27. A-bomb 0-0 vs 26. Kareless 0-0 vs 25. Green Chron 0-0

Mac Flow · 10-18-2005, 12:33 AM

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Green Chronic · 10-18-2005, 08:58 AM

checkin in , btw how this works , do we all need same topic or I choose my topic and my opponent can have different

KareLess · 10-18-2005, 05:24 PM

Check.. Just pick any topic and go with it.

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post12835681
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...9#post12835699

KareLess · 10-19-2005, 01:01 PM

To All the Girls

To all the women who've been wrongly convicted, of killing their children
To all the women who use their cell walls as a canvas, and fill them
To all the women who still carry hope when its been torn apart
To all the girls who live on, in those tired women's hearts.
who. . who. . who. .
from the start, declared their innocence and bared people's ignorance.
Not even a landmark petition could make any difference
of one coroners influence, who gave 60% of child deaths a su••••ious report.
More than stunning a repore, grieving mothers were met by police at the door
demanding more. . info, on the days leading upto the death of their child.
& after a while, interviews were scrapped 'n arrests were made. .
so cold 'n vile.
to a point of no denail, the system/accuser had become crown prosecutor,
pushing against the wind acting as the juries instigated tutor.
Nor a killer or looter, among 5 women falsely charged for a crime. .
at a time,
benine from proof, just x-rays of fractures trapped in a hairline.
"Shaken by the spine", was what the Devine cowerd stated on the hour!
A merciless show of power, Deminished Responsibility was devoured. .
& now murder was empowered. A maximum sentence could be assigned. .
To all the women. .
who had to let go and watch their children die
To all the women. .
who are still contemplating suicide
To all the women. .
who truely BELIEVED from the start
To all the girls. .
our voice WILL be seen brightly from the depths of the dark.

Don't let the girl inside you fade out.

-Dean.

Green Chronic · 10-19-2005, 02:06 PM

I'll spit tonight , my topic will be only God Can Judge Me

Green Chronic · 10-20-2005, 10:49 AM

INTRO

(Story teller)

The boy is still covered with bruises from all this venomous~abuses
But lets go to the history, this is painful for him but he will lose~this
Now he will introduce~you, physically~abuse~you, lyrically~confuse~you
The same way he was deported by boys in blue with his face all in blue

VERSE 1

(Boy’s dad)

Boy look at you, captivated by boys in blue, you wont make it through
Face the truth, you are a true face of accident & affliction, you’re a flue
You’re malicious addiction. Son you’re a worst mistake we could a make
Son every nice emotion I done was fake. Once when your life was in stake
I even prayed you would be deceased. But you made it through and I was pissed
Cuz you aways made~it and I couldn’t impade~it. Hey that day you were dissed
By your friends was my luckiest day, and now my pray is fully~actualized
Cuz In case you haven’t realized your life is ending and I’m truly~satisfied
One more thing before they send you to prison, when you said you want to sing
For some strange reason I started thinking : one day you could be something
but that thought started lapsing the same day I started drinking

(Story teller)

Now the boy answering truly~sadly and fully~madly

VERSE 2

(the Boy)

Fuck you dad you cannot arbitrate me if you accidentally had to create me
You are the only one who really hate me but your little speech set me free
Cuz you clearly~stated that I was really~hated and cruelly~obliterated
Because your life was painful, you drunk fool now you see why I was hated
and dad, no stop I’m not calling you dad, that’s bad. Ok you know when you said
that you had stopped believing in me when you started drinking, isn’t that sad
cuz you were drunk when you were creating me and that’s one thing that’s hurting me
And what’s wrong with the fact that you were enervate and I was strong
And I don’t want to take this too long so I’ll just say one thing about my song
You said that I want to sing, look at me now I’m singing, how much hate does that bring
To your abusive head so called my “dad” cuz this is the one thing that gives me wings
Cuz it will be everlasting hitter, now I will send you all to heaven with my AK47
“dad” you are goin first but to purgatory cuz you’re not like these cops, you had other reality
Say goodbye to your nugatory life. Haha look at my finger right now pressing the trigger
Oh men what a relief and now I’ll kill my self and according to my belief
Right now I feel astonishing relief. OH shit look at that light and God. Hey
I’m going to kill him too, with my AK

OUTRO

(Myself)

Oh shit it was all just a bad dream
But I wonder who was that boy
never mind back to sleep

Green Chronic · 10-20-2005, 01:57 PM

nice verse KareLess , waiting for A-bomb

A-bomb inabowl · 10-20-2005, 04:52 PM

will post by tonight

A-bomb inabowl · 10-21-2005, 12:17 AM

topic: famous last words

picture this.....

A man and his wife, livin the happiest life
but they have a fight, she grabs a knife, without askin him twice
cause she caught him in the bed, with a bitch bobbin on his head
she wanted to leave but just started sockin him instead
he didnt have a pot ta' piss in, but he said "wait! you gotta listen"
"i know theres cock rings on the box springs but we were doing long division"
she was puffin on a port, and cussin up a storm,
and he looked like he was just fuckin in a porn
she asked him why, he had the dyke, naked and tied up
to pass the time, he fantasized, that he was blazin a dime up
he blatantly lied cause, she was satan with white gloves
but while he wasted her time, she held the shank at her side,
cause hes gonna get shaken and sliced up
he saw the flash of the blade, He said "baby you have t' behave"
but she was in a panicky state, so she started hackin his face.
its a sad story, when you live the sort of life, thats sucker free
but he had to pork the pie so before he died he said....."it wasnt me"

I Dunnno · 10-21-2005, 07:44 PM

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TaLi RodrigueZ · 10-24-2005, 01:43 AM

Sorry you all didn't get more votes...

Kareless Wins 2-0

Kareless (1-0)
A-Bomb (0-1)
Green Chron (0-1)

10-18-2005, 12:33 AM	#1 (permalink)
Mac Flow Die Join Date: Jul 2000 Location: The Commonwealth Posts: 24,066	27. A-bomb 0-0 vs 26. Kareless 0-0 vs 25. Green Chron 0-0 Due Dates VERSES DUE Thursday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST VOTES DUE Sunday 9:00pm PACIFIC/12:00 Midnight EST -----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+----- Line Limit 4 lines - NO SHOWS 14 lines - MINIMUM 60 lines - MAXIMUM -----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+----- Voting - Hidden Content is now in effect. You must use Hiddent Content when you vote. All votes cast with out hidden content will be DQ'ed. - If you post in this thread before you vote on the battle, your future vote wont count. - You must vote on 4 battles and post the links. If you fail to vote on 4 battles you will loose your match. No excuses. -No payback votes -No 2nd Chance Votes -No hate votes - If your oponent no shows you are still required to vote on 2 battles. If you don't you will not recive the win. Further Explaination is in this thread: New Rules and Additions to the league! Must Peep. -----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+----- Topics!Topics For This Week!!! -----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+----- Now go forth and produce! Good Luck __________________ ...The Elite, who else... You run around talkin bout how every dime sucked you, when they don't even speak to you - nevermind fuck you KY's Finest ...DM Forever...

10-18-2005, 05:24 PM	#3 (permalink)
KareLess D.H.Brixton Join Date: May 2005 Location: N.M Posts: 50	Check.. Just pick any topic and go with it. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...1#post12835681 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...9#post12835699 __________________ The Writer. When routine bites hard, and ambitions are low And resentment rides high, but emotions won't grow And we're changing our ways, taking different roads Then love, love will tear us apart again -- -Joy Division. Last edited by KareLess; 10-23-2005 at 09:33 AM.

10-19-2005, 01:01 PM	#4 (permalink)
KareLess D.H.Brixton Join Date: May 2005 Location: N.M Posts: 50	To All the Girls To all the women who've been wrongly convicted, of killing their children To all the women who use their cell walls as a canvas, and fill them To all the women who still carry hope when its been torn apart To all the girls who live on, in those tired women's hearts. who. . who. . who. . from the start, declared their innocence and bared people's ignorance. Not even a landmark petition could make any difference of one coroners influence, who gave 60% of child deaths a su••••ious report. More than stunning a repore, grieving mothers were met by police at the door demanding more. . info, on the days leading upto the death of their child. & after a while, interviews were scrapped 'n arrests were made. . so cold 'n vile. to a point of no denail, the system/accuser had become crown prosecutor, pushing against the wind acting as the juries instigated tutor. Nor a killer or looter, among 5 women falsely charged for a crime. . at a time, benine from proof, just x-rays of fractures trapped in a hairline. "Shaken by the spine", was what the Devine cowerd stated on the hour! A merciless show of power, Deminished Responsibility was devoured. . & now murder was empowered. A maximum sentence could be assigned. . To all the women. . who had to let go and watch their children die To all the women. . who are still contemplating suicide To all the women. . who truely BELIEVED from the start To all the girls. . our voice WILL be seen brightly from the depths of the dark. Don't let the girl inside you fade out. -Dean. __________________ The Writer. When routine bites hard, and ambitions are low And resentment rides high, but emotions won't grow And we're changing our ways, taking different roads Then love, love will tear us apart again -- -Joy Division. Last edited by KareLess; 10-23-2005 at 10:35 AM.

10-20-2005, 10:49 AM	#6 (permalink)
Green Chronic the Rap Phenomenon Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: CROATIA Posts: 19	INTRO (Story teller) The boy is still covered with bruises from all this venomous~abuses But lets go to the history, this is painful for him but he will lose~this Now he will introduce~you, physically~abuse~you, lyrically~confuse~you The same way he was deported by boys in blue with his face all in blue VERSE 1 (Boy’s dad) Boy look at you, captivated by boys in blue, you wont make it through Face the truth, you are a true face of accident & affliction, you’re a flue You’re malicious addiction. Son you’re a worst mistake we could a make Son every nice emotion I done was fake. Once when your life was in stake I even prayed you would be deceased. But you made it through and I was pissed Cuz you aways made~it and I couldn’t impade~it. Hey that day you were dissed By your friends was my luckiest day, and now my pray is fully~actualized Cuz In case you haven’t realized your life is ending and I’m truly~satisfied One more thing before they send you to prison, when you said you want to sing For some strange reason I started thinking : one day you could be something but that thought started lapsing the same day I started drinking (Story teller) Now the boy answering truly~sadly and fully~madly VERSE 2 (the Boy) Fuck you dad you cannot arbitrate me if you accidentally had to create me You are the only one who really hate me but your little speech set me free Cuz you clearly~stated that I was really~hated and cruelly~obliterated Because your life was painful, you drunk fool now you see why I was hated and dad, no stop I’m not calling you dad, that’s bad. Ok you know when you said that you had stopped believing in me when you started drinking, isn’t that sad cuz you were drunk when you were creating me and that’s one thing that’s hurting me And what’s wrong with the fact that you were enervate and I was strong And I don’t want to take this too long so I’ll just say one thing about my song You said that I want to sing, look at me now I’m singing, how much hate does that bring To your abusive head so called my “dad” cuz this is the one thing that gives me wings Cuz it will be everlasting hitter, now I will send you all to heaven with my AK47 “dad” you are goin first but to purgatory cuz you’re not like these cops, you had other reality Say goodbye to your nugatory life. Haha look at my finger right now pressing the trigger Oh men what a relief and now I’ll kill my self and according to my belief Right now I feel astonishing relief. OH shit look at that light and God. Hey I’m going to kill him too, with my AK OUTRO (Myself) Oh shit it was all just a bad dream But I wonder who was that boy never mind back to sleep Last edited by Green Chronic; 10-20-2005 at 11:06 AM.

10-20-2005, 04:52 PM	#8 (permalink)
A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 83	will post by tonight __________________ "id jizz early, inside Liz Hurley" Paul Barman

10-18-2005, 08:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
Green Chronic the Rap Phenomenon Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: CROATIA Posts: 19	checkin in , btw how this works , do we all need same topic or I choose my topic and my opponent can have different

10-19-2005, 02:06 PM	#5 (permalink)
Green Chronic the Rap Phenomenon Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: CROATIA Posts: 19	I'll spit tonight , my topic will be only God Can Judge Me

10-20-2005, 01:57 PM	#7 (permalink)
Green Chronic the Rap Phenomenon Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: CROATIA Posts: 19	nice verse KareLess , waiting for A-bomb

10-21-2005, 12:17 AM	#9 (permalink)
A-bomb inabowl Abominable Flowman Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Portland, OR Posts: 83	topic: famous last words picture this..... A man and his wife, livin the happiest life but they have a fight, she grabs a knife, without askin him twice cause she caught him in the bed, with a bitch bobbin on his head she wanted to leave but just started sockin him instead he didnt have a pot ta' piss in, but he said "wait! you gotta listen" "i know theres cock rings on the box springs but we were doing long division" she was puffin on a port, and cussin up a storm, and he looked like he was just fuckin in a porn she asked him why, he had the dyke, naked and tied up to pass the time, he fantasized, that he was blazin a dime up he blatantly lied cause, she was satan with white gloves but while he wasted her time, she held the shank at her side, cause hes gonna get shaken and sliced up he saw the flash of the blade, He said "baby you have t' behave" but she was in a panicky state, so she started hackin his face. its a sad story, when you live the sort of life, thats sucker free but he had to pork the pie so before he died he said....."it wasnt me" __________________ "id jizz early, inside Liz Hurley" Paul Barman Last edited by A-bomb inabowl; 10-21-2005 at 12:20 AM.

10-24-2005, 01:43 AM	#12 (permalink)
TaLi RodrigueZ Washed Up Rapper... Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Syracuse, NY Posts: 4,544	Sorry you all didn't get more votes... Kareless Wins 2-0 Kareless (1-0) A-Bomb (0-1) Green Chron (0-1) __________________ Devoid of Orbit Oursin & TaLi = Ballin' Ass Hombres Shipwrecked Barnacles (Photography)

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