21. Eternal Path (1-0) VS 22. Vigil (1-0)

Ratiko Malodic · 09-26-2005, 02:47 PM

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Vigil · 09-27-2005, 07:12 PM

whats up

good luck.

VOTES:
27. BLAS NYC 0-0 VS 28. Mirage1 0-0

Eternalpath · 09-27-2005, 10:47 PM

..u 2

Eternalpath · 09-29-2005, 09:53 PM

Hood News

Four shots..Two glocks..only one person left for dead...
streets are dark..even when covered in red..
shells left on the pavement..next to the tire marks..
This is one of the reason why I don't hang out near parks..
A relationship gone wrong..but not the same ol same ol..
Both African Americans..believed to be sexing on the down low..
It seems that one of the brothers wanted more..but not the other
Both pulled out there weapons but only one fired on there lover..
So while the white sheets get pulled over the body..they ask questions..
Did anyone witness? I ponder if anyone learn from other's lessons..
The police is searching..while the family of the decease has the blues..
Another night..Another fight..Another death...More Hood news...
.
.
.
Pain is pleasure then I should be fond of everything around me..
My boyfriend for years..gave verbal lashings to clown me..
I could not leave, where would I go?? he's my one and only..
He only fed me once a day..and my body is black and bony..
Down to a measly 96 lbs..my ribs poking through my side..
Andre my man..drinks..smokes..and cares less if I died..
One day I cried..and it seems that he was tired of my whining..
Telling him that I over-heard something about him with a girl and dining..
Telling me that he needed to find a woman who can handle him..
I was emotionally fucked..when he told me its that bitch KIM..
My best friend..I went berserk..started throwing shit around the room..
Hitting him a few times and that woke him up to soon..
His eyes went from clear white to blood shot red full of anger..
something went off in my head telling me that I'm in danger..
His hands clasps around my neck..instantly my breath went away..
I fell to the ground..he never let loose and landed on top of me..
My skin pigment started getting blue..I was fading in and out..
I tried to reach anything but no use..couldn't even shout..
Then he stopped..and said this is a mistake..didn't want to fly the coop..
Wanting to be honest..telling me he hasn't been telling the truth..
There was a man..my disgust was written all over my face..
Telling me that he wanted him and it was over..so he headed to his place...
While I sat down..gasping for air..my thoughts were gone..
Thinking another man?? where did I go wrong?
Darkness fell..so I flipped on the TV to watch some news..
Noticed something on that I really was wishing it wasn't true..
Two men in a fight..gun shots..relationship?? my thoughts this could
be my man..Andre..as tears fell..bad news always in the hood...

Vigil · 09-29-2005, 09:58 PM

Runaway

There's not enough ink in my pen or room on this paper
To write down my past I'd need to face sooner or later.
It's my doomsday and my faith awaits for my fake cue
I start to look for cracks in the walls to escape through.
My window of opportunity doesn't come with a great view,
So why take center stage when its already too late to.
I'm unlikely to climb the height, I try to hide at times of fright
I'm only constructive with life when I write my rhmes at night.
Just a mime with a lot of spite, I'm a misfit and I admit it
I've bit the bullet then later shot myself in the foot with it.
I spend my time gently placing rhymes to comprehend the pace,
And take long stares at empty spaces with a not so friendly face.
Descending on the never ending page with a lost look
And try to find myself within it, but I end up exhausted with my thoughts shook.
I Still remember what I did last summer so I'm not off the hook
Not a crook, I'll show you the art of war when I spot the book
The exact oppoiste, I'm a pacifist with a master wit,
Wasted with a pack of cigs thats attracting passive kids
I tell them on that madish tip that a victim is all an addict is.
Fact is I took a turn for the worst and never looked back
Standing dead with my foot in the tracks, I try to run laps
But get spun back to the hook faster then undone raps.
I'm a shadow of the sun wherever I stand at so I find gaps
In my vision, I use brain navigation for my mind maps
Hoping I don't get a mind lapse or have my heart collapse
I don't want to find myself in the same place I started at.
A Lost soul in the crossroads where the truth unwinds as time folds
I keep checking my mirror for blind spots I know my mind holds
Padded down, my face is masking now - my past is passing round
Stranded in this scattered town - should I turn back around?
Cause the task at hand is heavy, I'm in doubt & depression
Asking questions that's raising them without a question.
Lies & confessions, I might as well die cause forget it
I don't know where I've been, at or where I'm headed.
With no method how do you expect me to be fighting sound?
Find me heads up, face down with a fist in the air as I quietly drown.
This is it, I'm a sink in today
I keep my feelings bottled up and drink em' away.

Some runaway from problems, and don't try to solve em
Some runway from their fears and stay running for years.
I'm not running away from any of the above, I don't wanna be dumb
I'm running away from the man I used to be, to the one I wanna become.

mirage1 · 09-29-2005, 10:42 PM

[hide] Both stories were tight but overall Vigil you took it. The flow
the main idea was tight, the ending was meaningful and very structured.
Topic was well thought out. Hood news was also nice yet just lacked something
that would've made it better, it sounded empty, but it could just be b/c it
was really depressing. Good job both of ya'll. first time voting...Sorry if to short[hide]

BLAS NYC · 09-30-2005, 12:10 AM

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TaLi RodrigueZ · 09-30-2005, 02:05 AM

Raising above no shows...

Vote here later

Insense · 09-30-2005, 02:40 PM

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Runna DaMille · 10-03-2005, 12:52 AM

score?

TaLi RodrigueZ · 10-03-2005, 01:09 AM

Vigil Wins By A 3-1 Vote

Vigil (2-0)
Eternal Path (1-1)

09-26-2005, 02:47 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ratiko Malodic Hispanic Bitchm0nkey Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Wales Posts: 36,007	21. Eternal Path (1-0) VS 22. Vigil (1-0) Due Dates VERSES DUE Thursday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST VOTES DUE Sunday 9:00pm PACIFIC/12:00 Midnight EST -----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+----- Line Limit 4 lines - NO SHOWS 14 lines - MINIMUM 60 lines - MAXIMUM -----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+----- Voting - Hidden Content is now in effect. You must use Hiddent Content when you vote. All votes cast with out hidden content will be DQ'ed. - If you post in this thread before you vote on the battle, your future vote wont count. - You must vote on 4 battles and post the links. If you fail to vote on 4 battles you will loose your match. No excuses. -No payback votes -No 2nd Chance Votes -No hate votes - If your oponent no shows you are still required to vote on 2 battles. If you don't you will not recive the win. Further Explaination is in this thread: New Rules and Additions to the league! Must Peep. -----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+----- Topics! Check My Sig!! -----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+-----+----- Now go forth and produce! Good Luck __________________ fuck it

09-27-2005, 07:12 PM	#2 (permalink)
Vigil Im infinite consciousness Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: under the radar Posts: 885	whats up good luck. VOTES: 27. BLAS NYC 0-0 VS 28. Mirage1 0-0 Last edited by Vigil; 09-30-2005 at 07:35 PM.

09-27-2005, 10:47 PM	#3 (permalink)
Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Heaven Posts: 1,081	..u 2 __________________ God's child

09-29-2005, 09:53 PM	#4 (permalink)
Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Heaven Posts: 1,081	Hood News Four shots..Two glocks..only one person left for dead... streets are dark..even when covered in red.. shells left on the pavement..next to the tire marks.. This is one of the reason why I don't hang out near parks.. A relationship gone wrong..but not the same ol same ol.. Both African Americans..believed to be sexing on the down low.. It seems that one of the brothers wanted more..but not the other Both pulled out there weapons but only one fired on there lover.. So while the white sheets get pulled over the body..they ask questions.. Did anyone witness? I ponder if anyone learn from other's lessons.. The police is searching..while the family of the decease has the blues.. Another night..Another fight..Another death...More Hood news... . . . Pain is pleasure then I should be fond of everything around me.. My boyfriend for years..gave verbal lashings to clown me.. I could not leave, where would I go?? he's my one and only.. He only fed me once a day..and my body is black and bony.. Down to a measly 96 lbs..my ribs poking through my side.. Andre my man..drinks..smokes..and cares less if I died.. One day I cried..and it seems that he was tired of my whining.. Telling him that I over-heard something about him with a girl and dining.. Telling me that he needed to find a woman who can handle him.. I was emotionally fucked..when he told me its that bitch KIM.. My best friend..I went berserk..started throwing shit around the room.. Hitting him a few times and that woke him up to soon.. His eyes went from clear white to blood shot red full of anger.. something went off in my head telling me that I'm in danger.. His hands clasps around my neck..instantly my breath went away.. I fell to the ground..he never let loose and landed on top of me.. My skin pigment started getting blue..I was fading in and out.. I tried to reach anything but no use..couldn't even shout.. Then he stopped..and said this is a mistake..didn't want to fly the coop.. Wanting to be honest..telling me he hasn't been telling the truth.. There was a man..my disgust was written all over my face.. Telling me that he wanted him and it was over..so he headed to his place... While I sat down..gasping for air..my thoughts were gone.. Thinking another man?? where did I go wrong? Darkness fell..so I flipped on the TV to watch some news.. Noticed something on that I really was wishing it wasn't true.. Two men in a fight..gun shots..relationship?? my thoughts this could be my man..Andre..as tears fell..bad news always in the hood... __________________ God's child Last edited by Eternalpath; 09-29-2005 at 09:58 PM.

09-29-2005, 10:42 PM	#6 (permalink)
mirage1 The One and Only Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Port City NC Posts: 757	[hide] Both stories were tight but overall Vigil you took it. The flow the main idea was tight, the ending was meaningful and very structured. Topic was well thought out. Hood news was also nice yet just lacked something that would've made it better, it sounded empty, but it could just be b/c it was really depressing. Good job both of ya'll. first time voting...Sorry if to short[hide] __________________ *Women who strive to reach equality with males...lack imagination...* Play the game like a man or get played like a Bitch

09-29-2005, 09:58 PM	#5 (permalink)
Vigil Im infinite consciousness Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: under the radar Posts: 885	Runaway There's not enough ink in my pen or room on this paper To write down my past I'd need to face sooner or later. It's my doomsday and my faith awaits for my fake cue I start to look for cracks in the walls to escape through. My window of opportunity doesn't come with a great view, So why take center stage when its already too late to. I'm unlikely to climb the height, I try to hide at times of fright I'm only constructive with life when I write my rhmes at night. Just a mime with a lot of spite, I'm a misfit and I admit it I've bit the bullet then later shot myself in the foot with it. I spend my time gently placing rhymes to comprehend the pace, And take long stares at empty spaces with a not so friendly face. Descending on the never ending page with a lost look And try to find myself within it, but I end up exhausted with my thoughts shook. I Still remember what I did last summer so I'm not off the hook Not a crook, I'll show you the art of war when I spot the book The exact oppoiste, I'm a pacifist with a master wit, Wasted with a pack of cigs thats attracting passive kids I tell them on that madish tip that a victim is all an addict is. Fact is I took a turn for the worst and never looked back Standing dead with my foot in the tracks, I try to run laps But get spun back to the hook faster then undone raps. I'm a shadow of the sun wherever I stand at so I find gaps In my vision, I use brain navigation for my mind maps Hoping I don't get a mind lapse or have my heart collapse I don't want to find myself in the same place I started at. A Lost soul in the crossroads where the truth unwinds as time folds I keep checking my mirror for blind spots I know my mind holds Padded down, my face is masking now - my past is passing round Stranded in this scattered town - should I turn back around? Cause the task at hand is heavy, I'm in doubt & depression Asking questions that's raising them without a question. Lies & confessions, I might as well die cause forget it I don't know where I've been, at or where I'm headed. With no method how do you expect me to be fighting sound? Find me heads up, face down with a fist in the air as I quietly drown. This is it, I'm a sink in today I keep my feelings bottled up and drink em' away. Some runaway from problems, and don't try to solve em Some runway from their fears and stay running for years. I'm not running away from any of the above, I don't wanna be dumb I'm running away from the man I used to be, to the one I wanna become.

09-30-2005, 02:05 AM	#8 (permalink)
TaLi RodrigueZ Washed Up Rapper... Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Syracuse, NY Posts: 4,544	Raising above no shows... Vote here later __________________ Devoid of Orbit Oursin & TaLi = Ballin' Ass Hombres Shipwrecked Barnacles (Photography)

10-03-2005, 12:52 AM	#11 (permalink)
Runna DaMille Registered User Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 172	score?

10-03-2005, 01:09 AM	#12 (permalink)
TaLi RodrigueZ Washed Up Rapper... Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: Syracuse, NY Posts: 4,544	Vigil Wins By A 3-1 Vote Vigil (2-0) Eternal Path (1-1) __________________ Devoid of Orbit Oursin & TaLi = Ballin' Ass Hombres Shipwrecked Barnacles (Photography)

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