean fight..lol naw but in my opinion for flow, punches and pers i'm goin wit RR on this

vote-Retulen

X sample · 11-30-2003, 06:05 PM

vote = namix..

pretty clear winner IMO...brought a dope verse, namix is proly the freshest writer in the rbl right now...

retulen - nice verse, pretty consistent, but i thought the only standout line was the beach/shells line...
some of them were a bit played..still good shit

namix - u brought fire...that MJ line was a bit played, but it was still flipped good..thanksgivin line was dope, as was the mud and adam and eve line...got this..

vote = namix

Papermate · 11-30-2003, 07:21 PM

Vote = Retulen Reactus

Had some nicer punches, pretty clean verse

Namix .. Came weak this time, usually he does much better than what I'm seeing from him now.

Retulen had a good flow, aswell.

11-26-2003, 06:37 PM	#2 (permalink)
namix u flip shit, i refine it Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 1,185	votes: 71. Insane Clown Vs 72. Incephalon Vs 73. Sram Vs 74. Blemickis Vs 75. cYnic Vs Proof http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...13#post7836913 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...70#post7838770 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...79#post7841579 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...46#post7841646 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...92#post7841692 __________________ Wonderflow my dick is so-long.. yours is more like hello Last edited by namix; 11-30-2003 at 08:52 PM.

11-27-2003, 02:46 PM	#3 (permalink)
Retulen Reactus Text Legend. Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: my crib Posts: 2,609	make it 16 man. Gluck CHAMPIONSHIP: 1. Mr. Body 8-0 Vs 2. Papermate 7-0 49. Break It 1-2 Vs 50. Lusty Letitium 0-1 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...31#post7841031 71. Insane Clown Vs 72. Incephalon Vs 73. Sram Vs 74. Blemickis Vs 75. cYnic Vs Proof http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...25#post7841625 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...44#post7841644 __________________ throw back Ex-t and [1]Click. [ Retulen- Perma-Inkwell] Precision Last edited by Retulen Reactus; 11-30-2003 at 08:48 PM.

11-28-2003, 09:31 PM	#4 (permalink)
Retulen Reactus Text Legend. Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: my crib Posts: 2,609	Beat cryo last week, but your not touchin my steez Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease! Micheal Jackson and R Kelley think ya real nice They both said your fresh n tite…and I don’t mean skill wise! Im untouchable geek , your still jockin b-boys g So Call me sea, the way your 20,000 leagues below me! win? please, all ya shits played n wheathered You’ve bitten ‘resin’ so much, that ya lips stick together! Ret's quick to rip, my lines are crowned majestic Nam’s concert’s a rodeo, everyone stampeding for the exit! This kid's dyslexic, i can't be phased by your weak slurs I'll Put more shells into ya frame, then beach pictures! Half your wins are from dickriders, the other half is luck Cause The closest you’ll get to Victory, is at the strip club! Last Setup= where I prepare for the final dissing. Last Punch= …what your entire verse was missing! __________________ throw back Ex-t and [1]Click. [ Retulen- Perma-Inkwell] Precision

11-28-2003, 10:17 PM	#5 (permalink)
namix u flip shit, i refine it Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 1,185	fuck thanksgivin kid, u lost ground faster than the Indians did speakin of which, ...ur train of thoughts like the ‘little Injin’ that couldnt do shit u can blame the dog, cars, obstacle courses or the fake car toy …but none of those explain why you couldnt beat Paper, boy ya tongue-tied like shoe laces.. so quit thinking u’ll blaze this its over with the fat lady, and the bitch isnt singing ur praises i go ape like king kong, on ya ass like your creepin pink thong ur only in Ex-T cuz ya ‘rode Mud’ like the dirt street u live on u can think a battle wit me’s more Fair than albino hair ‘n skin but like old Michael Jackson pictures.. ya pale in comparison everything u types fuckin pitiful, you probably even log-on sad all ur drops are like the end of Old Yeller…cuz ya doggone bad lol@u usin a adam n eve punch, now your verse’ll get Eden too ‘n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RBL..u’d be forbidden, fruit finishin clowns! fuck throwin it in, wipe my piss wit the towel kids never make-out wit muh ass, but u can start kissing it now ur like a one-legged man in an ass kicking contest. heh, g/l man.. __________________ Wonderflow my dick is so-long.. yours is more like hello

11-29-2003, 01:42 PM	#7 (permalink)
roadblock walken on the wild side. Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 452	funny that ret called out the other cat for resin biting, when the last two lines of his ish are earily similar to a frac couplet in PBA 1. but I digress. i think namix took this by a bit. retulen had the flow edge, but namix's punches were wittier (with the exception of the MJ line - which was HORRID). v - Namix. __________________ you get me in a vendetta-kinda mood, you tell the angels in heaven you never seen evil so singularly personified as you did in the face of the man that killed you...

11-29-2003, 02:05 PM	#8 (permalink)
namix u flip shit, i refine it Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 1,185	up ...and yea, i have never bit in my life.. making up personals is gay ret lol. (lol and word at the MJ line roadblock, except i hope u've at least heard the phrase 'u pale in comparison to me'- but im not defending it lol) __________________ Wonderflow my dick is so-long.. yours is more like hello Last edited by namix; 11-30-2003 at 08:51 PM.

11-29-2003, 03:04 PM	#9 (permalink)
roadblock walken on the wild side. Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 452	lol yes. i've heard the phrase. tooooooo many times. __________________ you get me in a vendetta-kinda mood, you tell the angels in heaven you never seen evil so singularly personified as you did in the face of the man that killed you...

11-29-2003, 05:09 PM	#10 (permalink)
eyedeal The Bad Guy Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: GA Posts: 20,306	iight, here's the breakdown... *Retulen Reactus:* Beat cryo last week, but your not touchin my steez Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease! haha, cool opener.. 2.5/5 Micheal Jackson and R Kelley think ya real nice They both said your fresh n tite…and I don’t mean skill wise! ehh, decent.. 2/5 Im untouchable geek , your still jockin b-boys g So Call me sea, the way your 20,000 leagues below me! haha, liked the concept, could've been worded better tho.. 3/5 win? please, all ya shits played n wheathered You’ve bitten ‘resin’ so much, that ya lips stick together! haha, i liked that.. 3.5/5 Ret's quick to rip, my lines are crowned majestic Nam’s concert’s a rodeo, everyone stampeding for the exit! ehhh, decent.. 2/5 This kid's dyslexic, i can't be phased by your weak slurs I'll Put more shells into ya frame, then beach pictures! haha, good wordplay.. 3/5 Half your wins are from dickriders, the other half is luck Cause The closest you’ll get to Victory, is at the strip club! hmm, it's decent.. 2/5 Last Setup= where I prepare for the final dissing. Last Punch= …what your entire verse was missing! nice ending.. 3/5 pretty cool verse wasn't really top quality I've seen better from u but it was pretty str8 ur total score is.. *21/40* *Namix:* fuck thanksgivin kid, u lost ground faster than the Indians did speakin of which, ...ur train of thoughts like the ‘little Injin’ that couldnt do shit nah.. 2/5 u can blame the dog, cars, obstacle courses or the fake car toy …but none of those explain why you couldnt beat Paper, boy [i]this was cool.. 3/5 ya tongue-tied like shoe laces.. so quit thinking u’ll blaze this its over with the fat lady, and the bitch isnt singing ur praises wtf, nah man.. 1/5 i go ape like king kong, on ya ass like your creepin pink thong ur only in Ex-T cuz ya ‘rode Mud’ like the dirt street u live on haha, cool concept.. 3/5 u can think a battle wit me’s more Fair than albino hair ‘n skin but like old Michael Jackson pictures.. ya pale in comparison nope, played.. 1/5 everything u types fuckin pitiful, you probably even log-on sad all ur drops are like the end of Old Yeller…cuz ya doggone bad wtf? ahahahaha, that's a newbie punch if I ever seen one.. 1/5 lol@u usin a adam n eve punch, now your verse’ll get Eden too ‘n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RBL..u’d be forbidden, fruit haha, that was cool.. 3/5 finishin clowns! fuck throwin it in, wipe my piss wit the towel kids never make-out wit muh ass, but u can start kissing it now very bad ending.. [1/5 not really a good verse this was my first time peepin u not really impressive at all work on ur wording and content kiddo ur overall score is... 15/40 so both total scores are... Retulen Reactus: 21/40 Namix: 15/40 vote=Retulen He was more consistent and thought out namix just seemed bland and needed better wording too some of his concepts were good but most weren't retulen edged 'em out in this one holler!!

11-29-2003, 06:54 PM	#11 (permalink)
Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy Join Date: May 2002 Location: Vancouver Island, B.C. Posts: 758	RR had little appeal - a lot of flipped shit that wasn't that nice. How the fuck did I lose to you? Haha - anyways. namix had the 'paper, boy' line, the 'rode mud' and the last section of his verse were all dopeness. He had better content which made for the easy dub-ya. Vote: namix __________________ Whut don't you say to a woman with breast cancer? 2 is better than 1. Yep, I'm going to hell.

11-29-2003, 08:44 PM	#12 (permalink)
Retulen Reactus Text Legend. Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: my crib Posts: 2,609	my upp. __________________ throw back Ex-t and [1]Click. [ Retulen- Perma-Inkwell] Precision

11-29-2003, 10:08 PM	#13 (permalink)
Inkwell Q 1X RBL Champion Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Boston, MA. Posts: 3,970	V - Retulen Reactus Namix seemed rushed a little, I dont know how much time you put into that verse, but some of those lines were just .. Not up to par with your other shits. RR came decent, your closer has been done an infinite amount of times though. The Tour-Rets line was pretty good Namix has the Rode Mud line, but I felt Retulen had a tad bit more material IMO. Nice battle. __________________ Newbie Monsters ... ResiduaL ... Resin M-I-C ... Inkwell ... ... Overhead ... Siryn ... PointGod ... Silentt ... MASH OUT WHITEBOYS

11-30-2003, 02:02 AM	#14 (permalink)
Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: H-Town Posts: 739	Ret had a pretty goood verse.. I was impressed.. and figured he had it..... but from line one.. namix took control.. and kept it.. just with better wording.. flow.. and punch concepts.. vote-Namix __________________ Fuckin a sig since the 80's

11-30-2003, 08:31 AM	#15 (permalink)
Charles Kwelity Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 1,032	namix was niiice..paper boy,and eden lines were fuckin nice...wow...ret made up personals?!?!wha? Vote - Namix,easy __________________ My boo guna work the avenue...my Nat'll fuck you up if i ask her to.

11-30-2003, 01:45 PM	#16 (permalink)
Retulen Reactus Text Legend. Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: my crib Posts: 2,609	STFU WITH THESE MADE UP PERSONALS, look on b-boys, and if read my verse you could tell it was one line ill edit this with votes __________________ throw back Ex-t and [1]Click. [ Retulen- Perma-Inkwell] Precision

11-30-2003, 01:51 PM	#17 (permalink)
Calefaction Legendary Textcee Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: M-town, NY Posts: 7,453	Namix - Came with a nice verse, I DID like the paper boy and eden lines.. but I didnt think they were ground breaking and that was more or less the only thing standing out Ret - Resin line, shells line, closer..<--basically those won it for you, the rest of your verse was about = to namix's rest of his verse.. but you had 3 stand out lines.. vote = double R __________________ Text Masters Of The Universe

11-30-2003, 02:06 PM	#18 (permalink)
Break it TEXTACY Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Where Dawgs Reap the benefits of Life Posts: 1,639	ima have to go with RR on this one just took this in my case both came out aggresive and had a real clean fight..lol naw but in my opinion for flow, punches and pers i'm goin wit RR on this vote-Retulen

11-30-2003, 06:05 PM	#19 (permalink)
X sample watch me shine Join Date: May 2003 Location: in yo sisters bed Posts: 11,367	vote = namix.. pretty clear winner IMO...brought a dope verse, namix is proly the freshest writer in the rbl right now... retulen - nice verse, pretty consistent, but i thought the only standout line was the beach/shells line... some of them were a bit played..still good shit namix - u brought fire...that MJ line was a bit played, but it was still flipped good..thanksgivin line was dope, as was the mud and adam and eve line...got this.. vote = namix __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=104229 "Only Mike puts up numbers like these, and hes no longer playin'.. but, neither am i" - Joe Budden

11-30-2003, 07:21 PM	#20 (permalink)
Papermate Registered Writer Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 460	Vote = Retulen Reactus Had some nicer punches, pretty clean verse Namix .. Came weak this time, usually he does much better than what I'm seeing from him now. Retulen had a good flow, aswell. __________________ Papermizzle