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Originally Posted by Lucifa
shut up .. the rules are clear .. 2 lines minimum per mc .. it's not about his time frames .. he had 3 votes disqualified .. including a vote for me ..
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^ hate vote......lool....
nah but umm....
lotus.....- your flow and skeme in this jawn was really tight so it made it a very easy read...generic piece but there isn't really anything that hasn't been done at least once so that dont matter much to be..you did okay with the emotional aspect of your charecter..not much imagery though...
kdp - lol it was a funny story ...built it up nice......flow was off in some part...one line would be 12 syl...next would be 16....just in some area.....it was a good read from the story stand point but once in a while it threw me off....
vote - kdp - told a better story ....
looks like 3 lines per mc to me sparky. it's not a great vote, but it is a legit vote.
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Dear _KDP_,
You have received an infraction at Rapmusic.com from Lucifa the RSTL Bus Patrol Mod.
Reason: Signature Rule Violation
I suggest you get on with your business.
And quit calling me nigga.
My RSTL Topic this week: Narcissistic Sociopath