7. L Dogg 13-4 Vs 8. MC4sight 5-0

Nebz · 09-23-2003, 11:59 PM

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LDogg The King · 09-24-2003, 04:17 AM

checking in.

MC4SiGHT · 09-24-2003, 08:29 AM

check...good luck

LDogg The King · 09-24-2003, 07:20 PM

http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/642701-19-god-extensions-1-0-vs-20-papa-smurf-1-0-a.html#post7372585
15. Wisdom 7-2 Vs 16. Den-S 1-0
23. HighpawTheCyst 1-0 Vs 24. Desenuts 7-4
http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/642697-11-stony-10-6-vs-12-hellrzah-17-13-a.html#post7372612
http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/642720-47-adversary-vs-48-smoke-trail.html#post7379864
http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/642691-title-match-1-dahlohner-champ-33-11-vs-1-richard-corey-8-1-a.html#post7387715

MC4SiGHT · 09-25-2003, 12:23 AM

[size=1.5]5. The man living beneath the underpass of a freeway

done...i forgot bout this tho, i thought it was due thursday since they were posted quick so it's a quick key...forgive me for any mistakes in it..1 good luck man sorry i didnt post earlier

Sound molecule's rush the waves, my ear brush of craze..
With every flushing stray, of a vehicular above my brains...
Flung with haze of mud retained, from dirt splashed from rains..
Horrid face in a broken place, tryna make way with minimal space...
In a race with time, nearly sixty-two, without job or income...
What the average republican would call your average street bum..
Strung off high-notes of failed careers, an economies bad last few years..
Brung to tears as i reminiss peers who no longer seem to care or miss
All I once knew, a dark hole under the never-ending road's abyss...
Flipped from a realm oppiste I'm in, where i practically had everything..
Brought withen the hells of sin, where i repent everything i did..
Went from corp. owner, to street-corner,in a single eyelids wink...
Never thought embezzling would lead to something that'd make me think..
If my life just a waste,or a path of wrong decisions and mistakes..
I take the blame, for it was my choice, still i'm miss that stronger voice..
Poised in the weeds now, as cotton blows, my weeping willows with noise..
Boys often toss pebbles barely missing, unknowing underneath a heads flinching..
Pinching the moment when the tire blows, and over the railing one rolls..
Folding hot steel and splashing schrapnel,condemening me eternal in this crap-hole..
Dead-cold holding steady hearing sirens now and then, wishing it was a friend...
Out to help or give advice to mend, better luck having a suicide jumpin then..
Ever see that light come here, underneath, in darkness, a pool of fears..
For years i felt i had it all, now i see even great men can fall..
I stall every second, every minute a forever, here where i thought i'd never..
Endevouring pit, a think-tank of all the stupidest shit i did...
Sit i blink as if it was another lie i'd spin, frozen and brim...
Slim and hungered, slumbered under a hollowing crib..
A dim shadow of all the worst, if only time travel would work...
But now i'm stuck fluctuating emotions back and forth...
Under a solid grey cloud, a bic lighter my only torch..
Scorching leaves and grass and twigs, when you lonely...
Anything that occupies time wins, flimsy and pale my soul is week..
Even i now would be suprised to last more then another weak..
So i find rope, thrown or broke from some vehicle passed by..
Beginning to plot my last breath, the steps until i die...
So i nuse a makeshift tie, hanging my last string from a nail..
Impailed in the rock ceiling, under the hall of wheels...
Feel my way to slip my neck in, eyes close my finale beckoned...
Then hop down from the stone, the last i'll stand, my life's wrecking...[/size]

LDogg The King · 09-25-2003, 05:20 AM

posting on blue...

oh an if you would have read the sticky.. u would see its not due until saterday... but oh well now we got the first battle up...

an ill be keeping an eye on your edit date so u dont change nothin. : )

pz bro

LDogg The King · 09-25-2003, 05:22 AM

Sitting On The Seashore...

.
.
.
when I’m feeling trapped, afraid ill go out back, an sit with waves
close my eyes an hear them say be brave as the echoes wash away
the day is almost over an the sunset is in peace with the sky
at these times I search for signs in the pink scenery through my eyes
see my history makes me cry.. even though iv lived a good life
none of my family has died.. I just wish things would have gone right
its not like they didn’t though.. i was raised here with my daddy
but i always wished i could have been with mom, ill never be happy
see my dad raised me with strengths.. at night was wishing for nothing
seems as though no matter where i went in life was always missing something
could never have it perfect if i was with mom id miss my dad
i talked about this to them before, they say be glad for what i have
i stayed consistent with the search to break fates course
cuz every time i would visit my mom would see she aged more
and i wanted so bad to have shared the times of her youth
i cried all the time about it but what could i do?
so when people tell me to be happy i ask them how they can
they tell me its these struggles that will break or make a man
so some days will go by where I’ll show off a smile or two
but i quickly relapse to sadness when i hear the hi, how are you
from the calls i make to mom i wait for her but she takes to long
i record music to let the pain go then tape her all my songs
because we used to be real close i would tell her bout it all
but as i grew older an got in trouble kept quiet of my downward fall
i had to much appreciation for her and felt guilty of my doings
felt i was disrespecting her at the same time my life i was ruining
she has such a kind heart, not an angry bone in her body
but she smokes everyday so i know her body is rotting
all these things i can not change or even be there to see
lately been feeling so alone an distant.. no one cares about me
I’m depressed and smoking weed, but none of my family knows
i really wish i could tell them.. don’t want them mad at me though
or disappointed cuz i never wanted to let anyone down
but I’m an guy who does nothing hoping ill be getting around
--
have even grown apart from all my friends, will never see them again
they all moved to go to school but i see them when I’m dreamin
but awake with yet the pain of feeling no one knows me
and i don’t want to grow old alone feeling sad an lonely
spend a lot of time at home, have grown close to my pets
i love them more then people... i love them to death
their there to listen to my problems an never say a thang
an around when i need them just have to call out there name
afraid to go find my way in life an leave all this behind
i walk around with my cam corder sometimes so parts i can always rewind
but I’m a troubled mind an ask why we cant have back the past
i dwell in my own sorrow.. its been weeks since iv laughed
asking god if when i die it will all come together an be perfect
if all i got to do is believe in you then to me it is worth it
but god iv asked you why u made life such a depressing place to be
kids like me grow up and watch their family’s die off becoming history
leaving everything that made us so were alone with strangers
I’m angered, it doesn’t make much sense to me all i see is danger
but this is nothing out of ordinary i think like this all the time
hoping one of these days sitting out here my answers ill find
the waves are so calm an mellow I’m at peace with my life
just like an elk hopping through meadows who flees with delight
knowing tomorrow will come and then many days after
an during this time i must find what I’m after
- and as the sunset went down an welcomed another night
i walked inside to let it out, sat down on the computer to write..

MC4SiGHT · 09-25-2003, 08:26 AM

yeah i know, i didn't notice the sticky until after i posted...

it's all good tho. nive verse by the way also...
and don't worry im not gonna edit...

1

HighPawTheCyst · 09-25-2003, 10:13 AM

MC4:

nice verse, this is the first time i peeped you, and im impressed, your rhyme scheme reminds me of stony a little bit, you have a nice poetic voice, and the imagery gave a nice descriptive setting, the flow could've been better, but i guess that just comes with your style, you stayed on topic rather well, and never really fell off in the appeal aspect, nice read

L-DOGG:

been around for a minute, i always enjoy your pieces, and i must say this verse was ill, the imagery was hottt, i loved this line here

[i]see my dad raised me with strengths.. at night was wishing for nothing
seems as though no matter where i went in life was always missing something]/i]

i was feeling that, your concept was tight, i thought the topic choice was rather simplistic, cause it's like having a free topic week or something, but you still did your thing, nice flow, good vocab, and the scheme complimented your verse well, props

OVERALL:

2 different styles, 2 different topics, but 1 had the better verse, obviously, right?, well, im gonna say you both brought fire, props for posting early, but when it came down to my vote, i took the verse that had a more vivid feel, and im going with L-DOGG, even though his topic was easier, i could feel more like i was having a flashback at the beach, rather than deteriorating under a bridge, but props to both

VOTE:

L-DOGG

SIN2 · 09-25-2003, 10:39 AM

Both verses were pure fire....gotta say that first

MC4 came hella nice...this is my first time peepin u also.....and like the others i was impressed.....if this was truly a key i give it to u.....i felt ur imagery was vivid....and u did give off tha poetic feel nice....yes tha way i read it,maybe made the flow off....it didnt stay real consistant all tha way thru....but overall nice shit

L

this is far from ur illest....but ur emotion in this i dunno its like I guess i could realate so i felt it real hard....u were vivid and u stayed consistant.....tho kinda simplicit it was still enuff to take this

Vote-L Dogg

Papa_Smurf · 09-25-2003, 01:47 PM

The same as everyone else said, I was feeling both verses, both came nice with their stories, and both stayed on topic well

In my opinion however I liked Mc's story better, there's not really much of an explanation for it, I was just feeling it more, personally

Vote: Mc4

Nu-SeNsE · 09-25-2003, 02:55 PM

Both Verses Fuckin Really Good By The Way.....

Mc4 I Thought Ur Verse Had Good Imagery And U Stayed On Topic Well

L-dogg I Thought The Same Bout Urs Too But I Was Able To Realate To Ur Verse More So Im Gonna Have To Vote

L-dogg

KonviKt · 09-25-2003, 04:02 PM

vote= L Dogg

Veeeeeery nice battle here boys. Both of you approached this shit nicely on 2 diff. topics with 2 diff. styles. Both you stayed on topic very nicely and provided some good reading. But somebody's gotta win and I enjoyed L's verse just a little more. Stay up.

21. Nabethian 1-0 Vs 22. Konvikt 6-1
Return the favor please..

K²

LDogg The King · 09-26-2003, 05:21 PM

TeKneeK · 09-28-2003, 02:04 AM

VerbalWeaponz · 09-30-2003, 12:23 AM

i was feelin both verses...tight tight shiz from both of u...im very impressed wit this.....

MC4-u had a xcellent verse for a key...stayed on topic all way through.....good imagry/structure......

L-Dogg-u had a good topic ta start wit.....nice imagry in this.....good vocab...sorta long but its also a topical...

but if i have ta give it to ne one ima give it to MC4sight bcuz of tha fact that he had a harder topic to write bout...his was a key and his was a lot shorter (bout 20 lines) n i felt his shiz a lot better.....

V-MC4sight

Verbal

LDogg The King · 09-30-2003, 12:57 AM

haha at about 20 lines.. he just used a smaller text to make his look smaller lol... re count his lines dude ...

hahaha funny shit

4-2

Patriarch · 09-30-2003, 10:46 AM

i def have to agree with sin2's reply... ldoggs came wayyy harder than this, it just seems that.. well, it wont even you or .. i dont even know.. def not one of your best pieces.. but i just dont think you had enough here to edge out mc4.. he came pretty nice and ive never really sat and read his stuff.. but not bad, battle could have been alot better, keep it up. pz

vote: mc

09-23-2003, 11:59 PM	#1 (permalink)
Nebz Mod God Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: West Coastin it. Posts: 24,476	7. L Dogg 13-4 Vs 8. MC4sight 5-0 VERSES DUE Wednesday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST VOTES DUE Saturday 10:00am PACIFIC/1:00pm EST Get Your Topics The RSTL Topics this week! - TOPIC WEEK! LINE LIMIT: 4 lines - NO SHOWS 16 lines - MINIMAL 60 lines - MAXIMAL VOTING: No crew votes No payback votes No 2nd Chance Votes YOU MUST MUST MUST -- POST YOUR URL'S OF ALL THE BATTLES YOU VOTED ON HERE IN YOUR OWN THREAD.. VOTE ON 6 BATTLES!!!!! FAILURE TO DO SO RESULTS IN 3 VOTE SUBTRACTION!!! if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!!! GO FOR IT!!! __________________ *N.iggas E.nvy B.ill'z* See Martin, see Malcolm You See Biggie, see Pac, see success and its outcome See Jesus, see Judas, see Caesar, see Brutus See success is like suicide Suicide its a suicide If you succeed, prepare to be crucified Media meddle's, nigga's sue you, you settle Every step you take, they remind you, "you ghetto"

09-24-2003, 04:17 AM	#2 (permalink)
LDogg The King S E A T T L E Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Seattle Posts: 16,637	checking in. __________________ ELITE motherfuckers www.soundclick.com/downedshadow www.myspace.com/downedshadow I wish the game was reversed and my verse was the beat so you'd listen to me first, and then dance later... I aint dumbing down shit, you don't get it, get a fuckin translator - Bishop Lamont

09-24-2003, 08:29 AM	#3 (permalink)
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09-24-2003, 07:20 PM	#4 (permalink)
LDogg The King S E A T T L E Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Seattle Posts: 16,637	http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/642701-19-god-extensions-1-0-vs-20-papa-smurf-1-0-a.html#post7372585 15. Wisdom 7-2 Vs 16. Den-S 1-0 23. HighpawTheCyst 1-0 Vs 24. Desenuts 7-4 http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/642697-11-stony-10-6-vs-12-hellrzah-17-13-a.html#post7372612 http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/642720-47-adversary-vs-48-smoke-trail.html#post7379864 http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusics-storytelling-league/642691-title-match-1-dahlohner-champ-33-11-vs-1-richard-corey-8-1-a.html#post7387715 __________________ ELITE motherfuckers www.soundclick.com/downedshadow www.myspace.com/downedshadow I wish the game was reversed and my verse was the beat so you'd listen to me first, and then dance later... I aint dumbing down shit, you don't get it, get a fuckin translator - Bishop Lamont Last edited by L dogg; 09-30-2003 at 03:57 AM.

09-25-2003, 12:23 AM	#5 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	[size=1.5]5. The man living beneath the underpass of a freeway done...i forgot bout this tho, i thought it was due thursday since they were posted quick so it's a quick key...forgive me for any mistakes in it..1 good luck man sorry i didnt post earlier Sound molecule's rush the waves, my ear brush of craze.. With every flushing stray, of a vehicular above my brains... Flung with haze of mud retained, from dirt splashed from rains.. Horrid face in a broken place, tryna make way with minimal space... In a race with time, nearly sixty-two, without job or income... What the average republican would call your average street bum.. Strung off high-notes of failed careers, an economies bad last few years.. Brung to tears as i reminiss peers who no longer seem to care or miss All I once knew, a dark hole under the never-ending road's abyss... Flipped from a realm oppiste I'm in, where i practically had everything.. Brought withen the hells of sin, where i repent everything i did.. Went from corp. owner, to street-corner,in a single eyelids wink... Never thought embezzling would lead to something that'd make me think.. If my life just a waste,or a path of wrong decisions and mistakes.. I take the blame, for it was my choice, still i'm miss that stronger voice.. Poised in the weeds now, as cotton blows, my weeping willows with noise.. Boys often toss pebbles barely missing, unknowing underneath a heads flinching.. Pinching the moment when the tire blows, and over the railing one rolls.. Folding hot steel and splashing schrapnel,condemening me eternal in this crap-hole.. Dead-cold holding steady hearing sirens now and then, wishing it was a friend... Out to help or give advice to mend, better luck having a suicide jumpin then.. Ever see that light come here, underneath, in darkness, a pool of fears.. For years i felt i had it all, now i see even great men can fall.. I stall every second, every minute a forever, here where i thought i'd never.. Endevouring pit, a think-tank of all the stupidest shit i did... Sit i blink as if it was another lie i'd spin, frozen and brim... Slim and hungered, slumbered under a hollowing crib.. A dim shadow of all the worst, if only time travel would work... But now i'm stuck fluctuating emotions back and forth... Under a solid grey cloud, a bic lighter my only torch.. Scorching leaves and grass and twigs, when you lonely... Anything that occupies time wins, flimsy and pale my soul is week.. Even i now would be suprised to last more then another weak.. So i find rope, thrown or broke from some vehicle passed by.. Beginning to plot my last breath, the steps until i die... So i nuse a makeshift tie, hanging my last string from a nail.. Impailed in the rock ceiling, under the hall of wheels... Feel my way to slip my neck in, eyes close my finale beckoned... Then hop down from the stone, the last i'll stand, my life's wrecking...[/size] __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE Last edited by MC4SiGHT; 09-25-2003 at 12:27 AM. Reason: made it size one so it was all on same line and easier to read...aigh, b4 he posted his verse anyways

09-25-2003, 05:20 AM	#6 (permalink)
LDogg The King S E A T T L E Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Seattle Posts: 16,637	posting on blue... oh an if you would have read the sticky.. u would see its not due until saterday... but oh well now we got the first battle up... an ill be keeping an eye on your edit date so u dont change nothin. : ) pz bro __________________ ELITE motherfuckers www.soundclick.com/downedshadow www.myspace.com/downedshadow I wish the game was reversed and my verse was the beat so you'd listen to me first, and then dance later... I aint dumbing down shit, you don't get it, get a fuckin translator - Bishop Lamont Last edited by L dogg; 09-25-2003 at 05:25 AM.

09-25-2003, 05:22 AM	#7 (permalink)
LDogg The King S E A T T L E Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Seattle Posts: 16,637	Sitting On The Seashore... . . . when I’m feeling trapped, afraid ill go out back, an sit with waves close my eyes an hear them say be brave as the echoes wash away the day is almost over an the sunset is in peace with the sky at these times I search for signs in the pink scenery through my eyes see my history makes me cry.. even though iv lived a good life none of my family has died.. I just wish things would have gone right its not like they didn’t though.. i was raised here with my daddy but i always wished i could have been with mom, ill never be happy see my dad raised me with strengths.. at night was wishing for nothing seems as though no matter where i went in life was always missing something could never have it perfect if i was with mom id miss my dad i talked about this to them before, they say be glad for what i have i stayed consistent with the search to break fates course cuz every time i would visit my mom would see she aged more and i wanted so bad to have shared the times of her youth i cried all the time about it but what could i do? so when people tell me to be happy i ask them how they can they tell me its these struggles that will break or make a man so some days will go by where I’ll show off a smile or two but i quickly relapse to sadness when i hear the hi, how are you from the calls i make to mom i wait for her but she takes to long i record music to let the pain go then tape her all my songs because we used to be real close i would tell her bout it all but as i grew older an got in trouble kept quiet of my downward fall i had to much appreciation for her and felt guilty of my doings felt i was disrespecting her at the same time my life i was ruining she has such a kind heart, not an angry bone in her body but she smokes everyday so i know her body is rotting all these things i can not change or even be there to see lately been feeling so alone an distant.. no one cares about me I’m depressed and smoking weed, but none of my family knows i really wish i could tell them.. don’t want them mad at me though or disappointed cuz i never wanted to let anyone down but I’m an guy who does nothing hoping ill be getting around -- have even grown apart from all my friends, will never see them again they all moved to go to school but i see them when I’m dreamin but awake with yet the pain of feeling no one knows me and i don’t want to grow old alone feeling sad an lonely spend a lot of time at home, have grown close to my pets i love them more then people... i love them to death their there to listen to my problems an never say a thang an around when i need them just have to call out there name afraid to go find my way in life an leave all this behind i walk around with my cam corder sometimes so parts i can always rewind but I’m a troubled mind an ask why we cant have back the past i dwell in my own sorrow.. its been weeks since iv laughed asking god if when i die it will all come together an be perfect if all i got to do is believe in you then to me it is worth it but god iv asked you why u made life such a depressing place to be kids like me grow up and watch their family’s die off becoming history leaving everything that made us so were alone with strangers I’m angered, it doesn’t make much sense to me all i see is danger but this is nothing out of ordinary i think like this all the time hoping one of these days sitting out here my answers ill find the waves are so calm an mellow I’m at peace with my life just like an elk hopping through meadows who flees with delight knowing tomorrow will come and then many days after an during this time i must find what I’m after - and as the sunset went down an welcomed another night i walked inside to let it out, sat down on the computer to write.. __________________ ELITE motherfuckers www.soundclick.com/downedshadow www.myspace.com/downedshadow I wish the game was reversed and my verse was the beat so you'd listen to me first, and then dance later... I aint dumbing down shit, you don't get it, get a fuckin translator - Bishop Lamont

09-25-2003, 08:26 AM	#8 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	yeah i know, i didn't notice the sticky until after i posted... it's all good tho. nive verse by the way also... and don't worry im not gonna edit... 1 __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE

09-25-2003, 10:13 AM	#9 (permalink)
HighPawTheCyst Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 523	MC4: nice verse, this is the first time i peeped you, and im impressed, your rhyme scheme reminds me of stony a little bit, you have a nice poetic voice, and the imagery gave a nice descriptive setting, the flow could've been better, but i guess that just comes with your style, you stayed on topic rather well, and never really fell off in the appeal aspect, nice read L-DOGG: been around for a minute, i always enjoy your pieces, and i must say this verse was ill, the imagery was hottt, i loved this line here [i]see my dad raised me with strengths.. at night was wishing for nothing seems as though no matter where i went in life was always missing something]/i] i was feeling that, your concept was tight, i thought the topic choice was rather simplistic, cause it's like having a free topic week or something, but you still did your thing, nice flow, good vocab, and the scheme complimented your verse well, props OVERALL: 2 different styles, 2 different topics, but 1 had the better verse, obviously, right?, well, im gonna say you both brought fire, props for posting early, but when it came down to my vote, i took the verse that had a more vivid feel, and im going with L-DOGG, even though his topic was easier, i could feel more like i was having a flashback at the beach, rather than deteriorating under a bridge, but props to both VOTE: L-DOGG __________________ im your baby's daddy

09-25-2003, 10:39 AM	#10 (permalink)
SIN2 as we speak Join Date: May 2000 Location: all sales are profitable Posts: 4,483	Both verses were pure fire....gotta say that first MC4 came hella nice...this is my first time peepin u also.....and like the others i was impressed.....if this was truly a key i give it to u.....i felt ur imagery was vivid....and u did give off tha poetic feel nice....yes tha way i read it,maybe made the flow off....it didnt stay real consistant all tha way thru....but overall nice shit L this is far from ur illest....but ur emotion in this i dunno its like I guess i could realate so i felt it real hard....u were vivid and u stayed consistant.....tho kinda simplicit it was still enuff to take this Vote-L Dogg __________________ (`·.¸ ¸.·´) §ïñ2* ÏñçØGñî†Ø (¸.·'*'·.¸) LOVE or RESPECT i been followin this crew for quite a hot minute...i say hottest on the net..ever...-Juventus

09-25-2003, 01:47 PM	#11 (permalink)
Papa_Smurf Junior Jedi Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Baltimore Posts: 397	The same as everyone else said, I was feeling both verses, both came nice with their stories, and both stayed on topic well In my opinion however I liked Mc's story better, there's not really much of an explanation for it, I was just feeling it more, personally Vote: Mc4 __________________ Fuck Your Sig. Rules.

09-25-2003, 02:55 PM	#12 (permalink)
Nu-SeNsE WHERE THE $$$'S COME FROM Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 985	Both Verses Fuckin Really Good By The Way..... Mc4 I Thought Ur Verse Had Good Imagery And U Stayed On Topic Well L-dogg I Thought The Same Bout Urs Too But I Was Able To Realate To Ur Verse More So Im Gonna Have To Vote L-dogg

09-25-2003, 04:02 PM	#13 (permalink)
KonviKt Jonny Punchline Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: The Bluegrass Posts: 21,453	vote= L Dogg Veeeeeery nice battle here boys. Both of you approached this shit nicely on 2 diff. topics with 2 diff. styles. Both you stayed on topic very nicely and provided some good reading. But somebody's gotta win and I enjoyed L's verse just a little more. Stay up. 21. Nabethian 1-0 Vs 22. Konvikt 6-1 Return the favor please.. K²

09-26-2003, 05:21 PM	#14 (permalink)
LDogg The King S E A T T L E Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Seattle Posts: 16,637	4-1 __________________ ELITE motherfuckers www.soundclick.com/downedshadow www.myspace.com/downedshadow I wish the game was reversed and my verse was the beat so you'd listen to me first, and then dance later... I aint dumbing down shit, you don't get it, get a fuckin translator - Bishop Lamont

09-28-2003, 02:04 AM	#15 (permalink)
TeKneeK The Heart & Soul of RMC Join Date: May 1999 Location: L.A. Californ: America's Best Posts: 26,160	up. __________________ .......................

09-30-2003, 12:23 AM	#16 (permalink)
VerbalWeaponz Unholy-Syndicate Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: 313 Posts: 254	i was feelin both verses...tight tight shiz from both of u...im very impressed wit this..... MC4-u had a xcellent verse for a key...stayed on topic all way through.....good imagry/structure...... L-Dogg-u had a good topic ta start wit.....nice imagry in this.....good vocab...sorta long but its also a topical... but if i have ta give it to ne one ima give it to MC4sight bcuz of tha fact that he had a harder topic to write bout...his was a key and his was a lot shorter (bout 20 lines) n i felt his shiz a lot better..... V-MC4sight Verbal __________________ banned http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?postid=7417580

09-30-2003, 12:57 AM	#17 (permalink)
LDogg The King S E A T T L E Join Date: Jan 2000 Location: Seattle Posts: 16,637	haha at about 20 lines.. he just used a smaller text to make his look smaller lol... re count his lines dude ... hahaha funny shit 4-2 __________________ ELITE motherfuckers www.soundclick.com/downedshadow www.myspace.com/downedshadow I wish the game was reversed and my verse was the beat so you'd listen to me first, and then dance later... I aint dumbing down shit, you don't get it, get a fuckin translator - Bishop Lamont

09-30-2003, 10:46 AM	#18 (permalink)
Patriarch Pat knows.. Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Orlando Posts: 12,298	i def have to agree with sin2's reply... ldoggs came wayyy harder than this, it just seems that.. well, it wont even you or .. i dont even know.. def not one of your best pieces.. but i just dont think you had enough here to edge out mc4.. he came pretty nice and ive never really sat and read his stuff.. but not bad, battle could have been alot better, keep it up. pz vote: mc