65. Anechoic vs. 66. FYIFB

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[FYIFB]

so young undefined, everyweekend on the banks had the time of my life
protected & raised by those gently sun rays & the soft splash of the lake
had a family who loved me, but then i was blind to the fact
only thing i wouldnt remember is my head cradled in my mommas lap..
..pasted out on the passenger side.. ..on the road home-after a long day headed back
fathertime youth yourself, for the sake of the water from my eyes
those were the bestdays of my life.......

(((60 years earlier)))
i can recall when it all alterd.. like curves on a sculpture beginning to faulterd
mom working 9-to-5 then 6-to-2, i thought i lost her.. but she loved me, I felt i cost her..
when everynight while she worked to protect me.. my father was lackluster
while momma was breakin her back, he introduced me to millions of other mothers
told me if i told her, the nights of my pain would draw out & last longer
i knew 2 men raised in the same crib, shouldnt have relations like we did
but the bottom of the bottle i guess touched both of our innocents
inna sense, i just wish.. he or i was dead
thats the direction my childhood was lead

now 17 years old, God helpped me grasp some goals
momma still never home, biological pops-still the same ol'
now im running & duckin for cover, but not on the homestead..
imma varsity backfield runner, every scout-keepin tabs on my progress
pressure aint added yet, felt more like it was danglin
young men problems.. i aint haven them
cheerleaders aint even gotta fuck with auditionin, im up in them
livin like im kareem-favre- or iron tyson.. my life 'only seems' enticing
im likein the star treatment, learned unlearned what the past did
ive past it, took prom night by grasp-it, was the awsome'est night ive even lived
did the whole dance & shit then landed in ah up all night party just me & these chicks
i mean it was mean, if ya know what im meanin
then this dude stormed my door an he looked type, mean
told me-he hoped we-aint went did nothin stupid
now i was confused quick, puzzled face placements
then i asked him, whats this, what the fuck was he doing?
he told me.........................my heart just dropped.......................
the rest I dont remember, i was told by the cops
i drank a fifth without a breathe an strolled uncontrolled down the block
bout ta pop, i stop, an whadda i got, the muthafucker that was fuckin me.. & my mom
he lookin all wrong an all he saw was my gun in arm
no time ta ask me what im doing
wake up inna mental home arms all strung
what have i done? where am i going?
why does this chip on my shoulder seem half gone?

the next 50 years of my life was trife just not right
that 8by8 cell id end up spending 90% of my life
had me a scholarship ta play dog.. division A Big East ball
a friend in my mom that i lost above all
she never visited me in my hell cell, i never told her what her husbans done
coulda went pro, coulda been famous, coulda had more doe then dunkin donuts
but so what, it all swayed me at a young age
beat & raped by my father, mother never got ta know me
then prom night when the bitchs pimp told me....that bitch had HIV
dont remember the rest but God.........
imma livin masked God, still i cant hide God, the only time in my life worth rememberin.......
is by this bank side while i was so young & undefined yet




lol & that was a key ..............

[TeKneeK]

FYIFB wins - make sure u vote dogg!