19 Catatonic 5-1 vs 20 Zuchie 4-1

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Old 09-30-2003, 11:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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19 Catatonic 5-1 vs 20 Zuchie 4-1




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Old 10-01-2003, 11:23 AM   #2 (permalink)
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CATATONIC takes it up the butt!
true. lets drop 20 on em Z

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Old 10-01-2003, 11:38 AM   #3 (permalink)
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ZuChiE takes it up the butt!
20 is gravy

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Old 10-03-2003, 04:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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ZuChiE takes it up the butt!
fuck with the flow

WARNING: voters, bad luck when this dude gets a spanking
cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings
by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw
u seem excited to die, time to ease this geeks boner
when i said i'd hook you up with an IV, i didnt mean a date with the league's owner
got ya ass handed to you before, now fall to defeat
most ûûûûûs got you under control, i also got you under alt and delete
you go all out, i put no work in this bitch
how can i be ranked lower than a kid who quotes Twirk in his sig?
peeps predicting you to win, dont go MIA cuz ya know what?
they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up
but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“
cuz that’s all your worth, i write on white rounded corners
Cat’s a piece of cake, and User’s b-day is right around the corner
this faceless dyke, my lines might be what saves his life
tryin to play kool when i smoke him, when he's really a Basic light
still cant get pussy? this narc’s had it
prolly cuz his girls pubic ‘region’is busy with bracket games in March Madness

the ruler's back bitch....
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Old 10-03-2003, 05:01 PM   #5 (permalink)
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CATATONIC takes it up the butt!
*sends out APB for Zuchies flow* …THIS is flow…
*sends out APB for what the phuck is a Zuchie*

allow me to retort... relay the message, sans the baton
as Cats punches leave Zuchs eyes black as African tannin salons
My cannons is on, you battlin armed wit slings n water pistols
pussy needs more’a support… shoulda brought ya garter wit you
ya spits is hardly orig’nal, far from pivotal- they bars for ridicule
verses like virgin panties- meant to be ripped but hard to get into
The games on lock cockboy- these facts aint even worth fighting
Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting
in da locker room sword fighting... snappin pics instead of towels
rolled off Wheel of Fortune for tryin ta buy dycks instead’a vowels!
bad luck battlin me not Jowelz, dat cat'll hurt u but CAT'll murk u
they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'
idiot gone'n turned fool, congrats on graduatin to retarded
battling like your jizz pre-penetration... lost before you started
clueless degener-rate- I might catch charges if i continue
cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you
cop you a dirt plot to climb up into… help elevate ya game
a shiny suit text crew?? no jokes, lets let that resonate in ya brain
voters see evidence of the same- how u smokin me outmatched?
well laid plans fall like your lifeless body... bagged n tossed out the hatch, batch.
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Old 10-03-2003, 05:15 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Zuch
WARNING: voters, bad luck when this dude gets a spanking
cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings
^^ lmfao

by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw
^^ haha.. =)

u seem excited to die, time to ease this geeks boner
when i said i'd hook you up with an IV, i didnt mean a date with the league's owner
^^ lmao.. word word

got ya ass handed to you before, now fall to defeat
most ûûûûûs got you under control, i also got you under alt and delete
^^ haha!

you go all out, i put no work in this bitch
how can i be ranked lower than a kid who quotes Twirk in his sig?
^^ ha!

peeps predicting you to win, dont go MIA cuz ya know what?
they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up
^^ ohhhhhh

but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“
^^ ohhh shit!

cuz that’s all your worth, i write on white rounded corners
Cat’s a piece of cake, and User’s b-day is right around the corner
^^ lmmfamoalmfol!!!!!!

this faceless dyke, my lines might be what saves his life
tryin to play kool when i smoke him, when he's really a Basic light
^^ daaaaamn

still cant get pussy? this narc’s had it
prolly cuz his girls pubic ‘region’is busy with bracket games in March Madness
^^ haha


Catatonic
allow me to retort... relay the message, sans the baton
as Cats punches leave Zuchs eyes black as African tannin salons
^^ lol

My cannons is on, you battlin armed wit slings n water pistols
pussy needs more’a support… shoulda brought ya garter wit you
^^ haha

ya spits is hardly orig’nal, far from pivotal- they bars for ridicule
verses like virgin panties- meant to be ripped but hard to get into
^^ ehh.. too forced

The games on lock cockboy- these facts aint even worth fighting
Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting
^^ nice, but just seen it recently..

in da locker room sword fighting... snappin pics instead of towels
rolled off Wheel of Fortune for tryin ta buy dycks instead’a vowels!
^^ ehhh

bad luck battlin me not Jowelz, dat cat'll hurt u but CAT'll murk u
they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'
^^ haha

idiot gone'n turned fool, congrats on graduatin to retarded
battling like your jizz pre-penetration... lost before you started
^^ heh

clueless degener-rate- I might catch charges if i continue
cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you
^^ lol

cop you a dirt plot to climb up into… help elevate ya game
a shiny suit text crew?? no jokes, lets let that resonate in ya brain
^^ huh?

voters see evidence of the same- how u smokin me outmatched?
well laid plans fall like your lifeless body... bagged n tossed out the hatch, batch.
^^ nahh


Zuch clearly took this.. Cat didnt come too bad, but Zuch just had so many ohhh shit lines I couldnt believe it.. the Username birthday line needs to go up in the top 10 punches this week.. damn.. Zuch really shook the rust off with this verse..

Vote = Zuch
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Old 10-03-2003, 05:22 PM   #7 (permalink)
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ZUCH



WARNING: voters, bad luck when this dude gets a spanking
cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings
by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw

opener was dope.. lol feeling it. that mandible claw line was mad creative loving it......

u seem excited to die, time to ease this geeks boner
when i said i'd hook you up with an IV, i didnt mean a date with the league's owner
got ya ass handed to you before, now fall to defeat
most ûûûûûs got you under control, i also got you under alt and delete

lmao at the iv line.. nice.. the second has been used alot before.. but it was switched nicely from the start of it.

you go all out, i put no work in this bitch
how can i be ranked lower than a kid who quotes Twirk in his sig?
peeps predicting you to win, dont go MIA cuz ya know what?
they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up
but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“

the twirp was ok..... but those next two were straight clowning. lmao.... liken them


cuz that’s all your worth, i write on white rounded corners
Cat’s a piece of cake, and User’s b-day is right around the corner
this faceless dyke, my lines might be what saves his life
tryin to play kool when i smoke him, when he's really a Basic light

the user line was nice.. made me chuckle lol.. but the multi's were dope really feeling that.... the second 1 is coo....


still cant get pussy? this narc’s had it
prolly cuz his girls pubic ‘region’is busy with bracket games in March Madness

lmao 2 the closer... nice....

over all the verse was very consistant never fell off at all.. a few ok lines a few real dope... really feeling the verse


CATATONIC



allow me to retort... relay the message, sans the baton
as Cats punches leave Zuchs eyes black as African tannin salons
My cannons is on, you battlin armed wit slings n water pistols
pussy needs more’a support… shoulda brought ya garter wit you

the opener was quite cool.. lol quite creative.... second was'nt bad...

ya spits is hardly orig’nal, far from pivotal- they bars for ridicule
verses like virgin panties- meant to be ripped but hard to get into
The games on lock cockboy- these facts aint even worth fighting
Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting

first one was nice lmao.. feeling it.. second was ok.. but revolved around this "candy rapper" which i was'nt feeling just to get a punchline for biting

in da locker room sword fighting... snappin pics instead of towels
rolled off Wheel of Fortune for tryin ta buy dycks instead’a vowels!
bad luck battlin me not Jowelz, dat cat'll hurt u but CAT'll murk u
they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'


wasnt feeling the first.. but the double plays line was dope... =)


idiot gone'n turned fool, congrats on graduatin to retarded
battling like your jizz pre-penetration... lost before you started
clueless degener-rate- I might catch charges if i continue
cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you

the jizz pre-penetration was ok... the second was again just ok......

cop you a dirt plot to climb up into… help elevate ya game
a shiny suit text crew?? no jokes, lets let that resonate in ya brain
voters see evidence of the same- how u smokin me outmatched?
well laid plans fall like your lifeless body... bagged n tossed out the hatch, batch.

finished ok... alot of nice dissing which counts for something..... some real creative shit..... but was never consistant enough..... i feel u could have done alot better cata. in the end, u brought a nice verse.. but not enough for zuch IMO


vote- zuch
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Old 10-03-2003, 05:29 PM   #8 (permalink)
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WARNING: voters, bad luck when this dude gets a spanking
cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings
^^Nice opener,play on Cat..overall nice bar..


by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw
^^Lol!Good ole' wrestling..nice,flowed nicely.

u seem excited to die, time to ease this geeks boner
when i said i'd hook you up with an IV, i didnt mean a date with the league's owner
^^Like this bar,wouldve been good for last weeks wow,but whateva..nice..

got ya ass handed to you before, now fall to defeat
most ûûûûûs got you under control, i also got you under alt and delete
..again,nice punch..keyboard lines can be horrible,but this was pulled off nicely..

you go all out, i put no work in this bitch
how can i be ranked lower than a kid who quotes Twirk in his sig?
Basic,hit..

peeps predicting you to win, dont go MIA cuz ya know what?
they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up
Basic,hit nicely..good bar

but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“
lol,nice

cuz that’s all your worth, i write on white rounded corners
Cat’s a piece of cake, and User’s b-day is right around the corner
User punch,ehh,worded nicely though..

this faceless dyke, my lines might be what saves his life
tryin to play kool when i smoke him, when he's really a Basic light
ok,nothing special..ok bar

still cant get pussy? this narc’s had it
prolly cuz his girls pubic ‘region’is busy with bracket games in March Madness
LOL!nice closer,funny punchline..some might not catch punches bout march madness..but nice..

Great verse..i am not sure cat can top this...lets see...

allow me to retort... relay the message, sans the baton
as Cats punches leave Zuchs eyes black as African tannin salons
Kinda played,but ok..

My cannons is on, you battlin armed wit slings n water pistols
pussy needs more’a support… shoulda brought ya garter wit you
Liked the setup,2nd line coulda hit harder..but ok..

ya spits is hardly orig’nal, far from pivotal- they bars for ridicule
verses like virgin panties- meant to be ripped but hard to get into
Ok,not the best similie..but ok..

The games on lock cockboy- these facts aint even worth fighting
Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting
Nice,loved the candy rapper/bar play..nest bar so far..

in da locker room sword fighting... snappin pics instead of towels
rolled off Wheel of Fortune for tryin ta buy dycks instead’a vowels!
ok..didnt catch..but its prolly ok..

bad luck battlin me not Jowelz, dat cat'll hurt u but CAT'll murk u
they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'
ok bar,wasnt feelin totally,but not bad.

idiot gone'n turned fool, congrats on graduatin to retarded
battling like your jizz pre-penetration... lost before you started
not very well worded at all..

clueless degener-rate- I might catch charges if i continue
cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you
Basic,but ok imagery..

cop you a dirt plot to climb up into… help elevate ya game
a shiny suit text crew?? no jokes, lets let that resonate in ya brain
ok,not feelin too much..

voters see evidence of the same- how u smokin me outmatched?
well laid plans fall like your lifeless body... bagged n tossed out the hatch, batch.
Ok closer..


This was a much better battle than i thought it'd be,zuchie came real nice n catatonic put up a good fight,came much iller than all the times i've seen him..my breakdown may nt show this,but overall cat came quite nice..but zuchie came hard with some fire lines, his opener was dope..good battle fellas..cta just couldnt do enough this time....

vote - ZuChiE..
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Old 10-03-2003, 05:42 PM   #9 (permalink)
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v/Zuch

mankind line was hot

everything else was prertty decent

cata just doenst appeal to me ..the flow was average ..ur punches didnt appeal .. nothing spectacular out ya verse

more consistency and better lines gives Zuch the win here ladies
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Old 10-03-2003, 05:46 PM   #10 (permalink)
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afraid knot. takes it up the butt!
vote = zuch
but it's not as one sided as everyone says. catatonic came nice, but nothing was original.. zuch had a couple blowup lines..

just like archive said, more consistent.
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Old 10-03-2003, 05:49 PM   #11 (permalink)
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CATATONIC takes it up the butt!
well i mean gahdam! lol-

zuch's obviously got this joint... i can admit being beaten no problem...

archive, if youve never felt my shyt- and others obviously have, just dont vote on my battles nahmean?

that dont take anything away from Z on this joint... kid brought much heat. props again.

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Old 10-03-2003, 06:00 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Creatical takes it up the butt!
catatonic-

"Id sink teeth into dis candy rapper if he eva had a bar worth biting"
-- ha.. felt this line. exhibited confidence, too.

"they outlaw doubleplays? aint no way left for u to turn '2'"
-- cool. could'a been reworded.

"I might catch charges if i continue
cuz strichtnine cyanide n knives aint all theyll find up in you"
-- sick


zuch-

"cuz this Cat will cross your path.. when he falls past you in the rankings"
-- dope. top 10 potential indeed.

"by the time i reach the top, this fag will be gone
hes such a disgrace to 'mankind', it gave him the mandible claw"
-- creative

"they just hypin’ you so they can watch me rip you when you show up"
-- ha

"but real heads know you have no chance, this is a recital bitch
peeps be like “wow zuch wasted lines, he shoulda recycled shit“"
-- cool idea. could'a been reworded.



both had lines that stood out to me.. but zuch was more consistant.

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Old 10-04-2003, 12:44 AM   #13 (permalink)
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ZuChiE takes it up the butt!
good battle
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i like catatonic, dudes who can admit when they lose obviously have their heads in the right place and get my respect, good looks.

zuch did take this tho.

his opener, 'amdible claw' and 'under control' lines were all dope.

cat had a verse of ups and downs, but the ups were good; - 'lost before ya started' and 'virgin panties' were both real nice similies..ima mos def peep him again.

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Old 10-04-2003, 08:59 AM   #15 (permalink)
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I wanted Catatonic to win, I like him a lot,

BUT,

despite his niiiiiiiiiiice flow, he couldn't mess w/ Zuch. He had no real flaws in his verse, and some dope ass lines...

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Old 10-04-2003, 01:38 PM   #16 (permalink)
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Word to toil.. I gotta say after this battle I respect Catatonic alot more than I did before.. I never really gave him a chance, but he came dope this week and isnt bitchin about the votes.. he's straight in my book
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Old 10-04-2003, 02:56 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Citizen X takes it up the butt!
cat came nice, i liked alot of his shit, it surprised me. but zuch came better with more creativity and consistency.

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Old 10-05-2003, 07:30 PM   #18 (permalink)
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Old 10-05-2003, 07:46 PM   #19 (permalink)
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X Mc HoTT SaLIvA X takes it up the butt!
zuch wins


he was just completely consistant, fire
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Old 10-06-2003, 02:30 AM   #20 (permalink)
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Zuch .wins 3-0 (-6 for votes on Zuch)

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