16. DAM & Amoniak VS 7. TeKneeK & Mac Detroit

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Old 01-06-2004, 02:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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16. DAM & Amoniak VS 7. TeKneeK & Mac Detroit


THE RSTL TAG TEAM TOURNEY



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" Im the sickest emcee with my partner while we teamin'
Leavin those opposin us left with face full of semen'
Im relievin' yall like pitchers in the 9th before I finish
__(Tag team partner)____ and ___(Your name)___, the first to leave you diminished! "


(Drop a rhyme by both of you about how ill your tag team is and spit metaphors and hot similies about your top notch status and why u the illest!)



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(verses) THURSDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN
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* "Rapper 1" and "Rapper 2" EACH must post their own 6 votes on their thread or failure to do so will result in 1/2 vote takeaway in their own match per URL not posted! ---- IN ANOTHER WORDS: 12 URLS must be shown or you lose 1/2 for each that isnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

* Crew votes are counted as 1/2 vote!!!

* Ryding and Paybacks are being monitored!


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Old 01-09-2004, 01:04 AM   #5 (permalink)
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They can’t break us down when we the first human conundrums
Then some fuck wit TeKneeKs but we just let our tracks run on um
Blessing the masses needing a taste n’ so we infecting these bastids
Had a believe in fate cuz we was set to win like wrestling matches
One second we packin, leave otha teams wishin they aint have a bar
We aint known here? We bound to pop up like the RM battle card
Credit is due n’ aint no one ever at our level n’ these facts impressive
Last ranked? We pullin up to the top like bitches in strapless dresses
Aint heard of ya bull but yall will feel the wrath of the murderers pull
Coming to peep us n’ shit we the only reason the fuckin server is full
Take a ‘real road’ n’ still none of which are frail from our camps draft
Show what ya fam lacks, switch the rails n’ no one touchin AM’s tracks
We versatile n’ still when it comes to DAM they aint a harder opponent
Now its borin cuz like communist ball games theres no bother in scorin
Fuck practicality, can catch sensations cuz we out n’ now throwin logic
No stolen objects; think we made the thread the way we own this topic
Stay smackin spleens n’ crush others who mean well packed with dreams
Keep up appearances cuz even wit dating sites yall cant match our team
We Throw factions, the soul assasins so persistent n’ wont fold attackin
We “lazy asses” but in this tourney we be the ones seein the most action
Yall got plenty peers who frown cuz we be tha ones sending fear all down
Ahead of our time, spit punches that’ll only be played 20 years from now
Causes harm cuz we the whole fuckin storm while yall just a few droplets
We secularists n’ don’t take kindly to converts so don’t think to cross us
Stopped us? Think again, trust when we spit yall will feel our speech hurts
Bleed words n’ watch us on top of this tourney like the rap music t-shirts

DAM
My team packs attacks..Makin pussies bleed without maxi pads..
If they say you better..You've been takin for a ride like taxi cabs..
Cuz half these wacks..Thinkin they be hard, but soft in all corners..
& we got game..Our punches come off guard like small forwards..
& off shoulders..Til you got dead, we make sure our rhyme is tight..
No need for hot techs..We Clock heads, makin sure the time is right..
Behind the mic..If bein wack was frightening then we barely afriad..
& we keepin flash like lightnin..My team ill, like AIDS charity games..
Who dares to be brave..We write, makin kids take an L or last place..
Cuz in fights, we high maintenance like dave chappelle in half baked..
A fast pace..No equal in skills, we drop fire, others cant flare a match..
Whatever people we kill..Fuck punchlines, we spit punch paragraphs..
We dare the wacks..To come test, the ill ghore that'll drop ya heart..
& punch chests..We so ill, fuck the billboard, we on top of doctor charts..
The hotness starts..We bring the sacred rhymes, stop wacks in a flow..
The intelligence reigns..Cuz even our state of mind gotta capital yo..
A smack to ya domes..You mindless dummies, i gotta line in the plan..
Fa real, Cuz if time is money..Then we got alot of time on our hands..
Amo' shines wit the DAM..While the spotlight is blazin ya sockets..
We makin the hot shyt..Wit Plane skills, like we made for the cockpit..
Sacred wit topics..We spit wit hard heat, no team can split the army..
We quick to harm thee..Wit a skill so dope, we can remix a heart beat..
Like hoes in college, we the head of the class..We'll attack you wit a free..
Or written, even cypha..Cuz are rhymes be comin achoo like a sneeze..
We takin the title..Even tho dickryders on RM are forever about..
But FUCK IT..Cuz we walked in the tourney,
And our luck'll NEVER RUN OUT..
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From coast to coast, we toast and boast the most...
Ferocious hosts...better than most ya folks...
So focus hope, follow or whether ya do ...
We're still conceited bastards god crafted better than you...
Hopes of fame fade in presence, it's tragic at best...
So why the fuck yall tryna box with a mac and a Tek...
Never careful of opinions, apathetic as i am...
But if you dare asked for weakness...I'd prolly give a DAM...
Measure essence in kilograms, but no value is greater...
Haters turn congradulaters from the scent of my flavor...
Greater than greek gods, Zues aint even stopping this...
Greater than Gatsby, Ego bigger than acropolis...
Never hailed for sloppy wits, I hold a passion for perfection...
Checking my mental weapon will always pass inspection...
Forgetting that I'm THE ONE? Killed for that rotten sin...
I'm the Master...
The slave...
And the entire cotton gin!



TEKNEEK

Yo!

I spread an epidemic deadlier than SARS infects your lung sacs
With cells mutated swift as I deliver words that tongue tap
The alloted time reacted from the pain I delivered
Delayed a second after the blow that I inflicted
You claims to be prolific... but your rhyme style's disgustin'
I swear there's no discussion when my fist emits percussions
That severs your vertebrae once it crackles in half
With a sound detrimental like a sonic boom aircraft
I laugh... cus I realize the worst that you come
Wasn't barely any noise to make the pound of a drum
It was done before these words were considered thoughts to type out
Im your 10 P-M curfew for teens... I turned your lights out
So right from the beginnin' --- your fate was predestined
The moment half your feces overflowed in your intestines
Ive infested your blood cells with a dose of clear liquid
That contained the Aids infection from patients that were sick wit
I mixed with nitroglycerin to show when Im reactive
These incidents repeat in tragic stories retroactive
The apocalyptic wordsworth intended to embrace you
Will show the love held a step beyond what life forsakes you!!!!!





None of u can step ta this!!!!!!!
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Old 01-09-2004, 05:23 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Amoniak.. never peeped u before i think but DAMN, ur whole verse was a fuckin quotable except for this...
Yall got plenty peers who frown cuz we be tha ones sending fear all down
Ahead of our time, spit punches that’ll only be played 20 years from now
which wasnt bad, but everything else was straight hot..
..dam..
same with you..
mac detroit, same with u..
tek.. holy shit same with u, ur shit in this was fuckin different, it was raw like an early rakim verse.. holy shit..
overall this was really fuckin close.. very close.. all 4 verses were hot, but i feel tek and mac took it, tek's verse edged it out for me... shit was just ill. god damn.. this is the best match of the first round so far, definately.. much props to all four..
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this was a fucking nice battle, amoniak dropped saome tight shit which ive never seen from him before and DAm came ill
tek came fucking ill...nice flow and vocab was nice
but mac detroit......holy crap....i fucking loved that verse

Hopes of fame fade in presence, it's tragic at best...
So why the fuck yall tryna box with a mac and a Tek...
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hot line

Forgetting that I'm THE ONE? Killed for that rotten sin...
I'm the Master...
The slave...
And the entire cotton gin!
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that closer in my mind, is fucking ill....loved that

so my vote goes to mac and tek...all dropped nice but i think tek and mac just clear overuled them

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vote tek an mac

more content, better flow, less words

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I got amon and dam taking this.. they had more quantity.. which usually counts against you.. but they maintained a high level of quality.. a couple of played lines.. but all in all.. a great flow with great originality..

mac and tek had a little brainier flow.. and actually would have taken this if they'd built just a slightly better case in thier verse.. but in points.. it seemed to meander.. however... damn mac.. that cotton gin line WAS the bomb.. definitely quotable of the match..

but just not enough..

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2-1 them. Headless vote should not count for obvious reasons.

The topic was saying how your team was ill, WASNT IT?
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vote should not count? bitch please

u guys wrote novels, without flow or content. ur lucky i even read both ya shits. terrible

like i said, mac and tek had some quotbable lines, WITH FLOW< MINUS 8,000,000 extra words which makes better verses

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This looks to be the match of the round so far..whoa, some really hot verses here.

Amoniak, that was a real nice..had some pretty good quotables in there such as..

Take a ‘real road’ n’ still none of which are frail from our camps draft
Show what ya fam lacks, switch the rails n’ no one touchin AM’s tracks

^I found that quite nice.

Stopped us? Think again, trust when we spit yall will feel our speech hurts
Bleed words n’ watch us on top of this tourney like the rap music t-shirts

^Hot closer..nicely down

Good flow, formation of punches and wordplay was ill also.

Dam, you had some on and off lines, but still the verse was nice. One line I didnt like though..

Like hoes in college, we the head of the class..We'll attack you wit a free..
Or written, even cypha..Cuz are rhymes be comin achoo like a sneeze..

^You serious? Nah man, not feeling that..

But still you had some coo lines like..

We dare the wacks..To come test, the ill ghore that'll drop ya heart..
& punch chests..We so ill, fuck the billboard, we on top of doctor charts..
The hotness starts..We bring the sacred rhymes, stop wacks in a flow..
The intelligence reigns..Cuz even our state of mind gotta capital yo..

^Nice part right here..

Yet the AIDS line and the "flash like lightning"..Meh, didnt really peak my interest. Flow was nice and so was wordplay also, punches could have been a tad better

Now Mac & Tek..Mac your whole verse reminded me of something Lyrics Born would write, the flow & word choice to have it like that made it seem like something of his, very nicely done.

Measure essence in kilograms, but no value is greater...
Haters turn congradulaters from the scent of my flavor...
Greater than greek gods, Zues aint even stopping this...
Greater than Gatsby, Ego bigger than acropolis...

^Good stuff..liking that part, IMO

Tek...your verse was fire, Id like to quote practically the whole verse but no point of copy/pasting the whole damn thing lol. Flow was hot, content & wordplay were good too..Some nice lines like..

The alloted time reacted from the pain I delivered
Delayed a second after the blow that I inflicted
You claims to be prolific... but your rhyme style's disgustin'
I swear there's no discussion when my fist emits percussions
That severs your vertebrae once it crackles in half
With a sound detrimental like a sonic boom aircraft

^That section was too sick bro..ill stuff

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Where stupid? Yet the topic was to tell how ill ya team was and Tekneek wrote a battle type rhyme and hardly even touched the topic?

Your stupid
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vote tek an mac..

the content in dam an his partners verse didnt match up with what little there oponents dropped.. mac an tek both came real solid.

short but sweat

vote mac an tek

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Where stupid? Yet the topic was to tell how ill ya team was and Tekneek wrote a battle type rhyme and hardly even touched the topic?

Your stupid
STOP MOTHERFUCKING SWAYING!!

There was NO fucking reason to type that shit IN THIS THREAD.

Jesus.

Yall motherfuckers can't get mad at a •••••hs opinion. Headless thought yall lost, yall challenged his opinion, he reinforced it. Jesus, WTF more do you want??? That's what a vote is, an OPINION.

For this point on, NO MORE CHIT-CHAT. You wanna argue, argue on aim, or in hookups. I'm tired f this shit.

5-1 Headless shit counts.
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