CHAMPIONSHIP: 1. Mr. Body 8-0 Vs 2. Papermate 7-0

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Old 11-26-2003, 06:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Papermate takes it up the butt!
I'm pretty sure we can add 2 more to make it a great one..

30 my man.
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Status NeSs: who is papermate.. you and?
sequence is: haha
sequence is: warlokk
sequence is: and ink helped

EYO--

U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..
That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..


YEEEEEAAAAAAAH

-U just got Body'd
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Papermate takes it up the butt!
Pfffffft .. Bitch Please..



“Its the real thing.. I know we over the lust..
Wasn't a nice guy.. you turned me from a soldier to one..
You stuck around when I was close to a bum..
Baby girl I got a feelin that I know you the one”
- Calefaction


^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
Its funny though
Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone
Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User
Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
You just mad User kicked you out of his place
Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
Its true people stay on line for Mate
Like how you meet most of your women

So uhh .. When you're ranked 9th with an 8-1 record .. How about you leave Resins intro alone pal?
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Old 11-28-2003, 03:20 AM   #8 (permalink)
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roadblock takes it up the butt!
both couldve done more in the wit department. both also had some dope wordplay based ish.


it looks like papermate tried for the rudge look, but missed. cale went for the ideal look, and hit it a bit more central.



tough call.


i think ima go for calefaction on this - but its close as FUCK. really hard to call, but i think cale had a bit of an edge.


real tough to call, but...

v - Calefaction.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Calefaction
Status NeSs: who is papermate.. you and?
sequence is: haha
sequence is: warlokk
sequence is: and ink helped

EYO--

U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines

good opener +1

That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..

cliche'd to all hell -1

N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..

not bad, even

Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..

-1

I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..

decent, even

Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..

niiice, +1

Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate

coulda been better, came out corny, even

One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..

+1

Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..

ehhhh...master locks have keys too , even

I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..

no, -1

Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..

-1

That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..

-1

Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..

haha, +1

On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..

hahaha, +1

U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..

cool, even


YEEEEEAAAAAAAH

-U just got Body'd
definitely picked up late, beginning had ok concepts but just werent used right to hit all that hard....the twins and skin lines had dope imagery and were funny as fuck


cool verse

um, u guys tally that shit..haha..




Quote:
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Pfffffft .. Bitch Please..



“Its the real thing.. I know we over the lust..
Wasn't a nice guy.. you turned me from a soldier to one..
You stuck around when I was close to a bum..
Baby girl I got a feelin that I know you the one”
- Calefaction


^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
Its funny though
Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?

hahahahaha, line of the battle +2

And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone

it was aiiight, even

Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first

hah, +1

Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User

-1

Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals

hah, +1

ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda

heh, even

Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return

blah, keep momentum going, -1

Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab

gay, -1

You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
You just mad User kicked you out of his place

heh, even...

Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered

nah, didnt work, -1

My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
And apparently STILL cant gain a pound

lol, even

Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet

daaaamn, +1

I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?

lol, +1

ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale

damn this shit is funny, even

I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
Its true people stay on line for Mate
Like how you meet most of your women

wooooooah, +2

So uhh .. When you're ranked 9th with an 8-1 record .. How about you leave Resins intro alone pal?

dammmn, i didnt do the math but i know who won


vote = papermate


this is one of the better champ matches in RECENT memory, both of you need to come like this every week....damn, props to both, cale's my boy and he def brough heat, just was off setted with some lines that didnt hit ....paper, focused on the weight thing but unlike somebody versus username, fliiiipped each line about that creatively different


damn, props
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U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines



hahah that op[enes up perfectly, peronals and all, feeling it alot



That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..





ahhah these again were nice, also the hidden personal.... feeling it




Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..





second was flipped nicely, first wasnt so great, had the edge tho as lokk trys to have the em persona







Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate





the orbit was coo, but the second was nice and halarious, it actually made you wanna use the aussie accent







One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..





that last was doope, the own vert was nicely used, wasnt expecting it the master lokk wasnt great tho... but nice







Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..







balls of tease i liked that, becuz it was original, used nicely and tyhe wordplay came through with forcing....







That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..





ahahah at the second.. that slayed in snow wasnt tho, u coulda come with a better approach focker... butt still ahahah at the second


On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..





the siamese was coo, closer killed it.... dope


paper




^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
Its funny though
Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone






thje sammi line was haha but that skibn tone wasnt, u tried changin themes / flipping and even adding tone, it never worked....


Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User





fod line was ok...... and second was coo....

Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda






if ur in the champ battle tyhese madicore lines will not do.... i love ya paper, but seriously, u need to keep it at the same pace or above.. u've dropped/ dropped /' dropped in the last 3 couplet's... all flowing off the tongue, but no thought






Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab








finally a little of the paper weve seen week in and out, dope switch ups, and lines unecpected that keeps every1 smiling..... thw wit-e was nicer






You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
You just mad User kicked you out of his place





sooooo passay, sorry soooo not to be used here,





Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
that was a decent flip on the pounds ^..... flustered was a coo simillie but its too obvious.. i aint feeling much of what paper has here..



Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet







ahahah i liked this due to the fact it was original and boasted about his un humanity lmmfao, dope




I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?





but gawd leave these damn personals out, uve used too many and 1 maybe 2's pulled off






ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
Its true people stay on line for Mate
Like how you meet most of your women




closer was straight, nice... the rock paper scissors wasnt bad.....

in the end i really felt paper over tried,, or just didnt bring it at all...... i feel he stayed on the same topic faaar too much, didnt have anough versatiltity in his verse with the flare needed, and his originality wasnt up to standards...

i love paper,ever last part of him.... or one lol..

but not this week kiko...





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Cale:
U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
ok opener
That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
haha
N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
cool
Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
decent personal
I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
haha
Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
nice, nice
Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
ohhhhhh, i liked that alot, nice concept cal
One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
haha!
Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
another nice concept
I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
ohhhh!! nice wordplay, love it
Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..
another good concept, nice
That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
nah
Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
decent
On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
ahahahahahhaa, dope
U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..
haha, good closer

nice verse overall man
I was feelin alot of the concepts in this one
was put together nicely
good shit


Paper:
^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
Its funny though
Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
ok opener
And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone
haha, nice
Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
hmm, i dunno about that one, could've been better
Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User
nah
Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
nah, not feelin it
ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
haha, decent
Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
nah
Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
haha, creative
You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
You just mad User kicked you out of his place
this was iight
Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
ehhh, gun-line
My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
haha, pretty decent personal
Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
haha
I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
ahahaha
ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
lol, coo
I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
Its true people stay on line for Mate
Like how you meet most of your women
decent ending

a pretty str8 verse here
nothing was really stand-outish tho
had a few nice lines here and there
I felt that alot of ur lines could've been better
decent shit tho


vote=Calefaction

I felt he had harder/wittier punches and concepts
he was just more thought out
paper had his on and off points
he wasn't as consistent as Cale

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Old 11-28-2003, 07:35 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Dr. Knockboots takes it up the butt!
calefaction

got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
ha, cool intro
That's three strikes.. but y'all can bring on the pitches..
I'll be havin a 'fowl ball' ..... when I swing on these chickens..
this was aight
N Q.. lets hope ya friends.. make up for Ur chokin when..
I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
heh, coo
Lokk ain't that big tho.. ain't that talented, smart.. but Ur cryin..
^Cuz U'll be those before Ur eminem.. okay? so stop tryin..
[i]cool[i]
I'm the wrong vet to try .. a walkin bomb threat..
In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
lol, this was nice
Cal's a world above the rest.. these fuckin cats are queer..
U just made it past orbit.. N Ur about to burn up in the atmosphere..
haha, dope
Save Ur name.. U can't win.. so try to get the title at a later date..
Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
nice
One of U'll run Ur mouths.. N even Lokk know he talks..
So I'ma step up wit a board N own 'Vert' like Tony Hawk..
hahaha, dope
Ur the wrong combination to get passed this, stop..
N fuck.. Cal knows the right combination when I master lokk..
haha, preety coo
I'm SOOOO the man right.. cuz I'm known to stamp guys..
Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
haha this was dope
Awww man.. U had me goin.. pretendin U was tough N all thug..
So now I'm crushin balls off the tease' like the end of a golf club..
aight, cool
That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
nawww not feelin this
Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
lol
On the other hand.. Vert's also no one.. cry to me bitch..
N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
hahahaha, nice shit
U'll get ate quick.. Fuck U losers.. Cal know shitty rhymes..
Ur just a carbon copy of Island.. minus User, Aloe N witty lines..
hahaha, dope

papermate

^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
Its funny though
Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
lol, preety coo
And I’d rather look like Marshal Mather’s twin bro
Than a gay Al Pacino with AIDS whos lackin skin tone
hahaha, nice
Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
ha, cool personal
Dukes, what kinda fool are you thinkin Mate's a loser?
When your fuckin alias – is also ya pet name for User
this was ok
Its weird, I believe that Cal targets to steal
Cuz he’s bitin Kabob
But his skinny ass obviously don’t like barbequed meals
ok. decent
ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
lol, nice
Kid we’ve all heard ya audios, you brag about it in like every verse
So I hope you do go places someday – and decide to never return
ok.. not really feelin this
Don't lie about jockin Epi, Papers better and I'm fryin ya best, fag
Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
lol, nice
You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
You just mad User kicked you out of his place
coo
Dukes my guns is impatient, pleedin to buck herbs
And make ya so red in the cheeks kids was thinking ya flustered
ha, coo
My reign is now, ya fake personals aint takin Paper down
But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
hahahaha, this was dope
Its known Cal bites, not a lot, but its better to try it
Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
ahaha, illness
I'm whorin you, duck for cover when Paper is stormin through
How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
lmao, this was dope
ROCK, PAPER, SCISSORS – first off, its a game, keep fixin the tally
But for now, its me - up against a rock, and a perfect mimic of Cale
dope
I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
Its true people stay on line for Mate
Like how you meet most of your women
ha, aight

this was a really nice battle, both came real nice.. cale came dope through out a couple weak lines in the beginning but the around the end was dope.. papermate had a nice verse but you dissed on his weight to much like everyline was about that so it got boring the beginning was preety weak but the end was dope.. u came nice then weak nice then weak.. so ima give it to cale for consistancy

vote - calefaction.. dope battle
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Old 11-28-2003, 09:36 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Cale, you my boy n all but i think paper won this


Cale- had some real dope lines, some filler like the key line, but for the most part it was dope, good concepts just didnt come hard enough...

Paper- hilarious verse. had some filler like cale, but i think the punches that wern't connected better, was a lil more personal and i could tell you wanted this more..

so
vote- paper

both had dope dope verse's good match
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Old 11-28-2003, 09:52 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Ramble takes it up the butt!
That means U better hope santa brings protection to U peasents..
Cuz Cal's known to slay in the snow.. with out the dear or the presents..
Lokk's a nobody STILL.. N Vert.. Ur nada jack...
Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back.
^^dopeness

Both came with dope verses but Cale had the better word play N wittier, fresher concepts

v- Cale
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Old 11-28-2003, 11:00 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Dee-Zy takes it up the butt!
U got no chance.. cuz one of U used to be a herb that bites..
The Second makes my beats N the Third asks me to re-word his lines
ouch! nice open

I let the blade in U N spill ink all over.. like I broke my pen..
nice

In otherwords.. U'll bite the dust.. then try to flip its concepts..
LOL

Cuz I'm takin down erry forest in Australia so there's no paper..mate
LOL, nice

Put my hands on Ur neck N Titan so much.. U'd think I own the franchise..
nice

Soo fat.. when I hit U.. Ur skin not only waved.. but holla'd back..
LOL

N Lokk's so skinny his ribs ain't just touchin.. they're siamese twins..
LOL

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^ An audio from Cal’s page, for that bitter chick that he likes
Its funny though
Didn’t you meet Sammi on a rap internet site?
LOL, OUCH! nice open

Skinny weakling, takin pictures nude with his purse
Why name yaself Body – If you barely put food in it first
nice

ITS THE WEEK OF THE 9ths! You know why the shits coolah?
Cuz it’ll be his 9th win, on his 9th verse, the 9th time he bit Luda
nice

Cuz your only lines that are Wit-E, were on that Dialects collab
lol

You don’t play games, theres no doubt that your gay
So when you say ‘Fuck Candy Land’
You just mad User kicked you out of his place
lol

But you’ve bit Monster, Luda, Rudge
And apparently STILL cant gain a pound
lol

Cal Eatin Paper? Only cuz hes so skinny its part of his regular diet
LOL

How you expect to wear the title belt when it weighs more than you?
OUCH!

I’m popular, the next champ – see I’m closer to winnin
Its true people stay on line for Mate
Like how you meet most of your women
OUCH! nice close


to me it basicly comes down to...

Cal's open, paper/australia and the holla lines

Paper's Open, title belt and close.

Although Paper killed with the open and closer he used alot of skinny lines and to be honest, Cal doesn't look skinny from that pic plus I think Cal was wittier with the wordplay (paper/australia, holla and titan lines)

vote - Cal edged this out.

Nice battle though. I think this can go either way.
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Old 11-28-2003, 11:39 PM   #16 (permalink)