EAST: 03- Lithix vs 14- User Name

[Vern Acular]

2004 RSTL TOURNEY


topics

Submit Tourney Topics Here

bar limit

24 bars min
48 bars max

due dates

verses due thursday 11:59 pm eastern
votes due sunday 11:59 am eastern

voting standards

anyone can vote
only broken down votes will count
you must vote on atleast 5 battles
you dont have to post links
but dont expect votes if you dont give them

misc. rules

you may not recycle verses
use only the topics provided
please only post verses, check ins, and votes
no freeposting

Good Luck

[Lithix]

Check.

[U S E R]

here

[U S E R]

i took the topic of friendship a different route...


Friendship



This boy was lovestruck, it was his first trip with love
He was almost punch drunk, whenever they’d kiss n hug
Talked til the suns up, she wasn’t just a bitch to fuck
Til she was killed by some dumbfuck, in a hit and run
Now this boy…he was desperate; lonely at most
His girl was only a ghost, but he slowly would cope..
Cus’ he was told that his hopes were great, so he’s holdin’ ‘em close
Love was only a joke, until someone came and showed him the ropes
Now theres a new girl…
See.. she was never close with her folks, she was for the most, alone
And while her mothers smoking the dope, she was in a broken home
These two were paired from the start, nothing could tear them apart
And even though her parents were hard, she was there in his heart
Cus’ they were sharing their scars; relationship would seem loving
He would dream of it; thinking of her safety even when she wasn’t
She was caught in the gleam of it, helping fight his fears
He was quite endeared by her love, she’s the type he’d like for years
But something happened…she’s been hurt, now her life is steered
And the same hand she held him with, she uses to wipe her tears
Now her lies are clear, and the time is near to give him the story
Its about 6 in the morning, she cant take it, her visions are gory
She straightens up, her face is tough but her eyes glisten with mourning
‘Your heart was in one piece, and I’m the reason it’s split into fourty’
She rolls over on the mattress, his face grew colder as he grasped it
He became bolder but he mastered the most controlling of his actions
She was hoping this was lastin’, so she told him to get past it
But the scene was slowly re-enacted, as he motioned for what happened

‘I tried to dream of a sentence, to explain the scene that I’ve mentioned
she had you all to herself, my thoughts turned to meanings of vengeance
My actions were slowly plotted out, and my greed was the essence
Now I’m seeing my message…I took a life out of my need for attention’


A single tear would frost his eye, he seemed lost in time
She continued to talk in rhymes, of her plot defined…
But the boy wasn’t taught to cry, over thoughtless crimes
In the end…a single thought is all that crossed his mind…

‘Love and Friendship go hand in hand, its enchanting but its a fact...
the other two arms have one goal...their stabbin you in the back’

[Mac Flow]

nice

*awaits Lithix*

[U S E R]

if u noshow im gonna hunt you down and kill you

[Innovative]

wow...

Lithix no showed...

wierd...

I guess whenever our home forum gets up n runnin Lithix'll be able to concentrate on the Trial of Tears 2 Tourney...