17. Mc Enferno Vs. 18 Mr. Rstl

Nebz · 09-14-2003, 03:29 PM

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MC ENFERNO · 09-15-2003, 02:52 PM

The kid is Here

Mr.RSTL · 09-15-2003, 03:31 PM

LoL im here Cheater

Votes: Goes Here

MC ENFERNO · 09-15-2003, 03:33 PM

Sticks and Stones will break my bones and words will never hurt me.

Fucc all the arguing lets just try to make this good for the Fans

Mr.RSTL · 09-18-2003, 01:33 AM

edited for the deadline

Mr.RSTL · 09-18-2003, 11:09 PM

Feel It

Im writing this letter to whom it may concern
Everyone faces trials of tribulation I guess it ya turn
Stay firm remember the further u go the less it burns
Life gives us lesson’s an take it as a lesson Learned
I can’t put into to words, how bad I feel
It may seem surreal but every wound takes time to heal
Never conceal, ya thoughts, feelings and such
Become her crutch stay an let her feel ya gentle touch
It may not appear as much, her fight with this is a beatable one
Don’t seem as none, but somewhere somehow its been done
Look at the long Run, She has a Beautiful son
With his smile the worse loss feels like you won
N Forget about the past, none of that now can be undone
It just begun, I know ya pain feels like a hundred ton
Stay strong, hold on and as you read this let it ease ya pain
You can weather this storm just let my words shield the rain
By the stage you read this is will be too late
My cancer took over at an incredible rate
Its my time now, im headed for the pearly gates
Life is life, and this is just my fate….

Boom!

MC ENFERNO · 09-18-2003, 11:59 PM

Chrous by 50 Cent
I was up in the club/
A 5th of Hennesy in my mug/
I took a copule x but I aint in to takin drugs/
I saw this girl tina and she had a nice rack and a butt/
I never met here once but I wanted to fuck/

Verse 1 by Mc Enferno
And that was all I remember/
I woke up sometime in December/
My name is Mark, I gotta a brother and a sister named Ginger/
I hear my mom yell out, "Hey Mark it's time for Dinner/
I get up to see a note that says "Call me Ginger,"/
I got on the same clothes so I reach in my pocket/
And I found out that somebody must've stolen my wallet/
I walk out to everybody laghing and shit/
I look in the mirror to see a tatto in the shape of a dick/
I hope it's fake so I try to jsut erase with spit/
But it wont go away/
So I hear something that no one should say/
My dad looks at me and says "Hey Mark are you gay,"/
Outta nowhere mom's like "Kids go out and play,"/
I am all alone so it sort of feels like Judgment Day/
I know it's not true but I aint got nothin to say/
I dont know Brenda but I guess I'll try it/
Cause if we really had sex, then she wont Deny it/
I pray on the phone, as the number I dial it/
A gay guy picks up the phone and he says "Hi, this is Bryan,"/
I look out the window I think to myself that it must be a lie/
"The air was suffocated with snow, as white sheets split the sky"/

To BE continued

Papa_Smurf · 09-19-2003, 12:33 AM

Hoo boy... Now that was some wierdness...

Ok the first guy didn't do the right topic. He wrote about himself having cancer, when it was supposed to be about a friends sister having cancer... I saw some parts that seemed like he was talking about someone else... but he confused me.

The second guy just decided, what they hell might as well tell everyone I'm gay a few times, that seems to be the best way to go...

Anyhow, I'm giving this vote to the second guy, at least he did what his topic was about.

Peace

Mr.RSTL · 09-19-2003, 12:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Papa_Smurf

Hoo boy... Now that was some wierdness...

Ok the first guy didn't do the right topic. He wrote about himself having cancer, when it was supposed to be about a friends sister having cancer... I saw some parts that seemed like he was talking about someone else... but he confused me.

The second guy just decided, what they hell might as well tell everyone I'm gay a few times, that seems to be the best way to go...

Anyhow, I'm giving this vote to the second guy, at least he did what his topic was about.

Peace

This vote doesnt Count, why?
Its called Creativity, I flipped the concept instead of
coming out with an ending that was thought i flipped it to where i was writing, a Letter To "Her" sister from the sister with cancer point of view, the last time I checked U can be best friends with your sister....

Papa_Smurf · 09-19-2003, 01:11 AM

That's the way I saw it, if that's the way you feel about my vote then don't count it, but I ain't gonna change it.

Nebz · 09-19-2003, 02:15 AM

Up Over No Shows

MC ENFERNO · 09-19-2003, 01:41 PM

Hey I think the vote should count and the only reason you are saying it should not count is because it was againsAnd too the guy who voted I am not gay. That was just a keystyle you idiot

Nebz · 09-19-2003, 03:31 PM

^ Vote Doesnt Count
0-0, it was obvious papa didnt
see the verses plot

MC4SiGHT · 09-19-2003, 10:15 PM

vote-MR.Rstl

this was plain and simple, he murdered enferno who's verse was horribly wrote, the bars were uneven the flow was off and the rhyme scheme very simplistic, plus to be continued? what lol....Mr. Rstl had a solid verse and i enjoyed his take on the topic...it was a lot more creavtive because im fairly sure 50 cent didnt stop by to do a text collab with you on a forum board...

just my thoughts....
1

MC ENFERNO · 09-20-2003, 05:06 AM

Uppin

Access Denied · 09-21-2003, 04:17 AM

Vote - mr rstl

He easily got this, enferno's verse was very simplistic. lacked all good storytelling elements really. mr rstl's verse had much more appeal, well done. votes for him

Nebz · 09-21-2003, 02:25 PM

Mr.RSTL-wins
MC ENFERNO-losses

09-14-2003, 03:29 PM	#1 (permalink)
Nebz Mod God Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: West Coastin it. Posts: 24,476	17. Mc Enferno Vs. 18 Mr. Rstl VERSES DUE Wednesday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST VOTES DUE Saturday 10:00am PACIFIC/1:00pm EST Get Your Topics The RSTL Topics - 9/13! LINE LIMIT: 4 lines - NO SHOWS 16 lines - MINIMAL 60 lines - MAXIMAL VOTING: No crew votes No payback votes No 2nd Chance Votes YOU MUST MUST MUST -- POST YOUR URL'S OF ALL THE BATTLES YOU VOTED ON HERE IN YOUR OWN THREAD.. VOTE ON 6 BATTLES!!!!! FAILURE TO DO SO RESULTS IN 3 VOTE SUBTRACTION!!! if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!!! GO FOR IT!!! __________________ *N.iggas E.nvy B.ill'z* See Martin, see Malcolm You See Biggie, see Pac, see success and its outcome See Jesus, see Judas, see Caesar, see Brutus See success is like suicide Suicide its a suicide If you succeed, prepare to be crucified Media meddle's, nigga's sue you, you settle Every step you take, they remind you, "you ghetto"

09-15-2003, 02:52 PM	#2 (permalink)
MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Newark, New jersey(Brick City) Posts: 1,613	The kid is Here __________________ "I smoke green and I'm incredible so call me The Hulk," MC Enferno I LOVE ANGEL ALWAYS YOUR MY ONE AND ONLY *NOW THAT"S GANGSTA*

09-15-2003, 03:33 PM	#4 (permalink)
MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Newark, New jersey(Brick City) Posts: 1,613	Sticks and Stones will break my bones and words will never hurt me. Fucc all the arguing lets just try to make this good for the Fans __________________ "I smoke green and I'm incredible so call me The Hulk," MC Enferno I LOVE ANGEL ALWAYS YOUR MY ONE AND ONLY *NOW THAT"S GANGSTA*

09-18-2003, 01:33 AM	#5 (permalink)
Mr.RSTL Rstl-Soon to be Champ Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: 5-2....Rstl Style Posts: 161	Topic #20 edited for the deadline Last edited by Mr.RSTL; 09-18-2003 at 03:47 PM.

09-18-2003, 11:59 PM	#7 (permalink)
MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Newark, New jersey(Brick City) Posts: 1,613	Mc Enferno ft 50 Cent(Topic 18) Chrous by 50 Cent I was up in the club/ A 5th of Hennesy in my mug/ I took a copule x but I aint in to takin drugs/ I saw this girl tina and she had a nice rack and a butt/ I never met here once but I wanted to fuck/ Verse 1 by Mc Enferno And that was all I remember/ I woke up sometime in December/ My name is Mark, I gotta a brother and a sister named Ginger/ I hear my mom yell out, "Hey Mark it's time for Dinner/ I get up to see a note that says "Call me Ginger,"/ I got on the same clothes so I reach in my pocket/ And I found out that somebody must've stolen my wallet/ I walk out to everybody laghing and shit/ I look in the mirror to see a tatto in the shape of a dick/ I hope it's fake so I try to jsut erase with spit/ But it wont go away/ So I hear something that no one should say/ My dad looks at me and says "Hey Mark are you gay,"/ Outta nowhere mom's like "Kids go out and play,"/ I am all alone so it sort of feels like Judgment Day/ I know it's not true but I aint got nothin to say/ I dont know Brenda but I guess I'll try it/ Cause if we really had sex, then she wont Deny it/ I pray on the phone, as the number I dial it/ A gay guy picks up the phone and he says "Hi, this is Bryan,"/ I look out the window I think to myself that it must be a lie/ "The air was suffocated with snow, as white sheets split the sky"/ To BE continued __________________ "I smoke green and I'm incredible so call me The Hulk," MC Enferno I LOVE ANGEL ALWAYS YOUR MY ONE AND ONLY *NOW THAT"S GANGSTA*

09-15-2003, 03:31 PM	#3 (permalink)
Mr.RSTL Rstl-Soon to be Champ Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: 5-2....Rstl Style Posts: 161	LoL im here Cheater Votes: Goes Here

09-18-2003, 11:09 PM	#6 (permalink)
Mr.RSTL Rstl-Soon to be Champ Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: 5-2....Rstl Style Posts: 161	Feel It Im writing this letter to whom it may concern Everyone faces trials of tribulation I guess it ya turn Stay firm remember the further u go the less it burns Life gives us lesson’s an take it as a lesson Learned I can’t put into to words, how bad I feel It may seem surreal but every wound takes time to heal Never conceal, ya thoughts, feelings and such Become her crutch stay an let her feel ya gentle touch It may not appear as much, her fight with this is a beatable one Don’t seem as none, but somewhere somehow its been done Look at the long Run, She has a Beautiful son With his smile the worse loss feels like you won N Forget about the past, none of that now can be undone It just begun, I know ya pain feels like a hundred ton Stay strong, hold on and as you read this let it ease ya pain You can weather this storm just let my words shield the rain By the stage you read this is will be too late My cancer took over at an incredible rate Its my time now, im headed for the pearly gates Life is life, and this is just my fate…. Boom!

09-19-2003, 12:33 AM	#8 (permalink)
Papa_Smurf Junior Jedi Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Baltimore Posts: 397	Hoo boy... Now that was some wierdness... Ok the first guy didn't do the right topic. He wrote about himself having cancer, when it was supposed to be about a friends sister having cancer... I saw some parts that seemed like he was talking about someone else... but he confused me. The second guy just decided, what they hell might as well tell everyone I'm gay a few times, that seems to be the best way to go... Anyhow, I'm giving this vote to the second guy, at least he did what his topic was about. Peace __________________ Fuck Your Sig. Rules. Last edited by Papa_Smurf; 09-19-2003 at 12:34 AM.

09-19-2003, 01:11 AM	#10 (permalink)
Papa_Smurf Junior Jedi Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Baltimore Posts: 397	That's the way I saw it, if that's the way you feel about my vote then don't count it, but I ain't gonna change it. __________________ Fuck Your Sig. Rules.

09-19-2003, 02:15 AM	#11 (permalink)
Nebz Mod God Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: West Coastin it. Posts: 24,476	Up Over No Shows __________________ *N.iggas E.nvy B.ill'z* See Martin, see Malcolm You See Biggie, see Pac, see success and its outcome See Jesus, see Judas, see Caesar, see Brutus See success is like suicide Suicide its a suicide If you succeed, prepare to be crucified Media meddle's, nigga's sue you, you settle Every step you take, they remind you, "you ghetto"

09-19-2003, 01:41 PM	#12 (permalink)
MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Newark, New jersey(Brick City) Posts: 1,613	Hey I think the vote should count and the only reason you are saying it should not count is because it was againsAnd too the guy who voted I am not gay. That was just a keystyle you idiot __________________ "I smoke green and I'm incredible so call me The Hulk," MC Enferno I LOVE ANGEL ALWAYS YOUR MY ONE AND ONLY *NOW THAT"S GANGSTA*

09-19-2003, 03:31 PM	#13 (permalink)
Nebz Mod God Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: West Coastin it. Posts: 24,476	^ Vote Doesnt Count 0-0, it was obvious papa didnt see the verses plot __________________ *N.iggas E.nvy B.ill'z* See Martin, see Malcolm You See Biggie, see Pac, see success and its outcome See Jesus, see Judas, see Caesar, see Brutus See success is like suicide Suicide its a suicide If you succeed, prepare to be crucified Media meddle's, nigga's sue you, you settle Every step you take, they remind you, "you ghetto"

09-19-2003, 10:15 PM	#14 (permalink)
MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: MICHIGAN Posts: 1,767	vote-MR.Rstl this was plain and simple, he murdered enferno who's verse was horribly wrote, the bars were uneven the flow was off and the rhyme scheme very simplistic, plus to be continued? what lol....Mr. Rstl had a solid verse and i enjoyed his take on the topic...it was a lot more creavtive because im fairly sure 50 cent didnt stop by to do a text collab with you on a forum board... just my thoughts.... 1 __________________ THE ELITE 1X RSTL CHAMPION 2004 RSTL TOURNAMENT CHAMPION RSTL League Record 27-9 Overall RSTL Record with tournies. 38-10 MYSPACE

09-20-2003, 05:06 AM	#15 (permalink)
MC ENFERNO I love Mary jane Join Date: Mar 2001 Location: Newark, New jersey(Brick City) Posts: 1,613	Uppin __________________ "I smoke green and I'm incredible so call me The Hulk," MC Enferno I LOVE ANGEL ALWAYS YOUR MY ONE AND ONLY *NOW THAT"S GANGSTA*

09-21-2003, 04:17 AM	#16 (permalink)
Access Denied Registered User Join Date: Sep 2003 Posts: 65	Vote - mr rstl He easily got this, enferno's verse was very simplistic. lacked all good storytelling elements really. mr rstl's verse had much more appeal, well done. votes for him

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09-21-2003, 02:25 PM	#17 (permalink)
Nebz Mod God Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: West Coastin it. Posts: 24,476	Mr.RSTL-wins MC ENFERNO-losses __________________ *N.iggas E.nvy B.ill'z* See Martin, see Malcolm You See Biggie, see Pac, see success and its outcome See Jesus, see Judas, see Caesar, see Brutus See success is like suicide Suicide its a suicide If you succeed, prepare to be crucified Media meddle's, nigga's sue you, you settle Every step you take, they remind you, "you ghetto"

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