Final 4: nah son vs. Trybz

[J o o k]

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[nah son]

this is it trybz

you have nothing to lose

my father once told me

the most dangerous man in the world

is one that has nothing to lose

shock the world kid

[Trybz]

Hey nahsy I have to pick up my brother from the airport, he's just getting back from Iraq. We'll probably go out tonight, so let's post tomorrow night k?

Extend this for a day please mods. I know nahsy usually needs an extra day.

[nah son]

take ya time pa' i'll be here tonight

[nah son]

T R U E S T O R Y

Written and lived by: nahsy

I really don't give a fuck if you feel me, I am going to write how I feel at this exact moment.


My mother had me at 14 years of age,
A scared teen, she screamed with fear and rage
She herself a child, of mild manner
Pushing me out head first with riled banter
Forced to give me up for adoption
By her parents whom believed keeping me was not an option
But got me back 6 months later, so she loved me, But still I payed
Because of the adoption
Names on my Social Security card and birth certificate still dont match til this day
My father? A drug dealer named Johnny
Who was 4 years older than my mommy
But that's neither here nor there
And I sure yall niggas neither hear nor care
So at age 5 I witness my uncle murdered, shot and slumped dead
With his blood matter and brain mass on my bunk bed
Over some fucking dope head,
Who put the gun to my mom and said he'd hit with smoked lead
If she didn't give up the drugs
So my uncle threw a hammer but didn't get it up enough
So it missed the dope fiend, then I only remember a thing or two
But it's the last time I seen him move
RIP Robby
So my pops had moms corrupted for another bit
On some Bonnie and Clyde, smuggling drugs, and other shit
So Johnny got knocked with 21 Kilos of cocaine
Then mommy lost her train of thought like she had no brain
Started moving weight on her own, talking big weight rather than dimes
But when you play the game, it's only a matter of time
So she got knocked too, took off the zone
Then me and my little brothers and sisters went to foster homes
Each our own, we were split up and shit
This is when I found the system to be corrupted kids
My foster mother was a bitch, barely kept me fed
And if it wasn't for the checks, she'd probably left me dead
On some fuck the little n.igger tip
So fuck the psychologist when he said I was a bitter kid
The white male, suit wearing, college educated hearing me out?
Like how the fuck is this nigga going to figure me out?
I mean he has never been through what I have or seen a killer with a vexed look
Charles the psychologist learned about my problems from a text book
So fuck this want to be know it all handy man
I only went because I'd get free candy after playing candy land
And what the fuck is up with psychologist playing board games with you
Like he could really diagnose you whether you're tame or rude
I mean doesn't everyone get a little angry when they lose?
And then a little happy, when they get to choose
Whether they get the blow pops or pop rocks I lifted up my skully to see
Homo candy choices and shit, but pop rocks was more gully to me
So at age 12 moms popped back up,
Back to selling crack, and trying to rack up
Back to the bing, with 2 strikes and foster homes again
Only God knows the end
But I'll tell you this, this is only half my life
So multiply by two and see the of half of my strife
I never got to be a kid, grew too quick
But I guess the important thing is I got through it
So besides my sis getting merked out I'm witnessing a little joy
But on some real shit When I grow up I want to be a little boy

one

[J o o k]

Gawt damn son. Anyways I am going to call this a no show on Trybz part, it's sunday morning.

[Quriosity]

boo

i really wanted to vote on this, or just experience this match up, i was very interested to see how it turned out

nah son, your verse was a bit of a let down solely because of its format and structure which really does not fit into this league, sadly enough but it is very true, i honestly think that had trybz showed up he would have walked away with a win here, nevertheless the story was packed with emotion but no real general direction, you basically led us through a script of turmoil and then just ended it, the ending was also very cheesy but the content leading to it was note worthy, had you accompanied the emotion with a better (or more readable) flow and a real ending then this would definitely have been a better match up, as is the verse offered nothing other than emotion, the flow was too inconsistent for a reader to actually grasp the rhythm that im sure you had in your head and as i said the ending was just too abrupt and seemed to distort the focus of the rest of the verse

good drop though overall, true stories are always (or should always be) carried by their pure/raw emotion, and i feel you on writing for yourself or how you feel at the moment, i just cant seem to do that for some reason, but yea... just thought id break it down and give some feedback since i had planned on voting, can't wait to see next week's match up

the number 2 spot should have been mine!!

[Got Life?]

i think you got lucky trybz didn't show honestly...this was probably one of the worst verses i've seen from you.

[J o o k]

Nah sons real life story just wasn't a good read for you guys lol. Beasts.