Top 40 BreakDown :: Presented By STRIKE

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Old 12-09-2003, 11:34 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Top 40 BreakDown :: Presented By STRIKE

Upon taking this task I had expected an easy job seein as most of you homos no show anyway…and guess what…practicly everyone showed except for a few homo's by the name of Poettiquette Vember mad Max Penitence Extrados..and venamis no showed due to a misunderstanding in rankings… if you no show due to problems..my bad in the name callin..its all good..but to you lazy people who jus plan their lives wrong..dont waste our time…and dont sign in…..anyways..we had a good week..it went as follows!

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1. Author NYSE 20-1 Vs 2. Awedishin 33-13

To me this seemed like new vs old school an old champ comin back for his title..against a new champ who is seemingly untouchable..so this haaad to be a good one and it was for author everyone agreed mac did his thing..but below his own reach…he dropped a good story feelable personal and stuff like that but nyse jus blew everyone away with nothin but class and style… wich brings you to what voters like a good ole bedtime story or the incredible skill of the pen…and well a hundred to one voted for the pen author keeps the title..some amazing skill right there

#1 ContenderShip
3. TekNeeK 30-6 vs 4. Vadik 20-7

this match was bound to be a war of bitchin deductin votes swayin shittalkin I must win speeches and so on and ow yeah both dropped terrific verses..but that seemed besides the point here..kinda sad..but for our rap audience we had some pretty mean verses..where tek excelled as a writer in vocab metaphores and rhymescheme…and vadik in depth rhyming choice of words…it was a close on in everyones opinion..but in the end …took it

5. Talent 30-13 vs 6. God Extensions 7-0
I hate bein my busy self cause I had promised myself to vote on this match seein as these are two of the best and coolest people in the league right now…but ow well anyways two crazy dope rhymeschemes good use of vocab by both whereas trap emphasized on his creative way of story telling..the talent used irony maybe even a lil sarcasme and poetry and stuff like that to paint his picture…many have said this..but..BATTLE OF THE WEEK talent took it 5-2 but it was way closer then votes could tell

7. MC4SiGHT 11-3 vs 8. Poetiquette 19-7
Two of my favorite rstl members to read…helas lets hope or not hope that po had somethin important..cause if you cant show..dont sign in or write early…MC4 did nicely as he always do..aint even gonna bother tellin yall kid is dope period

9. InsaneVillian 31-5 vs 10. Worst Enemy 9-0
well our first suprise was worst actualy showin.. he tends to pop up and then vanish for months…but what he showed was perfect…he only got one vote..wich really surprised me..cause I had him winnin after readin his verse…then came IV..and I feel he jus took it with length…cause worst was way more intense but IV jus told the better story and took the time to tell it…in the end I think the one with the best verse did win but not the best writer…I hope worst will grace us next week with somethin nice again

11. Spy2 8-1 vs 12. Jowelz 51-13
Man…this was the jowelzz show..spy was good decent drop but man..jowelz is back! A great story humor comedy sarcasme cynisime…jowelz had it all..and ow yeah..a great flow and structure…vote = jowelzz all I can say..


13. Strike 6-1 vs14. Mr.RSTL 5-1
Well this bein my own match I will stick to a small revieuw But I feel that if me and mr R had been able to bring our bests…this would have been a great one..helas both were hurried..and mr R even more so then mine.. all I can say is he a talented writer…but this time the scale tipped in my favor

15. Desenuts 14-7 vs 16. Neo Soul 4-1
Neo soul was great..the flow the sarcasme cynisime..never peeped before but I have to give props where due…the only reason this kid lost..is because dese had a slightly better writers voice and story line…but damn this was close imo…great job guys worthy of top 20 for sure


17. wrong makes writes 6-2 vs 18. Erykah~Caine 5-1
Well well a rematch between to pretty talented storytellers last time round vectore aka wrong did in miss caine with a dope verse..and this time was no different I mean the intial difference lies in my previous statement..both are talented storytellers…but only one is a really pollished writer and the way veec put it down gave him the deserved win

19. Maddest of Men 6-2 vs 20. Scrolls Oracle of Omen 7-4
well Scrolls knocked the hell out of maddest with his smooth ass flow and straight narratives and ow yeah he used the beat to changes and knowin that it read so easy I couldnt stop till I ended did…fuckin great…now did maddest suck? Hell no kid is mad talented but he jus tells the stories the technique needs a lot of improvement if he does that…I doubt he will ever leave top ten once he makes it there..
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Old 12-09-2003, 11:34 AM   #2 (permalink)
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21. Vember 5-3 vs 22. Den-S 6-4 vs formal
well 3 ways suck good thing Vember bitched out hopefully he wont bother us with no shows again..vote = kill no show people but anyways…
D dropped a some good shit solid some things to think about..but I noticed the readability kinda sucked… the long lines the simple flow I had to struggle to read trough…then we had formal a real real teardrawer I loved it..the poem at the end..its deep as hell I was lovin it I have been in long term relationship myself and I see how things go…this really hit home..and he won with jus cause on a KO


23. 5 Starre 4-1 vs 24. Topical Writer 3-0
Two decent writers both have room for a lil sharpning..but the spark is there…TW took this by a minal margin..cant really comment on this match without a huge breakdown and explanation…cause the difference was really small and neither was exceptionaly good or really bad

25. Mad Max 2-1 vs 26. Glass Mist 3-0
well not much to say..mad max turned homo..and glass dropped four lines…so eeh neeeext


27. Ring 3-1 vs 28. Mandarin 3-1
well this was a bust ring dropped four lines countin on a no show..and mandarin dropped 12 and took the win boo @ countin on shows I understand people dont wanna waste time writin a great verse and then lettin it go to waste but shit like this happens because people try to get of easy..a simple waste of space..on to the next


29. Zotimallkur 2-1 vs 30. Penitence 2-0
Zo dropped a good verse with a great rhymescheme some good imagery and I do think he deserves to be told his shit was nice…cause due to that pen homo no showin…prolly no one will read the verse..too bad homie..good verse

31. Venamis 2-0 vs 32. Magic Johnson 2-0
Venamis apparently signed out already and was put there by mistake..so I guess no harm is done..
but first off giving props to magic even tho his matched no showed he dropped lotsa votes..thass some class right there…the verse was great and he dropped a big fuck you on IV for the topic good shit homie


33. Stayt of Mynd 2-0 vs 34. Once A Myth 2-0
lmao demik my MIC fam boy homo'd himself out of a win that shoulda been his..by countin on a no show…demiks a good writer…but lazy as hell..serves you well sucka ha!
About stayt shit was decent nice multi's good flow basic story


35. CogzWell 2-0 vs 36. Wise Punchlines 2-0
Sucks that this match took place all the way down there…this was a great one…both had a terrific and emotional story..usin the same topic you could really compare..and compare they did…wise took it by a margin of ONE fuckin vote… dont ask me why I am still kinda decidin of who I think won…nevertheless… neither should have had faced the other so early in the league cause these are people who belong in top 20 at least…But…omen sticks to a system and the system sucks ask da average rapper….props to both..

37. Rapter2K 3-1 vs 38. Inatimate 2-3
I had no idea what to expect here…but I found rapter's shit was horrible to have to read…but really really good in content.. but my god kid learn to write more captivatin cause the long lines and little flow really suck… the story vocab and all of the content was real nice tho… jus learn to write please…In was the opposite good writin style rhymescheme and flow..but the content lacked so much…it didnt cover the difference..rapter takes it easy

39. Extrados 2-2 vs 40. MindzEye 1-2
Mind showed with a mediocre verse ex didnt…props for showin..


all and all I think a lot of people showed..soo thats good for the league…match of the week had to be trap vs talent..fuckin nice..tekneek and vadik stirred some shit too good match..and well I will leave the rest of the ratings to the tribune…goodbye and untill next week!
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Old 12-09-2003, 11:43 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 12-09-2003, 12:07 PM   #4 (permalink)
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word..good shit strike and thanx for the props
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Old 12-09-2003, 12:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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this was real nice... essential new addition to the league.. good work.
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Old 12-09-2003, 01:13 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Big job there... nice work...
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lets hope or not hope that po had somethin important..cause if you cant show..dont sign in or write early
if it wasnt fuckin important i would have showed now wouldnt i?
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Old 12-09-2003, 08:04 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Old 12-09-2003, 09:07 PM   #13 (permalink)
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good work strike. thanks for the props. pce.
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lots of work put into this.. good job strike.
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Old 12-09-2003, 10:27 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Old 12-10-2003, 05:54 AM   #17 (permalink)
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if it wasnt fuckin important i would have showed now wouldnt i?

thats everyones excuse homie I am not sayin yours wasnt but you get the pic..there are people who jus forget or dont feel like it and no show... when people like tek O and nebz are all workin hard to give them a spot in this weeks rstl


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damn I think that's the first time I ever saw Po cuss.......
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good job strike.. we all appreciate the effort..
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damn I think that's the first time I ever saw Po cuss.......

I agree... never have I seen him.. not even on AIM
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