25- In Awe (3-0) vs 26- 5 Starre (5-3)

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[5 Starre]

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[in awe]

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21- Muti (11-8) vs 22- Eyedill (3-0)

[5 Starre]

I lye still ina box wit da light black..
My worlds been stopped, wish i could bring my life back..
what was i thinkin blasted off just one fourty..
fuck it, cant do nuttin now but here my story..

The love was deep, suttin you only see in fantasies..
with every hug i recieved I know somebody cared for me..
In this life of hell had me feelin like a failure..
she helped me battle through makin me feel sure..
this it would all be right, but it all ended that freadful night..
there was more to her than she let meet my sight..
her own life was a living hell with so many problems for herself..
knowin how she felt i still couldnt do shit to help..
came home late from work on February the eleventh..
she wasnt home but saw the envelope dat read one eight seven..
sign of heaven i ripped it open n sank at what I read..

(her Note)
To whoever reads this note or care what it says..
i cant take this life its like a downward spiral..
Nothing can help me now, Ive even tried the bible..
I hope you know i love you ry, this wasnt you..
just know ill see you from the sky with you while ur blue..
all this weight on my shoulders i cant hold, im just a girl..
so this is my last note, my problems are solved, goodbye cruel world..


In the corner she wrote the time as half past seven..
Im gunna find her, I leaped up and heard the shot...MEAGHAN!!..
Oh my God I hope not too late busting through the bard door..
Blood on the walls and my babies body on the floor..
grasped her in my arms as i felt her life fade..
its my fault she gone, i was late and she coulda been saved..
How could you do this? Now my life is crushed..
I picked up the gun and felt a sudden rush..
Headed back into the house and grabbed a pad and pen..
prepared to write my last words to my closest to kin..

(my note)
I cant take this fuckin shit no more, my life finally collapsed..
It all piled up n my will to live broken, Ive snapped..
Im grasping this gun now, the desicion is made..
By the time anyone reads this itll be too late for me to b saved..
If anyone gives a fuck that im gone, i hope you know i love you..
and for those who dont care all i gotta say is FUCK YOU..
well im gunna go now and make everything alright..
whoever reads this note, im dead now so have a nice life..


I propped the pen and raised the 9 to my head n took a breath..
and with one shot i filled my brain full of lead til death..

This is what happens when people dont help and push you aside..
It leads to death like tonight wit this double suicide..

[in awe]

"A crazier life then a dime"

Welcome to Heaven, I am Paul.
What is your name?
25 cents
When and where were you born?
The Denver Mint on January 17, 1938
Tell me of your life?

well at first...........
I moved from place to place and never had a home to call my own
if not for the dimes and nickels I would have been so alone
but then one great day a couple of kids left me reborn
with the assistance of a train I then became deformed
from that point on I was a lucky coin, different from the rest
I got into the hands of a thirty year old man who seemed depressed
a good guy he would try to love his kids and wife
but they didn't make him happy and neither did I
we would go on long drives around schools for fun
he'd say hi to the kids, but then one day he took one
a little girl maybe 14 sat screaming in the back
I was beginning to think maybe my friends mind was off track
he raped and killed her, why did I have to be there
he buried her corpse in the woods while I sat scared

oh my

don't worry he was caught the world had a little order
so during the case he spent all his money down to his last quarter

that must have been tough for you
yes it was, life was a blur for a while
so what's the next thing you remember?

well......
the next thing I remember is Germany at a bad time to be
dog tags a picture of family and a young soldier started with me
but during these times I grew to share my owners pockets
with anything from ammo to my owners friends eye sockets
and thru time my owners weak mind began to change
but being around death and destruction will always feel strange
so on a horrible day he got shot, crying is all you heard
he passed me to his best friend along with his final words
that guy took me to the city and he wasn't much of a looker
so it didn't take long for me to be in the hands of a hooker

you've seen so much evil
thats not it, my last days we're the worst, listen

The lady had plenty of customers to make up for having no father
but she never had her clothes on, so I was never on her
but then one of those customers choked her to her death
how could she be considered evil if he was such a bigger threat
the man robbed her and took me with him for the ride
he was a soldier so he went back to war, I just wanted to hide
as this man continued the fight for Americas freedom
I knew God was gonna kill him, he had enough reasons
so it wasn't long before he triggered a land mine an killed us both
so how ironic that I'm money but I was still broke

[5 Starre]

good job postin after the deadline dawg.


rise

[in awe]

I was trying to post just before 11 but I was having all kiinds of trouble. but I dont think its a big enough deal for you to cry about it.

[Mobbs]

i would have voted for in - awe.... too bad buddy... L8 posts dont count I think...

vote - 5 starre cuz i havta

[Muti]

5 starre

nice job....good detail..flowed nicely..your imagery painted a nice picture... the ending was pretty much what i thought but beside that nice job...

In Awe

Your story was very nice.... flowed nicely and detail in GREAT imagery...I was picturing the quarter going from person to person.. and me actually use to be in the military so I was liek HA HA I like the way u flipp the topic....

and since the MODS have not closed this i suppose its still open for votes...and mine goes to

In Awe......... story was just better told and the ending was pretty nice... Props

[5 Starre]

1 - 1
uppin

i wasnt crying. i really dont care. its not ur fault the mods were slaking at 1am
lol

[in awe]

it should be 2-0 or 1-0, cuz since its counting mobbs vote would be for me


but I don't care to much about that so goodluck 5 starre

[Stiffaz]

very close battle..i really liked it..

5 Starre:

DAMN man..dopest lines:

"If anyone gives a fuck that im gone, i hope you know i love you..
and for those who dont care all i gotta say is FUCK YOU..
well im gunna go now and make everything alright..
whoever reads this note, im dead now so have a nice life.."

this was very strong ending
your verse doesn't need mending
and it had a consistent story
it's cool, so u don't need to worry
good vocab, imagery, nice flow
and i started to appreciate my hoe


in awe:

your story also was pretty cool
but it was calm like my swimming pool
interesting idea and wit plot
just vocab and flow weren't too hot


and now ladies and gentleman my vote gooooeees to:

5 Starre

[Atheist]

I disagree with Stiffaz - to me this battle was totally one sided.

I mean, who the hell is In Awe? His verse was hot. It was so vivid that it could've been a movie. However, if you get fucked because you posted late, then that is a disadvantage, because your verse was definately hot. So unless otherwise...

I vote: In Awe.

[Surface]

i dont know anything about the late verse thing, so my vote is just straight from the verses

5 starre: that was pretty good. I definaetly felt the double suicide use of notes. It really put you there. However, I think it coulda been somewhat worded better. I cant really give an example, but it just felt like it was missing one key thing..cant really put my finger on it. Good though..keep doin this, cuz youre definaetly good man.

In Awe: At first I was like.."whaaa?"..but after reading it twice I totally got it and I like it. Ive always wanted to see someone take the role of money, and you did an outstanding job with it. And I think you won this, with that verse

vote=In Awe

Peace to both.

[5 Starre]

3 - 2 him

rise

[in awe]

elevate

[SeQueL]

vote= 5 starree


On the suicide note, your words were very powerful. Felt every feeling of angst and pain.. Flowed nicely and the imagery was good. have ta say everything was on point

in awe's was great. painted a dope vivid picture of moola passin around. liked the story.. yours was well written as well... was kinda close but iono I think 5 stars jus hit harder in terms of a message sent

[in awe]

elevate

[Harlequin]

vote-awe

5's words were nice and strong, but i just felt it lacked something the whole time. flowed nicely and imagery was nice, and this is very close but for some reason it didnt capture me entierly

awe this was dope man, nice shit. the idea was wierd but you worked on it reallt well. Imagery was nice but your flow faltered at times and dropped off. just got me more though so that y i give it to you

go vot eon my abbtle verses labour fairly (not top 20)

cheers

[5 Starre]

4 - 3
rise, dis shit is close