3. Papermate 6-0 vs 4. Orbit 10-4

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Old 11-20-2003, 07:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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3. Papermate 6-0 vs 4. Orbit 10-4




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Old 11-21-2003, 12:22 AM   #2 (permalink)
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16 Lines.


1. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...42#post7776542
2. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...47#post7776847
3. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...14#post7777414
4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...39#post7777539
5. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...19#post7779619
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Old 11-21-2003, 05:56 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Orbit Einstein takes it up the butt!
yoyo keyboard check, 1,2 grrrrrr




Truth be told...I got riders on me
Enough to make paper fold to oragami
Its astonishing, even a wonder
How I got more fans on me than Rosanne in the summer
Now im battlin three groupies that cant even rhyme
Kids got me seein more pussy than they have in their life combined
Hybrid, Invert, Lokk, whoever...aint a test
Its obvious im the best...
...with more nerds on me at once than Everquest
Im too dope to digest, ya verse...Ima ruin it
And leave ya so embarassed...
...Youll hide your face more than the neighbor on Home Improvement
Ya dome aint fluent, dudes a newbie fumbler
Go back to the gutter...
...Since everybody knows 'Mate came from down under
My flow is butter, all punches turn quotes
The margin of victory will be so high I wont need to post votes
Hope ya ghost, or if ya post its just filler
Ya next ranking'll hithered...
...Cause im knockin three down the net like Reggie Miller


o damn, 5 minutes takin down all ya prewrittens
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Old 11-21-2003, 06:17 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Home Improvement line - seen it. Down under line - seen it. Post votes line - seen it. Damn, you just proved everything in my verse.





None of ya shits original, nor is it even close to perfect
Ya writers blocks so big, it got a paper route & postal service
Orbits a bald ugly midget, isn’t that clearly set out dude?
You ‘adore’ ya bitch – she’d rather have one to get out through
When storm wrote for you, we read harder text from Orb
But history repeats itself
Apparently yours cant recall what it said before
Ya made a turn around? But ya shit don’t impress me fag
Your only a Cinderella story cuz you clean my floors dressed in rags
God said to kill you, he’s had it with gays
So if ya strapped with a peace
I’m strapped with Mormons and Latter-day Saints
My concerts populate the arena, your crowds seat none that’s it
I make each ‘Row Gain’ a fan – While your scalp needs some of it
And ya all over Drinkin's balls, the facts is provin me perfect
You love the Citizen so much, DS's dick started a community service
And I know you hate seein storm insults, they tedious words
I hate storm lines too– so why bother even readin ya verse?



.. Militia is more like Salvation Army with those two pieces of garbage in it
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Old 11-21-2003, 06:28 PM   #5 (permalink)
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VOTE = Papermate

Mate's verse was aight. Nothin too great. Standard verse. But Orb's verse was jus ass. The few punches that were in there were direct, but they dissipated before they could hit. You also stretched those bars more than a torture rack. The rest of the verse was straight filler.
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Old 11-21-2003, 07:09 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Vote- Papermate

Overall a harder verse in my opinion.
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Old 11-21-2003, 07:27 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Truth be told...I got riders on me
Enough to make paper fold to oragami
Its astonishing, even a wonder
How I got more fans on me than Rosanne in the summer

WTF?

Storm didn't ghostwrite this.
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Old 11-21-2003, 07:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Ramble takes it up the butt!
wow.. was expecting much more, Orbit had aboslutely no word play, N his punches were simple as fuck. Whiiel Papermate came with a bunch of played shit, N one decent persoanl

but- Paper edged it
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Old 11-21-2003, 07:49 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Vote - Paper...

Had Some Tough Stuff And Some Sketchy Stuff But He Still Raped This Kid...
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Old 11-21-2003, 08:02 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Break it takes it up the butt!
My vote goes for papermate just overall better punches in this orbit didn't prepare himself for papercuts

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Old 11-22-2003, 12:53 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Craven Moorehead takes it up the butt!
I got Papermate easy on this - flow and content outmatched Orbit by a long shit. His verse was up and down, but had some dope shit. Orbit's shit was real old - no real creative flips or anything. Just a bland verse.

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Old 11-22-2003, 02:30 AM   #12 (permalink)
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vote papermate


read the verses!
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Old 11-22-2003, 02:48 AM   #13 (permalink)
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vote - papermate

orbit had a cool verse, the opener was nice, papermate came cool some good lines some ok lines but enough to beat orbit
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Old 11-22-2003, 03:25 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Orbit got ate.

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Old 11-22-2003, 10:11 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Old 11-22-2003, 05:14 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Papermate took it.


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Old 11-23-2003, 10:56 AM   #17 (permalink)
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vote = papermater..

but LOL @ how he dissed orbit for using old concepts when i used a writer's block line last week.. yeah man. real clever.
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Old 11-23-2003, 01:03 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Yea but nobody reads your shit.
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Old 11-23-2003, 03:59 PM   #20 (permalink)
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Stature. takes it up the butt!
Vote - Papermate, quite easily.

Orbit not sure if tried or not but your verse was just blah, a maybe a good punch or two, everything else was played to all hell. Papermate just came more original, some real nice lines too. GL to PM next week.

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