8. Headless Verseman & Sime VS 5. WrongmakesWrite & MC4Sight

TeKneeK · 01-06-2004, 01:56 AM

THE RSTL TAG TEAM TOURNEY

LINE LIMITS:

No-Show Minimums: 2 lines (per partner)
Minimal Line Limit: 16 lines (per partner)
Maximal Line Limit: 32 lines (per partner)

YOUR TOPIC THIS WEEK:

" Im the sickest emcee with my partner while we teamin'
Leavin those opposin us left with face full of semen'
Im relievin' yall like pitchers in the 9th before I finish
__(Tag team partner)____ and ___(Your name)___, the first to leave you diminished! "

(Drop a rhyme by both of you about how ill your tag team is and spit metaphors and hot similies about your top notch status and why u the illest!)

DUE DATE:

(verses) THURSDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN
(votes) SUNDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN

VOTING:

* "Rapper 1" and "Rapper 2" EACH must post their own 6 votes on their thread or failure to do so will result in 1/2 vote takeaway in their own match per URL not posted! ---- IN ANOTHER WORDS: 12 URLS must be shown or you lose 1/2 for each that isnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

* Crew votes are counted as 1/2 vote!!!

* Ryding and Paybacks are being monitored!

GOOD LUCK!

vectoreman · 01-06-2004, 01:17 PM

wow, what a gay topic. 4sight - hit the email.
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...39#post8125639
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...72#post8125672
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...92#post8125692
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...07#post8125707
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...23#post8125723
http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...30#post8125730

MC4SiGHT · 01-06-2004, 06:11 PM

aigh i got you...and yes damn that topic is terrible...

headless verseman · 01-06-2004, 11:53 PM

da fuck is this, if u want a brag track dont include an intro with a cum line, lmfao

were here i guess, wanna just agree on a non gay topic and go "off" the records...

MC4SiGHT · 01-08-2004, 09:49 PM

aigh...topic really suck..and i'm sorry man im just getting tired of the net..and life ..had shit going on lately so im just keying some quick shit...sorry, if they no show ill come better next week...

i simmer the slimmer while my partner mesmorizes
throwing eyelids out of proportion into slow demises
realize this, i torament encounters with intense thought
bashing in the weak alliterate, for whom i've sought
i've saw a many a flaw in otheres, which i yearn to fix
making phony sacrifices, nailing foes to a plastic krucifix..
who is this, two kids with creative unbalnaces..
yet together were one, take over all challenges...
4sight the optimistic with a vision to destroy...
got vector on the side, to bring big picture and deploy..
just a couples of toys, who've been bout wind up enough..
we coming alive tonight thru darkness to crush..
the nimble simple words of the other side trying to connive..
the crawl inside your minds, originality tribe..
standing in a doorway with no in and barely an out..
figuring out how to go about taking enemies down..
see the crowns sits where everythings gold we touch..
growing old with knowledge, denouncing ya crutch..
i see sime holding his head up, sides that ya headless..
ima' dread this, the mechanical lead powered sentence
using hesitance to attack, ya hips dead no hopping back
we the cripling act..as we devise and imply..
all means to defy and leave you pen and pencil dry..
so say goodbye..to ya topical life..
sight and vec...taking over...ya kids fuck plus ya wife...

sorry again...
pz

sime · 01-08-2004, 10:29 PM

you fake frat cat fucks get flipped like keg stands.
divide ya dome horizontally without the headband
you outta control...
cuz you piss in ya sleep with bedpans,
with a verse that`s the most exposed 'Whut???' since redman..
got a cat scan
y`all faggot queens
only 1/2 ya team deserves to get whored right..
outta spite i wont waste lines to tell 4sight
about the slaughter he already knows is goin down in a few more nights.
as for ya potnah...
Wrong makes Right? you so far off...you great maybe?
think again simpleton...we don`t fuck with catch phrases..
cuz if i dealt with cliche`s, this`d already be done...
'you supposed to win, 2 heads is better than 1'
but since i got a partner with no skull to his name,
i work overtime, and get double the brain.
me and HV freshest since white bread..
whitest since fresh keds,
fatalistic like deathbed...
and "i`ll fuckin...i`ll fuckin..." what meth said.
this matchup is foul, with yall faggots bad breath.
u gets no love with the racket u bringin.....game match set
we the illest with bayonettes
who`ll put two holes thru ya center like tape cassettes
see...
we spit metaphors and hot similes, top notch status,
y`all so wack...i`ll win quotin weak lines from that TeK faggot.
Write and Sight think they on the cuttin edge at the club
but got it twisted showin up with rainbow patterned batting gloves.
i ain`t have to do it...but i`m dope..and got asked to prove it..
with more sick lines than these netfucks have posts at rapmusic

headless verseman · 01-08-2004, 11:34 PM

the track cues us, to rip a topic so here's my battle cry
hit ya till ya got more slant eye's then a tek verse italicized
basically, this topic is horrid
•••••'s goldie lox, piss on ya bagel topping and shat in ya pouridge
ill slash ya jug, till it starts pouring, passing blood
2 of the wackest fucks that no one'll miss, well thats enough
get on stage and ill be booin you net nerds
couldnt score as sex in the city's music director
mom got caught fuckin the mail dude, ya she's laid
BUT ONLY NEWBIES ACTUALLY PUT MC IN THEIR SCREEN NAME
move along youngins , medic better see you
you two are bigger tools then dessert eagle's
basically im punchin ya throats
chop ya body real small then get stuffed in a boat
ride out in choppy water off the egyptian coast
the red sea, chum the water till sharks come then shit is toast
ya gone, never to be seen, missin in action
call this spouse abuse cuz u'll get hit with a passion

uh yea, terrible topic how dare that you'll prophet
cuz everyone will no show, the dough's set in ya pocket
tek, u a stupid •••••
WHY THE FUCK U POST A CUM LINE, WAS THAT ALL U COULD THINK?

if topics like this next round, i hope we lose.....and yes, this took me 5 minutes

wrongmakeswrite · 01-09-2004, 12:05 AM

we've sat back since day one, scopin the comp.
y'all get put between crosshairs.. now we scopin the comp.
it gets put to no. 1 when you team with write
when we seein you easily.. shit, we've got 4sight
bunch'a babies, lemme buy you a rattle
but where in this shitty topic does it say this is a battle?
shoot, we dont need the throne, we can see it ourself
the delivery's so nice that we conceived ourself
5th place, we already won in the title
PLUS.. we wrote verses without havin to recycle
we are creative, matter fact an example. ya chumpin
y'all take something to nothing..
we write dope verses from nothing to something
you cats are shit.. when you write, you're weaker
i've stepped on bigger shit in a baby sneakers
why be in this really? we won before it begins
so we grab the trophy now & walk away with a win
we stand tall, believe this we defeatin em
headless head so big when he spit, it leaks helium
& sime? who the fuck is this guy, droppin daily shit
or is it jowelz just knew he'd lose so made an alias
so yada yada yada we get down so vivid
that wrong & 4sight take this easily & i dont even have to fini--.

6th_plague · 01-09-2004, 05:26 AM

over n/s

Magic Johnson · 01-09-2004, 07:01 AM

4sight.. decent drop.. not like what i usta see from u though...
.. sime..
you fake frat cat fucks get flipped like keg stands.
divide ya dome horizontally without the headband
^hot
cuz if i dealt with cliche`s, this`d already be done...
'you supposed to win, 2 heads is better than 1'
^hot, went really well with what was said a lil earlier in the verse..

headless
hit ya till ya got more slant eye's then a tek verse italicized
^shit like that will never get old.. lol
but since i got a partner with no skull to his name,
i work overtime, and get double the brain.
^hot
whitest since fresh keds,
fatalistic like deathbed...
and "i`ll fuckin...i`ll fuckin..." what meth said.
^hot
we spit metaphors and hot similes, top notch status,
y`all so wack...i`ll win quotin weak lines from that TeK faggot.
^lmao
you two are bigger tools then dessert eagle's
^hot
tek, u a stupid •••••
WHY THE FUCK U POST A CUM LINE, WAS THAT ALL U COULD THINK?
^lol
..vectore..
the delivery's so nice that we conceived ourself
^nice
& sime? who the fuck is this guy, droppin daily shit
or is it jowelz just knew he'd lose so made an alias
^nice...

overall, i think headless and sime brought way more to the table...

MC4SiGHT · 01-09-2004, 08:24 AM

this turned into like the rbl with that topic...
good luck headless and sime..
i think im done with the net for awhile..
pz

vectoreman · 01-09-2004, 09:22 AM

yeah, i mean.. where does it say this was a battle really? i mean. this is stupid.
.. way to destroy the whole meaning of storytelling

Desenut§ · 01-09-2004, 10:02 PM

Well sime n headless took this on quality of writing.. but I think everybody.. myself included.. got out of hand on this topic.. we all started dissin our opponents.. instead of staying on topic.. which was to up ourselves as the best tag teams.. so based on that though.. I still think sime n headless took this.. primarily on the weight of sime's verse.. since headless stayed clowning everyone else..

vote-sime..

headless verseman · 01-10-2004, 12:07 AM

lol an u know this man

twas our strategy

Vern Acular · 01-10-2004, 11:02 AM

Head and Sime got this...

there verse was more fresh...sime had the best segment out of all of this...i wish y'all would but your team verses together...get a little organized guys...nonetheless...this wasn't a blow out though...4sight and vec had nice verses as well...just for the topic which i think is redundant to the tourney...head and sime had one up on y'alll...good shit from all though...special props to sime...your style is complex but so fluent...props

vectoreman · 01-10-2004, 12:13 PM

4sight, there's nothing i can say.. i didnt try because of that shitty topic. it ruined it for me.

LDogg The King · 01-10-2004, 12:31 PM

i got 4 sight an wmw winning this..

first off this isnt the fucking gay ass rbl.. headless wrote his whole verse like a battle verse.. didnt say shit about his tag team or himself.. only dissed like a battle verse.. there was no storytelling in this at all.

sime came ok .. but nothing over average for this topic.

both 4 sight an wmw had a team effort an u could tell. they did the topic how it was meant to be used.. not some lame battle verse.

vote 4 sight an wmw

pz

mAc Detroit · 01-10-2004, 02:19 PM

maaaan.....

i just couldn't get past "I simmer the slimmer"....

How do you EXACTLY "simmer a slimmer"??????

Anyway....

The rest of ya verse was eh+ok=aight. Ya dig. Oh, WTF is "alliterate"???

Whew. lol

Other cat. ummm....I got kinda bored by ya shit....
the first line was too audioey....if such a thing....

Headless was ok.

Sime was ok....

4site and wrong wins..........the L

01-06-2004, 01:56 AM	#1 (permalink)
TeKneeK The Heart & Soul of RMC Join Date: May 1999 Location: L.A. Californ: America's Best Posts: 26,160	8. Headless Verseman & Sime VS 5. WrongmakesWrite & MC4Sight THE RSTL TAG TEAM TOURNEY LINE LIMITS: No-Show Minimums: 2 lines (per partner) Minimal Line Limit: 16 lines (per partner) Maximal Line Limit: 32 lines (per partner) YOUR TOPIC THIS WEEK: " Im the sickest emcee with my partner while we teamin' Leavin those opposin us left with face full of semen' Im relievin' yall like pitchers in the 9th before I finish __(Tag team partner)____ and ___(Your name)___, the first to leave you diminished! " (Drop a rhyme by both of you about how ill your tag team is and spit metaphors and hot similies about your top notch status and why u the illest!) DUE DATE: (verses) THURSDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN (votes) SUNDAY 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EASTERN VOTING: * "Rapper 1" and "Rapper 2" EACH must post their own 6 votes on their thread or failure to do so will result in 1/2 vote takeaway in their own match per URL not posted! ---- IN ANOTHER WORDS: 12 URLS must be shown or you lose 1/2 for each that isnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * Crew votes are counted as 1/2 vote!!! * Ryding and Paybacks are being monitored! GOOD LUCK! __________________ .......................

01-06-2004, 01:17 PM	#2 (permalink)
vectoreman i fit in all stereotypes. Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: bentonville Posts: 6,742	wow, what a gay topic. 4sight - hit the email. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...39#post8125639 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...72#post8125672 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...92#post8125692 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...07#post8125707 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...23#post8125723 http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...30#post8125730 __________________ "I'd sell my soul, My self-esteem a dollar at a time" - Maynard. Last edited by vectoreman; 01-11-2004 at 02:09 AM.

01-06-2004, 06:11 PM	#3 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	aigh i got you...and yes damn that topic is terrible... __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE

01-06-2004, 11:53 PM	#4 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	da fuck is this, if u want a brag track dont include an intro with a cum line, lmfao were here i guess, wanna just agree on a non gay topic and go "off" the records... __________________ Most Hated

01-08-2004, 09:49 PM	#5 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	aigh...topic really suck..and i'm sorry man im just getting tired of the net..and life ..had shit going on lately so im just keying some quick shit...sorry, if they no show ill come better next week... i simmer the slimmer while my partner mesmorizes throwing eyelids out of proportion into slow demises realize this, i torament encounters with intense thought bashing in the weak alliterate, for whom i've sought i've saw a many a flaw in otheres, which i yearn to fix making phony sacrifices, nailing foes to a plastic krucifix.. who is this, two kids with creative unbalnaces.. yet together were one, take over all challenges... 4sight the optimistic with a vision to destroy... got vector on the side, to bring big picture and deploy.. just a couples of toys, who've been bout wind up enough.. we coming alive tonight thru darkness to crush.. the nimble simple words of the other side trying to connive.. the crawl inside your minds, originality tribe.. standing in a doorway with no in and barely an out.. figuring out how to go about taking enemies down.. see the crowns sits where everythings gold we touch.. growing old with knowledge, denouncing ya crutch.. i see sime holding his head up, sides that ya headless.. ima' dread this, the mechanical lead powered sentence using hesitance to attack, ya hips dead no hopping back we the cripling act..as we devise and imply.. all means to defy and leave you pen and pencil dry.. so say goodbye..to ya topical life.. sight and vec...taking over...ya kids fuck plus ya wife... sorry again... pz __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE

01-08-2004, 10:29 PM	#6 (permalink)
sime Registered User Join Date: Nov 1999 Posts: 65	you fake frat cat fucks get flipped like keg stands. divide ya dome horizontally without the headband you outta control... cuz you piss in ya sleep with bedpans, with a verse that`s the most exposed 'Whut???' since redman.. got a cat scan y`all faggot queens only 1/2 ya team deserves to get whored right.. outta spite i wont waste lines to tell 4sight about the slaughter he already knows is goin down in a few more nights. as for ya potnah... Wrong makes Right? you so far off...you great maybe? think again simpleton...we don`t fuck with catch phrases.. cuz if i dealt with cliche`s, this`d already be done... 'you supposed to win, 2 heads is better than 1' but since i got a partner with no skull to his name, i work overtime, and get double the brain. me and HV freshest since white bread.. whitest since fresh keds, fatalistic like deathbed... and "i`ll fuckin...i`ll fuckin..." what meth said. this matchup is foul, with yall faggots bad breath. u gets no love with the racket u bringin.....game match set we the illest with bayonettes who`ll put two holes thru ya center like tape cassettes see... we spit metaphors and hot similes, top notch status, y`all so wack...i`ll win quotin weak lines from that TeK faggot. Write and Sight think they on the cuttin edge at the club but got it twisted showin up with rainbow patterned batting gloves. i ain`t have to do it...but i`m dope..and got asked to prove it.. with more sick lines than these netfucks have posts at rapmusic

01-08-2004, 11:34 PM	#7 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	the track cues us, to rip a topic so here's my battle cry hit ya till ya got more slant eye's then a tek verse italicized basically, this topic is horrid •••••'s goldie lox, piss on ya bagel topping and shat in ya pouridge ill slash ya jug, till it starts pouring, passing blood 2 of the wackest fucks that no one'll miss, well thats enough get on stage and ill be booin you net nerds couldnt score as sex in the city's music director mom got caught fuckin the mail dude, ya she's laid BUT ONLY NEWBIES ACTUALLY PUT MC IN THEIR SCREEN NAME move along youngins , medic better see you you two are bigger tools then dessert eagle's basically im punchin ya throats chop ya body real small then get stuffed in a boat ride out in choppy water off the egyptian coast the red sea, chum the water till sharks come then shit is toast ya gone, never to be seen, missin in action call this spouse abuse cuz u'll get hit with a passion uh yea, terrible topic how dare that you'll prophet cuz everyone will no show, the dough's set in ya pocket tek, u a stupid ••••• WHY THE FUCK U POST A CUM LINE, WAS THAT ALL U COULD THINK? if topics like this next round, i hope we lose.....and yes, this took me 5 minutes __________________ Most Hated Last edited by headless verseman; 01-08-2004 at 11:35 PM. Reason: spouse was spelled wrong

01-09-2004, 12:05 AM	#8 (permalink)
wrongmakeswrite the streak wont end. Join Date: Jul 2003 Posts: 123	we've sat back since day one, scopin the comp. y'all get put between crosshairs.. now we scopin the comp. it gets put to no. 1 when you team with write when we seein you easily.. shit, we've got 4sight bunch'a babies, lemme buy you a rattle but where in this shitty topic does it say this is a battle? shoot, we dont need the throne, we can see it ourself the delivery's so nice that we conceived ourself 5th place, we already won in the title PLUS.. we wrote verses without havin to recycle we are creative, matter fact an example. ya chumpin y'all take something to nothing.. we write dope verses from nothing to something you cats are shit.. when you write, you're weaker i've stepped on bigger shit in a baby sneakers why be in this really? we won before it begins so we grab the trophy now & walk away with a win we stand tall, believe this we defeatin em headless head so big when he spit, it leaks helium & sime? who the fuck is this guy, droppin daily shit or is it jowelz just knew he'd lose so made an alias so yada yada yada we get down so vivid that wrong & 4sight take this easily & i dont even have to fini--. __________________ two wrongs make a write.. Last edited by wrongmakeswrite; 01-09-2004 at 12:09 AM.

01-09-2004, 05:26 AM	#9 (permalink)
6th_plague More then meets the eye Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Georgia Posts: 26,465	over n/s __________________ Fortune 5 Hunned - Behind the Smoke and Mirrors May 2007 are you ready? New Single -Hi Haters

01-09-2004, 07:01 AM	#10 (permalink)
Magic Johnson BAKSETBALL JOKES. Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: OSHITUGOTMYSPACETOO! Posts: 2,825	4sight.. decent drop.. not like what i usta see from u though... .. sime.. you fake frat cat fucks get flipped like keg stands. divide ya dome horizontally without the headband ^hot cuz if i dealt with cliche`s, this`d already be done... 'you supposed to win, 2 heads is better than 1' ^hot, went really well with what was said a lil earlier in the verse.. headless hit ya till ya got more slant eye's then a tek verse italicized ^shit like that will never get old.. lol but since i got a partner with no skull to his name, i work overtime, and get double the brain. ^hot whitest since fresh keds, fatalistic like deathbed... and "i`ll fuckin...i`ll fuckin..." what meth said. ^hot we spit metaphors and hot similes, top notch status, y`all so wack...i`ll win quotin weak lines from that TeK faggot. ^lmao you two are bigger tools then dessert eagle's ^hot tek, u a stupid ••••• WHY THE FUCK U POST A CUM LINE, WAS THAT ALL U COULD THINK? ^lol ..vectore.. the delivery's so nice that we conceived ourself ^nice & sime? who the fuck is this guy, droppin daily shit or is it jowelz just knew he'd lose so made an alias ^nice... overall, i think headless and sime brought way more to the table... __________________ carbon hydroxide!

01-09-2004, 08:24 AM	#11 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	this turned into like the rbl with that topic... good luck headless and sime.. i think im done with the net for awhile.. pz __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE

01-09-2004, 09:22 AM	#12 (permalink)
vectoreman i fit in all stereotypes. Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: bentonville Posts: 6,742	yeah, i mean.. where does it say this was a battle really? i mean. this is stupid. .. way to destroy the whole meaning of storytelling __________________ "I'd sell my soul, My self-esteem a dollar at a time" - Maynard.

01-09-2004, 10:02 PM	#13 (permalink)
Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine! Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: H-Town Posts: 739	Well sime n headless took this on quality of writing.. but I think everybody.. myself included.. got out of hand on this topic.. we all started dissin our opponents.. instead of staying on topic.. which was to up ourselves as the best tag teams.. so based on that though.. I still think sime n headless took this.. primarily on the weight of sime's verse.. since headless stayed clowning everyone else.. vote-sime.. __________________ Fuckin a sig since the 80's

01-10-2004, 12:07 AM	#14 (permalink)
headless verseman Registered User Join Date: Oct 2000 Posts: 16,579	lol an u know this man twas our strategy __________________ Most Hated

01-10-2004, 11:02 AM	#15 (permalink)
Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ Join Date: Oct 2001 Location: NC Posts: 5,027	Head and Sime got this... there verse was more fresh...sime had the best segment out of all of this...i wish y'all would but your team verses together...get a little organized guys...nonetheless...this wasn't a blow out though...4sight and vec had nice verses as well...just for the topic which i think is redundant to the tourney...head and sime had one up on y'alll...good shit from all though...special props to sime...your style is complex but so fluent...props __________________ TH3 3LIT3 2005 NO ID TOURNEY WINNER 1x POET TREE CHAMP 12x RSTL CHAMP Yes...I've Beat You Before www.soundclick.com/eulogy www.myspace.com/eulogy46

01-10-2004, 02:48 PM	#19 (permalink)
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01-10-2004, 12:13 PM	#16 (permalink)
vectoreman i fit in all stereotypes. Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: bentonville Posts: 6,742	4sight, there's nothing i can say.. i didnt try because of that shitty topic. it ruined it for me. __________________ "I'd sell my soul, My self-esteem a dollar at a time" - Maynard.

01-10-2004, 12:31 PM	#17 (permalink)
LDogg The King S E A T T L E Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Seattle Posts: 16,637	i got 4 sight an wmw winning this.. first off this isnt the fucking gay ass rbl.. headless wrote his whole verse like a battle verse.. didnt say shit about his tag team or himself.. only dissed like a battle verse.. there was no storytelling in this at all. sime came ok .. but nothing over average for this topic. both 4 sight an wmw had a team effort an u could tell. they did the topic how it was meant to be used.. not some lame battle verse. vote 4 sight an wmw pz __________________ ELITE motherfuckers www.soundclick.com/downedshadow www.myspace.com/downedshadow I wish the game was reversed and my verse was the beat so you'd listen to me first, and then dance later... I aint dumbing down shit, you don't get it, get a fuckin translator - Bishop Lamont

01-10-2004, 02:19 PM	#18 (permalink)
mAc Detroit da muthafuckin south Join Date: May 2000 Location: Camden, Mississippi Posts: 1,661	maaaan..... i just couldn't get past "I simmer the slimmer".... How do you EXACTLY "simmer a slimmer"?????? Anyway.... The rest of ya verse was eh+ok=aight. Ya dig. Oh, WTF is "alliterate"??? Whew. lol Other cat. ummm....I got kinda bored by ya shit.... the first line was too audioey....if such a thing.... Headless was ok. Sime was ok.... 4site and wrong wins..........the L __________________ www.soundclick.com/bands/battlesick http://www.soundclick.com/cmdbeats KrisCad: yo, i still think your the most improved emcee of the year - i know i told u that, but i mean it ^If that was year before last...what am I NOW? Caviar Records.......