5 Phrenic 8-3 vs 6 Toil 6-0

The Royal Penis · 10-04-2003, 04:21 AM

actually yes.. bear faced lie is a 'term' so to speak.. i thought the week point in toil's verse was simply the ring your neck line.. which he seemed to exclamate... lol

anyway... cit had some niceness in there

smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
& watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you

hahaha... this is a great section

cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
hahahahaha

imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
this is definitly one of the better worded 'match' lines i've seen... but also i will point out, i've seen alot of em...

hmm, like i was saying everything toil had was dope... he just outshined phrenic here.. even though after reading phren's verse i though he might pull it.. oh well

vote-Toil

also, this brings up a point i was making last week.. those first 3 voters... blah... i dunno bout them

ZuChiE · 10-04-2003, 01:23 PM

-Cit X-
i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
*lol, pretty cool opener*
smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
& watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
*left me confused*
believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
*lol nice*
u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
*no*
spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
*nah*
nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
*decent i guess*
toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
*prety cool lol*
imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
*nice closer*

cool verse, middle wasnt great, but started good and ended good

-Toil-
your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
*cool opener*
hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
*not feelin all that much*
when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
*cool*
radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
*nah*
ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
*lol i like*
i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
*lol nice again*
no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
*dope*
ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
*nice closer*

very close battle, punches were damn near even, in my eyes... toil just stayed a little more consistent with it, flow was pretty good from both tho

vote toil, nice battle guys

johnQspits well · 10-04-2003, 02:36 PM

Quote:

i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together

lol, the bear faced line was nice, dunno why people are trying to discredit it

toil had a fresh verse, only line i wasnt feeling was the champagne line

phrenics had a coo verse too, but some old concepts, the mummified line was good, but used a train of thought line which is mad old and a fruit of the loom line

v/toil, original concepts got it

Copywritten · 10-04-2003, 02:49 PM

Vote - Cit, his shit was more creative and some of that shit had me fuckin' rollin'.

Toil came nice as fuck though.
Battle of the week I think.

Vote - CIt

GlassEye · 10-04-2003, 03:52 PM

vote - toil

he just came more original than citizen x

Strike · 10-05-2003, 02:02 AM

well too bad for my dunny but it was coo while it lasted....vote toil...

cit..reup and bring some new shit to the table we know you have it jus up yer steez a bit...for toil I can only say damn..the silence and cit line was ill

10-05-2003, 03:09 AM

i jus wanna say...

TRP..your a moron...bear faced lie isnt a term, homie...its Bold faced lie...and bear with me...i think toil got them mixed up..

Rhymeageddon · 10-05-2003, 07:45 AM

CIT

i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
& watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars

started dope.. nice personal to open... feeling it.. and that seeing star s line had me rollin.. dope

believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you

that continue option line was eh.. but the train of thought line was switched up nicely.. dope

spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms

lol the leesh line was coo.. and the second couplet was a nice personal.. his last weeks line was about flow and juices right?.. dope..

toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match

the mummified line was cool... and closer was ok... butt he wind up throw thing was eh.. but it came out well....

cit brought a nice verse..... feeling most of it.. fell of once IMO... closer was ok... in the end was feeling most of it

TOIL

your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne

scooby doo line was eh but lol.. and the second was cool... =)

when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!

lol at the battery line quite creative .... the second i was feeling nice

ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie

a-peal line didnt really do it for me.. the bear faced lie was lol.. quite nice

no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you

musical chairs was ok.. closer was quite nice... =)...

in the end wasn't consistant enough for me... showed some creativity.. but not enough impact... in the end it was a nice verse, but

vote- CIT , even tho he's a fucking idiot

Mud.Crumb · 10-06-2003, 02:26 AM

Toil.wins 13-5

-m.CRUMB

10-04-2003, 01:23 PM	#22 (permalink)
ZuChiE Registered User Join Date: Nov 2002 Posts: 376	-Cit X- i see u won last week, the verse was wack though cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole lol, pretty cool opener smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars left me confused believins hard, but all this u and i shit.. u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option lol nice u drop shit, im here to be hanging you ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you no spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl nah nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms decent i guess toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified prety cool lol imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match nice closer cool verse, middle wasnt great, but started good and ended good -Toil- your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it cool opener hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne not feelin all that much when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do cool radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone! nah ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit lol i like i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie lol nice again no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together dope ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you nice closer very close battle, punches were damn near even, in my eyes... toil just stayed a little more consistent with it, flow was pretty good from both tho vote toil, nice battle guys __________________ lolololololololollololololololololl llllllllllllooooooooo

10-04-2003, 03:52 PM	#25 (permalink)
GlassEye Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 45	vote - toil he just came more original than citizen x __________________ Original Syndacate

10-05-2003, 02:02 AM	#26 (permalink)
Strike packin that metal Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: illsville... Posts: 4,210	well too bad for my dunny but it was coo while it lasted....vote toil... cit..reup and bring some new shit to the table we know you have it jus up yer steez a bit...for toil I can only say damn..the silence and cit line was ill __________________ MIC bitches Herbin Legends fuck a roster you know who we is bish got flow?

10-05-2003, 07:45 AM	#28 (permalink)
Rhymeageddon Shiny Suit Text® Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: <- uk Posts: 3,503	CIT i see u won last week, the verse was wack though cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars started dope.. nice personal to open... feeling it.. and that seeing star s line had me rollin.. dope believins hard, but all this u and i shit.. u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option u drop shit, im here to be hanging you ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you that continue option line was eh.. but the train of thought line was switched up nicely.. dope spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms lol the leesh line was coo.. and the second couplet was a nice personal.. his last weeks line was about flow and juices right?.. dope.. toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match the mummified line was cool... and closer was ok... butt he wind up throw thing was eh.. but it came out well.... cit brought a nice verse..... feeling most of it.. fell of once IMO... closer was ok... in the end was feeling most of it TOIL your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne scooby doo line was eh but lol.. and the second was cool... =) when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone! lol at the battery line quite creative .... the second i was feeling nice ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie a-peal line didnt really do it for me.. the bear faced lie was lol.. quite nice no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you musical chairs was ok.. closer was quite nice... =)... in the end wasn't consistant enough for me... showed some creativity.. but not enough impact... in the end it was a nice verse, but vote- CIT , even tho he's a fucking idiot __________________ iwin

10-06-2003, 02:26 AM	#29 (permalink)
Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Baltimore, MD. Posts: 1,409	Toil.wins 13-5 -m.CRUMB __________________ Ghost is... M.C. Ultra, you be suprised by the size of my hostler, bitch/ The reason why I be dissin' y'all n*ggas is cause y'all 0 for 6/ - Ghostface Longest nose on the block..whole hood'll call me Elephant Man/ -Joe Budden

10-04-2003, 04:21 AM	#21 (permalink)
The Royal Penis God. Join Date: May 2002 Location: 357 Posts: 2,107	actually yes.. bear faced lie is a 'term' so to speak.. i thought the week point in toil's verse was simply the ring your neck line.. which he seemed to exclamate... lol anyway... cit had some niceness in there smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars believins hard, but all this u and i shit.. u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option u drop shit, im here to be hanging you ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you hahaha... this is a great section cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms hahahahaha imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match this is definitly one of the better worded 'match' lines i've seen... but also i will point out, i've seen alot of em... hmm, like i was saying everything toil had was dope... he just outshined phrenic here.. even though after reading phren's verse i though he might pull it.. oh well vote-Toil also, this brings up a point i was making last week.. those first 3 voters... blah... i dunno bout them

10-04-2003, 02:49 PM	#24 (permalink)
Copywritten Copy Me Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 1,570	Vote - Cit, his shit was more creative and some of that shit had me fuckin' rollin'. Toil came nice as fuck though. Battle of the week I think. Vote - CIt

10-05-2003, 03:09 AM	#27 (permalink)
Island Guest Posts: n/a	i jus wanna say... TRP..your a moron...bear faced lie isnt a term, homie...its Bold faced lie...and bear with me...i think toil got them mixed up..

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