51-awakened rage [v] 52-dr. cause

DMeTRIUS · 08-02-2004, 03:28 PM

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Dr.Cause · 08-02-2004, 08:21 PM

i'll most defently show this time :-)

im a warrrriiooooorrrrr

Dr.Cause · 08-05-2004, 01:00 AM

wrote my verse in math yesterday :-)

understand the metaphore

topic:life as a grocery bag

Grocery bag=the metaphore of life

My lifes a grocery bag,Look at the shit im filled with/
built with the hardware tools i have killed with/
carried fist to fist and iv been carried all around/
when people done with me I get littered on the ground/
and look deep down,you see the book of knowlege/
that I earned from college,damn close to demolished/
dont know what to call it,Carried the Bottles for alcholics/
my like full and so trifled-
give me a second chance and have me recycled/
i had dreams and the laughed at me/
since the first day i came out the factory/
i work a 9 to 5 and go home with strange people/
Paper is the miority,but i consider plastic my equal/
my life is ruff,fuck it my life is fucked i had enough/
and i always get hurt when i have to open up/(love life)
all currupt,The grocery bag is being treated shitty/
and my life wont end till you put a hole in me/

Dr.Cause · 08-05-2004, 10:31 PM

oh may i add

studies by the university of Yale has recently proved Gay men No show

Interesting Fact :-)

Menso · 08-05-2004, 11:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dr.Cause

oh may i add

studies by the university of Yale has recently proved Gay men No show

Interesting Fact :-)

lmao... but you no showed also, before...lol... btw, he still has an hour. Ill edit my vote/crit if he shows.

Dr.Cause · 08-06-2004, 01:21 AM

i noshowed because of mistake this guy didnt even check in:-/

Dr.Cause · 08-06-2004, 01:58 AM

Loser!!!!!!

Lucifer Leviathan · 08-06-2004, 02:07 AM

...the language in that wasn't very polished...
...but the metaphors were clear, and i found it amusing...
...thought id reply for peeping it...

Dr.Cause · 08-06-2004, 10:38 AM

neat-o

.Etxegreshun. · 08-06-2004, 06:22 PM

why has this not been closed

Dr.Cause · 08-06-2004, 09:12 PM

lazy mods...ah well my post count is going THREW THE RUFF

or i got a SWELL idea...maybe some one can drop a verse right now

it could work

Menso · 08-08-2004, 12:09 AM

lol.. Vote - Awakened Rage.. his verse was just so spectacular. I had to read, reread, and read again.

Nice short piece Doc. parts were clever, and the flow was pretty good throughout. It could have been done more cmopletely, but i guess your math teacher wouldnt appreciate you spending all of class writing your RSTL verse. But this could be the begginning of a really dope piece if you finish it, and polish it up.

Good thing this was short, tho, cuz without another to vote on, i would have just passed

.

DMeTRIUS · 08-08-2004, 01:56 PM

awakened rage no shows

08-02-2004, 03:28 PM	#1 (permalink)
DMeTRIUS ³³³³³s and bananas Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 13,006	51-awakened rage [v] 52-dr. cause DUE DATES VERSES DUE Thursday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST/ VOTES DUE Sunday 10:00am PACIFIC/1:00pm EST TOPICS rstl topics 8-1-2004 by tha talent LINE LIMIT 4 lines - NO SHOWS 16 lines - MINIMAL 60 lines - MAXIMAL VOTING No payback votes No 2nd Chance Votes YOU MUST MUST MUST POST YOUR URL'S OF ALL THE BATTLES YOU VOTED ON HERE IN YOUR OWN THREAD.. YOU MUST VOTE ON 6 BATTLES for every vote you fail to submit and post a link for you will be deducted 1 if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!! Go Forth and Produce __________________ The Olympics is nothing but a full political scene—everything in world athletics is. You tell a kid the Olympics is the highest form of athletics. That it's man against man, soul against soul. But when you get to the Games it's all different from what you've been told all your life. It's country against country, ideology against ideology. - john carlos

08-02-2004, 08:21 PM	#2 (permalink)
Dr.Cause Peep The Sig Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Tucson,Az Posts: 607	i'll most defently show this time :-) im a warrrriiooooorrrrr __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/doccause i can rap better then this KhrImeChILd: So I come with a power to devour and spark heat -- Ill rip ur fuckin heart out and chew it up see --

08-05-2004, 01:00 AM	#3 (permalink)
Dr.Cause Peep The Sig Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Tucson,Az Posts: 607	wrote my verse in math yesterday :-) understand the metaphore topic:life as a grocery bag Grocery bag=the metaphore of life My lifes a grocery bag,Look at the shit im filled with/ built with the hardware tools i have killed with/ carried fist to fist and iv been carried all around/ when people done with me I get littered on the ground/ and look deep down,you see the book of knowlege/ that I earned from college,damn close to demolished/ dont know what to call it,Carried the Bottles for alcholics/ my like full and so trifled- give me a second chance and have me recycled/ i had dreams and the laughed at me/ since the first day i came out the factory/ i work a 9 to 5 and go home with strange people/ Paper is the miority,but i consider plastic my equal/ my life is ruff,fuck it my life is fucked i had enough/ and i always get hurt when i have to open up/(love life) all currupt,The grocery bag is being treated shitty/ and my life wont end till you put a hole in me/ __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/doccause i can rap better then this KhrImeChILd: So I come with a power to devour and spark heat -- Ill rip ur fuckin heart out and chew it up see -- Last edited by Dr.Cause; 08-05-2004 at 01:07 AM. Reason: typos and grammar...

08-05-2004, 10:31 PM	#4 (permalink)
Dr.Cause Peep The Sig Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Tucson,Az Posts: 607	oh may i add studies by the university of Yale has recently proved Gay men No show Interesting Fact :-) __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/doccause i can rap better then this KhrImeChILd: So I come with a power to devour and spark heat -- Ill rip ur fuckin heart out and chew it up see --

08-06-2004, 01:21 AM	#6 (permalink)
Dr.Cause Peep The Sig Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Tucson,Az Posts: 607	i noshowed because of mistake this guy didnt even check in:-/ __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/doccause i can rap better then this KhrImeChILd: So I come with a power to devour and spark heat -- Ill rip ur fuckin heart out and chew it up see --

08-06-2004, 01:58 AM	#7 (permalink)
Dr.Cause Peep The Sig Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Tucson,Az Posts: 607	Loser!!!!!! __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/doccause i can rap better then this KhrImeChILd: So I come with a power to devour and spark heat -- Ill rip ur fuckin heart out and chew it up see --

08-06-2004, 02:07 AM	#8 (permalink)
Lucifer Leviathan Does it 4 Da Shorties... Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: The Top Notch. Posts: 11,751	...the language in that wasn't very polished... ...but the metaphors were clear, and i found it amusing... ...thought id reply for peeping it... __________________ "I'm a muthafuckin ni99a you will never try... Fuck you hoes. Cause i'm a pimp... Till' i die." -Meatwad

08-06-2004, 10:38 AM	#9 (permalink)
Dr.Cause Peep The Sig Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Tucson,Az Posts: 607	neat-o __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/doccause i can rap better then this KhrImeChILd: So I come with a power to devour and spark heat -- Ill rip ur fuckin heart out and chew it up see --

08-06-2004, 06:22 PM	#10 (permalink)
.Etxegreshun. Registered User Join Date: Jun 2004 Posts: 102	why has this not been closed

08-06-2004, 09:12 PM	#11 (permalink)
Dr.Cause Peep The Sig Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Tucson,Az Posts: 607	lazy mods...ah well my post count is going THREW THE RUFF or i got a SWELL idea...maybe some one can drop a verse right now it could work __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/doccause i can rap better then this KhrImeChILd: So I come with a power to devour and spark heat -- Ill rip ur fuckin heart out and chew it up see --

08-08-2004, 12:09 AM	#12 (permalink)
Menso No Brown Baggers Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 14,077	lol.. Vote - Awakened Rage.. his verse was just so spectacular. I had to read, reread, and read again. Nice short piece Doc. parts were clever, and the flow was pretty good throughout. It could have been done more cmopletely, but i guess your math teacher wouldnt appreciate you spending all of class writing your RSTL verse. But this could be the begginning of a really dope piece if you finish it, and polish it up. Good thing this was short, tho, cuz without another to vote on, i would have just passed .

08-08-2004, 01:56 PM	#13 (permalink)
DMeTRIUS ³³³³³s and bananas Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 13,006	awakened rage no shows __________________ The Olympics is nothing but a full political scene—everything in world athletics is. You tell a kid the Olympics is the highest form of athletics. That it's man against man, soul against soul. But when you get to the Games it's all different from what you've been told all your life. It's country against country, ideology against ideology. - john carlos

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