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Join Date: Dec 2001
Location: Ohio, USA
Posts: 903
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No shit Sherlock
see Residual grandfather died, Cortex was just a dumb bitch
so now were waiting to see what excuse Ozzy come up wit
lol..
Witness as..........
Sherlock bash tis geek, no need fa massive heat
shame, -Oz- cant put up a front, like Ol Dirty Bastid teeth
dude is average at least, i'm not giving no doubt
but, how u gone measure up.............
when im using a pint of skill, thats still bigger than a ounce
aight started quite cool here.. the ole dirtys mouth line was coo and the measure up was used quite nicely
slowly rippen this pussy linen out, cant deny the facts
oops, pussy is a 'touchy' subject, notice both hands behind his back
shoulda used a simmilie here or in another way.. line still pulled off, but it has more potential than the ay it was used
my guns da size of shaq, so the pain never ease
Sherlock use more 'Techs' than piss off referee's
you better flee, leave if given the chance
or ya spine get jerkd in awkard positions like da chickenhead dance
lol that techs line was nice feelin it... the chicken head's rotf.. not bad
this is the plan, to da future ja rule, wit nursery wounds
b'cuz there is blood in his eyes..... but my fist, shirt n shoes
im serving this dude, without even trying
on the scale to 1-10, he's an 8, in front add the minus sign
blood line was nice.. was'nt really feeling that 8 shit tho =(.. it was kinna terrible
it obvious u bit the name, so the feelings random and eeries
-they like fuck a OZ.....
see now even HBO, wanna reconsider a new season, & cancel the series
this was ok, potential again for better.. to me ur wording is off alot, but you always pull off a real nice verse... that keeps you on the edge and reading, i really think tho with a bit better wording ur verse could be a 10.....
OZ
Now I aint Ashton Kutcher, But peeps will say you got punked,
Ill beat ya with light bulbs, Cuz sherlock aint shit with out watts, son!!!!
You aint hot dun, Dont smile cuz Ya mouth Just smells bad, shit.....
Ya breath so Foul,
Steve Bartmen Jumped out the crowed and grabbed it!
lmao that first was nice... feeling it, the second was cool, revolving round the foul shit, but could'a been used better
Ya verse...Shouldnt have dropped it, Now Im fistin this geek,
With punches that leave him like the mag, Missing this week!!
Your mission is bleak, As for text, youll neva be a veteran,
So please just take A-Lieve, And no...I aint talkin about medicine!
that mag line was ok... second was nicer....
Quit pester-in, Us with your text, Cuz Im killin that shit,
Your verse was such an Utter failure, People are milkin that shit!!
Oz's fillin this kid with lead,
In his head, Cuz sherlocks a femcee...but she lacks,
Skill, Still Sherlock birthed more Fe-Lines than slutty cats!!!
this whole segament was ok.. but the way you used it in grammar was confusing... that
..................but she lack's
skill, still sherlock and the first was mad pausing and starting, and why the coma after pester-in.... i was still feeling the first couplet here but grrrr at maken me stop/start
You aint no Craig Mack, So do Me a favor you queer,
Stop giving Wet Willies, You cant put the flavor in my ear!
Bow down, your savior is here, To put ya in a grave, in hell,
Cuz when my tired Screech, you wont be Saved By The Bell!!
that screech line was mad gay lol.... but the flavor in ur ear was nice. feeling that
You must be deprived as hell, livin without a care he...
Is such a Gothik-, A movie is being made starring halle berry!
A tune, you can never carry,
Ya tried out for the ROC, But dont hope you'll get it,
Cuz I just heard Kayne "threw the wire"...Around ya neck and choked ya wit it!
again here you seem to be trying to hard to use couplet's following on..... with out a care he
is such... u seem to be starting with the one word to follow through but it messes ur flow.... it was still not bad line tho... the kayne line was coo
Dont ya get it?
Ya have followers, but even they wont go get your spam,
Cuz when your cd dropped, I guess SHIT really hit the FANS!!!
rotf nice closer.... feeling this.... in the end oz was mad start/stop with trying to hard for follow on couplet's which he failed miserably in.... but that's taking nothing from the verse cuz im not deducting point's becuz of it... i'm going on purely what was said
anyways in the end i think oz takes this with just a few more stand out's... he started dope.... and i was wantng more, he never brought more, but stayed somewhat consistant... as did NSS..... anyways vote- oz
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