15. Pinnacle & Rapter2k VS 4. Mac Flow & Insanity

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Old 01-06-2004, 02:01 AM   #1 (permalink)
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15. Pinnacle & Rapter2k VS 4. Mac Flow & Insanity


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YOUR TOPIC THIS WEEK:


" Im the sickest emcee with my partner while we teamin'
Leavin those opposin us left with face full of semen'
Im relievin' yall like pitchers in the 9th before I finish
__(Tag team partner)____ and ___(Your name)___, the first to leave you diminished! "


(Drop a rhyme by both of you about how ill your tag team is and spit metaphors and hot similies about your top notch status and why u the illest!)



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(verses) THURSDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN
(votes) SUNDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN


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* "Rapper 1" and "Rapper 2" EACH must post their own 6 votes on their thread or failure to do so will result in 1/2 vote takeaway in their own match per URL not posted! ---- IN ANOTHER WORDS: 12 URLS must be shown or you lose 1/2 for each that isnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Old 01-06-2004, 12:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
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you know the deal pin...holla on aim

good luck inanity and mac flow.....lets make this a good 1
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word fellas....Insanity ima have to work on mine from work or sunnin...ain't got internet at home right now since I'm a broke bia and can't pay my phone bill lol.....Ima try to come up with some good ish though....sheesh, so much pressure...just got promoted to management here at work so I got so much goin through my mind right now, hopefully I can get something done by Thursday night...I'd hate to leave ya hanging
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we push rhymes like weight.....put aside our
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Mac Flow:
I guess we're underdogs in the numerical sense~
but let me show ya just where the Pinnacle is...

Top notch - we drop hot like clumsy adolescents~
Not to mention we shock spots and leave ya dawgs
convalescent~
My vocab's too immense and the intensity's Insane~
So ima drop some simplicity for Rapmusic's pea-brains~
a Midwestern team on top - we hold our own like a
fiend~
Stomping through all spots to sit on the throne as
kings~
Don't let the obesity fool ya sluts - our rhymes are
prime cut~
I'll point across at you hoes when asked "who gives a
fuck"~
Give it up - Pin and Rap have met their final
destination~
In fact - their hope's a stretch like spinal
separation~
But this ain't a diss I just think the topic's some
punk shit~
I mean it should be a topical - not about how good we
gon' rip~
But that's what you get when Omen's out the closet and
out the league~
and the whole reigns of this shit was all left for
Tekneek~
Exit left for you geeks - Mac and Ken showin ya how
Godly it gets~
See ya next round when you're both in the
audience..bitch~

Insanity:
We're from that midwest homie, just statin' the facts
Pushin' weight like Atlas to put our place on the map
So by stayin' intact, it's a fact no man can stand this
Mac and Insan sit, through all the rounds like sad draft picks
We're that sick, gellin' and fortelling your whack fate
You ain't seen a couple this sick since Ellen and Anne Hache
Known felons we plan rape, bitch emcees need to draw heat
We leave most pussies shittin' bricks before they eat the concrete
Kids be bitin' the curb, if fags wanna rap back don't try it
Cuz you know we eatin' beef... we need that Atkins diet
These rookies with mean flows, droppin’ it since confidence seems grown
We destroy your career goals worse than bookies to Pete Rose
Livin' it up as hillbilly thugs, girls always keep our cocks near
So while you're readin' Dear John, we're fuckin' in John Deere's
Ken and Mac kickin' back, at the sight of ass we enact charm
Two heavyweights runnin the country, we like to call that Phat Farm
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Rapter and Pinniacle been ruling time from now since the Jurassic
Dominating from a lofty peak, controlling minds like a fascist
The only way kats surving is through a peace treaty and a weapon ban
so we saw more white flags waving than the da klu klux klan
We catching good comments like bugs in a Venus fly trap
So big, when we log onto rapmusic.com they set out a landing map
Our rhymes draw people like Jesus at a steeple preaching sermons
We plan for y’all to have your hands in the air like Hitler and the Germans
So we have Tactical manoeuvres, Places and directions set out to shoot-ya
It nothing sexual but we know more positions than the karma sutra
With rhymes and lines we’ve been catapulted to the pinnacle of Fame
Picking up wins like awards, ruling threads to boards with cynical acclaim
Lines are discussed, then cussed dirtier than a ford’s exhaust
Illness freeze thaws minds, jumping out in the sharp of Jack Frost
A relentless cause, standing together stronger than China’s walls
Flowing these metaphors faster than water over Niagara’s falls
So ill we got the riders on our dicks tighter than thread on a bobbin
Got stunts and tricks, Dynamic Duo like Batman and Robin
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mac.. real hot verse, nice intro too..
Give it up - Pin and Rap have met their final
destination~
In fact - their hope's a stretch like spinal
separation~
But this ain't a diss I just think the topic's some
punk shit~
I mean it should be a topical - not about how good we
gon' rip~
But that's what you get when Omen's out the closet and
out the league~
and the whole reigns of this shit was all left for
Tekneek~
Exit left for you geeks - Mac and Ken showin ya how
Godly it gets~
See ya next round when you're both in the
audience..bitch~
^bangin shit.
..insanity..
We're that sick, gellin' and fortelling your whack fate
You ain't seen a couple this sick since Ellen and Anne Hache
^lmao. hot.
Known felons we plan rape, bitch emcees need to draw heat
We leave most pussies shittin' bricks before they eat the concrete
^hot
Kids be bitin' the curb, if fags wanna rap back don't try it
Cuz you know we eatin' beef... we need that Atkins diet
^lol. fat power.
These rookies with mean flows, droppin’ it since confidence seems grown
We destroy your career goals worse than bookies to Pete Rose
^lol.. hot.
Livin' it up as hillbilly thugs, girls always keep our cocks near
So while you're readin' Dear John, we're fuckin' in John Deere's
^lmao, it was at this point when i realized this verse was comedic genius..
Ken and Mac kickin' back, at the sight of ass we enact charm
Two heavyweights runnin the country, we like to call that Phat Farm
^what a closer.. lmao.. ill... this was seriously.. a VERY HOT FUCKIN VERSE..

now rapter.. left all alone, which sucks dick.. rapter dropped a kinda hot verse, nothing quotable in my opinion, but a nice verse..

vote- mac & big ken
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aight cheers for the vote man

yeh i got stood up but ill be damed if i dont go down without a fight so i posted

mac and insanity dropped nice...good on ye lads
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Breakdown

Mac Flow:

You started off pretty weak IMO,

My vocab's too immense and the intensity's Insane~
So ima drop some simplicity for Rapmusic's pea-brains~

^^Ehh, nothing all that special, could have been subbed with a nice punch

Stomping through all spots to sit on the throne as
kings~
Don't let the obesity fool ya sluts - our rhymes are
prime cut~

^Decent

n fact - their hope's a stretch like spinal
separation~
But this ain't a diss I just think the topic's some
punk shit~
I mean it should be a topical - not about how good we
gon' rip~
But that's what you get when Omen's out the closet and
out the league~

^Gotta say, Ive found this quite nice..

and the whole reigns of this shit was all left for
Tekneek~
Exit left for you geeks - Mac and Ken showin ya how
Godly it gets~
See ya next round when you're both in the
audience..bitch~

^Nice harsh ending..good stuff there

The rest of your lines were nothing that great..had some dull ones but towards the end you picked up pretty nicely. Closed the verse well.

Insanity:

Very good flow on your verse, lines were coo but still had some iffy ones.

We're from that midwest homie, just statin' the facts
Pushin' weight like Atlas to put our place on the map
So by stayin' intact, it's a fact no man can stand this
Mac and Insan sit, through all the rounds like sad draft picks
^Coo start off..draft pick line was nice

Kids be bitin' the curb, if fags wanna rap back don't try it
Cuz you know we eatin' beef... we need that Atkins diet
^Meh, Atkins line could have been left out

Livin' it up as hillbilly thugs, girls always keep our cocks near
So while you're readin' Dear John, we're fuckin' in John Deere's
Ken and Mac kickin' back, at the sight of ass we enact charm
Two heavyweights runnin the country, we like to call that Phat Farm
^I think Mac had the better closer out of you both..this one is a toss -up..not liking it that much but I dont hate it.

Other lines were decent..Pete Rose one caught my eye but nothing that special to talk about. Overall it was a coo verse, the flow, again was real nice

rapter2k:

Man I feel bad for you, sucks for real that you were left deserted by your partner. Still, you had a pretty coo verse overall.

Rapter and Pinniacle been ruling time from now since the Jurassic
Dominating from a lofty peak, controlling minds like a fascist

^Good intro to it, best out of all three

Our rhymes draw people like Jesus at a steeple preaching sermons
We plan for y’all to have your hands in the air like Hitler and the Germans

^Hmmm..liked the first line a bunch, decent for the second.

With rhymes and lines we’ve been catapulted to the pinnacle of Fame
Picking up wins like awards, ruling threads to boards with cynical acclaim

^Meh, another decent line

So ill we got the riders on our dicks tighter than thread on a bobbin
Got stunts and tricks, Dynamic Duo like Batman and Robin

^Not feeling the closer, you could have come with something more impacting, more clever. Seems just like 2 bars that should have belonged earlier in the verse

Your flow was also good, did not really have that many clever lines yet the Jesus one I honestly liked, good stuff.

Overall:

Mac & Insanity had some pretty decent verses..Mac started off slow, end quite nicely, Insanity started ill but ended with nothing special. Both still have some quotables, nice good lines..flow was also on point. Rapter2k really needed the presence of his partner but that doesnt mean his verse was bad, still made the effort to have a good showing but needed more clever lines to really pull this off himself

Vote - Mac Flow & Insanity

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mac and insanity easy...

rap had a good verse, but where was pinnacle...dont even know if the vote counts cause the bar limits weren't met...nonetheless...insanity killed it...nice flow...mac had the best part talking about the topic, omens departure, and tekneek's status on the league, very true...anyway there you have it
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good try rap.. sucks ya partna didnt show..

insanity had some good shit.. mac.. lol shit was kinda iffy.. be glad this gay topic was in the first round.

vote mac an insanity
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MAC FLOW & INsanity gets the vote based on a team vote...

Raptor that sucks to get showed up..u should have dropped all of it.. LOL

Anyway nice show up just to post and all..

but not enough....

Flow and Insanity had a better show up...punches and all and good boost
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it was obvious mac didnt try.. & still, his verse had some good lines.. nothing too good.. mostly decent.. but some good shit here & there.. insanity was nice.. scheme was hot.. & flow was straight..

rapter was aiight.. started off strong.. fell off.. nothing great about the flow or scheme or wordplay or personals or nothing either

insanity & mac take it
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