EAST: 05- Dmetrius vs 12- MisskeydaQueen

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Old 05-09-2004, 11:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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EAST: 05- Dmetrius vs 12- MisskeydaQueen

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... allow me to re introduce myself ... my name is d
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Your watching the most beautiful sunset that you, yourself have witnessed. Write about the sunset and what goes through your mind.


and

Your friends blind, describe something horrible, beautiful, etc. to him/her.

How do I even began to explain to you
Things that you never knew
Views you’ve never shared
Colors of which you never cared
Sights you’ve adapted without
Because sight you were never allowed
How can I justify in words
Things you’ve never seen and only heard
I suppose…
If you could open your mind
You can do your best to find
The emotion that spills from me
Hopefully that will help you see
This moment before you and I
This orange and golden sunrise
I know the words mean nothing
But I’ll try to elaborate on some things
Try to….
Remember how it felt when
You received your first kiss then
He held you in his arms and
He told you he loved you over and over again
Remember how it felt to hear
The sound of your favorite song in your ear
To feel that baseline against your chest
Melodies that can put the untamed to rest
Or when….
We used to play with rocks in the brook
You used to listen to the water as I would look
I would tell you where to step to keep you safe
Until you reached the other side of the lake
We used to steal candy and makeup from the store
They would never suspect who they felt sorry for
We’d have pockets full of gum and blow pops
They used to think we were innocent but we were not
This sunrise is like ,those things, to put it mildly
It’s like that feeling that gets your heart beating wildly
Try to imagine what that would look like in colorful ways
Maybe those memories can bring color to your days
And I know that it may not help much at all truly
But you asked me so I tried to describe this moments beauty
Occasionally the best way to help is by reminiscing on moments in time
Maybe that’s the only way I can bring illumination to your mind.




**Thought I saved the orginal and then had to key another because I didn't...this has been a crazy go round!!
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topic: it's cold
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The vivid images of the murdered Steve Berg, shrill screams heard
Young teen joining regimes with dreams of leaving this earth
We’re grieving with words, but act freely, as is free of concern
And we follow the lead of a leader, in a spot he don’t even deserve
But leave it to words to ease the feeble, blur them from seeing evil
They deceive the people; it’s self-evident to the president about the truths that WE hold
We follow the fallacied precedents, laid down by “god’s people”
And recreate modern day crusades against a supposed “axis of evil”

Still we maintain, the mind frame, and ideals that times change
What’s real is that we still maintain the same mind frame
And though the cold nights, warm days, and even the seasons changed
We still repeat mistakes, which were made in fore-days

But we hold, to what we’re told, fear but appear bold
Keep close to the hope that it was worth more than we were sold
And they told us long ago, that you reap what you sow
But we fill lands tilled with bodies, and only hope for rising souls

It would be naïve to believe, the hope of an American dream
When so many American minds are now buried over seas
From an entity to a memory, to parents crying and grimacing
We care but we don’t do a thing, except stare at the images vividly
We seek justice for those leaving, which leave us just grieving
But see the truth is for every dawn there will always be an evening
The clocks’ tick turns to screaming, Mr. bush your night grows closer
It’s true these days are heated, but the world is getting colder
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Old 05-15-2004, 10:31 AM   #6 (permalink)
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First off...your piece was nice. I enjoyed it. Describing the events to the blind. Of a sort of reminiscence of time gone by. Written well and with a poetic touch. Iono how you inteded the flow to be but to me I picked up a tone of a more spoken word type piece. Sittin in a Open Mic Club...on stage...reading your work as music plays in the background. I got that feel from it. Good job on combining the two topics as well. Nice piece.

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Enjoyed. Focusing on how the world itself is a cold place to be at times and how cold it is inside some peoples hearts. Nice touch. You wrote your piece good and your description was done well. I must say your 3rd Stanza is what really made this piece stand out in my opinion. Job well done here and I think you did a good job with the topic.


This was a pretty close match in my opinion but I was feeling DM a little more. I just enjoyed the aspect he took on the Topic chosen...while pieces like this have been done several time I just enjoyed the sort of message it put out. MISS did a good job as well I must say I enjoyed the tone put off by the piece. Great job by both but I was feeling DM a little more.

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Old 05-16-2004, 02:30 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 05-16-2004, 02:52 PM   #8 (permalink)
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since this vote only got one vote...d still wins but misskey moves on as well look for your match in the south bracket
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Old 05-16-2004, 03:11 PM   #9 (permalink)
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thanks verny ... i aint think that shit was a fair win ... and i dont like pulling bitch moves ... maybce cuz imma thug .. lol
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