WEST: 01- Vern Acular vs 16- Smurp

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Old 05-09-2004, 11:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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WEST: 01- Vern Acular vs 16- Smurp

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Old 05-10-2004, 02:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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checkin in i allways seem to have to battle a person who helps with da dam tourney
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Old 05-10-2004, 05:38 PM   #3 (permalink)
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dont doubt yourself, let's just make it a good match...

good luck...
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Old 05-12-2004, 01:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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A person has spent their entire life shitted on socially. No friends, no significant others, no sex, nothing. Now their about 18-22. Describe the person.

i hate my life and the way that everything remains alike
monotonous experiences gave to me the rage to fight
growing up without a freind my mother said i may ignite
and here i am going on twenty a bastard day and night
let's say im quite the egocentric guy, i'll tell a chick to die
flip the bird, and use obscene names until these bitches cry
listen im the scrooge of christmas, bias with rude intentions
violent i've used my fist with a pious polluted tension
i lie and make cruel decisions the guy that refused to listen
inside of a school cause kids then were sielent to me i wished then
that i would be sent to prison, i figured i had no motives
the pressure that built inside me sent me through a lack of focus
now im back but hopeless, ass hole and when trash approaches
regardless of who it is, i'll even go smack the homeless
my acts are potent, i look at people now as a pack of roaches
fuck the world and everyone in it, they suffer haletosis
i crashed a moment, but regained my stregnth, basically i stayed awake
remained insane but kept myself from tongue kissing a razor blade
day to day the anger flames, my mind burns with hatred
my pass was a girl thats naked open for the whole world to rape it
twirled and anxious, now my head is known to quickly spin and roam
with a mo-tion that's so tense that it's been bend a comb
listen yo, if i go, and get a hold of my breath
i'll grip reality so hard that i'll choke it to death
im open to stress, the biggest asshole the world is yet to offer
im not apologizing, shit!, i dont even respect my father
you cant neglect this author, so as i cuss and spit it lingers
but since this is text, close your eyes and picture my middle finger





You are the biggest asshole in the world, what makes you such a big asshole, and how did you get that way...
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Old 05-12-2004, 01:40 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 05-12-2004, 03:07 PM   #6 (permalink)
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u could take smurp up outta this he aint gone show
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Old 05-14-2004, 09:33 AM   #7 (permalink)
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chill i got this

and vern let me post under this topic: Late RSTL Topical

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Old 05-14-2004, 12:46 PM   #8 (permalink)
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topic: Late RSTL Topical

Im postin this late RSTL topical /
And Thats da topic so wut ever i say is optional/
Im ranked 16 in da West but everyday I face east opsticals/
Dodgen bullets threw da projects liven up to thug prospects/
Holdin nines and teck, sellin cause im buy out da slums of my old projects/
All for respect Im sick wit this topical mess, Verse a topical vet spit st8 exclusiveness/
I replied to da end quote of your verse man, Im da biggest asshole in da world... /
only cause Im Arrogant and a go up against da whole fuckin world/
So Im'a attacken who'ever i go against in this RSTL/
Nigg@s gone critisize if i dont spit that real/
D.E.F is da name of my crew for real/
I bailed out on them barz, i aint bout to have no prison scars/
Left da county in strech Limo car, St8 to da studio to a 6 track demo god/
16 wit a felony charge son droped all charges so i know he want revenge god/
But im'a BoGart and dead him off quick like an a extensive murder charge/
Cant be touch so u know I got da Big Head like simpsons Marge/
Came back to da hood wit new knickname sarge/
This was hot battle both verses was hard/
Im'a tell u was wrong wit RM there's a bunch of haten and collabs god/
Between Crew or hot Nebs I could MoD da onslaught get that shit popin/
My name aint Vern Acular but u could see me threw mirror as if i was a dracula/
Vern quotes 'dont doubt yourself, not even if I was Puff in a carity meraton/
My stationed in da pentigon we worned benlathan that we a drop them atomic bombs/
I hold gunz wit hollows and Missles that Swan/

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Old 05-14-2004, 01:12 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Old 05-14-2004, 09:50 PM   #10 (permalink)
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for obvious reasons...I don't know what that was Smurp did, but it wasn't good.
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Old 05-14-2004, 10:07 PM   #11 (permalink)
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dope verse my friend, it had a great flow and some very nice lines, especially the choke to death line, that stood out...and you showed the rage and anger well...and i liked the rhyme scheme more than normal, which really is something, because i always love your rhyme scheme.

Smurp:
aweful.

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Old 05-14-2004, 11:35 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Yeah seriously, musta been rushed or something. Vern was dope as always, flow was on point, and I always like reading his shit. Smurp on the other hand just didn't seem like he tried, and wtf was that topic?

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Vote - Vern

Vern got this easy, do I even have to explain ?

flow/content/structure/rhyme schemes... shall i continue?

SMURP's just seemed like a wasted verse about nothing.

sorry duke, but vern got this easily .....
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Old 05-15-2004, 09:41 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Vern takes this... Came better than I expected, I assumed he'd give Smurp 10 lines but no... Vern takes no Prisoners no matter how pitiful...
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Old 05-15-2004, 10:14 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Vern could of posted only his first 4 lines and still won this. I am sorry SMURP..credit for trying but that verse was just boring and I didn't even read it all. Vern takes this with ease...just better all around
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Old 05-17-2004, 12:03 AM   #16 (permalink)
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damn SMURP... it just looks like you didn't really try because you didn't think you would advance anyway... I feel it though.. I did the same thing in my match and picked the easy topic against Talent... but anyway... that still was a coo spit

Lets do the breakdown.. I don't know why this is still open when all the other battles are closed...


Vern...
nice vocab, word useage and flow was on point with the topic nicely
Props for that because I didn't think it was an easy topic to come with... hope you don't have much personal experience in that topic cuz it was grasped nicely

SMURP...
topic was not choice man
You my folks and I respect your talent, but you didn't leave yourself much to work with by picking that topic
Still, you had some nice flows with the topic, repped the crew one time... always nice to see... not much vocab though

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Old 05-17-2004, 08:33 AM   #17 (permalink)
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yeah this shit was done kind of quick and it wasn't any effort put into it
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I didnt put any effort in mine either....but then again, it looks like idol is a worse "keystyler" than me
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