5. Eyedeal 3-0 v.s 6. N. Taverez 1-0

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Old 09-18-2006, 12:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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5. Eyedeal 3-0 v.s 6. N. Taverez 1-0



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Old 09-18-2006, 03:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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N.Tavarez takes it up the butt!
down for like 10-14 lines..............................
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Old 09-19-2006, 12:55 AM   #3 (permalink)
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eyedeal takes it up the butt!
14's cool

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Old 09-22-2006, 06:31 PM   #4 (permalink)
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N.Tavarez takes it up the butt!
Look kid
ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
Ya girl be passing us brains, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
Cocky bitch walks in demanding..... thinks we probably feel em
Dont get too high on yourself, Ill make U land on somebody and kill em
Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
Im in a groove son its over your dead
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head
bitch!

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Old 09-22-2006, 11:13 PM   #5 (permalink)
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eyedeal takes it up the butt!
Ayo,

This clown’s lame.. He can act gangsta within his town’s frame
But here, he’ll get hit harder than Chad Johnson in the browns game
I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
You fuckin’ annoy me.. The inaugural tourney champ's half the man, son
& that's why the league didn't even mention you in the mag after ya won
You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch
I’ma don.. & if he’s an icon who plans to excel with wins
Then I’ma put the star on his head.. Like Terrell Owens
You’ll lose cuz you didn’t concentrate.. You gotta release ya whit
But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit

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Old 09-23-2006, 01:17 AM   #6 (permalink)
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youngflow takes it up the butt!
this was by far the best battle i have seen so far.....but ima give it to N.

for harder punches and better wordplay



ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name-line that did it


vote-N.
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Old 09-24-2006, 04:18 PM   #8 (permalink)
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ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
Im in a groove son its over your dead
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head

vs

This clown’s lame.. He can act gangsta within his town’s frame
But here, he’ll get hit harder than Chad Johnson in the browns game
I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
You fuckin’ annoy me.. The inaugural tourney champ's half the man, son
& that's why the league didn't even mention you in the mag after ya won
You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch



i think eyedeal had one more line i was feeling, i didnt like the scheme of the terell owens line, and the closer has been flipped before...

N tav had a couple lines i wasnt feelin....and soime i diid...


overall, Eye had more i was feeling...


Good battle folks,


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Old 09-24-2006, 06:33 PM   #9 (permalink)
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eyedeal takes it up the butt!
1-1, uppin'
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Old 09-24-2006, 07:26 PM   #10 (permalink)
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ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
Im in a groove son its over your dead
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head

v.s.

I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
I’ma don.. & if he’s an icon who plans to excel with wins
Then I’ma put the star on his head.. Like Terrell Owens

Overall this was a cool little battle here. NT came pretty cool. Had some good lines. Wasn't as good as his previous verse, but it was still a pretty good effort. That Frank one i thought was dope as hell. He was fallin' off after that, but finished pretty strong so cool shit there. Eyedeal also came cool. The eyedeal and TO lines were nice. rest of your verse was coo, but the Son of a bitch line I seen done over 100 times. shit's playedddd. But other than that you had cool verse too. But I think NT got this by a bit tho for being a bit more consistent.

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Old 09-24-2006, 07:32 PM   #11 (permalink)
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MagTzu takes it up the butt!
Ohhh shit, the legend is back...

and it looks like some freshness is in the vacinity...

Eyedeal, no doubt.
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Old 09-24-2006, 08:43 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Look kid
ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!

&


I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch

I don't know who Johnson or Owens is bro sorry, lines went right over my head, try mentioning some better known people

vote- Tavererz
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Old 09-24-2006, 08:55 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Look kid
ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
alright, this is an ok flip. i've seen plenty of i'm gonna be frank with you type of lines though.
Ya girl be passing us brains, straight acting unruly
we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
i saw you use this not too long ago, i thought it was tight. kinda loses value for not being the 1st time you dropped it tho, sorry bro
Cocky bitch walks in demanding..... thinks we probably feel em
Dont get too high on yourself, Ill make U land on somebody and kill em
ehh
Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
if he was like 9-0 and you were 3-0 this would have worked, but there's not much of a disparity with 2 wins
This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
ehh, not bad
Im in a groove son its over your dead
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head
bitch!
yea i thought this was pretty good, not dope. but solid

overall, you dropped above average i'd say. nothing real standout, nothing bad. i've seen better and i've seen worse from you, so not much criticism. the only thing that really hurt your verse were some kinda older concepts, which i will admit you flipped well. that and the 3 times the win line, but i just thought that one wasnt very good. closer was cool.


Ayo,

This clown’s lame.. He can act gangsta within his town’s frame
But here, he’ll get hit harder than Chad Johnson in the browns game
that was a hard hit lol. but this line is pretty simple
I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
thought this was cool
You fuckin’ annoy me.. The inaugural tourney champ's half the man, son
& that's why the league didn't even mention you in the mag after ya won
personal, so that's a plus. but not real creative
You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch
eh
I’ma don.. & if he’s an icon who plans to excel with wins
Then I’ma put the star on his head.. Like Terrell Owens
ehhh
You’ll lose cuz you didn’t concentrate.. You gotta release ya whit
But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit
lol. seen focus lines, was funny tho



this was a pretty close battle to me. i liked Deals eye drop and his personal. the rest was ehh. Tav had the in the groove line i liked. Most of your verse was cliches though, which is taking a chance alot of times nowadays, so the frank/high on yourself lines were concepts ive seen before. The UE line was recycled, when i first read it on RV i liked it. But i cant give the same props to the line now as i did then. Close battle. Lines i didnt like: i didnt like tavs 3 time the win line at all. the beatdown line was ok, but ive seen beatdown lines before too. um from Deal: i thought the TO line sucked. the Chad Johnson line wasnt really bad, but not that creative. Ok, and for best line of the battle i thought Deals eyedrop line took it. my instincts are sayin Eyedeal. i could see it going either way, but i cant give credit to cliches ive seen alot. but i wouldnt be surrpised if Tav wins.
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Old 09-24-2006, 10:05 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by macmilimeterhyms
Look kid
ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!

&


I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch

I don't know who Johnson or Owens is bro sorry, lines went right over my head, try mentioning some better known people

vote- Tavererz
LMFAO.. u don't know who TO and Chad Johnson is?

bwahahaha

they're two of the best wide receivers in the NFL
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Old 09-25-2006, 12:20 AM   #15 (permalink)
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