Guess Who's Back... The RSTL Chronicles

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Old 07-11-2005, 03:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Guess Who's Back... The RSTL Chronicles

Intro

Ok so we slacked for a week, but we're back and refreshed and ready to do our thizzle for shizzle my nizzles. So check it....we got interviews, a couple of different PPV breakdowns, top 5 Stanzas, we got m.onkeys juggling barbie dolls while smoking blunts, etc etc. It's an incredible thing, so here goes....

Pay Per View Review Part 1 - by Jooks

[UP IN FLAMES] TeKneeK vs. L Dogg

This pay-per-view was highly anticipated. Both ex-RSTL champions with something to prove to the league, they came at each other with nothing less then dopeness. Tek came with a more industry influenced piece consisting of personality snippets from AZ, Fat Joe, and last but definitely not least Nas. The piece was very well orchestrated to the point it felt like I was actually reading each artist's lyrics. The flow was very well kept and very easy to follow. What hurt this piece was the originality factor undoubtedly. This concept has just been overdone. It was an overall decent read. Next L dogg came into the match with one of the better pieces in the pay-per-view this time around. I actually enjoyed it all the way through. He went with a portrait/Gods of destruction approach that was just pure evil. The flow was almost immaculate keeping it at a 3 syllable or higher frequency. The imagery was very well portrayed and it definitely had a nice plot to it. In the end winning by a KO victory; L Dogg wins his first ever PPV while Tek loses his in a hard fought battle. It's just hard to judge both of these stories against each other because they are so different, but in the end the serious more breath taking verse wins. Congratulations L Dogg.


[UP IN FLAMES] Castro vs Defcon 5

Now everyone was wondering how these two notorious battle heads would do in a story telling event. Castro even pleaded to the masses before hand in hookups that he is not one to be slept on and he can definitely bring something to the table if given the chance. Defcon is a self proclaimed ill topical head who is always out for a victory and will not settle until he gets it. Defcon took a very serious approach to the battle choosing to write on the quote from Winston Churchill. He did a wonderful job portraying the irony of working so hard for something and losing it in one day. I personally can relate to this story so I did find it very intriguing. The flow was not very dope, but it did have its high lights. The plot had to be the shine of this verse being that it was pretty well thought out and executed. Next Castro came with topic of the devil purchasing his soul. Now this was a very good topic to write on because the possibilities are endless. His plot was not to clear at first, but it definitely became clear and focused once it hit the middle. The flow was very nice whether being developed from battling or not it was fresh. The imagery and emotion of this piece did appeal to all who read it. So at the end of the battle Castro walks away with his first PPV win, while Defcon loses his. Very nice battle fellas.


[UP IN FLAMES] Dicenyaeye vs Vern Acular

This was a complete upset for the PPV. One of the most anticipated battles and it did not take place. So with the said Dicenyaeye wins by a no show and here is a snippet of his verse:

Waiting for a cab, the wind pressing against her
Hiking her skirt up to her shirt in the wetness of winter
Showing her voluptuous figure was a pleasure for sinners
As three guys lurking by gawk at the treasures within her
Nectars for splendor of one man over shadowed the rest.....
He becomes restless in his incentives to be a savage of sex
Still mad at his ex for being the one to control the magics of flesh
The stranger walks behind her, pinches her ass while grabbing her breasts
She slaps him and stepped into his foot with stiletto heels
The pain entices perverted vices; his other head is revealed
Punching her face; breaking the jaw as he shattered her nose
2 of them pull her in an alley, tearing through fabrics of clothes
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[UP IN FLAMES] Tha Talent vs Rikoshay!!

Now this is a battle that has been anticipated every since riko had went on his unbelievable winning spree. Tha Talent known to be one of the best writers to ever graze the RSTL had to put his skills against the RSTL record holder in a match that nothing less then DOPE! Tha Talent dropped a verse that was very deep and emotional. Most who voted on the battle said that Talent came with a more poetic verse then topical. The flow was a bit abstract but it definitely worked for the emotional tone the Tha Talent was trying to establish. "They say we write in blood, sweat, and tears" was his first line setting the bar high for his emotional execution. The piece had very nice imagery and was very well written but like said before, the poetic feel to it might have been its downfall. Next Riko dropped a verse that was very short in length but was so stunning it was enough to contend hands down. The imagery and choice of words that Riko used to tell his short topical just couldn't have been put together any better. The flow was impeccable and definitely played part in being one of his more stronger attributes. In the end Riko wins in a landslide victory with Tha Talent only receiving a vote from L Dogg. Congratulations to Riko on his first PPV victory.


[UP IN FLAMES] Balthowsai vs Mac Flow

This is a battle that is unclear. I don't know enough about the situation but I am assuming that Balth pulled his verse out when Mac started getting votes. Like I said I don't know too much about the situation but Mac Flow wins and Balth dq's himself. Here is a snippet from Mac Flows Verse:

Traveling over the globe to galleries and exhibits
Experiencing the simple pleasures that are received by her senses
The smell of the crisp air across the coasts of Italy
With flowering dew giving sweet aromas with a brisk wind of spring
Natures her guide to success and as it's driven by peace
She has become a translator of it's fruit like limbs of tree
But unable to find the love was the most missing of links
She wanted to gain from that unknown passion that kissing can bring
An inquisitive being and although plenty wanted to get in her jeans
Only one inspires her pen to flow through rivers of ink

[UP IN FLAMES] pestilence vs Pent uP

First off I just want to take my hat off to these two for being so innovative and giving the league a very time consuming and skill full array of verses. This was another highly anticipate battle because both of these guys are well known and very capable of dropping complete and utter illness on any given day. These were both a continuation of the verses they dropped in the regular RSTL against eachother. So Pest dropped first with a fucking sick imagery oriented verse that kept my attention glued to it like fat bitches on cookies. None the less the plot was also disturbingly ill. In all honesty this was one of my more favorite verses to read in the PPV. The flow was eminent and the structure was nicely orchestrated. Next Pent uP dropped a mystical story about the sessions on the hookah. This piece literally took me on an adventure that was so overly utopian. The flow was very nice also consisting of the 3 syllable or higher frequency that played very well in the verse. The imagery was blazing nothing better portrayed what he was trying to say then the words he chose. Very dope shit. At the end of the night there could only be one winner in this dope ass match. Congratulations to Pent uP for winning his first PPV by ONE solitary vote. Very good battle fellas.

[up In Flames] Madpoet vs Momma

Now this match was also another highly anticipated PPV. Momma is a RSTL vet almost close to legend status, while MadPoet is an ex-RSTL champion. Both of these fellas had something to prove. So with that said Momma dropped first with his topic being rap. The story was very well written and definitely the shine of his verse. The flow was nice also displaying the usage of multis he fathomed the piece with. The imagery was subtle but played rather well with the style and content here. Next MP came on some crazy sick flow that just showed us all that he was an audio head. The story was okay and the imagery was sort of lacking in the piece. The concept he went on was a unique one because he didn't really use a topic it was more of a release of something he had been wanting to say for a very long time. But at the end of the night Momma KO's MadPoet and walks away with his first PPV win. Very nice battle fellas.

[UP IN FLAMES] J O O K vs Insense

Now this was the battle between the J o o k the kid that put a end to RIKOSHAYS unbelievable 18-0 record, and insense a 2 time RSTL champion. Now Insense came into the battle confident even telling me he was going to whip my ass in the battle. But of course I had other plans in mind. So Insense dropped first with a piece that was labeled Negro Mafia Familia. It was very nice, containing the names of most of the people in the RSTL, he created a plot that was timeless. Very intricate story telling and very nice rhyme scheme. Something that also stood out was the variety of colors used in the piece I would not often commentate on it but it seemed to fit in with the story quite well. Next I dropped some historic knowledge the was sensational. I went from the Vietnam era with the monks all the way to the travesty in Tiananman Square. The flow was kind of unjust but I didn't want to sacrifice my content for it. This battle definitely ended up being a good one. Shouts out to Insense for giving me a run for my money. I enjoyed his piece a lot. But at the end of the day it was J o o k coming out flawless on the votes and winning my first ever PPV. Good battle Insense.
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PPV Review Part 2 - by L Dogg

PPV

some people missed out on the PPV and have been wondering what all the fuss was about. Well, it wasn’t as great as It could have been, but def sparked some interest and motivated people to show up to their match. The good things I saw about the PPV were the quality of writing and the amount of matches able to vote on. During a time when the league struggles to get majority of people to post for their matches, the people somehow found a way to show. I liked how we were matched with people that were a “close match” or a “match to see” but I didn’t agree with some of the match ups and felt have they been different, could have been even better then it was. Havin Def and Castro in there matchin off was also cool, cuz it brings in some writers who you don’t see write often and kinda gives us as rstl regulars a measuring stick as to how we can compare ourselves as writers to those who succeed in other leagues such as RBL. I had planned on facing off with fracture and would have liked balth to have kept his writing up against Mac because those are some names who spark interest and make a league gain in popularity.

The down side to the PPV was the timing. At first it was going to be a special match up week where they would shut the regular league down, but the mods ended up deciding on keeping the league running while the PPV was going on. Now for people in the PPV who were already signed into the league.. It sucked.. Its hard as fuck for me to find time to write a 60 line verse.. Let alone 2 in one week and im sure im not the only one. I would personally like to see the PPV done with the league shut down next time so that you don’t wear out the members of the league. The voting was also kind of poor.. I spent a lot more time on votes then I normally would since I was in the league and PPV and had to have a certain amount of votes for both.. So you see.. it’s a lot of time your asking for people and if you want an overall better showing you gotta give people their time and not push so much shit on them in one weeks time.. that’s how I see it anyway..

I’m not sure how the match ups were picked this time around, but I would like see peoples names polled in hookups in a thread and have the people pick out certain match ups.

I wont speak much of the personal match ups and how well each person did.. You can go click they match if you wanna know..

Do I see success in future PPV’s? yes.. But you gotta make them worth while.. We need like a place added to the hall of fame where you can see who has won which seasons of PPV’s over the years/months… and maybe add the link to the match so that people can go back to check out the match.. Maybe even award the winners with points or something, but there should def be something done for the winners of the PPV. We all gotta get motivated for the league the same way that we did for the PPV.. If the mods can figure out a way to give the regular league the hype PPV brang then they will have a big success with the future of RSTL. But awards are where its at! An yo.. Tell peeps from other sites about this shit.. Bring them into a PPV match and shit to let them try it out.. I know that if the award is right or the hype is right, anyone will be apart of the league.. I would like to start seeing new names in the league and so we gotta globalize our shit.. Word of mouth guys.. Next PPV im callin out fracture or ebbenflow.. : )

This Big L signing off

Momma's got some words with Jook
Yassa Arabfat: how long you on for?
get off the blok: a good 30 more
Yassa Arabfat: enough for an interveiw?
get off the blok: why yes sir
Yassa Arabfat: good good, this is on the fly shit
get off the blok: Warning: No feelings are intended to be hurt in this interview. It is strictly platonic, and may damage reps. But none the less it is truth.

Yassa Arabfat: Thas my boy. Right, Ladies and Gents, Gents and Ladies, welcome to the weekly interveiw
Yassa Arabfat: so JOOK are you Jux?
get off the blok: Man being Jux is a fucking job, the kid stays online 12 hours a day. So basically fuck no I wouldn't be Jux if Jeff paid me 40,000$ a year
Yassa Arabfat: Hahaha
Yassa Arabfat: So, how's your time in the league been?
Yassa Arabfat: Enjoyied it? Better than the RBL?
get off the blok: It's undoubtedely the best topical league I've been in. I like the entertainment, the beefs, the scandals, it's just so fuckin sexy to me. I do enjoy it better then the RBL now.
Yassa Arabfat: That's what I want to hear.
Yassa Arabfat: How do you feel about the competition?
Yassa Arabfat: Seeing you really are new (ish) how is the competition?
get off the blok: Man I honestly feel like the inconsistancy in people make the league so dam interesting. Like the dopest fuckin kid in the league can lose to somebody wack on any given day because either they dropped wack or the wack nigguh was on point. You never know and that's what I liked about the league so much.. Anyone can beat anyone on any given day look @ pent up
Yassa Arabfat: Well, there's more to Pent uP than you'd think. I'm sure Dic would love to fill you in on that lol.
Yassa Arabfat: So you like the way it's more of a community than a league?
Yassa Arabfat: Or as much of a community as it is a league
get off the blok: Lol ehhhh sometimes i think its to much of a community. But the thing is I like that. I feel like I am part of something when I am in the league rather then the rbl being more of a solo independent thing I feel more of a bond. But it being so tight-knit causes ALOT of drama between participants.. Which I think is a good thing some times as long as momma stays on top of shit... Another thing I've witnessed is the voting stays fair no matter what thats good shit..
Yassa Arabfat: Yeah, Alotta people rag on voting (including me) and the same people miss the fact there are alotta people who are actually pretty good or at least honest voters
Yassa Arabfat: So this means you're coming back?
get off the blok: Yea I mean the only bitch I witnessed who may vote bias is cereal killer
get off the blok: Kids breakdowns be WAYYYY different from the vote lol
get off the blok: Momma - wack verse
Jook -dope shit

vote - momma
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get off the blok: lmfao
get off the blok: and hell yea I am coming back no doubt about it
Yassa Arabfat: Hahaha, word. I missed that. Kids eating too many pills these days.
Yassa Arabfat: good shit
Yassa Arabfat: very good to hear
get off the blok: lol no doubt thats anotha thing...STAY OFF DRUGS when u writin kids

Yassa Arabfat: True, true.
Yassa Arabfat: Let's give them what they came for.
get off the blok: yayyy ::: clicks hills :::
get off the blok: wait
get off the blok: heals
get off the blok: lol
Yassa Arabfat: Speaking of spelling, I've done quite well thus far.
get off the blok: Lol you on point mal
Yassa Arabfat: Anyway, naming names.
Yassa Arabfat: You know the deal, I drop you 'hot or not' them
get off the blok: Lets run itttt

Yassa Arabfat: Pent Up
get off the blok: Pent uP is a guy that has all the potential in the world probably one of the youngest cats in the league. I feel he has a lot of potential and will be NO JOKE in the near future once he matures in his writing a little bit.
Yassa Arabfat: Pestalence/Ashen Horse
get off the blok: He is one of the more enjoyable reads in the league I know what I am getting when I read a pest verse. Thats flow, imagery, and a decent plot EVERY time. He is all around very solid.
Yassa Arabfat: Tali
get off the blok: Tali is my favorite person to read. He is on some creativity level that is unmatched by anything I've read in the league and is fuckin dope. I can honestly think back when I battled him and saying to myself " I am not mad if he wins" cos it was that dope. Kid will be an author or some shit one day no lie.
Yassa Arabfat: Speaking of Authours... Tekneek
get off the blok: Tek lol man this guy is so unpredictable. It's either he drops fuckin SICK .. or he is fuckin wack... he has no in between. So if he is on a roll look out cos he will grab the title if not he's nothing to worry about
Yassa Arabfat: Dic
get off the blok: Dic is a good writer I don't have much criticism for his writing but sometimes he wears his emotions on his sleeve like a little bitch. That's cool to have your days of whining but not every fucking day. And Dic take that DAM 4 X champ out ya sig nigguh u only @ 3 lmfao.
Yassa Arabfat: L Dogg
get off the blok: L dogg is soulfull, I like his writing because it's on a maturity level that many cannot get too. Sometimes his shits boring though but most of the time it's on the astonishing level. Very solid
Yassa Arabfat: Anyone else you want to comment on?
get off the blok: yuh
get off the blok: lol
Yassa Arabfat: fire away
get off the blok: Momma - the kid needs to stop feeling sorry for hisself and fuckin merk something. He reminds me of the artist in the industry thats always one hit away but never gave us all he has. But I will be waiting for it.

Riko - I've always thought you were boring when I read you this goes back to before I was in the league but my views changed and I do enjoy you now dun stay writing and good luck.

Cereal - you are wack as fuck. You cannot follow a plot, your flow sucks, and your creativity gets lost in your

get off the blok: creativity
get off the blok: lol SHIT
get off the blok: iight
get off the blok: we good
Yassa Arabfat: No one seems to like Cereal no more...
get off the blok: word = [ well in that case :: hugs for cereal :::
get off the blok: i thought i was the only one
get off the blok: ANd MOMMA change that fuckin SIG bum biggity WHO
get off the blok: lmfao
Yassa Arabfat: I was trying to mix is
Yassa Arabfat: *it
Yassa Arabfat: BTW LOOK OUT FOR MY R'N'B SOUNDCLICK PAGE - COMING SOON
get off the blok: Lol ahh
Yassa Arabfat: speaking of shameless plugs
Yassa Arabfat: you've had a sneek peek of the tourney
get off the blok: yesssuh
Yassa Arabfat: What do you think?
get off the blok: man the tourny is going to be brilliant. this time around i think who ever wins it is going to deserve it no questions asked. this is also the perfect time for a tourny too so this shit will be blazin i already know
Yassa Arabfat: Yeah, I gotta admit I'm looking forward to it.
Yassa Arabfat: If only to prove talent wrong
get off the blok: Word
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Yassa Arabfat: and be part of the team that held the most successful tourney ever
Yassa Arabfat: known to man kind
get off the blok: it will be that
Yassa Arabfat: im starting to ramble and I keep trying to sing to you so I think we better wrap it up
Yassa Arabfat: drop thoose final words son
get off the blok: one thing is mods gotta stay with a backbone and not let anybody get to big for their britches
Yassa Arabfat: Trust me, we've been fucked about so much lately that there's not a chance of it.
Yassa Arabfat: Tali's our diplomat
Yassa Arabfat: the other three are about enforcing that.
Yassa Arabfat: I rhymed.
Yassa Arabfat: Anyway, seriously, I keep trying to sing, my attention span is up. Sorry
Yassa Arabfat: Final words!!!!
get off the blok: iight yo, shouts to you for takin the time to interview me its much appreciated.. shouts to pent uP for being there to critique my writing... shouts to insense .. shouts to tali for keepin it real... shouts.. to mac flow for stayin on the hustle.. shouts.. to jersee emcee cos i still like him as a writer even though nigguhs hate em... and last but not least shouts to everybody in the league for making it a good place to contend ... this is j o o k signing out peace, love, and tranquility
Yassa Arabfat: mwuah
Yassa Arabfat: Well there you have it Gents and Miskey. Jook. The man with the cop glasses. Peice
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Top 5 Stanzas by Jook

TOP 5 STANZAS


5. Ak-D

Blood splattered the scenery and flowed down a wretched canvas
Artilery disloged the beauty of the plains that stretcehd through kansas
All set on a background of rockets and explosions, twisiting emotions
Grey blended into the sky mixing the colors pain and devotion such a commotion
A world at erosion corpses paint the hills on which capital was instilled
Prophecys fufilled as atrocities build, all peace is slowly distilled
Innoncent killed revolutionize techniques, souls speak bringing life to a dead brush
In some type of a dread lust the world is drowned in a severe head rush
Watch the blood glush bleed into the easel against lifves approval
The enviroment dissallusional to try and stop this masterpice is simply futile
A rebuttal seems to subtle bystanders just watch as the portrait settles
Strokes form pretzels to trace the paths of hurling metal hardly gentle
No pencils all effects premently etched in a time line of destruction
The seduction of this creation is enough to tempt human production
We can hardly function at suction of a corporate system corrupted
A revival interupted by a constitutional that seems to lie abrupted
All hope is slowly deducted by a government mistrusted in safe keeping
Women and chilldren remain with little fate weeping
And in the center there is a soldier in tears he had no idea what was in store
It is nothing hes ever witnessed before a man lost in the art of war



4. Desenuts

and as she beams her waking sight.. through her acid.haze filled brain..
and cranks the janet joplin just to drown out peaceful rain..
mother earth.. she screams her pain.. as industry n greed progress
and Eve displays her breasts engaged in Freedoms threesome sex..
and even as she frees her dress.. the stench of death to heavens raise..
as the youth cry "pleased to meet you.." and "I hope you guess my name"
This was evil's rise to fame.. the country's flames began to burn..
as we approached the final chapter.. and our final lesson's learned..

In times we live.. now spurned
A drunken stupor.. losers... mute..
spilling words upon a page.. a gelding race.. can't reproduce..
or even feel our roots.. we've disengaged reality..
and this is the time we live in.. yes indeed.. both you and me..
converts to sins n greed.. our averice was trained so well..
by the one who fanned the flames.. and whose name's contained in hell..
it seems he cast a spell.. home of the brave.. now hides in fear..
And time is winding down.. amidst the slowly grinding gears..
A world that knew it's best in youth.. finds even the heavns are rend n bleed..
For the earth's been cursed since man was birthed it's sequence of death in entropy..



3. Dic Gets Gully

Madpoet directs some officers to gather the evidence
As me and him question the trash workers to capture more elements
Time lines are set if the burger spot dumped trash at 9pm as they said
And when the sanitation people came for it at 5am, she was dead
The body is presumed deceased for 4 hours at most
Because the blood hasn't dried from the blows that devoured her nose
Rikoshay searches for clues, a stickler to work within rules
Finding anything on the surface with an observative view
There's blood on the purse and the shoes so he's 1st to presume
She fought back and has DNA of the murdering crew
There's footprints with red treads across the scene of the crime
Pictures are taken and measured of three different sneaker designs
All three are size 9 and although that's all we have in our grasp
We can path a graph for suspects to single out and capture their ass
Fast on the track, Malo and Mad know there's a club on the corner
The deceased, known as Nonni looks beautifully dressed, even post mortem
Her picture is highly recognized because attention received
Had men lining up by the bar all night to get her some drinks
This dwindled a link to several rap sheets within our precinct
Cuz the party given was by a known gang considered Elite
We rounded the usual suspects, rushing to solve the sus.picions
Found L dogg in his backyard getting mauled by Awedishin
They're video taping them wrestling, but it doesn't look fair
As big ass Awedish climbs a tree, aims elbows and jumps in the air
We all squirm in the pain that we can see surging in L
With his skinny legs twitching underneath and his face turning real pale



2. L DOGG

Being trapped in tape was the first thing I noticed awake
Seat cloaked with slabs of sweat had me soaked from the waist
Down to my feet, which were bare as well
Heat was so hot, I thought I was breathing in hell
Dirt was kicking up from the wheels, we were in a car
2 men were talking, one of them was smokin a cigar
I could smell the brand, that’s about all I could do
They heard me move:
“hey buddy.. U have ten minutes for your father to choose
Your pop owes us some money and he will decide
If his precious casino funding is worth his sons life”
The car stopped, I squirmed around but grew exhausted
The door opened, they pulled me out an ruined the progress
Another car approached but I couldn’t see
Then I heard people get out.. It was pops voice.. Son im so sorry
I heard the men ask pop for a decision to make
Then silence broke out, doors closed. Without a minute to waste
I was pushed back in the car.. “sorry kid, he choose the doe”
My life was ghost. Within ten minutes my body will become a roast.



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Wrote Homers Illiad making you wonder what would
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I created Aesop Rocks acid for a summer of good,
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But its not only famous folks whos hands visit me;
I've disinfected little ann's injuries,
But it'd only be honest for me to Mention the Opposites;

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instead he chose cloud nine for a wonderful climb
He ended up on cement muddied, cuddled and blind.
I even gave the Terrorists a chance to Save their Ass
but instead of chasing dreams, they want to Rape this flag
So play hide and seek, but i'm about to make it tag
and with that pain you yell, i'll burn your makeshift rags
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Perception and Reality by Tekneek

PERCEPTION AND REALITY



The following section is a close-up look at the RSTL through the third eye in seeing what exactly is perceived by most as opposed to what is reality. As an opinionated piece, readers will either agree or disagree to the following but then will also allow them to think over what they view the particular example therefore, making it something to think about…Here we go…





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PERCEPTION:

Ghostwriters are bad for the RSTL.



REALITY:

Writers are either lazy, unskilled or bored. That would be the only possible reason why ghostwriters exist in the league. Ghost writing is equally as bad as biting for the one significant reason that you are NOT doing the writing… someone else is. The mods of the RSTL should outlaw it and people who do ghostwriting should not consider it nor keep it a secret. It should be reported and the person asking for it should be banned…. Period.



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PERCEPTION:

Female textcees in the RSTL are a step beneath the guys in the league.



REALITY:

I personally feel that female textcees get the bad rap. Whenever the possibility of a high ranking female textcee is on the verge of success, the best of them seems to be unseen in that moment. However, I think that voters are becoming a tad harsh and critical on them. The Eternalpath match this past week has had some voters giving some questionable critiques on why Eternalpath’s verse was not the moreso favorable piece. With potential newsworthy names like Luci Leviathan, Erykah Caine, MISSKEY… we have yet to find a first in RSTL with a woman winning the title. Will we ever see a woman win that title? If society from history has rated women to be second rate amongst the men they compete with… it pretty may well be that no woman will ever win a RSTL title. Few have had such close calls and have almost succeeded… but through many witnessing of the RSTL matches… I’m finding more of the participation in women in the league to be more scarce than ever… and I think that’s wrong.



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Some Words for the New Champ by Tekneek

L-DOGG GLORIFIED



It was not too long ago that our current RSTL champion L-DOGG was pretty much the center of the heat in both the RSTL and Emcee Hookups. And here now today, he’s pretty much simmered down in his thoughts and has kicked into gear his skill… and what skill he’s brought.



This is why champions are made. People like L-DOGG who sit down, shut-up and get to steppin, do what needs to be done… and by taking care of business, he has set himself at the top…again.



In my opinion, L-DOGG proves me right. When his mind is set and ready and willing, he can shine… and that he has done. In our PPV encounter, he pretty much annihilated and defeated me hands down. When his mind is focused, he is deadlier than many and that shows completely. With a winning streak the past 2-3 weeks, L has pretty much touched base with his ways in writing and has once again reached glory.



I personally congratulate L-DOGG for his doing…. But an extra juice of respect for killing the noise from awhile ago on the boards and mellowing out… and just handling business…. That’s a big plus from me.



Shoot, I bet even MAC FLOW gotta be happy for him too.


Outro

So there you have it, a complete mag. Hope you kids are happy. Big, huge, gigantic ups to all those who contributed so much this week Jook, Momma, Tek, L Dogg, you guys are fan-fucking-tastic. For those who actually read, there's a BRILLIANT tourney idea coming really, really soon we'll spill the details of that a little later on. For now, get out there and get grimey, Slick Rick style. Peace y'all - Mac Flow
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dope mag guys.. thanks for the kind words tek.. these last 3 weeks have been some tough matches that could go either way vern, tali and dic are all champ deserving.. were all winners in my book.. iv read some good shit.
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lmfao, thanks for the mentions

dope ass mag i gotta bone to pick with moms though ;-)


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good stuff.. congrats on the win p... good luck in the match..
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