55 MisterEThoughts vs. 56 White-Eyez

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Old 06-28-2003, 02:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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55 MisterEThoughts vs. 56 White-Eyez






VERSES DUE Wednesday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST
VOTES DUE Saturday 10:00am PACIFIC/1:00pm EST


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RSTL Topics !!!!

and write your story for your match in this thread!


LINE LIMIT:
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16 lines - MINIMAL
52 lines - MAXIMAL


VOTING:
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No 2nd Chance Votes


YOU MUST MUST MUST -- POST YOUR URL'S OF ALL THE BATTLES YOU VOTED ON HERE IN YOUR OWN THREAD..

VOTE ON 6 BATTLES!!!!!

FAILURE TO DO SO RESULTS IN 3 VOTE SUBTRACTION!!!


if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!!!



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Old 06-28-2003, 09:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 06-28-2003, 10:12 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The afternoon is late.. and the storm is coming down hard.... you walk out in the street... and see a baby all alone further down crying.. soaked... and lost... --- you look... and notice the baby is by himself... but when he turns head at your attention.. u find that the little boy is you as a child.... What did you feel? think? Do?


Lighting Strikes, my vision is blurred by a blindin light
Concentration dies, i didnt no what to do ,or what was right
All alone, was this baby left to die, i couldn't help but wonder
If this child, was forgotton about as i search for the mother


Past memories flow through my mind,
Abanded at birth, i begin to see my past life rewind

So familiar, yet it couldn't be..how could i be this baby
Our eyes lock, jaw dropps, damn i couldn't believe it was me
configurations of despirtation, lead me to be a failure while
Givin no chance as person, i resorted to the low life of denile

Flashbacks

Daddy was a drunk, momma was never there for me
By the age of three, i was living cold alone, with no family
Adopted... foster parents treated me like a king
Bought me everything i wanted and everything i need
Years go by i wondered where my parents where
I asked the Kramers, but they didnt blurt a werd
I got angry began to rip shit, through a hiphy fit
Pissed as i was i controleld my anger, they told me to sit
They explanded to me what kind of people my parents are
told me they where no good, and i needed to stay afar

Old enough to go to school, treated on fairly like gay
I had no one to come, may 16 for career day
I wondered, i asked, why me, god why me, as a prey
It was like no one was listening to the words i had to say
13 now, i began to understand, yet colors where bland
Damn, i learned from Mr. Kramer how to hold emotions and be a man

Jenny was my first girl friend, yet soon to be a bride
I wanted a life, to feel what it felt like to have love on ur side

17 now, i was engaged... left the struggles in the past
lost my virginity, as i inserted my penis in the gap
Started workin, at the local club it was alright
hunsband by day, yet an underestimated bartender at night

March 13, a Storm Was Coming, but i insested to work late
Walkin alone, 3 miles from home pacing at a steady rate
it began pouring all to soon, At that time i had lost my vision
Heard the baby crying, picked it indesisfully with precision

Flash backs end

I open my eyes... heard no baby cries or lightning strikes
Nothing in site except knowledge gained through the truth of my life
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Old 06-30-2003, 12:18 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Old 07-01-2003, 12:25 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Old 07-01-2003, 12:28 AM   #6 (permalink)
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i am wondering when this is due so i can drop it
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Old 07-01-2003, 04:56 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Old 07-02-2003, 08:30 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Old 07-03-2003, 01:57 AM   #9 (permalink)
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