EAST: 06- Liquid Life vs 14- User Name

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Old 05-17-2004, 04:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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EAST: 06- Liquid Life vs 14- User Name

ROUND 2



:: TOPICS ::

http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...02#post8856002


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min = 24
max = 48

:: VOTING ::

voting is mandatory, you must vote and post links on ( 5 ) battles, you will be deducted if you dont, if you cant vote on time, aim me and tell me why and maybe i'll let you slide, but im an asshole so you better have a good reason

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Old 05-17-2004, 11:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 05-17-2004, 11:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 05-20-2004, 01:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Depression (in the early stages of life)



In the race for life...I was picked to be the greater one
To meet an egg and prosper from my creators cum
9 months of growth then I'll enter a world thats great
Full of hate...because I already felt what its like when a girl gets raped
The way Im coming about is odd...like its a sport
Im not here because nature took its course...I was forced
Surrounded by damaged organs that have a tale of thier own
And a weak body structure held up by the frailest of bones
I figured we felt eachothers pain...guess not because apparently
The one that parents me...tries to kill me rather than take care of me
The taste in my mouth is bitter opposed to sweet
Because my mom downs a bottle of liqour when she goes to sleep
My nose is tweeked and I've only developed a brain
But my first thoughts are on hold...and its held by cocain
It's insane...my moms pain is too much to contain
Im a son of a gun...her life is heroine that shoots up in her veins
How can I suit up for this game...so far life is blurred at best
I can feel tears and hear mom speak the words of death
Like "20 bucks a blow" ...and I never heard the rest
I just speak to myself wondering do I deserve a breath
With not too much feeling because my nerves are wrecked
I call my mother Crystal since my body is merged with meth
I cant tell dad that the woman he raped is a drugie
Because I'll probably be dead before I can fit my huggies
I cant deal with this...too much abuse and tourment
And I cant kill myself...because I wasn't born yet
So here I am...stuck to develop in my mothers womb
Without a face but already facing an utter doom
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Old 05-21-2004, 12:59 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Depression (in the early stages of life)

ILL DO THE SAME TOPIC, LOLOL

im such a loser
this is a noshow RSTL verse from User
see...my comp has a virus, its herbed
it fuckin shuts off everytime i open up Word
even my email is gay and faggot'd up
so my rstl run?...LiquidLife is wrappin it up
props to you...however, i didnt like your topic choice
i mean...theres lots of noise, but no plot to voice
i hope you understaaaaand me...with this calm free
this week i had faaaaaamily...PLUS its prom week
n im not like many others here...i dont flex my net abillities
n i place ass and good sex above my text responsibilites
im still here tho...i had a good topic, and verse finished
but due to my comp...i open it up, and theres no words in it
thats my bad i guess...maybe if i had a real norton folder
maybe if i wasnt lazy, maybe if i wasnt such an illegal downloader
my comp would be ok...but now im depressed cuz of it...
at least i think i am, thats the topic i chose, wasnt it?
im typing to fast to scroll up...but hold up...
were both fucked...this is my noshow, and his flow sucked
im just playin liquid...your the iller storyteller, man
imma battler...i dont type the nets version of Old Yeller, man

im so sick
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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 05-21-2004, 01:13 AM   #6 (permalink)
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dam.. liquid.. u came ok an all but it felt like i was reading somthing i have read before..seemed rushed to me.. decent story though..closer could have been better..

user names as clearly shown was also rushed.. but hot dam! if thats not the most creative shit i have read in awhile.. he not only was rushing this verse but he gave his reasons of what happend an how he had another verse but his virus fucked it up.. the flow was hot.. the verse took depression to an all new height of funny.. def original shit


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Old 05-21-2004, 01:16 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Haha, props to User for at least posting a verse after his original one got deleted. It was at least comedic in places, but obviously Liquid got the best verse in this battle. its pretty much undebatable. User had a hard hitting closer tho lol

But yeah, liquid had the better flow, vocab, all the shit that makes up a topical...thanks for the comedy tho user.

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Old 05-21-2004, 01:19 AM   #8 (permalink)
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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 05-21-2004, 01:21 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Liquid i felt your verse was rushed, the flow was off in places and that made it feel bland
the story was coo but i didnt feel it as much. The ending was not strong at all. It seemed real rushed.

User it was creative but it was like a battle verse and i didnt feel that at all. That is what it is about. It was a no show verse i know but it just wasnt enough to out do liq in my mind
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Old 05-21-2004, 01:24 AM   #10 (permalink)
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YO IT WASNT A BATTLE VERSE...


i was telling the story from my point of view...


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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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YO IT WASNT A BATTLE VERSE...


i was telling the story from my point of view...


get down with it, homie...holla

It still had a Battle feel to it...
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well sense this dude obvious is the friend or the alias of john dough the whack no show has this freak ever ever dropped a rhyme or is he like JOHN DOUGH SIT ON HIS NO CREDIT GIVING BOOTY AND BITE MINE WHICH ONE IS IT SERGE JUST TELL YOUR BOY JOHN DOUGH TO STAY OUT OF MY THREADS WITH THE DUMB SHIT AND YALL WILL BE ALL RIGHT JOHN DOUGH TOO STUPID TO SHUT HIS BIG AIRCRAFT MOUTH NOW DO WHAT I SAY AND I WON'T PUNCH HIM OR YOU IN THE NOSE WITH THESE VICIOUS PUNCHLINES
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Old 05-21-2004, 01:35 AM   #13 (permalink)
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i didnt feel the battle in it.. i want everyone before they vote to sit an think of a time u have read about some fuckin baby in a druggie woom.. then sit an think of a time u have ever read that shit user dropped.. not only was it like truth commin gout of the words.. but it was funny shit...

i donno.. im not hatin on liquid.. an im not ridin username.. i just seriously think an original verse that made me laugh is better then somthing i felt iv read before an gave me no enjoyment..
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User:

lol..this was cool...i commend you for approaching the topic in a way thats never been done in the RSTL..*applause* It was very amusing, the overall storyline was pretty simplistic, but I think that kinda gave it that comedic edge cuz it seemed like a real relatible subject that most people on here have gone through. Flow was ehh...Overall a real enjoyable piece.

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This sounds real familiar, I feel like i've peeped this before, not sure why. That fact took away from your originality points which also took away from the overall storyline and concept. It seemed like you really rushed through this, flow was off in places, and it just wasn't a strong piece. But still an ok drop.

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Old 05-21-2004, 07:10 AM   #15 (permalink)
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check this shit out.. i thought that verse from liquid seemed familure..


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me and L dogg have uncovered your recylcing. I dont mean to bitch but you recycled your verse from when you faced Authour Nyse when you were both 9-0.

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Its exactly the same verse, so that gets you a d'q

i will leave this to VERN for the final call as for now

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