CONTENDERSHIP: 3. Inkwell Q 14-1 Vs 4. Charles 10-4

[U S E R]

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-The Rapmusic Battle League

[Inkwell Q]

How's 14?

[Charles]

ehh...i'd rather go 20..that cool?

[Inkwell Q]

I got no time

[Charles]

knuckle up,cuz ya gotta fight to say im spittin worse
memorise my lines,then i'll show u how hard i'll kick a verse
ima be the last to spray,look at the votes past this day
you'll be losin bad,boy...like when biggie smalls passed away
you wont win again in the league,wont ever destroy men
only close to the Victor,when ya snuggle wit ya boyfriend
dont start with me,beat u untill your heart dont beat
i'll empty a cartridge,then you'll see Ink start to leak
get close to a dudes where i live,get wrecked n bruised
prefer the male scent,like rappers when checks are due
fuck you up in many ways,shouldnt be allowed to rhyme
n if usin knifes is cold,i'll send shivers down ya spine
thinkin ur a test is foolish,funny how dumb this fools is
cuz ya aint pushin charlie,like those private school kids
your a pussy man,i'll fill you wit shots till the blood spit
i pack a string of bullets,n i'll put a knot in ya stomach
fuck a homo,you take it too new hights with this sick shit
i got the win in the bag,hy's got blusher,balm n lipstick
use the ebonics of the street,in the flyest respects
n it relates to this battle,cuz now Hy's gettin wrecked

[Inkwell Q]

Hey fagbot, nice bitch move by dropping 20 when I only had time for 14...

You stay with that senseless shit, but you'll never catch Ink mumblin'
Cause the only Charles to ever hold the crown, was durin the 1700's
I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug
Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
Ya old and whack, n remember that Inkwell is a cornorery artist, fool
When your fuckin hairline is re-seeding more than horrible farmers do
Lines are alarmin you, look at ya corpse an see ya shirt blood stained
Shitting on ya until Charlie Brown, like a member of the Peanuts Gang
Ink spits flames, I'm a nightly fear, taking Charles down right this year
My lines'll turn ya eyes inside out an use the tissue to wipe your tears
Ink's nice with the blades, and Ink is known to drop foes when I'm on
More ButterFlies in ya stomach then askin the popular girl to the prom
Get outta here with that wack shit, n ya verses is what I'm speakin on
I'm leavin a Charlie all over the ground... like the aftermath of Vietnam
Speakin calm, wins are restin on vets, bullets are testinf Charles chest
Ink's having your rep strewn out all over the net, like Resins concepts
I'm bestin ya best, add to it, that Ink's ill and this fucking gay knows it
Only alias to go 10-4 in the contendersip match, and still be unnoticed
I flow kid, and if you catchin Inkwell, then this week, fool your luckless
I had ya girls emotions runnin high, until I put them bitches in crutches

Whatever .. 2x here I come ..

[eyedeal]

BbBbBb BREAKDOWN!!
the point system


iight, iight, ladies and gentlemen, THIS IS THE BREAKDOWN!!


Charles:
knuckle up,cuz ya gotta fight to say im spittin worse
memorise my lines,then i'll show u how hard i'll kick a verse
decent opener.. 2/5
ima be the last to spray,look at the votes past this day
you'll be losin bad,boy...like when biggie smalls passed away
haha, pretty cool line.. 2.5/5
you wont win again in the league,wont ever destroy men
only close to the Victor,when ya snuggle wit ya boyfriend
ehhh, decent.. 2/5
dont start with me,beat u untill your heart dont beat
i'll empty a cartridge,then you'll see Ink start to leak
haha, good nameplay punch.. 3/5
get close to a dudes where i live,get wrecked n bruised
prefer the male scent,like rappers when checks are due
nice, haha.. 3.5/5
fuck you up in many ways,shouldnt be allowed to rhyme
n if usin knifes is cold,i'll send shivers down ya spine
hahaha, dope.. 4/5
thinkin ur a test is foolish,funny how dumb this fools is
cuz ya aint pushin charlie,like those private school kids
ehhh, decent.. 2/5
your a pussy man,i'll fill you wit shots till the blood spit
i pack a string of bullets,n i'll put a knot in ya stomach
its a gunline but nice flip, I liked the concept.. 3/5[/i]
fuck a homo,you take it too new hights with this sick shit
i got the win in the bag,hy's got blusher,balm n lipstick
ehhhh.. 2/5
use the ebonics of the street,in the flyest respects
n it relates to this battle,cuz now Hy's gettin wrecked
ok ending, nothing really special tho.. 2/5

pretty decent verse
I've seen better from u
this seemed like it was kinda rushed maybe
needed to put more thought into it
it was cool tho
ur overall score is... 26/50


Inkwell:
You stay with that senseless shit, but you'll never catch Ink mumblin'
Cause the only Charles to ever hold the crown, was durin the 1700's
haha, nice opener.. 3.5/5
I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug
Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
hahahaha, nice concept homie..3.5/5
Ya old and whack, n remember that Inkwell is a cornorery artist, fool
When your fuckin hairline is re-seeding more than horrible farmers do
ehh, hairlines are played, decent tho.. 2/5[/i]
Lines are alarmin you, look at ya corpse an see ya shirt blood stained
Shitting on ya until Charlie Brown, like a member of the Peanuts Gang
hahaha, another nice concept.. 4/5
Ink spits flames, I'm a nightly fear, taking Charles down right this year
My lines'll turn ya eyes inside out an use the tissue to wipe your tears
ohhhh, i liked that, niceness.. 4.5/5
Ink's nice with the blades, and Ink is known to drop foes when I'm on
More ButterFlies in ya stomach then askin the popular girl to the prom
ehh, decent, not really hittin hard.. 2/5
Get outta here with that wack shit, n ya verse is what I'm speakin on
I'm leavin a Charlie all over the ground... like the aftermath of Vietnam
ahaha, nice concept, good nameplay.. 3.5/5
Speakin calm, wins are restin on vets, bullets are testin Charles chest
Ink's having your rep strewn out all over the net, like Resins concepts
was str8.. 2.5
I'm bestin ya best, add to it, that Ink's ill and this fucking gay knows it
Only alias to go 10-4 in the contendersip match, and still be unnoticed
haha, decent personal.. 3/5
I flow kid, and if you catchin Inkwell, then this week, fool your luckless
I had ya girls emotions runnin high, until I put them bitches in crutches
nice concept there, good ending.. 3.5/5

this was a pretty good verse
I was feelin alot of the concepts
very creative and had some nice wording
ur overall score is... 31.5/50


so both point system scores together are...

Charles: 26/50
Inkwell: 31.5/50


vote=Inkwell

he edged the battle out as u can see with the point system
he seemed more consistent and thought out
charles was good but just seemed like he rushed it
some of his punches were lackin that special somethin

but good battle here, was a good read.

holler!!

[Dr. Knockboots]

charles

knuckle up,cuz ya gotta fight to say im spittin worse
memorise my lines,then i'll show u how hard i'll kick a verse
nah, filler
ima be the last to spray,look at the votes past this day
you'll be losin bad,boy...like when biggie smalls passed away
haha,nice
you wont win again in the league,wont ever destroy men
only close to the Victor,when ya snuggle wit ya boyfriend
ha, cool
dont start with me,beat u untill your heart dont beat
i'll empty a cartridge,then you'll see Ink start to leak
nice
get close to a dudes where i live,get wrecked n bruised
prefer the male scent,like rappers when checks are due
nah not feelin this
fuck you up in many ways,shouldnt be allowed to rhyme
n if usin knifes is cold,i'll send shivers down ya spine
played
thinkin ur a test is foolish,funny how dumb this fools is
cuz ya aint pushin charlie,like those private school kids
nahh not feein this
your a pussy man,i'll fill you wit shots till the blood spit
i pack a string of bullets,n i'll put a knot in ya stomach
nah man to much filer
fuck a homo,you take it too new hights with this sick shit
i got the win in the bag,hy's got blusher,balm n lipstick
lol..
use the ebonics of the street,in the flyest respects
n it relates to this battle,cuz now Hy's gettin wrecked
[b]nah, filer[b]

inkwell
You stay with that senseless shit, but you'll never catch Ink mumblin'
Cause the only Charles to ever hold the crown, was durin the 1700's
ha, cool
I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug
Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
hahaha, nice
Ya old and whack, n remember that Inkwell is a cornorery artist, fool
When your fuckin hairline is re-seeding more than horrible farmers do
haha, dope
Lines are alarmin you, look at ya corpse an see ya shirt blood stained
Shitting on ya until Charlie Brown, like a member of the Peanuts Gang
lol..
Ink spits flames, I'm a nightly fear, taking Charles down right this year
My lines'll turn ya eyes inside out an use the tissue to wipe your tears
nahh
Ink's nice with the blades, and Ink is known to drop foes when I'm on
More ButterFlies in ya stomach then askin the popular girl to the prom
dope
Get outta here with that wack shit, n ya verses is what I'm speakin on
I'm leavin a Charlie all over the ground... like the aftermath of Vietnam
aight aight
Speakin calm, wins are restin on vets, bullets are testinf Charles chest
Ink's having your rep strewn out all over the net, like Resins concepts
ha, cool
I'm bestin ya best, add to it, that Ink's ill and this fucking gay knows it
Only alias to go 10-4 in the contendersip match, and still be unnoticed
nice
I flow kid, and if you catchin Inkwell, then this week, fool your luckless
I had ya girls emotions runnin high, until I put them bitches in crutches
haha, dope

preety nice battle, charles came preety nice some nice lines but alot of filler, inkwell came nice.. some good punches that lugz line was dope

vote - inkwell he had the harder punches

[Ramble]

Charles had the Victor line, coo, cartiredge nice, male scent nice, shivers coo, knowt nice, pretty nioce verse...... Ink saude line nice, re- seeding coo, Cahrlie brown dope, charlie over ground coo, rsin line coo... Both had nice concepts but I thouhgt Ink had more consistent dope punches

v- Inkwell

[Dee-Zy]

this is the way I see it...

I haven't battled text in a year or two so I might be thinking lines are dope when they are played...




only close to the Victor,when ya snuggle wit ya boyfriend
nice.

i'll empty a cartridge,then you'll see Ink start to leak
nice

prefer the male scent,like rappers when checks are due
lol

n if usin knifes is cold,i'll send shivers down ya spine
nice

i pack a string of bullets,n i'll put a knot in ya stomach
niiice!

---

Cause the only Charles to ever hold the crown, was durin the 1700's
ouch!!!

Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
niiiiice!!!

Shitting on ya until Charlie Brown, like a member of the Peanuts Gang
LOL

Ink's nice with the blades, and Ink is known to drop foes when I'm on
More ButterFlies in ya stomach then askin the popular girl to the prom
nice, but coulda been worded better

Only alias to go 10-4 in the contendersip match, and still be unnoticed
ouch

vote - ink

although I thought ink's flow was horrible as fuck... Charles had nice lines I just think Ink was more personnal and his lines were funnier.

[Tri Optix]

Ive seen Charles come a lot better..his shit didnt really pick up until half-way..

Ive also seen Ink come a lot better...he started off a bit stronger..

Overall I got Ink taking this

vote=Inkwell

[Worst Enemy]

Charles had alot of ink lines ive seen before, but he had a couple nice lines, but Ink just murked his name. Charlie on the ground line, Peanut gang, etc. Ink ran away with this one, but good try Charles.

vote- Ink

[U S E R]

Up' Over No Shows

[Sur.]

Punches: Inkwell, Easily
Flow: Even
Wordplay: Ink By a Bit
Personals: Neither...Blah
Appeal: Inkwell


Vote - Inkwell Q Fairly Easily...Although I Was Sorely Disappointed

[Charles]

i had less time than i expected...whateva...nice verse..i dropped after a night out,just to explain why i came fuckin wack..but neverteless,nice verse ink..first two bars were fire..dont worry though..i'll be back..

plus im not an alias..lol..

[Imperial]

Charles, i think ya bein a little hard on yaself. I was feelin both verses. Charles had a better flow. His wordplay was dope in a few lines. There were a couple played lines, but i liked the wit and overall style of the verse.

Inkwell had more personals. They were all dope. I liked his wordplay too. Overall, i think he was a little more consistent than Charles.

I think its closer than everyones sayin. This was a nice battle.

Vote: Inkwell Q

[roadblock]

ink took it. barely.


charles had better flow (cuz ink had ZERO flow), but ink had a couple of punches that edged him ahead.


v - Inkwell.

[Inkwell Q]

Yeah, I redid my verse and left the same multi's in there by accident, so my flow did suck bad.

9-0 Anyway.

[Craven Moorehead]

Ink got this barely - them lines be long as hell. Neither impressed me much - Charles had that 'leeking ink' line that was nice. Ink had a couple Charlie concepts that were dope - but other than that, same ol', same ol'.


Vote: Inkwell Q

[-Oz-]

I actually thought charles won. oh well