RBL Championship!!! 1. Island 8-1 vs 2. Dough Jordan 7-1

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Old 09-27-2003, 05:22 PM   #41 (permalink)
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vote - dough

Island was cool, but like some said, one dimensional, ALOT of chin disses, had one cool line, but you cant see Doughs Calfs and hes not fat, so that line was just a stacked punch.

Dough had the lesser advantage with no pic and countered the verse, he had more of a in your face verse and all around better verse, it was just more well rounded then Islands.
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Old 09-27-2003, 05:47 PM   #42 (permalink)
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well this one could have went either way.

island, props for posting first. i didnt find the chin lines repedative at all and almost all of your lines hit hard.


dough., real nice verse. lot of hard hitting lines, but you didnt really hit on ALL of them. i think island was more consistant therefore


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Old 09-27-2003, 06:22 PM   #43 (permalink)
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This would have been alot closer if Island didnt use Dough's pic.. shit was your weakness..
exactly...I think the pic thing became gay after i did it with Manic...lol
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Old 09-27-2003, 08:28 PM   #44 (permalink)
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Island's best
You’ve been on the net for 4 years…but damn the mans a bore
Cus Lebron made the Cavs big…while Fat did that to yours
Nice one here.
This hunch back wasnt felt for 4 years, n now i bet this ho’s lovin it
Cus he'll keep his chin up....so the bottom 30 can limbo under it
There ain't no doubts, ...i'm pullin this win off
Chinchilla aint a fabric, it's the name of ur chin in a Godzilla spin off
Bahahaha. Flames.


Dough's best
I'ma save voters the breakdown since ya been smoked clear/
his verse's content summed up: insert chin joke here_____/
Hahaha. Good counter.
there 2 differences between us, u get stamped wit ease/
and 2? I never needed an alias to be champ of the league/
people came online ta check ya verse, u left many bored/
cuz ya dick's like the drug acid and nobodys on it anymore/
Dope. Acid punch is fire.
this battle ur sorta like a DJ vinyl, u gettin scratched and cut/
they say u are what u eat, that makes u both ass and butt/
thats whats up, wannabe net thug, let ya hammer tool spray/
I'm one hard act to follow, ur more like a grammar school play/
Feelin grammar school line.
keep ya pics cuz women love em, I'll pretend at least/
since his Mom, Nana, and all ya aunts got like 10 a piece/
HA. That's a coo closer.

Overall Dough edges this slightly. The chin jokes were repetitve but entertainng still. Great highs but I thought that it wasn't varied enough to get the win. Acid and grammar school play were just as good as any of the chin punches for me.
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Old 09-28-2003, 02:27 PM   #47 (permalink)
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Old 09-28-2003, 03:41 PM   #48 (permalink)
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Battle was off the fucking charts, both of y'all deserve a win but I got to be honest and give the W to the verse I feel was better by like the smallest of margins. Flows were crazy on both sides, both had some hard hitting top notch punches that really made this an enjoyable battle to read. I think eventhough Island's verse got repetitive with the chin lines he still managed to keep the level of creativity and hard hitting punches at a rate that in the end overpowered Dough's verse. Great Battle here, one for the ages.
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Old 09-28-2003, 04:41 PM   #49 (permalink)
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yo whattup man i got island takin this with the LMMFAO factor yo, lol. off the laugh tip he was illest while dough came with ordinary ish, some iigh stuff like the acid line but them ishes is kinda played imo yo, haha. dope ass verse, i think dough coulda killed anyone else with it but island came with comedy son.

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Old 09-28-2003, 05:38 PM   #50 (permalink)
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Kanye broke his jaw too, n it was makin his chin long
but Kanye spit thru the wire...youre rappin thru brick walls
You’ve been on the net for 4 years…but damn the mans a bore
Cus Lebron made the Cavs big…while Fat did that to yours


We make fun of user…hes fat, but his lines are forceful
N while he’s got 8 chins, you’ve got one bigger than his entire torso
This hunch back wasnt felt for 4 years, n now i bet this ho’s lovin it
Cus he'll keep his chin up....so the bottom 30 can limbo under it
There ain't no doubts, ...i'm pullin this win off
Chinchilla aint a fabric, it's the name of ur chin in a Godzilla spin off
Damn... alot of chin lines but they were all nice.

Posted by Dough Jordan

there 2 differences between us, u get stamped wit ease/
and 2? I never needed an alias to be champ of the league/

That hit hard

thats whats up, wannabe net thug, let ya hammer tool spray/
I'm one hard act to follow, ur more like a grammar school play/


Not much to quote from Dough... soooo

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Old 09-28-2003, 05:49 PM   #51 (permalink)
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Old 09-28-2003, 05:55 PM   #52 (permalink)
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island-lmao x 10 at all them chin lines....but dope verse....decent punches, nice creativity, and stayed consitent


dough- als0 came very dope....i felt you didnt want this as much....the pic was unfair, but ive seen you come way better

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Old 09-28-2003, 06:09 PM   #53 (permalink)
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Dough killed it with some lines, but all his lines were scattered about, while Island had some lines packed tight throughout the whole verse, and some dope lines, the only thing wrong was the abundance of Chin disses, but those can be overlooked with the rest of the punches being so damn good.

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Old 09-28-2003, 06:19 PM   #54 (permalink)
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island came with it..some dope ass chin lines some nice original shit
dough came nice, tried to counter alot better if he posted first but ehh


vote-island in the end
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Old 09-28-2003, 07:01 PM   #55 (permalink)
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Kanye broke his jaw too, n it was makin his chin long
but Kanye spit thru the wire...youre rappin thru brick walls
ehh
You’ve been on the net for 4 years…but damn the mans a bore
Cus Lebron made the Cavs big…while Fat did that to yours
lmfao wow line of the week
the guesses on who I am have been fake, but it lingers
as he counters my lines, makin his chin shape with his fingers
lol good
Lets leave it to dough, use the mag n see what he knows
I won best verse, he was runner up to me 2 weeks in a row
good personal
We make fun of user…hes fat, but his lines are forceful
N while he’s got 8 chins, you’ve got one bigger than his entire torso
ehhh
lets speak some more on user…not cus hes godly tho
But cus he likes stickin the sausage to Dough, more than Somnio
ehhhhh
ill reverse the curse...lemme just lunge back
And hit your chin so hard, the top a ya head'll resemble a dunce cap
coo
This hunch back wasnt felt for 4 years, n now i bet this ho’s lovin it
Cus he'll keep his chin up....so the bottom 30 can limbo under it
lol
There ain't no doubts, ...i'm pullin this win off
Chinchilla aint a fabric, it's the name of ur chin in a Godzilla spin off
lmfao yesssss
I tried to get over your chin, .....but fuck it, it's hard
If i broke ya glass jaw all of Hartford would be covered in shards
wow maybe thats the line of the battle actually


I'ma save voters the breakdown since ya been smoked clear/
his verse's content summed up: insert chin joke here_____/
good line, but cheap for playin off his verse
Above's ur chance for another chin diss, think of it quick/
I can't care too much, I provided u with a link to the pic/
ehh
and I don't need yours cuz ur considered a limited threat/
posted my pic for u again, saw what good it did citizen x/
ehhhh
there 2 differences between us, u get stamped wit ease/
and 2? I never needed an alias to be champ of the league/
good personal
people came online ta check ya verse, u left many bored/
cuz ya dick's like the drug acid and nobodys on it anymore/
tight, but generic as fuck
get a fresh style, a fresh gimmick, and become new ta people/
everyone knows that in ya field of dreams, i'm the root of evil/
cool
this battle ur sorta like a DJ vinyl, u gettin scratched and cut/
they say u are what u eat, that makes u both ass and butt/
ehh
thats whats up, wannabe net thug, let ya hammer tool spray/
I'm one hard act to follow, ur more like a grammar school play/
lol good shit
now I'm hoping u all understand just how this joker's lame/
just pulled so many cards half the rbl could play a poker game/
nah
keep ya pics cuz women love em, I'll pretend at least/
since his Mom, Nana, and all ya aunts got like 10 a piece/
good closer

ok this was an ok battle. i didnt really see it being too close though. dough had a good solid verse. however island had me lmfao a lot with some of his lines. i gotta give this to him on the basis that he had a few better lines.

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Old 09-28-2003, 08:17 PM   #56 (permalink)
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Old 09-28-2003, 11:14 PM   #59 (permalink)
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dough won to me


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Old 09-28-2003, 11:32 PM   #60 (permalink)
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he had a better all around battle verse, much more witt and humour along with a nice flow. Dough was solid but not good enough this week
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