13. Dougie G 2-3 v. 14. Master Peace 0-1 (Vote Now!)

Quriosity · 03-17-2008, 09:44 AM

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Dougie G · 03-17-2008, 04:20 PM

U know I am showing

Master Peace · 03-18-2008, 09:18 AM

Present...

Votes go here:
15. TheReturn 10-2 v. 16. LDogg 4-3 (Vote Now!)
Championship Match: 1. Metasin 3-0 v. 2. Got Life? 14-4 (Vote Now!)
11. Sephiroth 2-3 v. 12. Inkwell (chris) 3-2 (Vote now!)
9. Stars€reen 0-2 v. 10. Daht Cahm 1-1 (Vote Now!)

Dougie G · 03-20-2008, 02:32 PM

Tom
Pres
Wife

jump right in, and dig beneath the surface
My name’s tom and I’m in the secret service
Protected the pres, but I had another purpose
For this man I woulda given my life
But I feel bad, cuz I was hitting his wife
I was his friend, his safety, his protection
But she was the cause, to my love and my affection
She was my reason, for breathing without a question
But then one day, my heart stopped beating
Pres came up and said "I think my wife is cheating"
But shit, this my job, so i had to decieve him
"Lies and rumors, you cant be believing"
thinking to myself, How, searching for a reason
did he find out, i never left no evidence
"What woman would ever cheat on the president"
Then my phone rings "I’m sick and your the medicine"
It was her, his wife, calling on my phone
I said "He knows", she said "No He dont"
I said "He’ll find out", she said "No He wont"
She said "I need you", "I’ll be there in a minute"
She said "Hurry up," "My shift is almost finished"
Minutes later, here I am standing at her doe
Confused, staring at the flo, thinking, should I CUM or go
She opened up the doe, naked "There’s my daddy"
I couldnt say no, dazed, staring at her fatty
She was on top of me like Butter to the toast
Goin so hard a picture fell from its post
Not missin a stroke or beat, With my lovely host
I picked up the pic and sat it back in place
took a glance, wait, I know that face
it was the pres,Looking at me eye to eye
What if he found the truth in my rumors and lies
Then I heard a knock that had me surprised
It could’ve easily ended both of our lifes
open the door, thinking, his beef would be against me
But he just said "Tom, meet Monica Lewinski,"
But now that she’s gone, this lonliness is killing me
So everybody listening, please VOTE FOR HILARY

Dougie G · 03-20-2008, 06:12 PM

Yeah It looks like ur showing

Votes

1.9. Stars€reen 0-2 v. 10. Daht Cahm 1-1 (Vote Now!)
2.21. Condescending 0-0 v. 22. DeadKing 0-0 (Vote Now!)
3.Championship Match: 1. Metasin 3-0 v. 2. Got Life? 14-4 (Vote Now!)
4.5. Lucifa 14-5 v. 6. Pain 3-1 (Vote Now!)

Master Peace · 03-20-2008, 08:31 PM

Predicate thoughts drastically ravage me
As I sit and ponder ways to murder my brother savagely
I keep asking me…
is it worth it? For my mother to mourn
But then I remember how dastardly, they treated me scorned
My father blamed me for his condition, on his life it was sworn
I was the reason he was declared retarded after the day he was born
Due to the sequence…he was ease dropping and overherd the nurse
Say that this wouldn’t of happened to him if he was born first
I’m beaten daily, and called all types of names by the sort
And reminded that it’s my fault he’ll never see his son date or play sports

Wish it was fiction, my mothers’ old school so she lives by tradition
So she’ll watch me get treated like shit and won’t go against him
Has friends as policemen and never will mention
My fathers abusive to me, she won’t even raise the suspicion
Or utter a sentence in vain about him, it’s like her thoughts are suspended
I don’t exist to them; they give my brother all the attention
Enraged by jealously and anger love is no longer permitted
All I want is some affection, and for him to call me his Princess
It’s obvious I won’t get this; I’m starting to believe it’s my fault
That my brother can’t talk clearly and awkwardly walks

I think I love him, we play often under a neighboring tree
And my heart softens when he struggles to try and catch up to me
Or is it pleasure? Cause sometimes the site is lovely to see
When the kids tease him, I laugh with em’ cause it’s no longer saddening to see
Him crying and weeping as they pick with him, it’s time he felt agony
Instead of shelter and safety from our parents and the blaming of me
I use to think I was sick for dreaming that his throat would get slit
Or that I poisoned him in his sleep or murdered him quick
But now I realize that these thoughts that parade around in my brain
Are what gives me balance and keeps me from going insane

Master Peace · 03-20-2008, 08:34 PM

I didn't think I was going to be able to show at first cause of my work schedule...but I got a lil break before I gotta go back and punch the clock so I just threw sumtin up...

Got Life? · 03-20-2008, 10:37 PM

Dougie - alright each week everyone tries to encourage you...i dunno maybe i'm just not in the mood tonight, but dude this was just blah, boring, basic, awful...youre dialogue doesn't fit your characters at all...you turn educated and respected people into street slangin retards...your rhymes couldn't be more basic if you picked them out of a dr. seuss novel...and the concept was just really boring with poor execution...

MP - I think this was cool...i'm guessing the kids are chinese and you're going with that whole male superiority bit out there...it was clever...the execution was carried more by a really strong writers voice than anything else. I feel that alone was enough to win this battle for you over a much weaker writer.

vote = MP

Got Life? · 03-21-2008, 02:58 AM

up over no-shows

1-0 MP

Lucifa · 03-21-2008, 09:44 AM

Not sure what I make of this one ..

Dougie - I feel GL? is being a little harsh in his vote .. I don't want to be like TR and start championing you .. but I feel the encouragement is working .. the verse suffers from your lack of anything even remotely complex .. everything is on the basic tip .. but you're starting to work out some kinks in this current state and will soon start developing more skills as a writer .. (as long as you take the feedback on board and work it, rather than moan about how people don't rate you) .. the story was straight and the ending made me smile .. if you raise the overly simplified mechanics of your verses you'll start raking in more votes .. not bad ..

Master Peace - on the same note .. I think GL? has been overly complimentary to your verse .. I got bored pretty quickly reading this .. flow was blah with stretched lines and over wording .. never felt engaged with the story or the emotional aspect you (or atleast I) expect from a piece based on the content you ran with here .. I'd agree that evidence of experience over Dougie is here .. but for me .. it wasn't put to good use ..

Vote = Dougie G .. yup .. I said it .. I actually think his light entertainment verse just crossed the line ahead of Master's long winded effort .. neither verse will make headlines as they both suffer from some glaring faults .. I just feel .. in this matchup of verses .. Dougie deserves my vote ..

Master Peace · 03-21-2008, 12:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lucifa

13. Dougie G 2-3
14. Master Peace 0-1

bring the heat Dougie .. I think I may just be backing you this week ..

LOL...He wasn't bullshitin

and I wasn't bullshitin when the rules said 3 posts per match...

consider yourself docked one vote.

Lucifa · 03-21-2008, 12:56 PM

I don't want to clog the thread .. so I will give you one reply and one reply only .. too which if you really need to respond .. take it to another thread ..

I figured it wouldn't go down well with you .. so as for quoting the prediction .. after your verse last week, I fail to see why you think you're so eff'in godly .. my prediction reflected the fact that you're not above Dougie's level .. so he had a chance .. I think he took that chance .. or you failed to take yours .. either way .. my opinion is only 1 ..

Lord Drama · 03-21-2008, 06:20 PM

some good reads this week from the up and coming. Dougie's piece started out real strong, I enjoyed the story and it read easy.. then It sorta lost momentum towards the latter half but it was still a cool drop.

MP I liked the verse, it seemed authentic in the way it was written so I could easily picture how the girl must have felt towards her brother while growing up.. the ending had me in question though.. How does thinking evil thoughts of someone means of staying sane? I guess it's more sane then committing the act lol.. in any case, cool drop.

vote MP

Janitor · 03-21-2008, 06:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Master Peace

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LOL...He wasn't bullshitin

and I wasn't bullshitin when the rules said 3 posts per match...

consider yourself docked one vote.

got life

this is why you cant edit post anymore

Got Life? · 03-21-2008, 08:15 PM

no worries, i think i'm happier w/o the ability to edit other people's posts...makes it easier to quote something w/o clickin edit by accident

Loot Beats · 03-22-2008, 03:29 PM

Hmmm...

Dougie G's verse made me laugh. I think your take on fuckin your boss's wife was good. The flow was decent, never

03-17-2008, 09:44 AM	#1 (permalink)
Quriosity Michael Clayton of Text Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Atlanta, Ga Posts: 19,097	13. Dougie G 2-3 v. 14. Master Peace 0-1 (Vote Now!) ----- The RSTL Official Rules & Regulations ----- "GENERAL RULES" VERSUS DUE: Every Thursday @ 11:59 PM EST LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 16 lines, Maximum of 64 NO RECYCLING, NO EXCEPTIONS • Recycling is the equivalent to that of a no-show and will be treated as such, thus resulting in a loss in favor of the participant whom chose to recycle and a win in favor of his/her opponent • Extensions may only be granted if a moderator has given consent prior to a verse being posted in the match OR your opponent gives his consent • If granted, the extension will override deadline for both participants extending it for no more than 24 hours • CHECK-INS are encouraged, but not required • Verses MUST incorporate AT LEAST 1 of the provided topics • A failure to show will result in a loss and a sign out by default • If your opponent fails to show, you MUST STILL post AT LEAST 4 lines (4-15) AND 2 voting links in order to claim victory • A Championship Title WILL NOT be decided by way of no-show!!! • If an opponent fails to show in a Championship match, the remaining participant will be ranked as the number 1 seed, but will not be considered a Champion until a win by vote • Upon your second no show, you will be suspended for two weeks of competition. A third no show will result in a three week suspension and a fourth will result in a suspension for the remainder of the season. There is no suspension for first time no showers. • Competitors are limited to posting 3 times in their own match, which allows for checking in, posting votes, and posting a verse. For each post over 3 unless deemed necessary by the mods, the competitor will be docked one vote. • Each competitor may only post once in another competitors battle allowing for a vote and nothing more, if you would like an explanation or to explain as to why a vote was cast a certain way, you can pm them or point things out properly in the vote to begin with. Violating this will result in losing a vote in your match. • Members found constantly disruptive to the league will have their sign-in ignored. "VOTING RULES" VOTES DUE: Every Sunday @ 11:59 PM EST • You MUST vote on AT LEAST 4 matches AND post links in your thread • EACH link NOT POSTED will result in a 1 vote DEDUCTION • Voting on the Championship and Contender matches is mandatory • Your votes MUST be AT LEAST 2 FULL lines in length per verse in order to be deemed valid • If your opponent fails to show, you are still accountable for voting on AT LEAST 2 matches as well as posting those links in your match!!! • Votes posted AFTER DEADLINE will NOT COUNT!!! • Voting is open to PARTICIPANTS, RSTL MODERATORS, and PAST CHAMPIONS ONLY!!! • PAST CHAMPIONS MUST vote on a MINIMUM of 4 matches in order to be counted as a legitimate voter • Editing your vote for any reason must be done within the hour of the original post time. Otherwise, the vote will be null and void. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and cleared by a moderator *MODERATORS ARE LAW OF THE LAND* __________________ .textmastersoftheuniverse. calefaction lucifa thereturn alias2 magus quriosity speedycalhoun johndough bonniebathory metasin sephiroth ((JOIN THE RBL NOW)) ►► CLICK ME, CLICK ME ◄◄

03-17-2008, 04:20 PM	#2 (permalink)
Dougie G Registered User Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Hinesville Ga Posts: 299	U know I am showing __________________ The Republican Party Dougie G-The Return-Jook NO-SHOWS ARE FOR FAGS

03-18-2008, 09:18 AM	#3 (permalink)
Master Peace Pumpin ya bitch since '85 Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Romulus, MI Posts: 1,841	Present... Votes go here: 15. TheReturn 10-2 v. 16. LDogg 4-3 (Vote Now!) Championship Match: 1. Metasin 3-0 v. 2. Got Life? 14-4 (Vote Now!) 11. Sephiroth 2-3 v. 12. Inkwell (chris) 3-2 (Vote now!) 9. Stars€reen 0-2 v. 10. Daht Cahm 1-1 (Vote Now!) __________________ *Effin' Godly™: FAB 5* *Street Prophetz* *Corp Life.* Last edited by Master Peace; 03-21-2008 at 02:22 PM.

03-20-2008, 02:32 PM	#4 (permalink)
Dougie G Registered User Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Hinesville Ga Posts: 299	Tom Pres Wife jump right in, and dig beneath the surface My name’s tom and I’m in the secret service Protected the pres, but I had another purpose For this man I woulda given my life But I feel bad, cuz I was hitting his wife I was his friend, his safety, his protection But she was the cause, to my love and my affection She was my reason, for breathing without a question But then one day, my heart stopped beating Pres came up and said "I think my wife is cheating" But shit, this my job, so i had to decieve him "Lies and rumors, you cant be believing" thinking to myself, How, searching for a reason did he find out, i never left no evidence "What woman would ever cheat on the president" Then my phone rings "I’m sick and your the medicine" It was her, his wife, calling on my phone I said "He knows", she said "No He dont" I said "He’ll find out", she said "No He wont" She said "I need you", "I’ll be there in a minute" She said "Hurry up," "My shift is almost finished" Minutes later, here I am standing at her doe Confused, staring at the flo, thinking, should I CUM or go She opened up the doe, naked "There’s my daddy" I couldnt say no, dazed, staring at her fatty She was on top of me like Butter to the toast Goin so hard a picture fell from its post Not missin a stroke or beat, With my lovely host I picked up the pic and sat it back in place took a glance, wait, I know that face it was the pres,Looking at me eye to eye What if he found the truth in my rumors and lies Then I heard a knock that had me surprised It could’ve easily ended both of our lifes open the door, thinking, his beef would be against me But he just said "Tom, meet Monica Lewinski," But now that she’s gone, this lonliness is killing me So everybody listening, please VOTE FOR HILARY __________________ The Republican Party Dougie G-The Return-Jook NO-SHOWS ARE FOR FAGS

03-20-2008, 06:12 PM	#5 (permalink)
Dougie G Registered User Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Hinesville Ga Posts: 299	Yeah It looks like ur showing Votes 1.9. Stars€reen 0-2 v. 10. Daht Cahm 1-1 (Vote Now!) 2.21. Condescending 0-0 v. 22. DeadKing 0-0 (Vote Now!) 3.Championship Match: 1. Metasin 3-0 v. 2. Got Life? 14-4 (Vote Now!) 4.5. Lucifa 14-5 v. 6. Pain 3-1 (Vote Now!) __________________ The Republican Party Dougie G-The Return-Jook NO-SHOWS ARE FOR FAGS

03-20-2008, 08:31 PM	#6 (permalink)
Master Peace Pumpin ya bitch since '85 Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Romulus, MI Posts: 1,841	Predicate thoughts drastically ravage me As I sit and ponder ways to murder my brother savagely I keep asking me… is it worth it? For my mother to mourn But then I remember how dastardly, they treated me scorned My father blamed me for his condition, on his life it was sworn I was the reason he was declared retarded after the day he was born Due to the sequence…he was ease dropping and overherd the nurse Say that this wouldn’t of happened to him if he was born first I’m beaten daily, and called all types of names by the sort And reminded that it’s my fault he’ll never see his son date or play sports Wish it was fiction, my mothers’ old school so she lives by tradition So she’ll watch me get treated like shit and won’t go against him Has friends as policemen and never will mention My fathers abusive to me, she won’t even raise the suspicion Or utter a sentence in vain about him, it’s like her thoughts are suspended I don’t exist to them; they give my brother all the attention Enraged by jealously and anger love is no longer permitted All I want is some affection, and for him to call me his Princess It’s obvious I won’t get this; I’m starting to believe it’s my fault That my brother can’t talk clearly and awkwardly walks I think I love him, we play often under a neighboring tree And my heart softens when he struggles to try and catch up to me Or is it pleasure? Cause sometimes the site is lovely to see When the kids tease him, I laugh with em’ cause it’s no longer saddening to see Him crying and weeping as they pick with him, it’s time he felt agony Instead of shelter and safety from our parents and the blaming of me I use to think I was sick for dreaming that his throat would get slit Or that I poisoned him in his sleep or murdered him quick But now I realize that these thoughts that parade around in my brain Are what gives me balance and keeps me from going insane __________________ *Effin' Godly™: FAB 5* *Street Prophetz* *Corp Life.*

03-20-2008, 08:34 PM	#7 (permalink)
Master Peace Pumpin ya bitch since '85 Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Romulus, MI Posts: 1,841	I didn't think I was going to be able to show at first cause of my work schedule...but I got a lil break before I gotta go back and punch the clock so I just threw sumtin up... __________________ *Effin' Godly™: FAB 5* *Street Prophetz* *Corp Life.*

03-21-2008, 09:44 AM	#10 (permalink)
Lucifa Viva La Eva Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: United Kingdom Status: Rumba Raving Posts: 16,787	Not sure what I make of this one .. Dougie - I feel GL? is being a little harsh in his vote .. I don't want to be like TR and start championing you .. but I feel the encouragement is working .. the verse suffers from your lack of anything even remotely complex .. everything is on the basic tip .. but you're starting to work out some kinks in this current state and will soon start developing more skills as a writer .. (as long as you take the feedback on board and work it, rather than moan about how people don't rate you) .. the story was straight and the ending made me smile .. if you raise the overly simplified mechanics of your verses you'll start raking in more votes .. not bad .. Master Peace - on the same note .. I think GL? has been overly complimentary to your verse .. I got bored pretty quickly reading this .. flow was blah with stretched lines and over wording .. never felt engaged with the story or the emotional aspect you (or atleast I) expect from a piece based on the content you ran with here .. I'd agree that evidence of experience over Dougie is here .. but for me .. it wasn't put to good use .. Vote = Dougie G .. yup .. I said it .. I actually think his light entertainment verse just crossed the line ahead of Master's long winded effort .. neither verse will make headlines as they both suffer from some glaring faults .. I just feel .. in this matchup of verses .. Dougie deserves my vote .. __________________ Boy Better Know TMU Na Na Nai RSTL Ironman Tournament is up & running

03-21-2008, 12:56 PM	#12 (permalink)
Lucifa Viva La Eva Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: United Kingdom Status: Rumba Raving Posts: 16,787	I don't want to clog the thread .. so I will give you one reply and one reply only .. too which if you really need to respond .. take it to another thread .. I figured it wouldn't go down well with you .. so as for quoting the prediction .. after your verse last week, I fail to see why you think you're so eff'in godly .. my prediction reflected the fact that you're not above Dougie's level .. so he had a chance .. I think he took that chance .. or you failed to take yours .. either way .. my opinion is only 1 .. __________________ Boy Better Know TMU Na Na Nai RSTL Ironman Tournament is up & running

03-21-2008, 06:20 PM	#13 (permalink)
Lord Drama Patriotic Poetic Prisoner Join Date: Dec 1999 Location: U district Posts: 1,285	some good reads this week from the up and coming. Dougie's piece started out real strong, I enjoyed the story and it read easy.. then It sorta lost momentum towards the latter half but it was still a cool drop. MP I liked the verse, it seemed authentic in the way it was written so I could easily picture how the girl must have felt towards her brother while growing up.. the ending had me in question though.. How does thinking evil thoughts of someone means of staying sane? I guess it's more sane then committing the act lol.. in any case, cool drop. vote MP __________________ 3lit3 University of Washington Drama's RSTL GRADE REPORT: A 95-100% \| A- 90-94% \| B 85-89% \| B- 80-84% \| C 75-79% C- 70-74% \| D 65-69% \| D- 60-64% \| F 59% and below

03-22-2008, 03:29 PM	#16 (permalink)
Loot Beats Dope Beats are what I do. Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: North Va (woodbridge) Posts: 80	Hmmm... Dougie G's verse made me laugh. I think your take on fuckin your boss's wife was good. The flow was decent, never