Strike and Cauliflower \\// Rhyme and Dust-1

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Old 01-16-2004, 04:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 01-17-2004, 08:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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lmao keepin the faith I see dependin on topic we'll own
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in you slutty bitches

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in you slutty bitches

rhyme and dust will win hands down
like 12 o clock upside down eh
yeah..next time i post there will be a verse eh

strike and me will win like a shortened version of wins
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To be naked or not to be naked


to be...

cauli
i prowl the streets at night, hood flicked over my face
i stick to the shadows and i stick to my place
in life, in the streets because its never gonna change
we've all been dealt cards only death can re-arrange
the strange tarot that i'll never hold in my hands
stolen glances at the clock, its unfolding my plans
so slowly the bad lands turn to something else
personas change untill we run for someones help
the under-runners of society running the streets
underclasses pass this message on in thunderous speech
guns bust and reach for me so im closing my eyes
i watch life pass by from my window in frozen surprise
growing despise rises in me day by day
heads glued between hands untill the pain fades away
places stay imprinted in the back of the memory
ghosts clutching at the facts like faded melodies
of the seventies, i hold my breath not singing a song
streets got me scared of attention wont be lingering lon

or not to be..

Strike

I walk around with flashy clothes talkin bout smackin hoes...
Niccas know I'm pretty nasty tho...
whip out my dick and take a piss in public...
I'm the class's hero... cause I'm crazy and these mofo's luv it
When I tell the homo teach to shove it..homey truss me they jus love it...
Give lil homes a nudgin let em know he bein noticed...
Gave this dreamin dude a punchin jus to keep this shit focussed..
I gotta own attention homey cause on the top its lonely homey...
But sometimes I kinda feel that attention owns me homey..
Kinda phoney but I'd never let it bother me
Cause it would propably send me on a cockamany oddesy
kinda like my father be... always behind the next assignement
Never understood he was a cop I always lied he was a fireman
But anyways thats aside mi I really cant stop to be discouraged..
Its absurd kid but bitches always talkin and now I gotta hurry
Baby I cheated and you know it.. and so does everyone watchin...
I act like I feel rotten but inside I'm glad you act like you forgotten..
It keeps the peeps talkin...but this time she seemed strange kinda tipsy...
Shoulda thought about what would happen if someone so close to me..
would denie to forgive me..
But I was feelin nifty still kinda high on the moment...
Seein lil girls hopin I'd cheat with them next and throw their social life open
But the next day it seemed the mood of sex changed...
I dared to say people seemed scared to say my name...
I said hey lorraine wanna come take a position on a thesis in my lab...?
But in a nervous tone she said she was sick and feelin kinda drag...
Then she looked from light to left to check
and she walked in such a pace it almost seemed if she had fled..
I checked to see if I was dead cause now I was gettin nervous...
wondered did they pull this prank on purpose..or a faint attempt to hurt mi
But nervous turned to panic when I found why I was bein banished...
Even in breathin I hardly managed like a stroke that wouldnt get to passin..
It was said I liked the homosex and I asked girls to put it in their ass quick...
Turned around and saw my lil man's laughin
asked if the puss didnt stink enuff Yo I was feelin tragic...
The week was filled with homojokes untill I cried slipped and broke
I told this nerd yo you can have my jack if come home and be my bro...
But when even he was shitty tho I became a slave whipped...
Crawling back to a slave ship opened my locker became plain sick
a thousand notes fell out sayin now you know how it feels to be naked..
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for the idiots, were doing the hell topic, take over satan blah blah


rhyme.
i've been helping my boss to get his applause.....
just as the raiser of hell is beggining to loss
buckles get fastened, mind crushing my carcus
when my thoughts walk through, the puddles of darkness
but cousin the fact is, i just desire his attire
not seen as my pay-back, but it's fire with fire....
the damned raising upon their battle stations
will you turn against satan, with all arms blazing...
plans facing, a set back or 2.... but a blast from me
delivered into the hand's of evil or the sanity....
thou shall not kill, thou shall not steal.....?
thou shall at will, & thou shall not fear.....
plan's of the ruthless^, kept at hand of useless
with too much power & a back turned from goodness
will dethrone his greatness to clone his status
it's prone to show up & roam the faces....
of heaven and earth, wherever it dwell's....
i'll be fighting my way, to own the heavens my self
deliver thy hell, into fans of attack mode
hand's streaming from the sleeves of a dirty black robe....
getting ever so close, i'd like the feeling forever
but what would it take to strike a deal with the devil?
voices i hear, are on my level quickly turning to dust...
love for myself, or just something i lust.....
but punishment does, break u & want my throne.....
when the voices im hearing are that of my own
fire in my dome, the evil and scent in my tone....
i myself wish to over power, the hell that's my home
i can tell my bones are shivering & yet u will differ
but differ u may, becuz i AM ur god, yes lucifer........
so whoever decides to test these feelings will see.
that all i have to do, ...is defeat the demon in me.....


Dust-1

''They sacrificed to demons, not to God, to gods they did not know, to new gods, new arrivals that your fathers did not fear." (Deut.32:17)

whispers in ancient languages, have me thinkin i'm the son of sam
but then my spirit whisked me to Canaan, to understand,
such tongues do not come from man
communicating with Marduk of Babylon beside the lake, I thought
why be trapped on earth, and not be a leader to these pagan gods?
so i demanded to meet, all the demons in a field by Thebes
"the dead and the spirits, murderers and thives, kneel for me
for i am your ruler, never am I threatened or weak
i ask you to follow me, not based on personality, weapons or speech
not because its been forecasted by Sephron the mede
but because it was something that was destined to be"
to Galilee i traveled to meet Beezlebub, to re-do whats told
Matthew 12:22-32
I have to defeat the lord of the demons and assume his role
upon my sword he lay defeated, his aura limpid and red
the Pharisees watched ever carefully, "it is written again"
so command of the demons i took and in the valley we stooped
on through Ekron and cities which remain unspoken, I rallied the troops
with power comes evil and all my components are sick and deranged
absolute power and strength runs through every inch of my frame
such supernatural force exiting myself, its hard to bind my mouth
leading to a great battle, I find myself
listening to a general of mine, Glasya-Labolas spoke a line out loud
"If our leader is to overtake Satan, our the time is now!"

Matthew: 12 33-37

"How can you being evil speak good things? For out of the abundance of the heart the mouth speaks. A good man out of the good treasure of his heart brings forth good things, and an evil man out of the evil treasure evil things."

so on and on we marched, of course, my line is first
to another galaxy arrived the cursed, hell isn't just confined to earth
the battle began with Satans army, prepared to stand to death
who knows what will happen, but if i win guess what planets next?
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vote- dust and rhyme

I think both verses together were more solidly good than strike and caulis. All four verses were good, and I hate to vote against the guy who had the "we've all been dealt cards only death can re-arrange" line, but I just felt dust and rhyme put forth more interesting ideas and stories. The quotes were fucking sick.
 
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cali and strike...

nice verses from both...i liked cali's verse especially flow was nice and the structure just had me like whoa...strike had a lot of content just it was a bit stretched for my liking and took away from the affect, all in all...you 2 had a nice piece...props to ya

rhyme and dust...

rhyme's scheme is nasty...i liked the flow and your content was clean...your verse fit the topic nice while being complimented by dust-1's second opinion type style...the quotes were good...and brought not much of a suprise to it all...but enough to set off the reders eye...you 2 work welll together...rather you thought of this in unison or not...it worked

^and that's why DUST & RHYME get my vote...they just came better as a team...cauli and strike had nice verses...but there styles clash too much for me...good showing by all of you though
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vote- rhyme & dust

break down-

cauli- good verse, well written, nice scheme, excellent flow, nice structure.. overall a solid verse

strike- old school style.. wasnt really feeling it.. kinda jumpy and didnt really flow, but conceptually & rhythmically.. scheme was simple.. seemed kinda childish to me

rhyme- sick scheme.. flow was dope.. structure was straight.. the best verse by far

dust- nice verse.. similar to my old style.. so i was definately feeling it man.. nice scheme.. great thought put behind your verse.. flowed pretty well.. could work on it, but it was straight

overall rhyme & dust had the better team

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