35- Fraud Hukstable Vs 36- FYIFB

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Go Forth and Produce

[Fraud Hukstable]

Checkin In

[FYIFB]

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[Vern Acular]

RSTL TOPICS

Get Your Topics!!

[Fraud Hukstable]

the topic is a suicide letter

[Fraud Hukstable]

yo fuck this world,and everything fuckin in it,
16 years old,violent background no feelings,
for shit,family,friends,or bitches,im goin out
i could give a fuck less about this lyrical bout,
if i dont kill myself i think somebody else will,
what will it be,guns,knifes,or prescription pills,
i had chicks,and mic skills,rims and ice grills,
timbs and much skrill,i was on top of the hill,
but now im depressed had to this off of my chest,
i wish i had atom bomb to kill me and rest,of yall,
i know i fall but its just a little short,its long time thing,
like mister rock smokin newports,nothin is gonna change,
i got the same fucked up brain,this is hurtin me,
the tears im tryna restrain,young black dude,
got treated good and crude,parents hated me,
cuz at school i broke all the rules,wanted to be thug,
join a gang and pack tools,fuck this letter,
cuz my life is the only thing i got to lose

The End

[FYIFB]

11. Youre a deadly virus explain, how u came about and what is that you do.

in the net!! its a fish!! its a crab!!- nah doggy its jus me
disease- like VD Cancer & HIV//
but im officially- known as New Ew Wack Bitch Emcees
better known as NewBe//
i came about around the summer 2K
an n!gga im here too-stay//
I once only lurked on E-Z Boards
an iont even know why peeps said i was easily whored//
but then I gained the support, of a new generation
"spit" lyrics like CUM-get me & if i lose ya jus hatin//(GET IT LMAO)
i aint fakin.. im 4,273 & 2 on the net
60-0 on yahoo, not voice chats..only in text
me & my crew hit Blunts & rapboard..ruined that shit//
we'd DE-FEET any peeps, "like come off those sneeks"(hehe)
see, we herd RM & freestylin had 'dopeheads*', so we 'hit em*' ta 'geek*'//*
see-we-be-these-Gs like-bg-n-cashmony never-bummy gimmie'ya-money, yo
ha, i gotta jag, lex & hummer i spit text for fun yo
i gotta deal wit a label 'under the ROC' & it aint 'dirt' yo
im not allowed to talk about it or theyll take away my permission ta flo, yo//
ya gonna have ta wait- & nah i cant chat on AIM- my mics being lame
ive infected alot of kids, want me ta name names?
MChotFyia69..killerkiller187 & lyricalFlame//
tha's jus some, thurr'll be more to CUM
the only reason im logged on on saturday night is cus, for some reason my car wont run//
an here check the freshest lyics ive wrote to date
these shits are classified as pure rape//
"Y’all act like you never seen a white person before
Jaws all on the floor like pam, like tommy just burst in the door
And started whoopin her ass worse than before
They first were divorce, throwin her over furniture (ahh!)
It’s the return of the... ah, wait, no way, you’re kidding,
He didn’t just say what I think he did, did he?
And dr. dre said... nothing you idiots!
Dr. dre’s dead, he’s locked in my basement! (ha-ha!)
Feminist women love eminem {*vocal turntable:
Chigga chigga chigga*} slim shady, I’m sick of him
Look at him, walkin around grabbin his you-know-what
Flippin the you-know-who, yeah, but he’s so cute though!
Yeah, I probably got a couple of screws up in my head loose
But no worse, than what’s goin on in your parents’ bedrooms
Sometimes, I wanna get on tv and just let loose, but can’t
But it’s cool for tom green to hump a dead moose
My bum is on your lips, my bum is on your lips
And if I’m lucky, you might just give it a little kiss
And that’s the message that we deliver to little kids
And expect them not to know what a woman’s clitoris is
Of course they gonna know what intercourse is
By the time they hit fourth grade
They got the discovery channel don’t they?
We ain’t nothing but mammals.. well, some of us cannibals
Who cut other people open like cantaloupes {*slurp*}
But if we can hump dead animals and antelopes
Then there’s no reason that a man and another man can’t elope
{*ewww!*} but if you feel like I feel, I got the antidote
Women wave your pantyhose, sing the chorus and it goes"
nobody bite those, i gott'em copywrittin
an LIKE TYSON ill BITE your hearing for bitin this shit//





*dopeheads = hit'em = geek, cus yo dopeheads like drugs, hit em like smokin it, then you geek out lool, cool huh??

omg if you guys DONT GET THIS, lmao, tat this in ya siggy lol

[Everkleer]

lol @ FYIFB's verse...hahahaha comedy

Fraud your verse was pretty simplistic, nothin really stood out and the concept was played...I feel like you could have done alot more because it takes something dope to pull off a suicide letter without it being played out.

Vybe that verse was comedy man...I liked it. I thought you did a good flip on the topic NewBe virus hahaha...good shit, I felt you took this pretty easily.

VOTE=FYIFB

[phatkid]

arghh FYIFBs verse was needlessly complicated in the middle
as frauds verse was way to basic all the way through

FYIFB should have dumbed down his lyrics a lttle to make it easier to read

and Fraud should have ed his up with more multis and a deeper meanin

im gonna have to go with FYIFB on this one cause his shit was funny
i liked the roc line

vote- fyifb

[allnakey]

To tell you the truth I hated both pieces, couldn't really get into them and they both kind of alluded the topics in there own way. Not coming out straight forward and kind of beating around the bush at times. I felt fyifb, put more effort into his piece and it was funny in some spots... for those reason i vote for fyifb

[ErykahCaine]

Ok battle

FYIFB:

lol....this was hilarous...very creative way to approach the topic. The flow was on point and you had an overall pretty creative storyline, although 80% of ya piece was an eminem verse, but it served its purpose, and made for a nice read....Nothing to great but Cool Job.


Fraud:

Ok, this was ehh.. The overall concept was well...non existent, there was really no story, just ranting and raving, your story was all over the place, which would've worked well with the suicide topic, if you would've executed it in a better way.

with that said vote = FYIFB

[Anaphora]

Fraud: Yea man... this fell short sorry... you didn't put nearrrrrrly enough explanation on why you were depressed, you could've gotten into the whole idea of materialism not soothing you like you made it seem like it did, when all you wanted was to eat a soy burger and hug trees cuz you're a hippy at heart... or SOMETHING... you just didn't really take it anywhere ya know? Had some nice stuff, but never brought out the reasoning, or anything, and for such a cliche topic as a 'suicide poem' or note or whatever, ya need something interesting.

FYIFB: haha. I think that's all I need to say. made me giggle, I hear alot of people complain about other boards, even though since Homegrown shut down this is the only one I've been to... funny stuff.

Vote: FYIFB

[FYIFB]

yall forgot to close me...

[FYIFB]

ahhhhhh, im still open, weird lol..

[FYIFB]

ha yea so im still hurr, the champ is hurr
2 amps ta hurr
thru anne-ear
cambys-year
count me here
passin the 1st tho
ass is the 2nd hoe
3rd dont esist yo
championchip...ive covered ya'kno
its nothin ta flo
fuck off & enuff yall ta ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh iono
fuck a flo
dun had enuff buurrr ta choke my chode
whoa & whoa
whoa & whoa

bud to the light & light to the bud!!!
it aint a real party witout the burr & chronnns

[Vern Acular]

winner fuiyfiuysdfijhg