39- Phat Kid Vs 40- Spit That

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[Spit That]

Cheking in...

[phatkid]

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[Vern Acular]

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[phatkid]

I'm doing mine on passion, here it is.


I’m passionate about a lot of random shit…
Leaving Iraq, and the legalization of cannabis
Using rap to my advantage, and
Taking hip-hop back to its Roots, like Jurassic (five) did
There’s more to lyrics then snaps and adjectives
It's about the magic that happens when you’re continuously practicin
And there’s more to women then ass and tits
It's about the love that can exist
I’m passionate about a lot of random shit…
Fuck a political cabinet the funds terrorist candidates, yea that's it
George Bush is more than a faggot bitch; he's a fascist pig
That gets paid by taxes every time you buy a pack of cigs
Which by statistics, is more addictive then crack to kids
I crack the lid and take a sip of ash and piss
Cause this world tastes more bitter then when this phatkid rips ass again
I’m passionate about a lot of random shit…
Using gods goddamn name in vein is blasphemous
So is giving millions to actresses
While starving kid can’t get fed or meds, so they go eat from the trash when sick
And this planets dictators slap hands and live off the fat of the land…its sick
I’m passionate about a lot of random shit…
But mainly the fact that I cant do shit



http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...81#post8997081
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...35#post8997235

[Spit That]

Ill get my votes in...I thought verses were due Friday...:( Sorry for the key phatkid...by the way nice drop


Passion

I do it for the fun of it..you dont understand~this sick ish
It's never planned~it can happen in an instance
What was I to do..of course I'd do the unexpected
My thoughts not connected..the most un-usual methods

I love to kill!!!

Your heart can quickly stand still and you can look ill!!
You will beg me to die~but that doesnt mean you will
Ill leave you bleading 'till~you drop blood out of your eyes!!
Put a pen in your throat and laugh as you choke on the ink
I warn you dont blink..you wont have a second to think
Before you body starts to stink from you starting to rot
And you get a copule holes and few balnk body spots
You ever seen my sick smile..tortued into a tight bind
With a sick mind..your pants will and Ill do you from behind
Kick you up a deserted street and watch your teeth bleed
My knife and you will meet and when you dont move
...it wont be cuz your sleep
Stick a knife in you back and see if it can go deep
So keep back..give my space or else prepare for your fate
You just wait and you'll witness my passion for hate

[phatkid]

in my rhyme "the funds terrorist candidates" is supposed to be "that funds terrorist candidates"
by the way nice drop on your end to

[Anaphora]

Phat: this seemed like an open mic to me, but... I liked it regardless... sticking with the same rhyme the whole way is gutsy, but you did it pretty well, the end lines got a little stretched, but I can handle it... good message to the piece, definitely a plus there... all in all a pretty good piece for a first time in rstl... just to warn ya though, cats are big on stories here (me too usually) so you may wanna keep that in mind next week...

Spit: the flow was kinda off and on... a little too stop and go in the middle of lines at places... some lines were a bit redundant like:
Before you body starts to stink from you starting to rot
- rotting really basically is saying you're stinking ya know? stuff like that really sticks out to me...
I liked the idea, it was a bit different... but you didn't go deep enough into the character, didn't explain at all why, didn't give very vivid imagery about it... just kinda said what you were doing, the old (and very cliched) adage of show don't tell applies in the rstl as well... Keep it up though, make sure your story is constantly moving forward, doesn't get redundant... and lines flow smoother and you'll get good fast.

Vote: Phat Kid

[phatkid]

more votes
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...19#post9016119
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...20#post9016220

[Awedishin]

hmmm I gotta go Phat Kid on this one

Both obviously are going to need a lot of work but not too bad here. The only thing that I can say that got Phat kid the win was the content ... although it was definitely more like a .... song than a verse....so to speak the lines themselves were strong to the topic chosen.

Spit That, I could see what you were trying to do there, but at times I couldn't really follow your flow man....the whole thing was choppy and dicey...with some work you'll both be aight, but for now...Phat Kid gets the dubya

[allnakey]

Phat Kid- Had some really good lines and it was a nice verse, but you didn't tell much of a story, kind of justed stated a lot of truth, but that was cool i was feeling that.

Spit- flow broke off in a lot of places, wasn't a smooth read. Overall the energy wasn't there and I couldn't get into it.

Vote- phat

[Spit That]

Thanks for the votes...Ill be back to link the rest of mine...

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...00#post9016800

[Vern Acular]

winner phat kid