9. Aura(9-2) vs 10. Charles(6-2)

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Old 10-15-2003, 04:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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9. Aura(9-2) vs 10. Charles(6-2)




..The RBL Rules & Regulations..

RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time
RBL Votes Due Sun. @ 11 o’clock PM:Eastern Time

Each battler is entitled to up their thread ONCE.
Upping includes counting votes, discussing votes, or
replying period. Each time you up your thread more than once
you'll lose 1 vote.

You must vote on at least six battles EVERY week..
For every vote that you are missing, you will be deducted
that number. Make sure to edit the links of the battles in
your check-in post.

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(dickriding) the person accused will be eliminated from the
RBL. There are no crew or outside votes, meaning
you must be in the RBL. An for the vote to count you must
VOTE under your League name. NO ALIAS VOTING PEOPLE!!

4 Lines: Minimum; 30 Lines: Maximum, and the bar
range, or amount must be agreed on by both battlers. You
may edit your verse, ONLY if you’re the first cat to post ya
verse and The 2nd guy hasn’t posted his shit yet.

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Old 10-16-2003, 11:53 AM   #2 (permalink)
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about 14

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7. Saliva(6-0) vs 8. Vyris(7-3)
87. Ra Ill 1-2 vs 88. Smelly Dude 1-2 vs 88.5. J Rocca 3-4
45. .LM 2-0 vs 46. Namix 2-0
127. Lares Viales vs 128. Write Coast
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Old 10-17-2003, 08:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!
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45. .LM 2-0 vs 46. Namix 2-0
101. ILLASTYX 0-1 vs 102. BMM 0-1 vs 102.5. Vember 0-1
37. Fatal literature 3-1 vs 38. visualize 3-1
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Old 10-18-2003, 06:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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aura takes it up the butt!
I'm the dopest when I rhyme, there's no hope left for this guy
Beggin for mercy so much he should be homeless with a sign
Ain't copin with ya life either, so why you talkin kid?
I bet you been broke ever since your moms' waters did
Yeah you claim status, but you’re jus’ lying, see
..the only skills you’d possess would be in occupying me
All ya punches are stretches, no one can follow ya shit
..only good writer I know named Charles wrote Oliver Twist
He's the fakest with his spits y'all, him winnin ain't likely
cuz battlin me.. that's takin on a big job like Bruce Almighty
I'll shoot at ya legs, with the gun layin in ma pocket
..blowin out a knee like Barkley playin for the Rockets
Yeah you came out the closet fag, and it's known to all
Only reason ya wanna pink slip cuz it match ya clothes and walls..

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Old 10-18-2003, 07:01 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!Charles will do you doggie style!
craft/
task/

you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../
be careful who ya hang with,ya outta watch out duke../
cuz if people say ya gay..theres a certain Aura about you../
aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../
saw ya champ match..that shit had me wetting in stitches../
cuz ya got left out the 3-way..like a man wit two lesbian bitches/
fuck who ghosts for you..your own shit is too played to write../
plus your verses like women..they pussy and aint your type../
dont follow me about..this stan shud start ta drown in cars.../
n' this stalker aint bin jailed yet..but still holdin' prowlers bars../
midgit shit..how we see eye to eye when you fit under my thigh?/
funny that im always one step ahead..while he's like 100 of his behind../
the shit you come up with..that aint considered rappin at all../
aint like ya ghosts..but you still gonna be passin through walls../
your performance last week wasnt too bad,to doubt is silly../
i gotta say you had won.......vote-and that was out of pity../
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Old 10-18-2003, 07:09 PM   #6 (permalink)
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aura takes it up the butt!
you done 18?
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Old 10-18-2003, 07:22 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Charles is good....

but aura is better..
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Old 10-18-2003, 08:46 PM   #8 (permalink)
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VyRiS takes it up the butt!
vote = aura

by a hair tho, I felt aura was a little more creative
Not takin nothin away from charles but I felt more energy in aura's verse for some reason
good battle yall, it WAS close.. props to both!
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Old 10-18-2003, 09:53 PM   #9 (permalink)
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you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../
be careful who ya hang with,ya outta watch out duke../
cuz if people say ya gay..theres a certain Aura about you../
aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../



hot ^
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Old 10-19-2003, 03:04 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Aura...

I'm the dopest when I rhyme, there's no hope left for this guy
Beggin for mercy so much he should be homeless with a sign
--koolio
Ain't copin with ya life either, so why you talkin kid?
I bet you been broke ever since your moms' waters did
--heh
Yeah you claim status, but you’re jus’ lying, see
..the only skills you’d possess would be in occupying me
--kool
All ya punches are stretches, no one can follow ya shit
..only good writer I know named Charles wrote Oliver Twist
--ok
He's the fakest with his spits y'all, him winnin ain't likely
cuz battlin me.. that's takin on a big job like Bruce Almighty
--not feeling
I'll shoot at ya legs, with the gun layin in ma pocket
..blowin out a knee like Barkley playin for the Rockets
--nah old also
Yeah you came out the closet fag, and it's known to all
Only reason ya wanna pink slip cuz it match ya clothes and walls..
--done before, ok

Charles...

you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../
--ha
be careful who ya hang with,ya outta watch out duke../
cuz if people say ya gay..theres a certain Aura about you../
--heh
aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../
--haha
saw ya champ match..that shit had me wetting in stitches../
cuz ya got left out the 3-way..like a man wit two lesbian bitches/
--nah, killed concept
fuck who ghosts for you..your own shit is too played to write../
plus your verses like women..they pussy and aint your type../
--wording is bad, couldve been better
dont follow me about..this stan shud start ta drown in cars.../
n' this stalker aint bin jailed yet..but still holdin' prowlers bars../
--no
midgit shit..how we see eye to eye when you fit under my thigh?/
funny that im always one step ahead..while he's like 100 of his behind../--nah
the shit you come up with..that aint considered rappin at all../
aint like ya ghosts..but you still gonna be passin through walls../
--k
your performance last week wasnt too bad,to doubt is silly../
i gotta say you had won.......vote-and that was out of pity../
--kool

this is too close to call but I'mma have to take Charles with a couple of harder hits (beginning was nice), this is a flip a coin match, kool battle fellas

vote-Charles
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Old 10-19-2003, 09:09 AM   #11 (permalink)
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euphemism takes it up the butt!
why have u dropped more than the the other guy.. ?!

anyways,

aura, nice consistent verse. No filler shit.. few lines in there made me lol.

Charles had an ok verse.. I didn't like the rhymes though. cars/bars, all/wall, stitches/bitches..
decent content, but IMO.. not as much as aura

niceness..

Ain't copin with ya life either, so why you talkin kid?
I bet you been broke ever since your moms' waters did
Yeah you claim status, but you’re jus’ lying, see
..the only skills you’d possess would be in occupying me

vote - aura
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Old 10-19-2003, 09:14 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Aura

aura ya had a nice decent verse, although nothin too speacial this week....heres a few lines of yours i liked.....

I'm the dopest when I rhyme, there's no hope left for this guy
Beggin for mercy so much he should be homeless with a sign

Yeah you came out the closet fag, and it's known to all
Only reason ya wanna pink slip cuz it match ya clothes and walls..


Charles

havent really seen much from you but this verse was pretty nice....pretty consistant heres your best lines......

you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../

aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../

midgit shit..how we see eye to eye when you fit under my thigh?/
funny that im always one step ahead..while he's like 100 of his behind../

your performance last week wasnt too bad,to doubt is silly../
i gotta say you had won.......vote-and that was out of pity../


both had nice shit but i think charles takes this one, aura was had some dope shit but charles just had more......

vote-charles
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Old 10-19-2003, 09:18 AM   #13 (permalink)
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aura should win
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Old 10-19-2003, 09:20 AM   #14 (permalink)
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aura: nice solid verse..sum real nice hits throughout

charles: koo verse sum nice hits....just didnt feel as many lines as i did wit aura

so V/aura

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Old 10-19-2003, 11:44 AM   #15 (permalink)
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this was a pretty good read, both verses were good, but I felt that Charles brought a little more to the table in this one, aura was good but could've been more thought out and more wittier, charles was just harder and more thought out.

v/ Charles
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Old 10-19-2003, 12:41 PM   #16 (permalink)
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V - Aura

Solid verses by both, but Aura came nicer with the punches. Charles had some cool ones, but Aura brought consistency throughout his verse. I liked that homeless line.

Cool battle
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Old 10-19-2003, 01:43 PM   #17 (permalink)
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V - Aura

Aura was consistance throughout, but Charles had the best start. If Charles had saved another good line for the end of his verse, I think he would have won this one. As of now, it looks like you drifted out of the win...
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Old 10-19-2003, 03:23 PM   #18 (permalink)
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No hate but Aura came on some played shit. He had a few straight lines.. these are the only ones im diggin,

Ain't copin with ya life either, so why you talkin kid?
I bet you been broke ever since your moms' waters did
Yeah you claim status, but you’re jus’ lying, see
..the only skills you’d possess would be in occupying me

the water break line was ill.


Charles - ya first 6 bars killed it.. pretty nice concepts.. the rest was solid.

im givin it to charles.. overall more enjoyable.. stronger verse
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Old 10-19-2003, 03:36 PM   #19 (permalink)
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aura - the only lines i was really feelin' from aura was 'homeless' opener, and the 'water breaks' line. otherwise, the lines just didn't have a full effect, and a couple were played.

charles - your opener was ill. not just the first bar, but the whole first 6-8 lines.
you dicks a laugh, but right now im not joking son../
so if im ass in this battle..no wonder your poking fun../
be careful who ya hang with,ya outta watch out duke../
cuz if people say ya gay..theres a certain Aura about you../
aur got nothing to pull out the bag,while ima stay blasting men../
if he got shit up his sleeve,he bin finger-fuckin his ass again../
that was hot as hell.

vote - Charles.
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Old 10-19-2003, 03:50 PM   #20 (permalink)
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lmfao..

v/ Aura

better verse by far, better wordings, concepts, punchesm, everything. And a better flow as well.
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