3. MISSKEYdaQUEEN 10-6 VS 4. Mirage1 4-1

[TeKneeK]

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62 lines MAXIMUM - CONTENDERS & TITLE MATCH ONLY!



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Topics:
Your TOPICS for this week - 6/26!

[MISSKEYdaQUEEN]

interesting...lol
checkkkk

[mirage1]

I'm here good luck MissKey I'm glad to be facing a female.

[mirage1]

You sit outside of your house in NY... talkin to ur
partner on the steps... and you guys reminisce
how both of you grew up and how both of you
came from different upbringings... narrate u and
your partner's origin and how they came of age.

Aiy wasup boy… what you been doing with ya life?
I've been aight' got two kids and a beautiful wife.
Must be nice….so, how's ya mom and dad?
They still fightin' over shit and it’s making me mad
Yeah that's pretty bad it's been over for awhile
I mean you're a grown man, and you ain't never been a child
I know right…they divorced 10 years ago you was there
In fact you seemed to be the only one I knew that would care
My uncles and aunts didn't lend a helping hand or an ear
You remember my family there was so much a man could’ve feared
Here someone would slip, land on the wrong side of the track
You had to be secretive…
And strong enough to watch your own back.
Dinners were serious, somehow they always ended in crying
Because my mother or sister found out that someone was dying
Damn I remember the stories and nights you crawled in my window...
Like the time you saw your dad screwin the neighborhood bimbo
Is that why they got divorced and left your life in a limbo...
And made everything complicated don’t you wish it was simple
I’m trying but cant remember...
maybe it’s cause…
he killed her unborn baby 11 years ago in December
She threw a vase at him and he said he didn't love her
She said the same as he threw the dead phetus out in a bloody cover
I witnessed it all, it taught me how to become a man
It gave me incite to terror and helped me to draw up a plan
It showed me how being a boss ultimately would be costing ya
I didn't plan to help in my family's Corleone mafia
you moved out the house…and I ain't here from you for awhile
I missed having conversations and then seeing you smile.
But what about you? how have you been? I remember when we were kids
Way back then? It funny cause I grin when I reminisse
(laughs) I've been okay not married yet, you know…there’s other men
Damn girl I figured by now you’d had enough of them
Shit! If I could find a mate I'm sure you'll find one to
I know… but, problem is im only thinking of you
Ever since you left the Bronx, well…I've ran the blocks
Not havin you around has resulted to random cocks
My mama is still a stripper, doing crack, working the night clubs
Every mornin I see her come home wita nigga rolling on white dubs
Are you serious? Naw…? Come on, that shit isn’t cool
You should be the role model, that’s close to finishing school
Ma’ this life isn’t for you, what caused you to make this choice
You could’ve been an actress, or a church vocalist with an angels voice
I didn't have the money and I lost you what else could I do? Cry?
My dad in prison, my sister died, I've struggled to stay alive
You should've done what I did learned from everyone’s mistakes
Life isn't always what you want; it’s a test beyond your faith
I grew up I made it out of this slum and I’m telling you
If you had told me, I would've made arrangements to rescue you
We woulda got married and ma you coulda been my wife
But it’s over now like 112 we're each in a different life.
We're just two partners in crime that will always be real
So my Nubian Queen, please, can you acknowledge or feel
“FEEL!” I feel used and abused, look at me I'm disgusting
But ma, your beautiful….believe me, it’s not an assumption
I never grew up like you I didn’t become a woman,its like I'm stuck
Well now at least you can admit it...So now you’ve begun to move up
You’ve passed self pity, naivety, denial, and your last childish stage
Its calm, past the craze, but once my heart was full of the wildest rage
Just one big maze, another chapter just to fill up a page
but today....
we helped each other in our coming of age.

[MISSKEYdaQUEEN]

Topic: I used a pic and topics #18 and #20

Times like this I remember the sound that brought me cheer
When things got downright awful I’d look to you, my dear
Cause you stayed positive through it all when I couldn’t see
The light at the end of the tunnel, you’d said there’d always be
Screw me for my pessimism, it only made things worse
Me here with an empty wallet, you an empty purse
Here I felt like a boy with no means of survival
Felt even worse when you told me of our unborn arrival
I tried to stay positive through it all while you kept a smile
You couldn’t wait to deliver, and truth is I didn’t want a child
But how could I tell you and stifle the laughter you brought to us
I just said never mind and continued to show paternal fuss
Scared to disappoint you, I continued to look for jobs each day
But repeated felons just don’t ever have an easy way
Do I go back to hustling and risk a life with you
Or do I make excuses and tell myself “do what I gotta do”
If I slang again I’m risking my life, yours, and my unborn child’s
This stressful period is enough to make a man go wild
But still you laugh and love all of my stresses to an ease
That in itself is enough to make me fall down to my knees

I’m asking God to make a way even if it is difficult
Cause after blessing me with a woman who brings my pain to halt
I just need the strength to show my family that I can be a man
But I also need for God to assist, please help me see a plan
So I thought of school and honestly it made me cringe
Two semesters from graduating, should I begin again
I never was a braniac but I know I can get the help
Plus you are the brave one my worries can go up on the shelf
I’m sitting here waiting for the doctor to tell me news
Everybody’s walking back and forth like zombies and fools
I just need the laughter that you give to reassure me your ok
18 hours of labor and then they decide to take me away
I wanted to be there for you but there were complications
I got angry with doc cause he gave me no information
And as uncertain as I am right now I know the decision is made
Once we get out of here, my educations what will get us paid
Your strength is the thing that has shown me a sort of clarity
Never seen so much courage from anyone I’ve ever seen
You are the one who is turning we into a family
My sweet girl, my new born child, and a brand new me
I just want to hear you laugh in this moment of happiness
I want to share this moment with you in this time of bliss
Let you know to make this family right, I’ll do what I can
This stressful period has turned me into a better man

*he hears laughter in happiness, and a baby crying*

[MC4SiGHT]

uppin over no shows

[FloR]

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[Julius Caesar]

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[Nique...]

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[mirage1]

To readers: My grammer in my piece I was going for street talk. I used ain't only due to this reason. I know Isn't is the proper way, I said ain't on purpose. But thanks Julius for pointing that out so that I could explain because others may see it that way as well.

[mirage1]

My votes: note to mod, If you weren't already forwarned I can't vote on my bf's vernacular/doyen match b/c it's considered a crew vote so these are all there was to post in
thanks.

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post13762571
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post13762647
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...3#post13762663

[KareLess]

Mirage -
Ok, dude.. this wasn't a bad piece at all. It felt quite personal the way you made the two converse the whole way through the piece.. came across emotive and real. I just think the flaw was that it was hard to catch the flow sometimes. But aside from that you write a pretty decent piece.. bit of a cheesy ending, lol. Props either way.

Misskey -
Ok, man.. this was a pretty decent piece. It was a nce way to tell a story of reform and how somebody was gonna change, and I think you portrayed it well. The piece itself was a bit stop/start & simplistic but you told a solid story and never wavered. Nice use of 2 pics and a topic.. (didn't think we could do that, lol).. and altogther good.

Overall -
Both pieces were simplistic in the use of their mechanics but you did both create a nice sense of telling a story. Not great but definately worth the read. I gotta go with the one I enjoyed the most and that was Miss's.

Vote: Miss

Props, and check out my battle.

-Brix.

[Got Life?]

Kareless learn to hide your votes...hmm that just sounds ironic...

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[2Xtreme]

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[MISSKEYdaQUEEN]

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...7#post13764087
TITLE MATCH: CHAMP Nique 22-4 VS 2. Doyen 96-19
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...4#post13764104

Some of my votes will be late because I had family issues. I will vote fairly either way. i apologize for the tardiness but I couldn't put the issues off to vote...try to understand...I won't be pissed if i get penalized but...

[MC4SiGHT]

Misskey wins 11-6.
Mirage loses 4-2.