CONTENDERSHIP 3. macmilimeteryms 3-0 vs. 4. Butler 17-2

Oneduh · 09-04-2006, 07:26 PM

RBL Rules & Regulations.

-Duedates-
All Verses due FRIDAY night 12:00am Pacific
All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Eastern
(Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

-Line Limit-
agree on an amount with your opponent
in your check in. if no agreement is reached
2nd person to drop must match the 1st person who dropped
(2nd person can drop less but NOT more)

-Voting-
5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. (links)
1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
One vote must be cast in either Contender or Championship Match, and Labeled as such.
Failure for winner to not produce all links will result in no win being added to their record.

-General Rules-
---1st person cant edit after 2nd person posts
2nd person cant edit after a vote has been made
--Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted
will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle!
--No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
--Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend
rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

-Mod AIM Contacts-
Oz -- Jaygood259Oz
Oneduh -- Anthraxspitz

macmilimeterhyms · 09-05-2006, 08:23 PM

10 lines

check back

Butler · 09-07-2006, 03:33 PM

watever.
probly doin more than 10 lines if i post 1st

macmilimeterhyms · 09-08-2006, 10:14 PM

ok

ya mother's a hooker, worthless to many
I spent a whole roll of coins on that trick, and it was worth every penny
gangsta living? naa dudes a herb, you wouldn't move a bird-
until thanksgiving when the food is served
I'm known for blazin', mackin' hoes amazing
I'm a Butler's worst nightmare like a home invasion
I aint impressed wit ya fam, ya less than a man
I could probably palm ya whole chest in my hand
lightweight u could get high off cigars
you have a model verse, 'cuz any mod'll recognize your bars
Ima chokelift this joke and not let him down
this bitch dress drag heavier than a wedding gown
this is no dream dope fiend fall back on the hits
you're like a desperate handyman, always lookin for a fix

what ya got?

macmilimeterhyms · 09-09-2006, 11:21 AM

i hope this dude got an extention...

macmilimeterhyms · 09-09-2006, 06:35 PM

feel free to critique my verse

Meta Syn · 09-09-2006, 08:06 PM

I think when I sign out, ur gonna have a cool battle with Oneduh or whoever is in the champ match

Al Murder U · 09-10-2006, 03:10 PM

good verse, id say add/remove a few words from certain lines, it will compliment your flow. Also, a couple of rhymes were just rhymes, creative, yes....but not very hard hitting..(EX. Chest in my hand)

yo, this dudes an herb...who wouldn't move a bird...
...until thanksgiving day...when the food is served

thats how i woulda did it...\

i understand why u put gangsta living in there, but, IMO, it is unnessicary. (SP?)

if u do require an explanation, within the line, watch syllables...it messes up the flow...and makes ur verse look unattractive...

Also, like the every penny line, in stead of .."and it was".., id simply say
"...she was worth every penny..."

Good verse, other wise, sorry Butler No Showed....Good luck with ur battle next week...

Peace..

Butler · 09-11-2006, 05:23 PM

damn.. somethin serious came up,

if nobody cares, i'll drop in 5 minutes.

Butler · 09-11-2006, 06:03 PM

macmilimeterhyms

U cant say shit.. so execuses? ya can't pull it now,
its monday.. I gav u 3 entire days to edit all that bullshit out
who are you kiddin? homeboi u got NO cread.
ngga, the mods r lettin me post an hour b4 Oneduhs gonna close threads
but Mac luvs textin'.. always jottin down the hardest shit
he's got a real will to write - cuz he only got about 8 bars to live
Na, im playin.. ur elevatin'. Iv read ya stuff guy
u remind me of how i word my punchlines.. minus the impact, wording an punchlines
Expose ya corny bars. and ya gay tranny world bro..
then discuss the irony of Mac finding an Apple in his girls throat
fluffy kid. soft as hell. Macs a Fluffy bitch
wen i calld U a down dude
...i meant like feathers in the comfortr ya moms n i cuddle with

SPuL · 09-11-2006, 06:21 PM

lightweight u could get high off cigars
you have a model verse, 'cuz any mod'll recognize your bars

v.s.

U cant say shit.. so execuses? ya can't pull it now,
its monday.. I gav u 3 entire days to edit all that bullshit out
Na, im playin.. ur elevatin'. Iv read ya stuff guy
u remind me of how i word my punchlines.. minus the impact, wording an punchlines
Expose ya corny bars. and ya gay tranny world bro..
then discuss the irony of Mac finding an Apple in his girls throat

Overall, this was a pretty one-sided battle here. Mac came ehh... nothing really stood out too much man. Iunno if you tried fully or what. But your wording caused your impact to suffer. Rest of your shit was aiight though. Butler killed his verse pretty much. Every line was a pretty good hit. The opener was pretty dope. lol and the minus impact line. Good shit there. So I mean IMO Butler got this with ease. Nice effort Mac, but it just wasn't enough yo.
v/Butler

Oneduh · 09-11-2006, 07:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by macmilimeterhyms

i hope this dude got an extention...

Based on that .. Imma allow Butler's verse.

I gotta agree with spul here.. Butler just outclassed dude. Mac I see alot of potential.. You got some great ideas you just need to adapt to the RBL style wording.. Good shit tho. Liked the Model line the best. Butler aint have nothin amazing.. Like I said.. Jus outcalssed dude.. I liked the will to write line tho.

Vote- Butler

Butler wins

09-04-2006, 07:26 PM	#1 (permalink)
Oneduh Wf. Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 8,573	CONTENDERSHIP 3. macmilimeteryms 3-0 vs. 4. Butler 17-2 RBL Rules & Regulations. -Duedates- All Verses due FRIDAY night 12:00am Pacific All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Eastern (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches) -Line Limit- agree on an amount with your opponent in your check in. if no agreement is reached 2nd person to drop must match the 1st person who dropped (2nd person can drop less but NOT more) -Voting- 5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. (links) 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all. Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts. No 1 line voting! It wont be counted! One vote must be cast in either Contender or Championship Match, and Labeled as such. Failure for winner to not produce all links will result in no win being added to their record. -General Rules- ---1st person cant edit after 2nd person posts 2nd person cant edit after a vote has been made --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle! --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP! --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league. -Mod AIM Contacts- Oz -- Jaygood259Oz Oneduh -- Anthraxspitz __________________ shut the fuck up.

09-07-2006, 03:33 PM	#3 (permalink)
Butler Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 596	watever. probly doin more than 10 lines if i post 1st __________________ I will fucking rip you!

09-09-2006, 08:06 PM	#7 (permalink)
Meta Syn Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 194	I think when I sign out, ur gonna have a cool battle with Oneduh or whoever is in the champ match __________________ a VERY motivated meta

09-10-2006, 03:10 PM	#8 (permalink)
Al Murder U Lyrically... Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Killerado- The Real Hip Hop 5280 Posts: 7,231	good verse, id say add/remove a few words from certain lines, it will compliment your flow. Also, a couple of rhymes were just rhymes, creative, yes....but not very hard hitting..(EX. Chest in my hand) yo, this dudes an herb...who wouldn't move a bird... ...until thanksgiving day...when the food is served thats how i woulda did it...\ i understand why u put gangsta living in there, but, IMO, it is unnessicary. (SP?) if u do require an explanation, within the line, watch syllables...it messes up the flow...and makes ur verse look unattractive... Also, like the every penny line, in stead of .."and it was".., id simply say "...she was worth every penny..." Good verse, other wise, sorry Butler No Showed....Good luck with ur battle next week... Peace.. __________________ ..l.. (-_-) ..l.. Last edited by Al Murder U; 09-10-2006 at 03:14 PM.

09-11-2006, 05:23 PM	#9 (permalink)
Butler Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 596	damn.. somethin serious came up, if nobody cares, i'll drop in 5 minutes. __________________ I will fucking rip you!

09-05-2006, 08:23 PM	#2 (permalink)
macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: NJ Exit 8a... Posts: 2,675	10 lines check back

09-08-2006, 10:14 PM	#4 (permalink)
macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: NJ Exit 8a... Posts: 2,675	ok ya mother's a hooker, worthless to many I spent a whole roll of coins on that trick, and it was worth every penny gangsta living? naa dudes a herb, you wouldn't move a bird- until thanksgiving when the food is served I'm known for blazin', mackin' hoes amazing I'm a Butler's worst nightmare like a home invasion I aint impressed wit ya fam, ya less than a man I could probably palm ya whole chest in my hand lightweight u could get high off cigars you have a model verse, 'cuz any mod'll recognize your bars Ima chokelift this joke and not let him down this bitch dress drag heavier than a wedding gown this is no dream dope fiend fall back on the hits you're like a desperate handyman, always lookin for a fix what ya got?

09-09-2006, 11:21 AM	#5 (permalink)
macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: NJ Exit 8a... Posts: 2,675	i hope this dude got an extention...

09-09-2006, 06:35 PM	#6 (permalink)
macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: NJ Exit 8a... Posts: 2,675	feel free to critique my verse

09-11-2006, 06:03 PM	#10 (permalink)
Butler Registered User Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 596	macmilimeterhyms U cant say shit.. so execuses? ya can't pull it now, its monday.. I gav u 3 entire days to edit all that bullshit out who are you kiddin? homeboi u got NO cread. ngga, the mods r lettin me post an hour b4 Oneduhs gonna close threads but Mac luvs textin'.. always jottin down the hardest shit he's got a real will to write - cuz he only got about 8 bars to live Na, im playin.. ur elevatin'. Iv read ya stuff guy u remind me of how i word my punchlines.. minus the impact, wording an punchlines Expose ya corny bars. and ya gay tranny world bro.. then discuss the irony of Mac finding an Apple in his girls throat fluffy kid. soft as hell. Macs a Fluffy bitch wen i calld U a down dude ...i meant like feathers in the comfortr ya moms n i cuddle with __________________ I will fucking rip you! Last edited by Butler; 09-11-2006 at 06:09 PM.

09-11-2006, 06:21 PM	#11 (permalink)
SPuL Registered User Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Beantown Posts: 898	lightweight u could get high off cigars you have a model verse, 'cuz any mod'll recognize your bars v.s. U cant say shit.. so execuses? ya can't pull it now, its monday.. I gav u 3 entire days to edit all that bullshit out Na, im playin.. ur elevatin'. Iv read ya stuff guy u remind me of how i word my punchlines.. minus the impact, wording an punchlines Expose ya corny bars. and ya gay tranny world bro.. then discuss the irony of Mac finding an Apple in his girls throat Overall, this was a pretty one-sided battle here. Mac came ehh... nothing really stood out too much man. Iunno if you tried fully or what. But your wording caused your impact to suffer. Rest of your shit was aiight though. Butler killed his verse pretty much. Every line was a pretty good hit. The opener was pretty dope. lol and the minus impact line. Good shit there. So I mean IMO Butler got this with ease. Nice effort Mac, but it just wasn't enough yo. v/Butler

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