55 Mad Poet vs 56 MC Quoteable

[Insanevillian]

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[MC Quotable]

I'ma be here. Good luck.

[MC Quotable]

Topic: Girlfriend says she pregnant


I remember High School days/
Rules I didn’t obey/
Football games I played/
When college was on it’s way/
Gettin’ drunk at night/
Never seein’ any A’s/
Tryin’ to get out/
Dyin’ to pass 12th grade/

Gotta get outta this small town/
Was all I could think/
Gonna play ball in the fall /
At a University/
My parents boy /
Gonna have a degree/
I’ll be outta this bitch/
In 32 more weeks/

Life was flyin’ by/
Homework, practice, and stuff/
I really couldn’t find time/
To party too much/
Football season ended/
Decided to have a night of fun/
Went to a party/
Got drunk and “fell in love”/
Seen a fine lil’ cutie/
Did somethin’ really dumb/
I didn’t wear a rubber/
But still blew it in this slut/
Four weeks later/
She sayin’ she knocked up/
Went to the doctor/
Had blood tests done/
Said it was my baby/
Said it was MY SON/

Livin’ life a lil’ faster/
Then I shoulda been livin’/
Moms’ baby boy/
Had to make some decisions/
Should we abort this child/
Or except the gift Gods’ given/
I’m trapped in this town/
Locked in my own prison/
Graduated from school/
Got outta that town/
Support my wife and kid/
I’m in the Army now/
No more Football/
My parents ain’t too proud/
They wasn’t at my wedding/
When I said my vows/
Us against the world/
Me, my kid, and my spouse

[Madpoet]

Hey i may not need it but I gotta get my stomach scoped tommorrow(Sticking a tube down my throat with a tiny camera at the end) is it ok for a 24 hour extension...like I said I may not need it depending on how I feel...Ive not felt so good these past 2 days?

Coo?

[Insanevillian]

Im sorry.. U ••••• write it tonight then...

There is no such thing called Extentions in this league...

[Madpoet]

Keyin....

[Madpoet]

You are lucifer...Explain the fall and your feelings


Revelations 1:17
And when I saw him, I fell at his feet as one dead. And he laid his right hand upon me, saying,

Fear not; I am the first and the last

MaDPoET:

I have incited a war to end all; I will watch every friend fall
Flyin tall; my wings sprawl as I scream a battle call
I wont ever concede to HIM; I'd rather bleed then let them succeed
And as for HIS greed and HIS need..I would rather secede..
HE is blind for creating humankind; HE must be out of his mind
So now its time for a new mastermind; time for a faster rewind
To the start where I will build this from the ground up;anew
Bound up; Lucifer's rage grew; and from his mouth hate did spew
"I can take you; your through; your too pathetic -n- weak"
The morning star became sick ; thats when GOD did speak:



How art thou fallen from heaven,
O Lucifer, son of the morning!
How art thou cut down to the ground,
which didst weaken the nations!
For thou hast said in thine heart,
I will ascend into heaven,
I will exalt my throne above the stars of God.
I will ascend above the heights of the clouds,
I will be like the most High.
Isaiah 14:12



MaDpOeT:

HE rose his hand;I became the legendary ADVERSARY
Momentarily I realized this wasnt so visionary; Not so revolutionary
I fell through the earth; a new birth of brimstone hit
Alone on a throne I sit; Temper brewin ready to throw a fit
But I will have my revenge; He will see that over time
When he gives me the world; Then I will make it mine
Build an army where he cant harm me any more
Kick him and Michael out the door; Then we'll see whose declarin war
I will sit on whats his; YES THAT IS WHAT I MUST DO
I will need soliders But Iv'e learned never trust a fool
Maybe it starts with one of you; Wanna be able to rhyme like 50 and em do?
Dont think it can be true; Sit down; Let me explain it to you.....




Sorry RSTL; this may be a weak show..but Im sick...Ill put more in it next time...

[Insanevillian]

MC Quoteable.... Your rhyme scheme was different in my eyes but i caught it. I kind of enjoyed the full circle story, and the ending was relevant to what was goin on in your life. It seems like it is from the heart so i almost see it as a true story. I think it was simplistic in some ways however, and the story itself wasnt very intriguing...

Mad Poet... First off u made the Cardinal RM sin... NEVER say your shit was weak after u drop a verse, cuz then thas how people will look at it... Dont apologize, just take your L and rip someone next week... but what if u... didnt say it was weak? Someone might enjoy your shit more nah mean...? Lemme get to ur verse... The imagery was there, and the flow was very apparent... The way u set your shit up... AT FIRST i thought u had this in the bag... But your second verse was alot of the same shit in the first verse... and u really didnt develope Lucifer from your own perspective... Basically i was reading shit ive already heard till possibly the last 6 lines... U had the right beginning, now u need to close it up a little better...

Vote MC Quoteable... He told a story in my opinion that was more full circle and even tho simplistic, it was complete, with a heartwarming ending...

[Cereal_Killer]

mc

the lay out you've got with ///'s is how i use to do it until i found out that most people like it sraight without them it flows nicer because they dont have to stop point blank at every / but i enjoyed the read anyway, good story but together well, simple but compressed.

6/10

mad

for keying it up you did pretty well i thought but like iv said you cant let people know you think yours is shit or even if it is a key because straight away people know you didnt spend the time. Still the story was choppy i felt and bit light but i know if you had the time you could of brought this alot closer. so good luck next round anyways.

4.5/10

[5 Starre]

ima come right out n say MC i hate when rhymes are written wit that format. throws me off. it doesnt flow as good as it could. however flow was the only thing that needed work in your peice i think. the overall story was strait. shit was put together nicley. good job.

Mad your shit was strait to. i didnt really feel it though. the flow was semi there. some parts were it hink broken up too much. overall not a bad job but some parts could have been better.
good shit to both
stay up

vote - MC

31 5 Starre 5-4 vs 32 Cereal Killer 4-4
return fava

[Madpoet]

Thanks guys..I basically Keyed in so I could respect you guys and not no show..I am really sick...And your advice is appreciated...So next week I say..This was fun though

[Chase Murda]

A Quiet Day I M Enjoying Fishing Im Taking A Break From The Rap Site....... Wait A Minute Got Aphone Call ........hello Hello Oh Its The Mods On Rapmusic.com Whut Up...say What You Want Me To Vote..your Kiddin Me Hold Hold On I Think I Got One Its A Big Big One Reeling It In Wow Its The Biggest Hater Ive Caught Yet....

Mc ..your I Liked Your Quick Breakdown It Was Simple And Straight To The Point You Brought Back The Old School Flavor With That One I Dont Think Anyone Else Could Beat That On That Particular Topic Good Hit Keep Banging..ya Heard

Madpoet You Really Came Off On Your At The End Thats What Really Got Your Story Blazin And I Liked This Line (but I Will Have My Revenge He Will See That Overtime,when He Gives Me The World I Will Make It Mine Good Shit But........
It Wasnt As Good As Mcs Sorry Dude

Vote................mc

BYE HATERS............

[LongStory Short]

are u serious? MC wrote one of the simplest stories I have ever seen. it was like reading an explicit 1st graders book. yea the story went together well.. but who couldn’t have wrote that? I did relate to some of the things said in the beginning though.

madpoet, although might have said his shit was weak.. put a lot more time in his verse then im sure his oponent did, an he can call it weak or whatever he wanna call it.. but whatever it was, it was a much better showing then what MC had to offer.

vote madpoet.

[Shiva]

I agree with LongStory Short...yes, Quotable's story was built up and ended smoothly...but he had too many weak points...for example...flow...rhymes...imagery.. ..all too simple...I mean I'm sure he took his time and he did do the story aight in itself...but come on!...anyway, Madpoet won in every aspect I mentioned above...and I honestly can't see why so many people voted against him...don't make any sense...

Vote: Madpoet

[Madpoet]

4-2..Good positive feedback..Im feelin this RSTL....

[Lokternal]

MC Quotable- Your story didnt really interest me, and the format was killing me. It was straight forward, but still I'd like to see more depth in the future. You have a basic story down, but I dont like the short bars at all.

Mad Poet- Found this verse to be much more interesting. I was really into the story, and it was much more in-depth. The vision was there, and I thought you delivered it. I do think you can do better, but this week I dont see how people voted against you.

Vote= Mad Poet; better story, more in-depth, much more interesting

[JuJewBea]

mc it was was to simplistic it felt like you diden't even try to win this story was ok but other than tha it was lees than average......

madpoet it was an ok vs i liked the flow coulda used a lil content work it was an overall good vs


vote=madpoet the lesser of 2 evil's peaz good luck.........

[Art Writaz]

mc: i wasnt feelin ur style or rhyme scheme at all.. it was too simple, as stated before.. the story lacked so much.. the imagery was there, but there was nothin interestin or eye-catchin in it.. it sounded like a rock bands song or somethin, just had no depth to it.. it was just a basic "u get what u see" verse, and there were no real twists to it..

madpoet: nice story.. came with a much more complex verse.. better vocab and style in my opinion.. better imagery, better content.. just overall better

vote = madpoet

[LDogg The King]

Over No Shows

[Stiffaz]

MC Qouteable:

hmm..externally your verse looks like poetry but for real it's not..anyways nice story..i really liked it..very interesting with unexpected twist (for me)..maybe vocab was too simple imho...

Mad Poet:

too short verse..flow seemed ok, rather very good but story was kinda boring for me..there was emotional feelin...vocab and imagery were a bit stronger than MC's..

but i gotta go with MC Qouteable

very close battle