13. T.r.oo.p. 0-0 vs 14. The DQ 0-0 vs 15. Precize 0-0

MC4SiGHT · 07-04-2006, 03:32 AM

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Your TOPICS for this week - 6/26!

T.r.oo.p · 07-04-2006, 05:51 PM

Nike's.............

T.r.oo.p · 07-07-2006, 03:08 AM

Well since they probly not gone show

can i jus vote on 5 battles?

Tha_DQ · 07-07-2006, 06:12 PM

Barb Wire

A black strand…released from her nappy hair
Caught in barbed snare, such a trap of despair
Her glare glides to the other side of the wire
A desire for an angels’ choir though life is dire
No more light in these eyes…it faded with lies
She fainted & cried but always kept her pride
Buried inside of a strong soul, she’s a panther
A concrete jungle, that’s where God plant her
To flourish and eventually nourish a new seed
But she bleeds knowing only a few succeed
Ever year, playing this game called surviving
The same ones depriving but she tries diving
In the ocean of cheers & dreams, just to see
It isn’t meant to be as she’s covered in debris
Her people’s past lasts to this day…they hurt
Through dismay, paid but still portrayed as dirt
Although authors changed, the crime remains
The suppressed stay the same, chained in pain
Barbs cutting the skin…words cutting within
She keeps up her chin, hope’s growing so thin
But she’d tear out her hair and rip off her flesh
To just get their respect or to start over fresh
But the others aren’t that grand as they stand
To demand she withdraws her helpless hand
Her plea, screaming to society: “rescue me!”
Is feared by the men of power as they see
A threat from afar, staying away from scars
That they cause, locking fathers behind bars
Ever wonder why they call it the black sheep?
Mothers weep, children shriek as death creeps
On this side of the barb wire, demise soars
She fights her wars as they slam the doors
In her face, she never loses her female grace
To continue the chase along her proud race
So she busts her ass off, staying outta trouble
Until that darn barbed wire bursts her bubble

T.r.oo.p · 07-07-2006, 10:29 PM

So So So many mistakes that ive commited during my life
so so so so many times i have gaven up during my fight
refused 2 stay focused on my goals...hopeing and wishing
my secrets digged deeper than bait on a lure during fishing
so so so many dark secrets that i contained in my closet
so many times i chose to reject instead of accept knowledge
hard headed goals i set in stone that i refused to let budge
instead i held a grudge and forced my self to be my judge
a case that i couldnt win..a case that actually never existed
good times reminisent to the spirelling emotions now twisted
within the temptation and lack of motivation of my new path
that was paved towards my grave my days now cut in half
my calf's & knees are turning cold & my hair is brittle and old
my legs and knees are buckling..and my chest is about to fold
my palms are sweating so so so much that it begins 2 hurt
why am i hurting...why am i fainting...was this life i lived worth
all the victims i accumulated during my trials and tribulations
now im laying here paralyzed my eyes seeing the ill patients
that seemed to suffer and utter the same mutters i udered
then i looked out the caged window and say a bird fluttered
inbetween a tree and a branch...and then it fell down quickly
silly me thinkin that std's diseases & aids wouldnt cum get me
see my blood count is changing like the winter & fall seasons
but why should i stay here..i knew and didnt tell for no reason
so now my life is vannishing and damnit its so so so my fault
i should of listened instead of fought the lesson i were taught
now my life is so so so so gone & my body is about 2 reject me
im jus prayin..im so so sorry i just hope my father will accept me

*Opens my arms*

MC4SiGHT · 07-08-2006, 03:00 AM

Precize no shows.

so it's T.r.oo.p vs The DQ

Tha_DQ · 07-08-2006, 03:01 PM

Votes

1. CONTENDERS MATCH: 3. 2Xtreme 3-1 vs. Julius Ceaser 2-0
2. 16. KempoMRK 0-0 vs. 17. Dark Nebula 0-0
3. 5. Got Life 24-12 vs. 6. Kareless 3-0
4. 7. Insanvevillian 38-7 vs. 8. Nique 22-5

Got Life? · 07-09-2006, 01:40 PM

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Insanevillian · 07-09-2006, 01:56 PM

[hide]I can see why people are avoiding this battle... because it is so fuckin close...

here is a different kind of breakdown so i can get to the bottom of this one...

Writers Voice- Troop... I was able to get to the bottom of the verse and read it as if troop was talking to me...

Rhyme Scheme- I give to DQ... Troop had a few multis but DQ's had a much smoother effect...

Flow- Both flowed pretty much the same but DQ's flow was more crisp... NOTE to TROOP- leave out the so so so next time.. maybe it would work in audio where we could here it, but not in text... it just doesn't look good...

Interest- DQ her writing kept me more interested cuz ive see and read MANY verses like TROOPs before

Story- DQ- Slightly better story, The STD thing has been done alot, and it has to be done more creatively to get a rise out of me, hiule the barb wire thing had alot of good meta's and held me there...

Overall i vote DQ... U can see all of my reasons above... It looks like DQ ranaway with it due to the way i broke it down, but troop its alot closer than that and i can see it going either way...

good luck to both...

Nique... · 07-09-2006, 01:59 PM

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2Xtreme · 07-09-2006, 03:26 PM

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Pent uP · 07-09-2006, 08:28 PM

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MC4SiGHT · 07-10-2006, 02:01 AM

The DQ win 1-0
T. r. oo. p. Loses 0-1

07-04-2006, 03:32 AM	#1 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	13. T.r.oo.p. 0-0 vs 14. The DQ 0-0 vs 15. Precize 0-0 LINE LIMITS: 4 lines NO-SHOW 12 lines MINIMUM 48 lines MAXIMUM 62 lines MAXIMUM - CONTENDERS & TITLE MATCH ONLY! VERSES DUE: Friday 10:00pm PST/1:00am EST VOTES DUE: Sunday 10:00pm PST/1:00am EST TOPICS: Topics will be provided at the beginning of the week so that everyone has ample time to get involved. VOTING: You must vote on 4 matches and post URL's on your thread of matches u voted for. -You must use the HIDDEN VOTES UBB CODE to conceal your votes. Votes must be hidden! To hide a vote, first thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. The last thing you type in your reply is a bracket “[“, a backslash “/”, the word “hide” and end bracket “]”. Unhidden votes will not count. - No HIDDEN CODES? - That vote DOES NOT COUNT - You must vote on another match and use HIDDEN CODES! -FORMER CHAMPS are allowed to vote for any match (but only 3 matches max). -Crew Votes are illegal. -1 vote is taken away for each vote you fail to do. -1 vote is taken away for each URL you fail to post on your thread. -No Show Winners must vote also! - Your thread will be kept open to post URL's. -Tiebreakers will be determined by the Moderators when the week winds down. ALTERNATES: If your opponent NO-SHOWS, and you posted a full verse you will be bumped up appropriately to face the next person in the brackets within your range. If no opponent is available such as if you were in the bottom 20 and the next up no show is in the top 10 then you will be given a win for your efforts. You must still vote on 5 matches accordingly as any failure to vote will result in no win and no progress in the ranks. The only event other than this in which you may take the no show win is if you only did post a no-show verse which consists of 4 rhyming lines. Topics: Your TOPICS for this week - 6/26! __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE

07-04-2006, 05:51 PM	#2 (permalink)
T.r.oo.p .:Im'a G between F & H:. Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: ..Dirty Glove.. Posts: 64	Nike's............. __________________ ....Established... . . ~Bumpin My Musik~

07-07-2006, 03:08 AM	#3 (permalink)
T.r.oo.p .:Im'a G between F & H:. Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: ..Dirty Glove.. Posts: 64	Well since they probly not gone show can i jus vote on 5 battles? __________________ ....Established... . . ~Bumpin My Musik~

07-07-2006, 06:12 PM	#4 (permalink)
Tha_DQ Expected The Unexpected Join Date: May 2005 Location: Alosta Posts: 145	Barb Wire A black strand…released from her nappy hair Caught in barbed snare, such a trap of despair Her glare glides to the other side of the wire A desire for an angels’ choir though life is dire No more light in these eyes…it faded with lies She fainted & cried but always kept her pride Buried inside of a strong soul, she’s a panther A concrete jungle, that’s where God plant her To flourish and eventually nourish a new seed But she bleeds knowing only a few succeed Ever year, playing this game called surviving The same ones depriving but she tries diving In the ocean of cheers & dreams, just to see It isn’t meant to be as she’s covered in debris Her people’s past lasts to this day…they hurt Through dismay, paid but still portrayed as dirt Although authors changed, the crime remains The suppressed stay the same, chained in pain Barbs cutting the skin…words cutting within She keeps up her chin, hope’s growing so thin But she’d tear out her hair and rip off her flesh To just get their respect or to start over fresh But the others aren’t that grand as they stand To demand she withdraws her helpless hand Her plea, screaming to society: “rescue me!” Is feared by the men of power as they see A threat from afar, staying away from scars That they cause, locking fathers behind bars Ever wonder why they call it the black sheep? Mothers weep, children shriek as death creeps On this side of the barb wire, demise soars She fights her wars as they slam the doors In her face, she never loses her female grace To continue the chase along her proud race So she busts her ass off, staying outta trouble Until that darn barbed wire bursts her bubble __________________ ...Odi et Amo...

07-07-2006, 10:29 PM	#5 (permalink)
T.r.oo.p .:Im'a G between F & H:. Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: ..Dirty Glove.. Posts: 64	So So So many mistakes that ive commited during my life so so so so many times i have gaven up during my fight refused 2 stay focused on my goals...hopeing and wishing my secrets digged deeper than bait on a lure during fishing so so so many dark secrets that i contained in my closet so many times i chose to reject instead of accept knowledge hard headed goals i set in stone that i refused to let budge instead i held a grudge and forced my self to be my judge a case that i couldnt win..a case that actually never existed good times reminisent to the spirelling emotions now twisted within the temptation and lack of motivation of my new path that was paved towards my grave my days now cut in half my calf's & knees are turning cold & my hair is brittle and old my legs and knees are buckling..and my chest is about to fold my palms are sweating so so so much that it begins 2 hurt why am i hurting...why am i fainting...was this life i lived worth all the victims i accumulated during my trials and tribulations now im laying here paralyzed my eyes seeing the ill patients that seemed to suffer and utter the same mutters i udered then i looked out the caged window and say a bird fluttered inbetween a tree and a branch...and then it fell down quickly silly me thinkin that std's diseases & aids wouldnt cum get me see my blood count is changing like the winter & fall seasons but why should i stay here..i knew and didnt tell for no reason so now my life is vannishing and damnit its so so so my fault i should of listened instead of fought the lesson i were taught now my life is so so so so gone & my body is about 2 reject me im jus prayin..im so so sorry i just hope my father will accept me Opens my arms __________________ ....Established... . . ~Bumpin My Musik~

07-08-2006, 03:00 AM	#6 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	Precize no shows. so it's T.r.oo.p vs The DQ __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE

07-08-2006, 03:01 PM	#7 (permalink)
Tha_DQ Expected The Unexpected Join Date: May 2005 Location: Alosta Posts: 145	Votes 1. CONTENDERS MATCH: 3. 2Xtreme 3-1 vs. Julius Ceaser 2-0 2. 16. KempoMRK 0-0 vs. 17. Dark Nebula 0-0 3. 5. Got Life 24-12 vs. 6. Kareless 3-0 4. 7. Insanvevillian 38-7 vs. 8. Nique 22-5 __________________ ...Odi et Amo... Last edited by Tha_DQ; 07-09-2006 at 05:40 PM.

07-09-2006, 01:56 PM	#9 (permalink)
Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE Join Date: Aug 2000 Location: Oakland, Ca Posts: 16,322	[hide]I can see why people are avoiding this battle... because it is so fuckin close... here is a different kind of breakdown so i can get to the bottom of this one... Writers Voice- Troop... I was able to get to the bottom of the verse and read it as if troop was talking to me... Rhyme Scheme- I give to DQ... Troop had a few multis but DQ's had a much smoother effect... Flow- Both flowed pretty much the same but DQ's flow was more crisp... NOTE to TROOP- leave out the so so so next time.. maybe it would work in audio where we could here it, but not in text... it just doesn't look good... Interest- DQ her writing kept me more interested cuz ive see and read MANY verses like TROOPs before Story- DQ- Slightly better story, The STD thing has been done alot, and it has to be done more creatively to get a rise out of me, hiule the barb wire thing had alot of good meta's and held me there... Overall i vote DQ... U can see all of my reasons above... It looks like DQ ranaway with it due to the way i broke it down, but troop its alot closer than that and i can see it going either way... good luck to both... __________________ ELITE

07-10-2006, 02:01 AM	#13 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	The DQ win 1-0 T. r. oo. p. Loses 0-1 __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE

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