13 WarLoKK 5-0 vs 14 Imperial 7-3
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09-30-2003, 11:45 PM
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STILL in CHARGE
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Location: Oakland, Ca
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13 WarLoKK 5-0 vs 14 Imperial 7-3
 ..The RBL Rules & Regulations.. RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time RBL Votes Due By Sunday, 11 o’clock PM: Eastern Time Each battler is entitled to up their thread ONCE. Upping includes counting votes, discussing votes, or replying period. Each time you up your thread more than once you'll lose 1 vote. You must vote on at least six battles EVERY week.. For every vote that you are missing, you will be deducted that number. Make sure to edit the links of the battles in your check-in post. If there is enough evidence or reason to suspect favoritism (dickriding) the person accused will be eliminated from the RBL. There are no crew or outside votes, meaning you must be in the RBL. An for the vote to count you must VOTE under your League name. NO ALIAS VOTING PEOPLE!! 4 Lines: Minimum; 30 Lines: Maximum, and the bar range, or amount must be agreed on by both battlers. You may edit your verse, ONLY if you’re the first cat to post ya verse and The 2nd guy hasn’t posted his shit yet. Word of the Week!!!! No Word This Week!!! Any head caught biting will be banned from the League or any RBL Tournaments. All questions go to: rapmusicnovel@yahoo.com |
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10-03-2003, 05:10 PM
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u flip shit, i refine it
 Join Date: Sep 2003
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Warlokk
Hate me, its crazy- damn I’m tired of all these lames ..so I’ll give ya more shots than that camera virus I got on AIM .....naw, not feeling this dog, especially for an opener.. blah @ aim disses, u know? lol Imp is known to lose, critics say you suck & you gay Warlokk wont win by a hair.. shit - more like a fuckin toupee .........hah, there we go.. smooth, i have seen 'by a hair' lines before, not a lot of 'em, but this was a nice flip to me. You underated man? Shit just aint set in fairly ..but your only the underdog.. in a fuckin pet cemetary .........lol cool, nice more grimey hit here.. it would have been a smoother read if you didnt use 'under' in both lines, especially at the end of two short breaks if you feel me lol.. just a heads up on that, this was a dope line I’m hard as a rock, I got ya neck pressed at an angle See I’m settin the standards.. you in the kitchen settin the table ........HAHA, man, i think this is being overlooked more than it should be, this was fire i thought.. Imp’s stupid as they come, all my boys is slayin you ..cuz you don’t just draw a blank- you oil paint em too .........well, you have very smooth wording, and that is huge in a text battle.. alot of newer kids take nice concepts and just mangle them with poor wording, but the cats that have been around for a minute can take a REAL PLAYED CONCEPT, and somehow make 'em sound dope  .. lol, for real, oil paint was funny even tho draw a blank is definately playedYou copyin my style, & its bout time this whore is silenced So on ya next vacation.. you can stay at my ‘resort’ to violence ...........word, i feel it, this time i think your wording wasnt as needle point... 'at my resort to violence', if u coulda made that sound better.. it doesnt sound AS tough as it could because you are saying its your "Resort" to violence, that makes u sound like its ur last option and u dont wanna fight.. I think if u flipped it more into "but u would never resort to violence" somehow it would been straight ill, but it was cool Ya foundation is weak.. I aint surprised ya skill is wack Honestly.. you the guy who lost to a fuckin Fill-in-Champ ..........lol, pretty nice hit, hopefully keepin it personal, not as impressive to me, but its still pretty cool If talents a needle in a haystack, this wack coward is fucked then ..cuz hes got more ‘hey’ than a Fat Albert discussion ........haha word man, still the heads up, the repetitive homophones 'hey' and 'hay' doesnt sound as nice as if we heard 'hey' for the first time in the punch.. maybe a synonym, 'when it comes to finding skill, this herb's a dime a dozen...... hes just a needle in straw....with more 'hey' than a fat albert discussion' ...eh, i dont know if you feel me, im stoned as hell so just like breakin 'ish down for what its worth.. cool line lol ;) We’ll get to the matter at hand, okey dokey? but first.. ..how come this is the only week you didn’t show me ya verse? .......Fire. this was maybe my favorite line.. what a damn grill slap haha.. so simply put too, just casually hitting with prolly ur hardest shot too.. i thought that completely made imperial look like a bitch, and an inferior.. lol.. damn. I coulda revised it, but instead you just put in some shit ..you’ll always be below Warlokk – hell, just look at my sig .........I wish i deleted this line by mistake lol.. naw, for real its ok, i think it was sonned by your bar above it though, i think you should have ended it there, it woulda sounded like a nice closer too.. but this was still pretty cool, hear shit like it now and again though. nice verse.. Imperial - Fuck name disses.. all war ‘lock’ lines are played If you dont understand that, ill repeat.. all Warlokk’s lines are played ........haha, that was so simple, same rhyme.. hahah, that was just funny to me though.. i mean definately not ill, but it was hilarious.. ahh, pot Youre the leader of our crew.. thas why we dont do nothin And you neva win belts.. ya dad jus whips ya ass with ‘em .......that didnt flow well to me playa.. also belt lines, especially with whipping are pretty played.. it was aiight tho Hes predictable, ill explain how much Warlokk sucks Hell probly take my name out his sig.. and use that for a punch .....haha, i mean, your hits are pretty simple, but you are still clownin on him a little by it.. pretty funny, rhyme is iffy though Dont even try to say im wack.. thas a lie and a hoax You recruited me.. so you obviously know Im dope ......cool.. nice little more grill slap type shit, i thought this was cool.. if your going to rhyme shit like hoak and dope you really should have a multi supporting it though, in my opinion man.. My punches are ill, I got mad skills when Im rappin bars So at least we got one thing in common…… no avatars ........lol, sorta funny.. i normally hate avatar punches, those hits never impress me, but this was simple and NOT stretched (while alot of avatar punches are) lol, so i feel it.. His punches aint hot, when voters rate Lokk… He only gets A 1.. like people addicted to their steak sauce .........lol i think you could have flipped this even nicer if you made it more complex than just 'people addicted to steak sauce' and worded it better.. cool tho Youre neva hittin high, ya gettin knocked out for sure Ya punches are more ‘low key’ than the lock on a mouse’s door .........haha, that was dope i thought..to be honest with you i think some of your hits have sounded elementary but ur pulling them off very witty.. cool shit Ive heard ya beats.. you need some fuckin practice But whats the point of havin a beat.. when you suck at rappin ......haha, i thought that was pretty nice too.. Lokk wore a suit.. thinkin hed be more of a threat So I strangled him wit his tie.. to give him a formal death ...........naaahh, i wasnt feeling this one seemed stretched not really the best thing for their closer, yuno? but nice verse as a whole man, u had me laughing too. lol vote-warlock why? dope battle i thought.. i think warlock built up from his opener getting nicer and nicer and then nailed it with that show me your verse line boom. but definately a nice read fella's, keep it comming could ya'll peep my battle in the other thread if u get a minute.. kick me some knowledge Last edited by namix; 10-03-2003 at 05:32 PM. |
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