5 Phrenic 8-3 vs 6 Toil 6-0

Insanevillian · 09-30-2003, 11:49 PM

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toil · 10-01-2003, 04:03 AM

16 or 20
you choose
g'luck

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Citizen X · 10-01-2003, 02:42 PM

16 is good

goodluck too

Citizen X · 10-02-2003, 03:26 AM

Im dropping early cause Ill be gone

Toil.... hmmmmmmmmmmm

i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
& watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match

toil · 10-03-2003, 08:06 AM

your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you

dont even TRY to tell me i lost

Deadly Weapon · 10-03-2003, 09:01 AM

quit swaying

anyways............................ ..................

Citi

i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
that is funny as fuck,nice

smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
& watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
that was also funny an very creative with the wordplay

believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
aight, nothin special,

u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
hahahahaha... funny

spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
eehhhhhh...decent

nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
aight

toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
aight

imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
aight

Toil
your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
ehhhh....didnt like, maybe its over my head

hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
o.k

when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
aight

radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
that was nice

ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
nice

i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
didnt like

no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
damn, nice name play

ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
aight

damn this was a good battle, kinda hard to decide, but ima vote

Cit

his verse was funny ass hell

Wordage · 10-03-2003, 09:49 AM

Phrenic

i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
8/10
smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
& watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
7.5/10
believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
7.5/10
u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
8/10
spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
7.5/10
nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
8.5/10
toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
7/10
imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
7.5/10

total= 61.5/80

Toil

your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
7.5/10
hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
7/10
when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
7.5/10
radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
8/10
ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
7.5/10
i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
7/10
no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
7.5/10
ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
7/10

total= 59/80

vote= Phrenic. Both came with some funny lines, good flow and interesting concepts. Blackhole and Fruit of the Loom lines were hilarious. Toil had the cell phone line I thought was pretty good but other than that the rest was just decent. Goodluck to both of you.

VyRiS · 10-03-2003, 02:31 PM

vote = Phrenic

toil was str8
but.. Phrenic took this with more thought out
lines and a better overall verse..

decent battle.. holla

RP2G · 10-03-2003, 03:47 PM

Quote:

i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly/
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie/

HAhahaHAhaHaHAHaHAHAHAHhAhAhAhAhAhA HAH... damn can this dood write punches or what?! jesus, that was great! not to take anything away from citizen X, his verse was better than decent, but toil just killed that shit man, each bar just more demoralizing than the other, NO DICK RIDING HERE, JUST HONESTLY WHAT I SAW...

Vote: TOIL!

Nintendo™ · 10-03-2003, 04:04 PM

Toil got this...

Cits shit was nice but these lines killed it

i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
^Nice

Beginning was slow though but picked up

Cit ur shit was funny but kinda corny

Papermate · 10-03-2003, 04:34 PM

daaamn, toil.. bringin heat

Warlokk. · 10-03-2003, 04:36 PM

This wasnt too bad..

..at first I thought Cit had this.. cuz I was readin toil's shit and I was just totally unimpressed with the beginning.. I was like "what the?? he really didnt try this time around".. then I hit that "a-peal" line and from there to the end was just flames.. that was dope.. Thats what got it for him..

..Cit didnt really impress me this week that much.. he doesnt seem like he gives a fuck anymore.. He had a few iight lines.. the continue option was iight, creative juices was dope.. but toil just snatched it this week

Vote = toil

Whiz_Kid · 10-03-2003, 04:51 PM

toil needs a spell-checker

CATATONIC · 10-03-2003, 05:06 PM

^ lol at that

vote = toil

the niccas sick wit the punches... doesnt use too many other techniques, but this is one occasion its not needed... the whole phuckin fruit... bearfaced lie... were hell nice

Cit and silence go together is punchline pandam material...

cit had a nice verse, feelin alot of his ideas and shyt... but toil got this one.

headless verseman · 10-03-2003, 05:16 PM

no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together

hahahah, he wins

afraid knot. · 10-03-2003, 05:48 PM

jesus.. citizen came completely unoriginal in this.. i used a version of almost every single line just last week. basically why i lost.

toil came nice, but the bear-faced lie line is stupid as fuck.. it's a bold-faced lie.. bear-faced isnt even a saying.

vote = toil.

EYE-Z · 10-03-2003, 07:18 PM

toil wins...too many groupies at rm

cit line was dope

rest was solid, nice fresh comedic appeal

cit came aiight alot of old concepts, train of thought, creative juices, seein stars

short leash coudla been nice

Sabath VII · 10-03-2003, 09:07 PM

i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
Ehh, not a bad opener, but not a good one.

smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
& watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
Umm, alright I suppose.

believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
Nice

u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
LoL, Liking that

spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
That was alright

nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
Lmao

toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
Nice

imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
Nice closer

Good verse overall.

your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
Not a bad opener

hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
Ehh, alright

when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
Ok

radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
Niicce

ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
Ehh

i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
Best line so far

no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
Tied with the one above it

ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
Ok closer

Nice verse.

All in all toil edge this out, not by much though.

Vote - Toil

Citizen X · 10-03-2003, 09:15 PM

this is my up, Bear Faced lie isnt even a term, its bold face. but anyways its cool. good shit

BuGG · 10-04-2003, 03:14 AM

V - Toil

That "ring ya neck" line was goofy. It could have been left out. just like the bear faced lie. Citizen isn't the only person that caught that. WTF? Citizen, your lines aren't clean. If they were worded better, they'd appear and read a lot nicer.

09-30-2003, 11:49 PM	#1 (permalink)
Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Oakland, Ca Posts: 16,322	5 Phrenic 8-3 vs 6 Toil 6-0 ..The RBL Rules & Regulations.. RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time RBL Votes Due By Sunday, 11 o’clock PM: Eastern Time Each battler is entitled to up their thread ONCE. Upping includes counting votes, discussing votes, or replying period. Each time you up your thread more than once you'll lose 1 vote. You must vote on at least six battles EVERY week.. For every vote that you are missing, you will be deducted that number. Make sure to edit the links of the battles in your check-in post. If there is enough evidence or reason to suspect favoritism (dickriding) the person accused will be eliminated from the RBL. There are no crew or outside votes, meaning you must be in the RBL. An for the vote to count you must VOTE under your League name. NO ALIAS VOTING PEOPLE!! 4 Lines: Minimum; 30 Lines: Maximum, and the bar range, or amount must be agreed on by both battlers. You may edit your verse, ONLY if you’re the first cat to post ya verse and The 2nd guy hasn’t posted his shit yet. Word of the Week!!!! No Word This Week!!! Any head caught biting will be banned from the League or any RBL Tournaments. All questions go to: rapmusicnovel@yahoo.com __________________ ELITE

10-01-2003, 04:03 AM	#2 (permalink)
toil Registered User Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 308	16 or 20 you choose g'luck 41 X sample 3-1 vs 42 Narsil 3-1 141 StubbilyMug vs 142 Type Nice 121 Nintendo vs 122 Glass Eye 13 WarLoKK 5-0 vs 14 Imperial 7-3 http://board.rapmusic.com/rbl-top-20/646170-19-catatonic-5-1-vs-20-zuchie-4-1-a.html#post7415380 25 Scientz 4-0 vs 26 Saliva 4-0 Last edited by toil; 10-04-2003 at 05:53 AM.

10-01-2003, 02:42 PM	#3 (permalink)
Citizen X UGHHHHHHHHHHH Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: south fla Posts: 3,050	16 is good goodluck too __________________ ...drinking sucks

10-02-2003, 03:26 AM	#4 (permalink)
Citizen X UGHHHHHHHHHHH Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: south fla Posts: 3,050	Im dropping early cause Ill be gone Toil.... hmmmmmmmmmmm i see u won last week, the verse was wack though cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars believins hard, but all this u and i shit.. u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option u drop shit, im here to be hanging you ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match __________________ ...drinking sucks

10-03-2003, 09:01 AM	#6 (permalink)
Deadly Weapon Fuck off Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: at the bar gettin shitfaced Posts: 972	quit swaying anyways............................ .................. Citi i see u won last week, the verse was wack though cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole that is funny as fuck,nice smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars that was also funny an very creative with the wordplay believins hard, but all this u and i shit.. u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option aight, nothin special, u drop shit, im here to be hanging you ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you hahahahaha... funny spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl eehhhhhh...decent nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms aight toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified aight imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match aight Toil your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it ehhhh....didnt like, maybe its over my head hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne o.k when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do aight radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone! that was nice ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit nice i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie didnt like no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together damn, nice name play ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you aight damn this was a good battle, kinda hard to decide, but ima vote Cit his verse was funny ass hell __________________ www.soundclick.com/DWep

10-03-2003, 08:06 AM	#5 (permalink)
toil Registered User Join Date: Jul 2001 Posts: 308	your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone! ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you dont even TRY to tell me i lost

10-03-2003, 09:49 AM	#7 (permalink)
Wordage The Coming of Age.... Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 288	Phrenic i see u won last week, the verse was wack though cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole 8/10 smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars 7.5/10 believins hard, but all this u and i shit.. u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option 7.5/10 u drop shit, im here to be hanging you ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you 8/10 spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl 7.5/10 nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms 8.5/10 toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified 7/10 imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match 7.5/10 total= 61.5/80 Toil your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it 7.5/10 hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne 7/10 when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do 7.5/10 radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone! 8/10 ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit 7.5/10 i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie 7/10 no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together 7.5/10 ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you 7/10 total= 59/80 vote= Phrenic. Both came with some funny lines, good flow and interesting concepts. Blackhole and Fruit of the Loom lines were hilarious. Toil had the cell phone line I thought was pretty good but other than that the rest was just decent. Goodluck to both of you.

10-03-2003, 02:31 PM	#8 (permalink)
VyRiS Come Get Infected Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Top Posts: 456	vote = Phrenic toil was str8 but.. Phrenic took this with more thought out lines and a better overall verse.. decent battle.. holla

10-03-2003, 04:04 PM	#10 (permalink)
Nintendo™ Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 30	Toil got this... Cits shit was nice but these lines killed it i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you ^Nice Beginning was slow though but picked up Cit ur shit was funny but kinda corny

10-03-2003, 04:34 PM	#11 (permalink)
Papermate Registered Writer Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 460	daaamn, toil.. bringin heat

10-03-2003, 04:36 PM	#12 (permalink)
Warlokk. Tekneek + Username Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Pittsburgh PA Posts: 925	This wasnt too bad.. ..at first I thought Cit had this.. cuz I was readin toil's shit and I was just totally unimpressed with the beginning.. I was like "what the?? he really didnt try this time around".. then I hit that "a-peal" line and from there to the end was just flames.. that was dope.. Thats what got it for him.. ..Cit didnt really impress me this week that much.. he doesnt seem like he gives a fuck anymore.. He had a few iight lines.. the continue option was iight, creative juices was dope.. but toil just snatched it this week Vote = toil __________________ 6- Legal Agreement -1 Warlokk Produces Beats, Yay for the Children! Status NeSs: this is better than 99% of the beats I get off mp3.com Status NeSs: and the 1% its not better than Status NeSs: its = to

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Whiz_Kid Registered User™ Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Virginia Posts: 11,735	toil needs a spell-checker __________________ "Crash a bike in ya face and leave you with a handlebar mustache"-Celph Titled

10-03-2003, 05:06 PM	#14 (permalink)
CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 663	^ lol at that vote = toil the niccas sick wit the punches... doesnt use too many other techniques, but this is one occasion its not needed... the whole phuckin fruit... bearfaced lie... were hell nice Cit and silence go together is punchline pandam material... cit had a nice verse, feelin alot of his ideas and shyt... but toil got this one. __________________ Who want what? I bring it to you beef uncut A fat slab of somenila- force feed you fucks You want the crown ya ••••• bring yo mutts So mines can eat yo's up press ya luck fucka, or ease on up "Undisputed"

10-03-2003, 05:16 PM	#15 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together hahahah, he wins __________________ Most Hated

10-03-2003, 05:48 PM	#16 (permalink)
afraid knot. Mr. Get Jerk'd In The RBL Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 248	jesus.. citizen came completely unoriginal in this.. i used a version of almost every single line just last week. basically why i lost. toil came nice, but the bear-faced lie line is stupid as fuck.. it's a bold-faced lie.. bear-faced isnt even a saying. vote = toil.

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10-03-2003, 07:18 PM	#17 (permalink)
EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Where i'm from Posts: 8,239	toil wins...too many groupies at rm cit line was dope rest was solid, nice fresh comedic appeal cit came aiight alot of old concepts, train of thought, creative juices, seein stars short leash coudla been nice __________________ *Bobby D...*

10-03-2003, 09:07 PM	#18 (permalink)
Sabath VII God's Mercy Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 143	i see u won last week, the verse was wack though cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole Ehh, not a bad opener, but not a good one. smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars Umm, alright I suppose. believins hard, but all this u and i shit.. u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option Nice u drop shit, im here to be hanging you ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you LoL, Liking that spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl That was alright nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms Lmao toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified Nice imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match Nice closer Good verse overall. your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it Not a bad opener hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne Ehh, alright when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do Ok radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone! Niicce ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit Ehh i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie Best line so far no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together Tied with the one above it ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you Ok closer Nice verse. All in all toil edge this out, not by much though. Vote - Toil

10-03-2003, 09:15 PM	#19 (permalink)
Citizen X UGHHHHHHHHHHH Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: south fla Posts: 3,050	this is my up, Bear Faced lie isnt even a term, its bold face. but anyways its cool. good shit __________________ ...drinking sucks

10-04-2003, 03:14 AM	#20 (permalink)
BuGG Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 189	V - Toil That "ring ya neck" line was goofy. It could have been left out. just like the bear faced lie. Citizen isn't the only person that caught that. WTF? Citizen, your lines aren't clean. If they were worded better, they'd appear and read a lot nicer.

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