12. Primal & Desenuts VS 3. WWIII & L-Dogg

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Old 01-06-2004, 01:59 AM   #1 (permalink)
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12. Primal & Desenuts VS 3. WWIII & L-Dogg


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Minimal Line Limit: 16 lines (per partner)
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" Im the sickest emcee with my partner while we teamin'
Leavin those opposin us left with face full of semen'
Im relievin' yall like pitchers in the 9th before I finish
__(Tag team partner)____ and ___(Your name)___, the first to leave you diminished! "


(Drop a rhyme by both of you about how ill your tag team is and spit metaphors and hot similies about your top notch status and why u the illest!)



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(verses) THURSDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN
(votes) SUNDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN


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* "Rapper 1" and "Rapper 2" EACH must post their own 6 votes on their thread or failure to do so will result in 1/2 vote takeaway in their own match per URL not posted! ---- IN ANOTHER WORDS: 12 URLS must be shown or you lose 1/2 for each that isnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Old 01-06-2004, 06:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Chizeck.. hrm.. interesting topic..
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Old 01-07-2004, 11:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Primal/muti is here.. he just said there was no check in required.. so he wasn't going to check in.. he has sent me his half of the verse.. I do have a question though.. does one partner post the joint piece.. or do both have to post thier individual halves..
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chea.. for GP...I'm Primal...Desenuts messed up on the sign ups..

either way good luck fellas..
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Muti -

The illest, true team drop unbeatable verses we're rap's dream..
Bashed and beamed..battle us, its like E & J u get casked and Creamed..
UnMask a team faster then Jim Carey most cats are wanna-be scarey..
Faceing Muti and Desenuts..slicing foes guts, every situation gets hairy..
or more like a steriod boosted Barry..
Whats expected a home run every time up to bat..matter fact..
We could battle christians, they turn there cheeks & both of dem get smacked..
Shit guess we like Posters that's thumb tacked..we stay elevated..
& never hated, compared to us, other cats sound grated..
Wait..our flows are mixed between Jay's and Fitty plus we dance like ditty..
Its like cats are birthing babies..cuz ladies keep giving up there kitty's..
Chea cuz were so witty, inteligente en espanol flipping metaphors..
Desenuts shine more then new bentleys riding on twenty-fours..
Were a perfect team while others live dreams, US is a reality..
I'm a nightmare it seems cuz I kill duos like Cerial killers..mutiple fatalities..
with so much brutality leaving cats with no mentality & with Desenuts
U better give up cuz he'll leave u smoked until the end like cigarette butts..
Fuckers stay ripped up, U can Kiss Dese-nuts just ask Micheal Ringo(his Real Name)..
Our metaphoric steez leave kids done in a row like bingo..
Other rappers are more R & B then Wingo(JE singer) your so ballistic..
Cuz this dream team leave rap cats like box scores..NOTHING but statistics..

Desenuts -

When it comes to Dese and muti you must've missed it..
we split shit like bizquick..
your thin hits get dismissed quicker than bitch gifts at christmas.
I'll smoke n L.. then get viscious.. wage war on warthington the IIIrd..
cuz me and muti got more skills.. than black n decker collectors up in tha burbs..
Us loosings just absurd.. that's my word.. and none holds faster..
we keep kids at bay so damn much it's like WE both harbor masters..
You got flow? Let's see it bastards.. but really.. bitch.. why bother..
since me and muti walk on water.. and both known as fire-starters..
we more dynamic of a duo.. than the dark night.. and his apprentence..
and we could end this battle friendless if I don't tone down half this sentence..
See I'm a menace.... and muti's duty's to keep me doing damage..
I didn't plan this.. but damn it.. sombody's leavin in an am-blance..
Me n muti's on top to slam this.. like profesional wrestlers.. we got it locked..
N this stage? it's just a prop.. from which L-dog and Warth are gettin dropped..
you think it can? it just don't stop.. when we pop.. tha gats unloaded..
if you had a general idea.. even THAT just got Promoted..
We've sowed it.. Me + muti is power personified up in this place-n
more similar to energy=MD's squared on this occasion.. like einsteins old equation..
amazement's all we're facing.. cuz our foes don't hardly count..
when Dese and muti's rips tha mic.. even .org can get some clout.. ;)

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Let me introduce ourselves, we are the sleeping giants
who share the crown so get on ya knees an greet a heinous
every teams behind us, ya land fill ass can stay n stand still
I construct greatness.. ww3 okayed the plan to build
so I’m stacking up the chips while my fist fatten up ya lips
an if I get tired of ya face I’ll start cracking up the ribs
were a new age of terror, 2 shotguns, an a new gauge to spare
our mission is to the top, lets see' who stays aware
cuz we don’t play around, walk silent, don’t say a sound
chew up teams so watch others bones flake to the ground
its an alone fetish, from an ill syndrome head glitch
u find when your better then the rest no ones left to be messed with
muti, stay in ya home.. when we knock let us in
put desenuts in ya mouth have a taste of your own medicine
you bitches treated like the Iraq an afghan war so don’t be conceited
I could beat you both myself an world war three isn’t needed
we take brave hearts into the night, see if they see a noble morning
which is unlikely cuz were so fucking hot could repeat a global warming
mold the flooring into steel.. just to hold our weight
it was fun to play you but was too easy just like boulders gate
this is the soldiers way who else can paint the perfect picture
u wanted some help on this TAG shit so we spray painted ya fixtures
warren an I are the kings, there aint no other team who can tackle sets
I’m gonna end yall season faster then the corner who picked off hasslebeck





When we get on stage all you see is clappin' mixed with puffy grins
In fact, when SG hypes a crowd they turn pacifists into ruffians
Rap activists adapt to this when stuff begins, to start n spark feelin'
The hardened Arch villains will have your heart spin, cart-wheelin'
Pardon parched peelin, overtanned pimply fans crowding the floor
To catch a glimpse, and spectators in the stands shouting for more
Hands shrouding the gore, peeps getting hit, punched in the chest
Split crunched in distress as others attempt to fit bunched in the mess
Ripped, hunched an depressed, kids try to sneak inside the place
A piece of the sky will shake as the vibe peaks beside the bass
Switch it up
I drop bombs, cats SWEAR they knew it was a harrier jet
L shattered sound before they proved there was a barrier yet
scarier yet, six feet deep is the type of rut u'll be in
when we collide... just like Desenuts and your chin
get touched from within, cuz were so ill we're leaving u sickly
and we swift to get violent so we're beating u quickly
families grieving two missing, our teams so hot we both sizzle
the primal fam knew from his roasted corpses smoke signal
I'll leave muti dazed in a place of illusion
He reps so many states, he must be in a state of confusion
Ya takin a bruisin', we win soon as we drop a verse
Like ya sig, "Can u tell a story?" Yeah, but y'all need ALOT of work
Muti we're takin Dese purse n u'r chain sir, curse n we'll maim her
Cuz SG travels wit the Heat like Miami's personal trainer
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Fuckers stay ripped up, U can Kiss Dese-nuts just ask Micheal Ringo(his Real Name)..
Our metaphoric steez leave kids done in a row like bingo..
^hot line.. felt muti had a good verse, dese came ehh, aiight.. l dogg and ww3 just dropped more solid well written, well constructed verses..

vote- l & ww3.
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Multi:

The illest, true team drop unbeatable verses we're rap's dream..
Bashed and beamed..battle us, its like E & J u get casked and Creamed..

^Meh..average opener..not all that special

Wait..our flows are mixed between Jay's and Fitty plus we dance like ditty..
Its like cats are birthing babies..cuz ladies keep giving up there kitty's

^Nah man..not feeling this at all, sorry dude

Were a perfect team while others live dreams, US is a reality..
I'm a nightmare it seems cuz I kill duos like Cerial killers..mutiple fatalities..

^Not bad..Cerial Killer is with an S though

Fuckers stay ripped up, U can Kiss Dese-nuts just ask Micheal Ringo(his Real Name)..
Our metaphoric steez leave kids done in a row like bingo..
Other rappers are more R & B then Wingo(JE singer) your so ballistic..
Cuz this dream team leave rap cats like box scores..NOTHING but statistics..

^Last line could have been a nice punch if you would have formed it better..

Desenuts:

When it comes to Dese and muti you must've missed it..
we split shit like bizquick..
your thin hits get dismissed quicker than bitch gifts at christmas.

^Not a strong opener..'spit shit like bizquick'..sorry bro..not good

we more dynamic of a duo.. than the dark night.. and his apprentence..
and we could end this battle friendless if I don't tone down half this sentence..

^Decent..thats about it

We've sowed it.. Me + muti is power personified up in this place-n
more similar to energy=MD's squared on this occasion.. like einsteins old equation..
amazement's all we're facing.. cuz our foes don't hardly count..
when Dese and muti's rips tha mic.. even .org can get some clout.. ;)

^Line was a bit to stretched..ending was aight..nothing special again

For real, maybe it is the topic but I know Dese you can come with some nice punches..the same for Multi, cuz I know you good in topical also. This wasnt really up to par from what im used to seeing from both

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Let me introduce ourselves, we are the sleeping giants
who share the crown so get on ya knees an greet a heinous
every teams behind us, ya land fill ass can stay n stand still
I construct greatness.. ww3 okayed the plan to build

^Coo introduction

muti, stay in ya home.. when we knock let us in
put desenuts in ya mouth have a taste of your own medicine
you bitches treated like the Iraq an afghan war so don’t be conceited
I could beat you both myself an world war three isn’t needed

^Haha@ the second line..nice stuff there

this is the soldiers way who else can paint the perfect picture
u wanted some help on this TAG shit so we spray painted ya fixtures
warren an I are the kings, there aint no other team who can tackle sets
I’m gonna end yall season faster then the corner who picked off hasslebeck

^Alright ending, quite nice..I felt the first two bars above the last two would have been a better closer, IMO

WWIII:

When we get on stage all you see is clappin' mixed with puffy grins
In fact, when SG hypes a crowd they turn pacifists into ruffians
Rap activists adapt to this when stuff begins, to start n spark feelin'
The hardened Arch villains will have your heart spin, cart-wheelin'

^Good stuff, multies all kinds from beginning to end(and also through the rest of the verse).

Hands shrouding the gore, peeps getting hit, punched in the chest
Split crunched in distress as others attempt to fit bunched in the mess
Ripped, hunched an depressed, kids try to sneak inside the place
A piece of the sky will shake as the vibe peaks beside the bass

^Eh its coo, not feelin it that much

scarier yet, six feet deep is the type of rut u'll be in
when we collide... just like Desenuts and your chin

^Hehe, pretty coo punch

Ya takin a bruisin', we win soon as we drop a verse
Like ya sig, "Can u tell a story?" Yeah, but y'all need ALOT of work
Muti we're takin Dese purse n u'r chain sir, curse n we'll maim her
Cuz SG travels wit the Heat like Miami's personal trainer

^I personally loved the closer, tight punch.

Overall:

Ive seen better from Multi & Dese cuz SG just came alot tighter, they had some filler lines but still, not only in flow but in creativity & punches, they just hit harder with their verses

Vote - Sleeping Giants(DS & WWIII)
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this is Primal just to make sure all know.. and here are my votes
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vote = Sleeping Giants

really not much of a contest, and this topic makes for hard reading because I find myself not wanting to keep reading lol...

either way, the flow, the content, the metas, the multis, all that shit is leaning towards the Giants and they had some nice disses and personal shit involved too...which helped...

good verses, good luck to those who go on
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sleeping giants took this easily everything was just far more advanced..solid verses by both l and wwIII..good flow and some nice disses and personals..primal and dese your verses were good nothing spectacular but good nonethe less but my vote goes to sleeping giants
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sleeping giants took this w/ ease

better wordplay, punches, concepts, rhyme schemes, flow

everything was better
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i think the sleeping giants (?) tore this up. but primal & dese still had nice verses. good showing.
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vote-sleepin giants

dese and multi both came nice, good mulitis and some of the mataphors used were nice, but L dogg and WWW3 just ruled it

muti, stay in ya home.. when we knock let us in
put desenuts in ya mouth have a taste of your own medicine
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dese is usualy a good writer..and I think he did nicely...muti came pretty correct too gets better everytime I check...L and ww jus owned tho...sorry
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all emcees came pretty decent in this...

Dese/Muti- decent showing, both dropped a few decent lines but...

L/WWIII- came correct as always. Very few people can contend against this tag team and your opponents posted a valiant effort but just didn't have the wordplay, metas, and creativity to make this much of a match.

vote- WWIII and L-dogg
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