39-sikness vs 40-status Quo

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Old 06-08-2004, 04:28 AM   #1 (permalink)
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39-sikness vs 40-status Quo
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Old 06-10-2004, 12:31 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Siknes takes it up the butt!
im in... will edit this post with my votes
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Old 06-10-2004, 01:55 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Topic: everytime u wake up from a scary dream you’re in another


Im in the sky with no parachute so theres no escaping death
I take a deep breath I close my eyes and then im wakin up
I wipe the cold sweat from my brow I thought I was a goner
When all ofa sudden I see that lil fag harry potter
Sorcerors what? Who? what the fuck are you talking bout
he got pissed said some latin shit n turned me into a white owl
now im feelin sharp pains in my back, yo what the fuck
I was a cigar now im being transformed into a blunt
It wont be long before im gone when some one breaks out the bong
Wow close call…. cuz the hits are strong
Their eyes are red
Now they’re smoking cigarettes
But I spoke too soon cuz now I feel their lips
I feel the flames I let out a scream that wakes me from dreams
Dazed I startled my roommate who was up late playing games
He told me to shut the fuck up before I get smacked up
I get up filled anger, grab his shoulder he turns wit the face of a stranger
FUCK it’s the boston strangler
I don’t need to be spider man to sense the danger
He grits his teeth as he grips my neck fingers crushing flesh
With a deadly intent Im plunged into the toilet
I never thought Id die in the bathroom
I close my eyes only to open them in the womb
This shit is strange, but wanna know wuts stranger
I think I see bent a hanger….
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reality in this world is bought and sold, a very limited scope of life is shown
and im just one of the mold fully controlled, left to erode in my humble abode
u wont hear me coz I got no loot, u dont hear me becoz u wont compute
im docile, psycho have u heard of such? im invisible and impossible to tuch….
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Old 06-10-2004, 02:01 AM   #5 (permalink)
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last line should be i think i see a bent hanger... fuck! typo plus i left out fuck....
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reality in this world is bought and sold, a very limited scope of life is shown
and im just one of the mold fully controlled, left to erode in my humble abode
u wont hear me coz I got no loot, u dont hear me becoz u wont compute
im docile, psycho have u heard of such? im invisible and impossible to tuch….
-MR. LIF-
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Old 06-10-2004, 03:32 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Status Qu0 takes it up the butt!
talk someone into suicide.


he grew up with a haunted expression,
confessions invested in the falsehood
of priest and God's wouldn't help the kid.
enveloped with his evil friends that
taunt and tease him.
sometimes he dreams the seasons
away,
and he goes to his happy places
whenever it's HIS turn to get
beaten.
but he's twenty five now, so there's
no reason to be treated this foul
by his supposed allies.
they moved away, leaving a few
articles of clothing and the scars
that left him choking and broken
apart.
they left on clouds not cars.
but the most evil, vindictive buddy
was left to torture him for eternity.
"hug me, stop, you're hurting me."
now johnny looks behind his back
everyday for his friend.
maybe his death will come when
he can walk amongst the pebbles
and settle unnoticed.
it's december 31st, eve of the dawn
of a new life. so his friend will try
to continue johnny's plight.
LET'S DINE TONIGHT!
Johnny took the shotgun and pointed
it at this annoying kid.
employing fists was pointless - this
bully of a friend was doomed to ruling
till the end.
johnny sat and explained to his friend
that death was the only option.
and he eventually bought it.
so, Mark, took control of his actions
screamed.
LIVE AND LOVE LIKE FASCISTS
and painted the wall with
a lovely red that was never replicated
again.
and so. Johnny died since they
were two personalities of the same
inflicted body.
that's how you kill two birds
with one bullet.
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Old 06-10-2004, 09:18 AM   #7 (permalink)
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VOTE.....status quo

both verses coulda been better but i think status pulled me in more
like i know these are hard topics but in a scary dream u shold come up wit somthin better than harry potter

like half the verse didnt even rime

but thats y i voted for status
ur verse was easily better and was interesting
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Old 06-10-2004, 10:43 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Status won with one easily do i even have to explain my vote on this one.

The first guy who posted was off... that shit was terrible... didn't even keep a constant flow and the story had no explaination or detail, just kept jumping to the next action or event, just bad.

Status that was a pretty nice story I could get into it and I liked it. Very nice and the a flow was there.
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Old 06-10-2004, 01:11 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Seemed like a noob battle, room for improvement........well, there is in Status.

sikness shit didn't even rhyme 95% of the time lol. The story was horrible, generic, and plain boring.

Status was OK. Flow was your top point. The story was unfolded pretty well, not the most in depth but we got the point, worked the topic at your best. Keep in this shit son you looking like an up and comer.

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Old 06-10-2004, 02:51 PM   #10 (permalink)
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WTF though? These verses were kind of whack, c'mon y'all... y'all shyt barely rhymed, EVER HEARD OF BARS?!?!?! Obviously not, but anyways. Stat Qu0 got my vote, by elimination....
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Old 06-10-2004, 05:03 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Sikness: K man, you were so close to catching on here... but right from the start I saw that this wasn't gonna be as good of a verse as it could be... like, the second line:
I take a deep breath... if you took off the deep, it would be a multi with escaping death from the end of the first line... things like that... you also need to step it up if you're going for comedy, its gotta be waaaayyyyy fucking out there... instead of just turning you into an owl, harry potter could've chased you around trying to stick his wand up your ass or something crazy... shit like that brotha... flow, story etc...

Quo: Eh... unless I'm a little slow, and have this alias wrong, I was expecting more... and that this topic's been used before, with similar twists pulled off... but eh, you got this battle... and its impossible for you to know shits already been done... the formatting of your verse could've been easier to follow if you did it more standardly... or... yea.

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Old 06-10-2004, 05:25 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Status Qu0 takes it up the butt!
i didn't try, i read his verse.
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Old 06-10-2004, 07:24 PM   #13 (permalink)
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i was trying to beat the deadline cuz i got home late and wrote it quick... its ok ill do better next time... my thing is y fucking put me down... if u dont like my verse fine but dont take shots at me... ie whack, terrible, etc. etc. whatever everyone is a beginner some time and no one here to my knowledge is fucking made.... pz
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Old 06-11-2004, 03:40 AM   #14 (permalink)
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umm, me not being rich doesn't make that verse any less shitty.
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Old 06-11-2004, 10:29 PM   #16 (permalink)
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well I cant see where everyone says sikness' shit didn't rhyme...cuz it did for the most part. Shit was rough, but I mean it wasn't impossible to understand just kinda bland and boring. Status' shit was the one that was a little harder to follow with flow in parts. However, the story was better...easily better. I'd break this down more, but It's really pointless.

vote = Quo...

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Old 06-12-2004, 06:48 PM   #17 (permalink)
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Sikness-shit was horrible, uninteresting an all that

Quo-i thot u was supposed to convince someone to commit suicide, not tell about what someone went thru an shit. Didnt stay on topic very good an i hate that style but u still won over Sikness i believe.

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Old 06-13-2004, 07:39 AM   #18 (permalink)
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vote status

sikness' verse was just bad, it took me forever just to finish reading it cuz it was so boring.

status, ok verse but thats about all you needed
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