47. Adversary Vs 48. Smoke Trail

Nebz · 09-24-2003, 12:13 AM

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-Adversary- · 09-24-2003, 07:34 PM

I step before death on the brinks of suicide,
Life built to be sacrificed to god between 2 knives.
Hide shattered, Ready to go into battle,
with my inner self and shadow, nerves rattled.
Retrace thoughts locked of whats real and whats not,
Ask why I got such depression which lead to aggression I fought.
No answer responded back, so I started to run laps...
With my brainwaves and acts, its wrapped, no turnin back.
Held a gauge, inserted the recipe...death undressin me,
Permanently settin free the anger, my flesh diseased.
Has it really come to this? Standin 500ft. high...in front a fence,
Demons claimin me, I give into the pressure...with one more script
Its over wit fast, up to my head... I hold it and blast,
But no explosion was cast...only the motion of gas.
As soon as the smokin had passed, I was lookin through a mirror I cracked,
Took the glass to my wrists, and with a swish...was nearin a gasp
With fear I collapse...an hour later my parents find me, I was too blind to see the impact,
But its too late...I'm a pile of blood and mush.......Interior black

Holla

Smoke Trail · 09-26-2003, 03:52 PM

wad up checkin in, will drop tonight, -1-

same topic i guess

Smoke Trail · 09-28-2003, 02:02 AM

if the Mod comes in here can i have an extension to tomorrow at 12am, i had some family things at the hospital i had to go to and couldnt get finishes, would appreicate a exten. if u can, thank you

TeKneeK · 09-28-2003, 02:03 AM

EXTENSION GRANTED.

XplicitConcepts · 09-28-2003, 12:32 PM

Bullshit man, you cant ask for an extension when you no-show, you shoulda asked way be4, i posted my verse up the first hour or so battles were up, youve taken like 4 days, and ive seen you browsing the boards up to half hour at a time, and you tell me you cant post? fuckin bullshit, it took me 20 min. to do my verse

Smoke Trail · 09-28-2003, 01:28 PM

man ive had alot of family shyt, so why u even mad, its just a board, im postin here in the next couple hrs, calm down, thank you for extention TekneeK

Smoke Trail · 09-28-2003, 02:00 PM

As the darkness creeps in, i remember my many sins
Now alone without any friends, there no way for me to win//
so as i stare in the mirror all i see is death
every minute it becomes clearer as i take breaths//
i cant control my behavior, maybe these drugs arent saviors
all im askin is one favor, afta i die speak my words with flavor//
so after 2 bottles, a O, and some blow, im ready to flow
off this balcony im to low, climb some stories to die as a pro//
lookin over rememberin past times, and afta i die i cant rhyme
so i think this really my time, maybe to myself death is lyin//
can i commit this immortal crime, which choice should i take
but ive committed so many mistakes, i break, take, & even raped//
i dont deserve to live, i dont have anything else to give
so im gunna push myself over this cliff after one more sniff//
lay out 2 more gator lines, but this time the teeth get me
so as darkest creeps in, am i diein, wakin up in the hospital in reality//

\\\

did real quik off the head casue i gotta go back to the hospital, g/luck

Den-S · 09-28-2003, 04:03 PM

sorry to hear about ST's situation, but in terms of battle, I think Adversary got this one, based on how he developed the topic more and also had a better flow and vocab...He could have gone more in-depth with the topic but didnt need to given the circumstances of this battle...

vote= Adversary

g'luck wit your family ST

Smoke Trail · 09-28-2003, 05:35 PM

thanks homie, i be back in effect in a week or so

trapezoidal. · 09-28-2003, 06:13 PM

adversarys verse was dope for being so short. smoke might've made a good comeback if he would've had a more substantial piece, but it seemed rushed, and not full of the imagery and story in adversarys verse.

i liked ad's alot, looking forward to reading more of your shit.

vote = adversary.

WiSDoM · 09-29-2003, 02:33 AM

at least u did enough to drop a verse and didn't pull no shady shit on a no show..ya know...so props for that, but it just wasnt enough to pull out the win yaknow?...adversary had the better verse all around..good drop by ya both..hope shit works out with ya family kidd..

vote = adversary

peace!

LDogg The King · 09-29-2003, 06:44 AM

i agree with the rest.. advasary came with the better short story this week... props to both for droppin stuff though an not no showing..

good luck to whoever wins.

vote advasary..

pz

Patriarch · 09-30-2003, 11:01 AM

have to go with the flow, adv took this with the better short story.. both verse were pretty good i look forward to reading more involving bthe both of you in the later rounds.. maybe somethin a little longer? hah

pz

vote: adv

Papa_Smurf · 09-30-2003, 01:23 PM

I wasn't really feeling either verse that much in this case. Both could have done a bit better in my opinion. but Advas had the btter verse in this case.

Vote: Advas

Nebz · 09-30-2003, 04:44 PM

Adversary wins

Tha Talent · 09-30-2003, 05:49 PM

close this

09-24-2003, 12:13 AM	#1 (permalink)
Nebz Mod God Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: West Coastin it. Posts: 24,476	47. Adversary Vs 48. Smoke Trail VERSES DUE Wednesday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST VOTES DUE Saturday 10:00am PACIFIC/1:00pm EST Get Your Topics The RSTL Topics this week! - TOPIC WEEK! LINE LIMIT: 4 lines - NO SHOWS 16 lines - MINIMAL 60 lines - MAXIMAL VOTING: No crew votes No payback votes No 2nd Chance Votes YOU MUST MUST MUST -- POST YOUR URL'S OF ALL THE BATTLES YOU VOTED ON HERE IN YOUR OWN THREAD.. VOTE ON 6 BATTLES!!!!! FAILURE TO DO SO RESULTS IN 3 VOTE SUBTRACTION!!! if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!!! GO FOR IT!!! __________________ *N.iggas E.nvy B.ill'z* See Martin, see Malcolm You See Biggie, see Pac, see success and its outcome See Jesus, see Judas, see Caesar, see Brutus See success is like suicide Suicide its a suicide If you succeed, prepare to be crucified Media meddle's, nigga's sue you, you settle Every step you take, they remind you, "you ghetto"

09-24-2003, 07:34 PM	#2 (permalink)
-Adversary- Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: UK Posts: 101	19. 1 step before death on the brinks of Suicide... I step before death on the brinks of suicide, Life built to be sacrificed to god between 2 knives. Hide shattered, Ready to go into battle, with my inner self and shadow, nerves rattled. Retrace thoughts locked of whats real and whats not, Ask why I got such depression which lead to aggression I fought. No answer responded back, so I started to run laps... With my brainwaves and acts, its wrapped, no turnin back. Held a gauge, inserted the recipe...death undressin me, Permanently settin free the anger, my flesh diseased. Has it really come to this? Standin 500ft. high...in front a fence, Demons claimin me, I give into the pressure...with one more script Its over wit fast, up to my head... I hold it and blast, But no explosion was cast...only the motion of gas. As soon as the smokin had passed, I was lookin through a mirror I cracked, Took the glass to my wrists, and with a swish...was nearin a gasp With fear I collapse...an hour later my parents find me, I was too blind to see the impact, But its too late...I'm a pile of blood and mush.......Interior black Holla

09-26-2003, 03:52 PM	#3 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,933	wad up checkin in, will drop tonight, -1- same topic i guess __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-28-2003, 02:02 AM	#4 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,933	if the Mod comes in here can i have an extension to tomorrow at 12am, i had some family things at the hospital i had to go to and couldnt get finishes, would appreicate a exten. if u can, thank you __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-28-2003, 02:03 AM	#5 (permalink)
TeKneeK The Heart & Soul of RMC Join Date: May 1999 Location: L.A. Californ: America's Best Posts: 26,160	EXTENSION GRANTED. __________________ ....................... Last edited by TeKneeK; 09-28-2003 at 02:29 AM.

09-28-2003, 12:32 PM	#6 (permalink)
XplicitConcepts Banned Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 262	Bullshit man, you cant ask for an extension when you no-show, you shoulda asked way be4, i posted my verse up the first hour or so battles were up, youve taken like 4 days, and ive seen you browsing the boards up to half hour at a time, and you tell me you cant post? fuckin bullshit, it took me 20 min. to do my verse

09-28-2003, 01:28 PM	#7 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,933	man ive had alot of family shyt, so why u even mad, its just a board, im postin here in the next couple hrs, calm down, thank you for extention TekneeK __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-28-2003, 02:00 PM	#8 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,933	Here ya go.......Same topic As the darkness creeps in, i remember my many sins Now alone without any friends, there no way for me to win// so as i stare in the mirror all i see is death every minute it becomes clearer as i take breaths// i cant control my behavior, maybe these drugs arent saviors all im askin is one favor, afta i die speak my words with flavor// so after 2 bottles, a O, and some blow, im ready to flow off this balcony im to low, climb some stories to die as a pro// lookin over rememberin past times, and afta i die i cant rhyme so i think this really my time, maybe to myself death is lyin// can i commit this immortal crime, which choice should i take but ive committed so many mistakes, i break, take, & even raped// i dont deserve to live, i dont have anything else to give so im gunna push myself over this cliff after one more sniff// lay out 2 more gator lines, but this time the teeth get me so as darkest creeps in, am i diein, wakin up in the hospital in reality// \\\ did real quik off the head casue i gotta go back to the hospital, g/luck __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-28-2003, 04:03 PM	#9 (permalink)
Den-S .:.The Chosen One.:. Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: RSTL...6-5 Posts: 855	sorry to hear about ST's situation, but in terms of battle, I think Adversary got this one, based on how he developed the topic more and also had a better flow and vocab...He could have gone more in-depth with the topic but didnt need to given the circumstances of this battle... vote= Adversary g'luck wit your family ST __________________ ThA KiD PrOdIgY Of DoPe "Life And Existance" "Question" "America's Death" "Stranded" "Loss" "Doubts"

09-28-2003, 05:35 PM	#10 (permalink)
Smoke Trail Writing My Life Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: 3o4 Posts: 2,933	thanks homie, i be back in effect in a week or so __________________ ----------------------------------------------------------------- Dedication Month Links To Abused Children To Victims of Drunk Drivers, One Contemplating Suicide, and Murdered Children

09-28-2003, 06:13 PM	#11 (permalink)
trapezoidal. dip - the wonder years. Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: maryland - the middle ground. Posts: 84	adversarys verse was dope for being so short. smoke might've made a good comeback if he would've had a more substantial piece, but it seemed rushed, and not full of the imagery and story in adversarys verse. i liked ad's alot, looking forward to reading more of your shit. vote = adversary. __________________ whyfebeater #1.

09-29-2003, 02:33 AM	#12 (permalink)
WiSDoM I t0k yer wifes virginity Join Date: Dec 1999 Posts: 4,285	at least u did enough to drop a verse and didn't pull no shady shit on a no show..ya know...so props for that, but it just wasnt enough to pull out the win yaknow?...adversary had the better verse all around..good drop by ya both..hope shit works out with ya family kidd.. vote = adversary peace!

09-29-2003, 06:44 AM	#13 (permalink)
LDogg The King S E A T T L E Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Seattle Posts: 16,637	i agree with the rest.. advasary came with the better short story this week... props to both for droppin stuff though an not no showing.. good luck to whoever wins. vote advasary.. pz __________________ ELITE motherfuckers www.soundclick.com/downedshadow www.myspace.com/downedshadow I wish the game was reversed and my verse was the beat so you'd listen to me first, and then dance later... I aint dumbing down shit, you don't get it, get a fuckin translator - Bishop Lamont

09-30-2003, 11:01 AM	#14 (permalink)
Patriarch Pat knows.. Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Orlando Posts: 12,298	have to go with the flow, adv took this with the better short story.. both verse were pretty good i look forward to reading more involving bthe both of you in the later rounds.. maybe somethin a little longer? hah pz vote: adv

09-30-2003, 01:23 PM	#15 (permalink)
Papa_Smurf Junior Jedi Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Baltimore Posts: 397	I wasn't really feeling either verse that much in this case. Both could have done a bit better in my opinion. but Advas had the btter verse in this case. Vote: Advas __________________ Fuck Your Sig. Rules.

09-30-2003, 05:49 PM	#17 (permalink)
Tha Talent , Tha Master. Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: in the hall of fame. Posts: 3,588	close this __________________ elitely smo

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09-30-2003, 04:44 PM	#16 (permalink)
Nebz Mod God Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: West Coastin it. Posts: 24,476	Adversary wins __________________ *N.iggas E.nvy B.ill'z* See Martin, see Malcolm You See Biggie, see Pac, see success and its outcome See Jesus, see Judas, see Caesar, see Brutus See success is like suicide Suicide its a suicide If you succeed, prepare to be crucified Media meddle's, nigga's sue you, you settle Every step you take, they remind you, "you ghetto"

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