45. CauliFlower 1-2 vs. 46. Lokternal 2-1

Omen · 12-07-2003, 02:21 AM

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CauliFlower · 12-07-2003, 12:00 PM

again
alright

CauliFlower · 12-10-2003, 07:01 PM

lego topic

i love lego
you love lego too
you fucking kinky bitch
wait till i put my leg in you
put some some fucking bread in you
lego men food we need no
i just want some loops that bleed ho's
troops that see no losers
lego men violent in bed
i see some bruises
choose this abusive music
to make love to cos im kinda useless
so i use less condoms cos im kinda plastic
when i say kinda,i mean i am
you spastic
graff kids dont like,neither does my mum
i love girls
especially being rubbed on their lower gums
i lower guns cos my plastic dick gets stuck
in your girls mouth cos shes got a dick to suck
fucking tranny
ive been rubbed up and down her panties
kinda skanky right?
thank you

Lokternal · 12-11-2003, 01:13 AM

Kennedy, Williams, Rogers, wait what was that
Kennedy, Williams, uhh Rogers no way it cant be Matt
Me dead, thirty-three fresh out the state penatentary
Smoking, dealing, losing track of time but dead yesterday?
It cant be thought I was just at the dog track placing bets
It cant be my time yet, I havent even paid off my debts
Stay still man, i'm panicking left my wife at the hospital with our child
He was just born yesterday, yet right now i'm dead, still in denial

I was such an evil man, has blood on my hands before birth
I was in a band, Touched many people on this earth
Was often drunk on the road, yet idolized to the fullest
Sang every damn note on the chart, had a face like bruce willis
Yet I sit back and see my name in black and white on a paper
There clear as day under a priest over a raper
I was on top of the world, glorified like a saint
On a huge billboard in times square up there in paint
Had a Star in hollywood, put my hands down on that wet cement
While families of five couldn't have running water couldnt pay rent
I was greedy man, with my black suit and boots
Had a mean look, didnt even smile couldnt see my blonde roots

Left my soul in El Paso when I drank too much
Left my car in the river, left two dead with one single touch
Of the gas of my car, as I ran into their long lost souls
Left the skid marks on the tar, car rapped around the telephone pole
Sentenced to 3 years prison sentence, did that no problem
Lost all my fame, but got out in automn
Came full cirlce got my career back intacked
Divorced my wife the coke addict stayed off the crack

Yet I see my name on the sunday edition of the Herald
Dead at thirty-three left millions in cash and emralds
Shot in the face, left in a ditch, died without a fight
All the fame, all the fortune, now gone, DEAD OF RIGHTS

Omen · 12-11-2003, 02:19 AM

Over NS

Lokternal · 12-11-2003, 04:29 AM

Spart0z[4R]
One day you're readin the newspaper and then you scan the obituaries page to see who died.. AND HOLY SHIT! Your name is in there!

thats my topic

Votes:

1. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...14#post7929814
2. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...57#post7929857
3. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...10#post7929910
4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...70#post7930170
5. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...84#post7930184
6. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...93#post7930193

TeKneeK · 12-11-2003, 10:14 AM

wow... lets do this:

CAULI: U know i know that verse u wrote was hurried and u effortlessly wrote that --- but in the past i seen alotta folks write quickly and the rhymes arent bad at all .... urs was real different and had the real short line rhyme structure... and while it is hard to follow i actually enjoyed that... -- ur content was off tune to the topic but the enjoyment was there for some reason... the flaw i found in urs was a bit more touch in comedy and a more concentration on the topic mightve scored u some extra... but in all .. it was entertaining yet possibly short ended

LOK: which topic were u rockin on that again? - all i have to say is very very very well written spit... enjoyed it beginning to end completely --- strong content, story was real real solid and interesting... details and word usage was perfect and just something i can actually enjoy hearin on a song.. it "MIGHT" be rhyme of the week in this side of the board... but thus far... ur the 1st match im lookin at...

however, great story...

vote - LOK.

ChampionShip: 1. Author NYSE 21-1 vs. 2. TekNeeK 31-6 - hollar on my TITLE MATCH ---

pz -- read below :(

A.S.K · 12-12-2003, 05:13 AM

damn...here goes

cal: wierd but enticing. i found it really hard to follow at times and it was just soo short. vocab was poor, the flow was oof and the structure was poor, but for some reason i still enjoyed it.......

lok: nice verse man, i wasnt thinkin u were up 2 this. good vpcab , n9ce structure and has me hooked right through. well wrote man

vote-lok

retunr the favour on top40 battles, me vs wise punclines

i must win.........

6th_plague · 12-12-2003, 08:21 AM

Lok gets this

he kept me interested and i felt what he was saying, nice structure nice easy read, vocab was aight, nothing special but it isnt really a deciding factor... your story telling and language deffinatly got you this...

caul : i felt this was juvinile writing, there was a small voba there. lol there wasnt actually mush to it like i said it was juvinile but i still read it. . . it had some appeal to it, your style i guess. apply some vocab etc to it youve got summin going on

vote = lokk

MindzEye · 12-12-2003, 05:21 PM

interesting...

Cauliflower- looks like you expected a no-show which in the end fucks you more times than it helps....really not much of story to speak about, but your a perverted lego maniac.....

Lok- this was a good attempt at a good topic...your imagery wasn't that deep, but you stayed consistent with your topic..good spit overall...

Doc` Evil · 12-12-2003, 08:36 PM

cauliflower, your only upside was you had some interesting content, the various things a lego man would be subject too, nice.....but the flow and vocab destroyed it man, made the peice an annoing and difficult read, the bars were not evenly written and that messed up the flow.
lok had everything caul didn,t a dope story, real interesting, dope flow and vocab man, tight peice

vote - lokternal

X sample · 12-12-2003, 11:42 PM

lol, perverted lego maniac...

cauliflower - shouldnt of been so rushed, it was an interesting verse as it was but really it coulda been 20x better...

lok - nice verse, just a more mature and detailed verse, really thats all that needs to be said, they were on different levels..

vote = lok

CauliFlower · 12-13-2003, 03:13 PM

hey its ok
cos i won last time

TeKneeK · 12-13-2003, 09:51 PM

lok wins.

12-07-2003, 02:21 AM	#1 (permalink)
Omen O Luh Da Kids Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: IND INC Posts: 21,058	45. CauliFlower 1-2 vs. 46. Lokternal 2-1 VERSES DUE Wednesday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST VOTES DUE Saturday 10:00am PACIFIC/1:00pm EST VOTING RULES No beef votes No payback votes No 2nd Chance Votes, Once and Done VOTE ON 6 BATTLES!!!!! FAILURE TO DO SO RESULTS IN 3 VOTE SUBTRACTION!!! This week and following we will enforce this rule 4 lines - NO SHOWS 12 lines - MIN 60 lines - MAX Fail to Post URL's all those votes will not count Your Topics are here RSTL Topics !!!! if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!!! NEW RULE: Voting On a No-show Verse does not Count as your vote, Both Competitors must show. Go Forth And Produce __________________ *The Elite* *Starving Artist*

12-07-2003, 12:00 PM	#2 (permalink)
CauliFlower CauliFlower Suspects Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 184	again alright __________________ No your a moron....have you even posted a rhyme on this board? Do you have time with all the dick you been suckin? You dont even capatlize your words...SO fuckin what..dickface - madpoet hope for intelligence on the board?

12-10-2003, 07:01 PM	#3 (permalink)
CauliFlower CauliFlower Suspects Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 184	lego topic i love lego you love lego too you fucking kinky bitch wait till i put my leg in you put some some fucking bread in you lego men food we need no i just want some loops that bleed ho's troops that see no losers lego men violent in bed i see some bruises choose this abusive music to make love to cos im kinda useless so i use less condoms cos im kinda plastic when i say kinda,i mean i am you spastic graff kids dont like,neither does my mum i love girls especially being rubbed on their lower gums i lower guns cos my plastic dick gets stuck in your girls mouth cos shes got a dick to suck fucking tranny ive been rubbed up and down her panties kinda skanky right? thank you __________________ No your a moron....have you even posted a rhyme on this board? Do you have time with all the dick you been suckin? You dont even capatlize your words...SO fuckin what..dickface - madpoet hope for intelligence on the board?

12-11-2003, 02:19 AM	#5 (permalink)
Omen O Luh Da Kids Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: IND INC Posts: 21,058	Over NS __________________ *The Elite* *Starving Artist*

12-11-2003, 04:29 AM	#6 (permalink)
Lokternal Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: On a Boat in the middle of Alaska frozen to the ice looking at polar bears who are really horny and want to fuck penguins and eskimos and also ice sculptures Posts: 577	Spart0z[4R] One day you're readin the newspaper and then you scan the obituaries page to see who died.. AND HOLY SHIT! Your name is in there! thats my topic Votes: 1. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...14#post7929814 2. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...57#post7929857 3. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...10#post7929910 4. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...70#post7930170 5. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...84#post7930184 6. http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread...93#post7930193 Last edited by Lokternal; 12-12-2003 at 07:05 AM.

12-11-2003, 01:13 AM	#4 (permalink)
Lokternal Registered User Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: On a Boat in the middle of Alaska frozen to the ice looking at polar bears who are really horny and want to fuck penguins and eskimos and also ice sculptures Posts: 577	Kennedy, Williams, Rogers, wait what was that Kennedy, Williams, uhh Rogers no way it cant be Matt Me dead, thirty-three fresh out the state penatentary Smoking, dealing, losing track of time but dead yesterday? It cant be thought I was just at the dog track placing bets It cant be my time yet, I havent even paid off my debts Stay still man, i'm panicking left my wife at the hospital with our child He was just born yesterday, yet right now i'm dead, still in denial I was such an evil man, has blood on my hands before birth I was in a band, Touched many people on this earth Was often drunk on the road, yet idolized to the fullest Sang every damn note on the chart, had a face like bruce willis Yet I sit back and see my name in black and white on a paper There clear as day under a priest over a raper I was on top of the world, glorified like a saint On a huge billboard in times square up there in paint Had a Star in hollywood, put my hands down on that wet cement While families of five couldn't have running water couldnt pay rent I was greedy man, with my black suit and boots Had a mean look, didnt even smile couldnt see my blonde roots Left my soul in El Paso when I drank too much Left my car in the river, left two dead with one single touch Of the gas of my car, as I ran into their long lost souls Left the skid marks on the tar, car rapped around the telephone pole Sentenced to 3 years prison sentence, did that no problem Lost all my fame, but got out in automn Came full cirlce got my career back intacked Divorced my wife the coke addict stayed off the crack Yet I see my name on the sunday edition of the Herald Dead at thirty-three left millions in cash and emralds Shot in the face, left in a ditch, died without a fight All the fame, all the fortune, now gone, DEAD OF RIGHTS

12-11-2003, 10:14 AM	#7 (permalink)
TeKneeK The Heart & Soul of RMC Join Date: May 1999 Location: L.A. Californ: America's Best Posts: 26,160	wow... lets do this: CAULI: U know i know that verse u wrote was hurried and u effortlessly wrote that --- but in the past i seen alotta folks write quickly and the rhymes arent bad at all .... urs was real different and had the real short line rhyme structure... and while it is hard to follow i actually enjoyed that... -- ur content was off tune to the topic but the enjoyment was there for some reason... the flaw i found in urs was a bit more touch in comedy and a more concentration on the topic mightve scored u some extra... but in all .. it was entertaining yet possibly short ended LOK: which topic were u rockin on that again? - all i have to say is very very very well written spit... enjoyed it beginning to end completely --- strong content, story was real real solid and interesting... details and word usage was perfect and just something i can actually enjoy hearin on a song.. it "MIGHT" be rhyme of the week in this side of the board... but thus far... ur the 1st match im lookin at... however, great story... vote - LOK. ChampionShip: 1. Author NYSE 21-1 vs. 2. TekNeeK 31-6 - hollar on my TITLE MATCH --- pz -- read below :( __________________ .......................

12-12-2003, 05:13 AM	#8 (permalink)
A.S.K ... Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Some University, UK Posts: 5,003	damn...here goes cal: wierd but enticing. i found it really hard to follow at times and it was just soo short. vocab was poor, the flow was oof and the structure was poor, but for some reason i still enjoyed it....... lok: nice verse man, i wasnt thinkin u were up 2 this. good vpcab , n9ce structure and has me hooked right through. well wrote man vote-lok retunr the favour on top40 battles, me vs wise punclines i must win......... __________________ For years in Europe, Christianity was law so how many deaths were caused in the name of Our Lord Sense would tell me it aint the words on the pages but the interpretation of it that fuelled the crusaders

12-12-2003, 08:21 AM	#9 (permalink)
6th_plague More then meets the eye Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Georgia Posts: 26,465	Lok gets this he kept me interested and i felt what he was saying, nice structure nice easy read, vocab was aight, nothing special but it isnt really a deciding factor... your story telling and language deffinatly got you this... caul : i felt this was juvinile writing, there was a small voba there. lol there wasnt actually mush to it like i said it was juvinile but i still read it. . . it had some appeal to it, your style i guess. apply some vocab etc to it youve got summin going on vote = lokk __________________ Fortune 5 Hunned - Behind the Smoke and Mirrors May 2007 are you ready? New Single -Hi Haters

12-12-2003, 05:21 PM	#10 (permalink)
MindzEye Registered User Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Land of the Heartless, home of the brave.. Posts: 345	interesting... Cauliflower- looks like you expected a no-show which in the end fucks you more times than it helps....really not much of story to speak about, but your a perverted lego maniac..... Lok- this was a good attempt at a good topic...your imagery wasn't that deep, but you stayed consistent with your topic..good spit overall... __________________ ..Mindz... ..Are you being served? I'm the wackest cat on rm.com, Nasif told me so himself...

12-12-2003, 08:36 PM	#11 (permalink)
Doc` Evil i'm back Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 112	cauliflower, your only upside was you had some interesting content, the various things a lego man would be subject too, nice.....but the flow and vocab destroyed it man, made the peice an annoing and difficult read, the bars were not evenly written and that messed up the flow. lok had everything caul didn,t a dope story, real interesting, dope flow and vocab man, tight peice vote - lokternal

12-12-2003, 11:42 PM	#12 (permalink)
X sample watch me shine Join Date: May 2003 Location: in yo sisters bed Posts: 11,367	lol, perverted lego maniac... cauliflower - shouldnt of been so rushed, it was an interesting verse as it was but really it coulda been 20x better... lok - nice verse, just a more mature and detailed verse, really thats all that needs to be said, they were on different levels.. vote = lok __________________ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=104229 "Only Mike puts up numbers like these, and hes no longer playin'.. but, neither am i" - Joe Budden

12-13-2003, 03:13 PM	#13 (permalink)
CauliFlower CauliFlower Suspects Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 184	hey its ok cos i won last time __________________ No your a moron....have you even posted a rhyme on this board? Do you have time with all the dick you been suckin? You dont even capatlize your words...SO fuckin what..dickface - madpoet hope for intelligence on the board?

12-13-2003, 09:51 PM	#14 (permalink)
TeKneeK The Heart & Soul of RMC Join Date: May 1999 Location: L.A. Californ: America's Best Posts: 26,160	lok wins. __________________ .......................

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